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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: dhvanisoni

are yaar...i M IN LOSS OF WORDS HERE...I mean...jsut donno wht to say...me blushing and smiling😉 hehe...this was the best part ever..👏.and nikki told it right tht u looked at every small thing tht a marriage cud have....everythign was awesome...great...excellent part...and the last bit was nice...I think u did justice to it...LOVED IT ...from the bottom of my heart...seriously...😳

thnx dhwani....i ws a bit nervous yaar...😊!!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: 143786

very nice part the whole ceremony n their very 1st night every thing was just aweosome 😳 ab yeh honeymoom pe kub jarahay hain 😉 tehre will be lots of fun na 😃 waisay na bhi jayin to ab her din hi 😆 after all sujallll 😆 n e wayz v nice part n cont soon

thnx sweets...i will post the part in few mins!!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: neh0307

ooooohhhhhhh mmmmyyyyy god....amazin yaar....
idiot akshat charu ke chakar me sujal ke joote de diye aur apna hi nuksaan karva liya....
now lets come to our jodi MR n MRS SUJAL GAREWAL.....
before marriage woh nervousness so sweet bechara jis din ka wait kar raha tha ussi din itna pareshan ho gaya.....but thats ought to happen whn one is gettin married....
then the shaadi,,,both were lookin awsume...
then the vidai,,,the sad part...but sujal hai na aasu poochne ke liye....
now the main thin...THE SUHAAG RAAT...AMAZIN YAAR...the way u expressed the fellins was tooo good.....yaar maan gae aapki imagination ko..... 👏
ab to poor AKKI ki bhi shaadi kar va do....
waitin for next part.....

thnx neha fr such a sweet reply...i m glad u noticed n wrote every detail...😊!!

ab shaadi ke din nervousness to hogi hi...😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: aishwaria

totally loved it it was awesome. Next part Epilogue? u ending this story?

yes dear its gonna end!!😊!!

do read the epilogue!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ami_princess

awwwwwwwww so romantic yaar...finally thier marrige is done i am so happy....and now they are one...LOVE IT....cant wait to read more........ 😳

thnx dear!!😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: fravashi

hmmmmmmmm.......... i am still in that spell which u have cursed by writing this part 😆 .my heart is beating faster that ever and i am all blushing,smiling and getting all worked up 😳 . mehndi the part was extreeemmmmmelllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy fantastic,fabulous,excellent , evry well and perfectly written and superb 👏 . agar mujhe iss part ko rating karna ho toh i would give 100/100 it was that exclusive 🤗 . the marriage ceremony was perfect,just perfect, saab kuch bilkul sahi tarike se tha, every rasam was perfect mehndi 👍🏼 .lagta hai tum shadiyaan bohot attend karti ho.even i go for many marriages and in all this was very nicely and the word perfect automatically comes 😉 . saab kuch ekdun accha tha and i am really proud of u ki tumne itna khubsurat shadi ka part likha .jisme there were emotions of nervousness 😕 😕 😕 ,tension 🤔 🤔 🤔 ,happiness ,excitement 🥳 🥳 🥳 ,eagerness 😍 😍 😍 , sadness cause she has to leave her house,love ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ,romance 😉 😉 😉 and finally starting of revolution of one's world with immense love 😳 . today's part was beyond description and appreciation mehndi 😉 . i was amazed ki tumne harr choti baaton paar gor kiya and u showed it in the story 👏 .everything like shadi ke surrounding,decoration se lekar kareeb rishtedaron ke mazak, hasi tak and last but not the least sujal aur kashish ke aik hone tak ❤️ .this was the best part i ever read ⭐️ .well done 😉 !!!keep it up 👍🏼 !!!great exclusive part mehndi 😉 . will be waiting for epilogue .but plzzz....don't show them getting middle aged or something yaar 😭 . atleast for a while let them be young married couple after some months of marriage 😳.hey the last bit was the best written part ever 👍🏼 👍🏼 .continue soon yaar plzzzzz.....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

thnx nikki!!like always...luvd ur reply!!😊....u never forget to mention the small details of part which is the best part in yr replies....😳.....and the way u write u make me write more romance in between them😉.....i hv attended close marriages , but still wsnt sure of order....n wats more i cudnt ask my mom abt that u see.....she will think something other😆.......!!

i luvd ur reply n a BIG thnx fr it!!😊😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: goodkashish

yaar it was too good 👏 ........i just love every single word of it.......mind blowing..........yaar you r too good in romantic scene 😳 ...........ple continue soon........thanks........keep post romantic parts like this in the future.........i am so happy for sk.....love the wedding........thanks

love

kashish


thnx for liking the part dear!!😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Kashish_88

