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@liquidfantasy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#761

Originally posted by: ami_princess
AWESOME part yaar.....the sakaham part was funny...SALLLE... 😆

thnx yaar😊!!

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liquidfantasy

@liquidfantasy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#762

PART-60
ak:arrey sujal kitchen mein kya kar raha hai...

he saw sujal hiding in a corner....sitting wid his back against wall...aur uske chehre par 12 baje huye the....

s:shhh...aki plzz kisi bataiyo mat...abhi abhi ramukaka aur us maha bevkoof jhalloram ko bhi mana kiya...ab tu aa gaya...
ak:par hua kya??tu aise yahan kya kar raha hai??
s:arrey yaar kuchh nahi...achha chal...yahan baith..mere paas!!(aki sat down)...yaar wo badi tension ho rahi hai...waise to main khush hoon ki kashish(saying that name he got a smile fr a sec...bt agn got the tensed face)....se meri aaj shaadi hai...lekin yaar pehli baar hai na....bohot ajeeb sa lag raha hai...

aki laughed....

ak:kya yaar...tune to meri jaan hi nikal di thi....aisa hota hai...chal ab uth....thodaa tayar hona hai na tujhe....sab dhundh rahe hain tujhe...
s:nahi yaar...main nahi jaunga...itne logon ke aage
ak:main jaanta hoon teri tension kaise door hogi....aa to sahi mere saath...

sujal reluctantly went wid aki...he drove him to kashish's place....bt stopped the car lil far frm kashish's place...

ak:ab dekh...ja kashish se baat kar aa....khidki se jaaiyo....main yahin tera wait kar raha hoon...30 min mein aa jaiyo....
s:pakka jaon??...kisi ne dekh liya to...shaadi ka ghar hai..koi bhi mil gaya to??
ak:hmmm....ye le...ye glares aur bandana pehen le....is se kafi chhup jayega tera chehra...
s:thnx yaar...main bas thodi dair main aata hoon...

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c:di...ye aapke shaadi ke lehnge ke saath achha lagega...ise hi pehen na...

yahan kashish ki haalat bhi kuchh kam nahi thi....she had squeezed the soft pillow so much that the cotton inside ws crumpled....n it wsnt enuf....she had already measured the length of room , walking frm one corner to another....

k:haan theek hai charu....rakh de...
c:ohh di...janti hoon aap nervous hain...lekin...achha main aapke liye coffee lati hoon...u will feel better...

s(in whisper...frm widow)...:kashish...kashish...
k:sujal..tum yahan...kisi ne dekh liya to??
s:ab agar aise latka rahoonga to definately koi dekh lega..
k:ohh...andar aao...(she closed the door..)...bolo kya hua...

sujal hold her hand...it ws cold n shaking....

s:steady kashish...(she smiled)....nervous??
k:terrified....
s:i know its ur 1st time na...
k:tumhara bhi...
s:tabhi to yahan hoon...subah se main bhi nervous hoon...to yahan tumse 2 min baat karne aa gaya....idhar aao..(he guided him to bed , made her sit there n he himself sat besides...)...dekho kashish...aajse humari zindagi badal jayengi...lekin jab bhi tum pareshaan hogi...mujhe apne paaas paogi....tumhara saath main kabhi nahi chhodunga....kabhi nahi...
k:i know sujal...main tumhe koi pareshaani...koi dukh aane nahi dungi...in sab ko pehle mujhse ho kar jaana hoga...

sujal caressed her cheek...very lovingly...

s:1 baat aur....jab tak tum nahi chahogi....hamare beech kuchh nahi hoga....pakka...
k:lekin maine aisa kab kaha ki....(she bit her tounge n sujal smiled..)

she ws red...blushing..

s:thnx kashish...meri zindagi mein firse aane ke liye...
k:thn to u sujal...meri zindagi itni sundar banane ke liye....

there ws a knock at the door...n someone called kashish....

k:ohh shit..papa...
s:ab kya karein....neeche to saksham khada hai...
k:chhup jao....jaldi se...

sujal rolled under the bed...kashish opened the door...

