Mr. Loney *note: pg. 33*

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Kristina

@jdsean

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#201

Yay!! You continued on time. Its good Simran's not going to die. Can't wait for the next part for some more AK scenes. Continue soon

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#202

nice part both ak r thinkin about each other

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hershii

@Smileyface

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 17 years ago

#203

oh yayyy...u continued...proud of u...u made the deadline....aww i luv this part...it was soo nice...so cute how kripa got all happy and jumped pn simran's bed...lol...and raul is so cute too...i hope simran gets 100% better....and angad is just hot...lol...lovely part...

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sna004

@sna004

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#204

Ishu Ishu Ishu! What can I say? That was brilliant! I loved the way you used simiies/metaphors! The description was alive! It was beautiful! Loved it!

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jiya imdad

@jiya imdad

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#205

it was a fabullous part!
loved the way kripa got all excited and how she expressed it!
glad that simran's illness can be cured, hope she gets well soon.
raul is really cute!
loved angad and kripa's interaction 😳

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kriti mehera

@Love''sAngel

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#206

nice part
atleast u have increased simran's chances of survival & hope she survives...
angad lost 4 words.... that was gr8
continue soon...

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nycdesiqt

@nycdesiqt

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#207

omg!! she can live for little while longer!! thank god!! i was starting to get depressed!! well i hope that she gets better and can live forever and ever!! lol!! kripa was acting soo cutely when she heard the great news!! i mean who wouldn't!! and raul was great!! lol!!
angad and kripa's interaction was just lovely!! both are thinking about each other!! how cute!! can't wait to read more!!! thanx for the extra long part! enjoyed it very much!!! 😃

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Puja

@P u j a- -*

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#208

Awwww your FF Is reallyy Good! read all of it && everything is describedd so beautifully! && Love the title lol & All thee characters...I'm soo glad Simran has more chance of living pleasee make her 100% Better! 😳 her & raul make a really cute couplee. The angad & kripa scene was really sweet! cont soon! 😊 x

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@ishu124

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#209

hey guys!

i have the next part written, but the problem is that the next part is on my laptop which i dont have! i left my laptop at home and im at my aunts house. so once i get home, ill post the next part! till then, hold on tight!

till then, heres a something, im going to be killing off some charater or charaters for sure! take a guess!

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nycdesiqt

@nycdesiqt

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: ishu124
hey guys!

i have the next part written, but the problem is that the next part is on my laptop which i dont have! i left my laptop at home and im at my aunts house. so once i get home, ill post the next part! till then, hold on tight!

till then, heres a something, im going to be killing off some charater or charaters for sure! take a guess!

what!!??!! ::faints:: lol nahh hmmm who could it be??