First of all i m extremely sorry for replying late its just tht my stupid net stopped working n now i got it to work again :D
Next, my name is Aalia, what's ur name?
I have read the wedding part and well the part was awesome, really u have written awesomely well, n u did justice 😉 lol neways i relli loved the part, it was described very well, and u r an awesome riter.... 👏 👏 👏
i guess u would b posting the epilogue next n tht will b the end of this but seriously i wil relli miss ur fic n i encourage u to start another fic as u have the ability to
i will relly miss ur romatic scenes n ur cute parts b/w sujal n kashish..
Again great work n looking for the next part to b posted soon hopefully...
till then gud luck n cya
👏 👏 👏

aalia....nice name...i ws quiet nervous while writting the bit...i never planned to write after their lip kiss.....but then...wrote to the nxt level n thn to u fr that...otherwise i wud hv just said that the screen is blurred...or something like that...its not very much though...bt still u gave me the courage.....thnx dear...and my name is mehndi!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
EPILOGUE

akshat:i m so nervous sujal...
s:and wt u said on the day of my marriage....??
ak:that ws to comfort u yaar....u know!!...hey...y is he smiling like that..??nd y i feel warm on my shirt...n wats that smell??ohh crap sujal...dnt tell me he has......(he cudnt complete...it ws better if he shud not!)....
k:give him to me akshat....and u get changed...its ur marriage dear jiju....
ak:plzz dont call me that...aki is much better....

it has been 2 yrs since SK got married...they hv 2 month old baby boy.....and well u got it he has just spoiled his sweet n loving aki chachu's shirt....

the last 3 mnths were very quick....charu done with her studies , aki-charu got engaged.....and then...kashish got this b'ful feeling of being mumma....she gave birth to a baby boy....and named him rajveer.....rajveer garewal.......which meant victory...!!
it ws day of aki-charu wedding and after much fights it ws decided....sujal will b frm aki's side n kashish be frm charu's side....

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k:kaisi lag rahi hoon??

sujal who ws playing with his son , looked up , watched her...n smiled...

s:u r always b'ful biwi....ahh..but...the lipstick shade is dark.....
k:ohh...i will wipe it off...
s:no need jaan....i will help u...

he put raj on bed , walked toward her n kissed deeply on her lips....

s:now thats called a perfect shade.....(nd winked)...

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"i will not let u win this time also".....said kashish to her husband...
s:ohh wo kaise??
k:ladki wale hamesha jeet-te hain...aur ab bhi jeetenge...
s:wo kaise??
k:hamari shaadi mein aki ne charu ko tumhare shoes de diye the....aur aaj tum doge aki ke shoes...isliye aaj bhi hum jeetenge....
s:nahi nahi biwi....i wont give u...
k(coming closer):are u sure honey...(she caressed his cheek)....is it fine that i take the shoes....
s:(with so much resistence...even aftr 2 yrs of marriage kashish had same effect on him as before)....h..ha..haan...n..nnooo...i..i.. ca..cant...
k:(she now kissed him below his nose , above his lips)...plzz sujal...

sujal ws nt in state to reply....

kashish took his hands and kept them on her bare waist n pushed herself closer....he ws drowning in her eyes....he ws so drowned that he cudnt even notice the naughtiness in her eyes , the grin on her face....

k:do na sujal...
s(he pulled her in a tight hug..):kya doon kashish....
k:ye(pointed towards aki's shoes)....

sujal in trance, gave her the shoes....bt still didnt left her...they were hugging tightly....she too forget the purpose....and clunged onto him....

mehek:bhabhi...rajveer ko delkhiye.....(she shut her mouth wen she saw them hugging.....she turned arnd instantly)....aap log to kahin bhi shuru ho jaate hain....bhaiya...ab chhod bhi do bhabhi ko....
s:ohh..wo..to...ye kashish bhi na...(ran his hand thru his hair n gave a silly smile!)
k:sach sujal main bhi na bohot smart hoon....(n she ran away with the shoes...which unfortunately ws noticed by mehek...)
m:bhaiya...ye kya kiya apne??
s:kya kiya maine??
m:bhaiya....bhabhi joote le kar bhag gayi....sach...aap aur aki bhaiya ka ek hi haal hai....waise to sabse lad lenge lekin...apni biwiyon ke aage kho hi jaate hain.....ab aap hi dena paise...aki bhaiya ne aapki shaadi mein diye the...ab unki shaadi mein aap do.....(n she turned around to leave!)
s:arrey mehek...rajveer ko to deja....ab iski maa to dushman party mein ho gayi....yahi sahara hai ab to....(n both of them laughed!!)