k:ji papa..
ks:beta...(he took her inside n sat on couch...)..ye tumhari maa ke hain..(gave her gold bangles)..usne teri shaadi ke liye rakhe the...wo hamesha tujhe dulhan ki tarah dekhna chahati thi....aaj wo bohot khush hoti...agar zinda hoti to...
k:(they both got tears in eyes)...nahi papa...wo ab bhi hamare saath hain....aur wo khush hain...
ks:tum bohot yaad aaogi kashish...(he hugged her)...
k:papa...main yahin hoon...jab aap kahenge main aa jaungi...
ks:jaanta hoon...lekin tera sasural bhi to chahega ki tu hamesha wahin rahe...
k:papa sujal samjhata hai...wo kabhi pareshaan nahi hoga...
ks:beta....sujal ka dhyaan rakhiyo...wo bohot pyaar karta hai tujhe...us par hamesha vishwaas rakhiyo...wo kabhi kisi ka bura nahi kar sakta...(sujal who ws listening all this smiled...)haan thoda gussa hai us mein....

kashish (laughed...):papa...main sujal ke khilaaf nahi sun sakti...fir chahe wo sach hi kyu na ho....
ks:dhat...aise nahi kehte....chalo tum tayar hona shuru kar do...kuchh hi ghante bache hain....
k:ji papa...

her dad left the room....n kashish agn closed the door...sujal came out of bed...his hands on his waist n wid anger...

s:to main gussa karta hoon...
k:haan..bilkul...
s:dekho abhi to main ja raha hoon...lekin raat ko chhodunga nahi tumhe....tayar rehna...
k:ohh...jaise main dar gayi...
s:kashish...aaj dilwale apni dulhaniya le hi jayenge...dekh lena...(n he winked..)..
k:sujal...ye dulhan bhi jaane ke liye tayar hai...kabse...

sujal kissed hurriedly on her cheek n left the room....aki ws waiting fr him...

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mehek:akshat bhaiya...hamein sujal bhaiya ke shoes ka khayal rakhna hai....charu aur saksham zaroor lene ki koshish karenge...
ak:arrey aise kaise le jayenge...main khud hi inhein chhupa aata hoon...
m:ye hui na baat..

sak:wo dekh charu...akshat jij ke shoes le kar ja raha hai...
c:wo to main bhi dekh raha hoon....lekin karoon kya...

saksham gave a you-are-stupid look to her...

sak:arrey charu...'AKSHAT' le kar ja raha hai!!...to tu us se le sakti hai...jaa...
c:ye to mast hai..i wonder mujhe ye idea kyu nahi aaya....
sak:tere paas dimag thode hi hai....ab jaa...

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c:aki tum bohot achhe lag rahe ho...(he ws wearing gray colored long kurta with shining silver work on neck...wid silver pajami....n he really looked handsome).....bohot jach rahe ho..(n she planted kiss on his cheek...he ws lost in her.....she too looked awesome in deep pink colored lehenga choli..the choli had very thin straps n ws having slant cut...thus showing off a part of her waist...)..kahan ja rahe ho...

aki is still looking at her n not in his senses....

ak:w..oo..wo..mm..main..ye..chhupaane..j..jaa raha tha....
c:ohh...do mujhe do...main chhupa deti hoon(ran her finger on his face)....theek hai...
ak:hh..aaa...nn..t..the...kk h..aai...m..mu.jhe k.kya.. problem hogi....
c:u r so sweet love...(she agn kissed him on the corner of his lips)...

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mehek:bhaiya...kahan chhupaye bhaiya ke joote??
ak:(remembering his moment wid charu few mins ago)...haan chhupa diye...
varun:lekin kahan??
ak:charu ko diye hain...wo chhupa degi...
varun:kya...akshat ye kya kiya aapne....joote charu ko de diye...(hit his forehead)....
mehek:bhaiya...lekin kyu..??

now he understood n felt embarassed to tell them...so he stuttered with words n told them the truth....n ws blushing!!

m:sirf 2 kisses ke liye aapne...ohh bhaiya...aap bhi na...ab kya karenge hum...
v:hum kuchh nahi kar sakte...ab to unhein pase dene hi padenge....sab teri wajah se akshat...!!

while at some other place...

sak:good work sis...u r too good...lekin 2 kiss karne ki zaroorat nahi thi...
c(blushing):wo..wo...tune hi to kaha tha..(trying to hide her blush)..jaa kar joote lekar aa...
sak theek hai...theek hai...

