Originally posted by: fravashi
hmmmmmmmm.......... i am still in that spell which u have cursed by writing this part 😆 .my heart is beating faster that ever and i am all blushing,smiling and getting all worked up 😳 . mehndi the part was extreeemmmmmelllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy fantastic,fabulous,excellent , evry well and perfectly written and superb 👏 . agar mujhe iss part ko rating karna ho toh i would give 100/100 it was that exclusive 🤗 . the marriage ceremony was perfect,just perfect, saab kuch bilkul sahi tarike se tha, every rasam was perfect mehndi 👍🏼 .lagta hai tum shadiyaan bohot attend karti ho.even i go for many marriages and in all this was very nicely and the word perfect automatically comes 😉 . saab kuch ekdun accha tha and i am really proud of u ki tumne itna khubsurat shadi ka part likha .jisme there were emotions of nervousness 😕 😕 😕 ,tension 🤔 🤔 🤔 ,happiness ,excitement 🥳 🥳 🥳 ,eagerness 😍 😍 😍 , sadness cause she has to leave her house,love ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ,romance 😉 😉 😉 and finally starting of revolution of one's world with immense love 😳 . today's part was beyond description and appreciation mehndi 😉 . i was amazed ki tumne harr choti baaton paar gor kiya and u showed it in the story 👏 .everything like shadi ke surrounding,decoration se lekar kareeb rishtedaron ke mazak, hasi tak and last but not the least sujal aur kashish ke aik hone tak ❤️ .this was the best part i ever read ⭐️ .well done 😉 !!!keep it up 👍🏼 !!!great exclusive part mehndi 😉 . will be waiting for epilogue .but plzzz....don't show them getting middle aged or something yaar 😭 . atleast for a while let them be young married couple after some months of marriage 😳.hey the last bit was the best written part ever 👍🏼 👍🏼 .continue soon yaar plzzzzz.....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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