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punditjee:ab vivaah sampann hua....var-vadhu jayein aur sabka aashirwaad lein!!

aki-charu touched everyone's feet....now it ws time fr dinner...the table ws laid down...

veena:la kashish raj ko mujhe de...tu aaram se khana kha le...
k:nahi mumma...theek hai...
v:arrey mujhe bhi to apne potey ke saath khelne de...
cg:haan kashish...apne dada ke paas bhi to aane de...
k:arrey papa kaisi baatein kar rahe hain aap....mujhse aur sujal se zyada hak to aapka hai is par!!

cg , after seeing rajveer fr the 1st time in hospital...., changed a lot....he liked his grandson....and started spending time with him....everyone liked the change in nature.....sujal too started talking to him in a cool manner...

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k:dekho sujal...mumma sahi kehti hain....iska naak aur chin bilkul tumpar gaye hain....kitne pyaare hain dekho...(cleaning of her make-up while seating on chair in front of mirror)
s:lekin aankhein to tum par hain...brown aur caring....my god he will be popular in girls , like me...oh god save him...like u saved me....(he swayed his son in his strong arms)
k:tum kehna kya chahate ho sujal....ladkiyaan tumpar marti thi...
s:haan kashish...bilkul....chaho to akshat se puchh lo....
k:ab aki ja chuka hai apne honeymoon par tab keh rahe ho!!...waise bohot se ladke mujh par jaan dete the...
s:(with jealousy in eyes)...kiski himmat hai jo kashish sujal garewal ko 1 nazar bhi dekh le....

kashish laughed....seeing her laughing....he forgot his anger n jealousy n kept on looking her....

na kajre ki dhar, (he looked at those eyes which were free of kajal)
na motiyon ke haar, (the simplicity moved him)
na koi kiya shingar fir bhi kitni sundar ho...

he came towards her....make her stand and looked into mirror...in mirror it had the image of sujal...with one arm around his wife and in his other arm held the sleeping rajveer)

s:perfect!!(she smiled while caressing her son)...bas ab kuchh hi bachon ki kami hai...

kashish hit him on his chest....

k:kuchh bache??...bas 1 aur...

sujal kept rajveer in his small bed , besides their bed....and again reached fr her...

s:1 aur ke liye bhi to mehnat karni padegi na...chalo....

mann mein pyaar bhara,
aur tann mein pyaar bhara,
jeevan mein pyaar bhara tum to mere priyawar ho...
tum hi to mere priyawar hai....

sujal laid down with his arms around her...watching their small son sleeping peacefully in his bed....

s:thnx kashish..
k:kis liye sujal??
s:raj ke liye....he is so pure...so small...
k:sujal...wo humara beta hai....u dont need to thank me....

sujal hugged her wife tight...telling her he is really happy seeing his son....

singaar tera yovan,
yovan hi tera gehna,
tu taazagi phoolon ki,
kya sadagi ka gehna,
ude khushboo jab chale tu,
ude khushboo jab chale tu,
bole to baje sitaar.....

na kajre...

sujal strtched while yawning , his hands above her head..he agn took her in embrace n closed his eyes.....he ws tired of work , marriage n preparing fr varun-mehek marriage which ws aftr a month....while kashish , who ws looking him , got tears in her eyes...

s:kya hua...
k:sab sapna sa lagta hai...isliye
s:nahi kashish ye sapna nahi hai....ye haqiqat hai...aur future is se bhi khubsoorat hoga....i promise!

saari duniya harjai, (she remembered rishi's act n how she hated to love)
tere pyaar mein he sachai, (but gradually she fell in true love...with sujal)
isliye chhodke duniya, (she again believed in love...)
teri or khichi chalo aayi,(and finally melted in his strong arms....she loved him more than her life....)
thi patthar,tune chhu kar,
thi patthar,tune chhu kar,(she hugged him more tightly as if she will never let him go of her life..)
sona kar diya khara......

mann mein....

s:jo beet gaya...use yaad karne se koi fayda nahi hai kashish....sab bhool jao...
k:sahi kehte ho sujal...

sujal ws sleepy....he started sleeping...but kashish climbed on him....rested her face on his strong chest while moving her hand on his chest....and aftr few mins...raised herself and showered him with kisses all around his face....and noticed a smile on his face.....

tera ang sacha sona,(he caressed his back...smooth , soft n glowing...)
muskaan sache moti,
tere honth hai madhushala, (he kissed her on lips....those soft n supple lips...)
tu roop ki hai jyoti,(he reached fr her other features...eyes , forehead , nose , cheeks...)
teri surat jaisi moorat,
teri surat jaisi moorat,(then went down n kissed her neck n around neck...shoulders)
main dekhoon baar baar...

na kajre.....

and lay their in each other's arms.....they knew now there is no looking back.....they love each other n their small son....they were the happiest lovers at the moment....and every moment that followed!!


>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>> END & nbsp; <<<<<<<<<<&l t;<<<<<<<<

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Edited by liquidfantasy - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Excellent yaar just loved their son beautiful, but me sad it ended are u planning another FF?

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