they got good deal of money in exchange of shoes....which ws paid by poor akshat....as it ws his fault....but stll he winked at charu...!!he ws happy that it ws only charu who can distract him...!!
well moving onto further...everyone ws so busy....veena , cg , ranjeet n krishnakant were so engrossed in work aroung mandap that no one had the time to breath.....the marriage ws held in a open gardens of hotel TAJ.....a stage ws set with a sofa kept there....the altar ws made near it...it ws a b'ful altar with red and golden clothes...the pillars were decorated with flowers.....and the 'hawan kund' ws kept in middle.it ws sorrounded by quilts fr people to sit.....pundit jee ws already there making some prior arrangement....sujal too ws sitting n waiting fr 'muhurat' so that he cud see kashish...occassionaly aki n mehek n varun n pammi mausi wud come to chat wid him....he didnt wait fr long as pundit jee said those magical words...

pundit jee:dulhan ko bulaiye...waqt beeta ja raha hai
he adjusted his dupatta as kashish wud come any moment...he ws wearing white n golden sherwani...with golden wore all around....n golden dupatta....with a 'sehra' n talwar hung frm around his shoulders...he looked up to see fr kashish n he saw her....it ws as if his heart wud explode of sudden fast beating...he knew she is gorgeous...but 2day...it ws diffrent....she looked angelic n dainty in her red heavy lehenga....golden work at the borders n had taken the dupatta on her head....the blouse had cap sleeves...and her slim fair hands ws dark brown coz of mehndi.....her arms had so many red color choodiyaan that he wished to listen its 'khanak'....she ws looking at ground n walking very slowly....eider it ws the nervousness or the heavy lehenga....her hair were tied in a bun n she wore 'golden maang-tikka' n the traditional 'nath' in nose...with earrings.....n the best thing ws the smile he noticed on her fair n pretty face....it really reflected the love she had in her heart fr him.....she really looked like a complete bride....the most b'ful girl he had ever seen...he cherished the moment n felt proud fr having her in his life...!!

they were now standing on stage....ready put garlands into each other's neck....sujal readily bent his head so that it is easier fr kashish to put...aki ws very angry on this...but he too knew that he wud do same...

they moved on to sit in altar......he watched her closely....he love her...wo sharam jo uske chehre par thi....sujal cud happily lay his life fr that...!!

punditjee:kanyadaan ke liye aayiye...

it is the most awaited moment fr a father.....sinha came there immidiately and performed the ritual by giving her hand into his....sujal held her hand with affection n warmth...!!
soon the mantras were read....and then veena put a piece of cloth around sujal.....then punditjee told them to do the pheras....the knot ws tied.....while taking the pheras....each them promised that they will b there forever....and thanked god....and asked fr god that they shud be husband n wife always....
it ws time to put sindoor in kashish's 'maang'....sujal put that very carefully.....then he tied manglasutra.....sujal n kashish glared each other n smiled....the smile said everything...their happiness , love , trust , care......

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ak:chal bhai teri to shaadi ho gayi...mera number kab lagayega??
S:aa jayega...jaldi kya hai...!!
ak:jaldi kya hai...huh??...apni shaadi ki kitni jaldi thi tujhe.....
varun:bhaiya ye to akshat ke saath cheating hai....
s:(to aki)arrey mazak kar raha tha meri jaan....main jaldi hi papa se baat karunga...kyu kashish...

she just nodded in affirmative...

now dinner ws served.....a plate ws given to SK...so that they can also eat....every one ws happy n quiet cheerful....they were praising the newly weds....

pammi:haye kinni soni jodi hai na....nazar na lage kisi ki....
ak:sachmuch GF...dono bohot hi achhe lagte hain...
pammi:sach kaha tha sujal ne...kashish bilkul pari jaisi hai....oh phitte mu...tu kab shaadi kar raha hai??
ak:kya karoon....meri koi baat hi nahi karta charu ke sadu papa se....aap chaliye na....
pamm:chal abhi chal....
ak:arrey abhi nahi...shaadi ke baad!!
pammi:oh..zara kudi ko bula to la...miloon to us se....
ak:bas 1 sec...(he returned with charu...charu touched her feet)...ye hai meri jaan mausi...
pammi:oh putaar tune is nalayak mein kya dekha....kahin is ne tujhe fasaya to nahi....
c:(she ws shy)..nahi mausi ji....aisa nahi hai....
pammi:fir theek hai....
c:mausi ji....main chalti hoon vidaai ka waqt ho raha hai...

kashish ws crying....her face ws taer starined.....the kajal of her eyes spread on her face coz of constt crying...everyone ws crying too...her dad had got tears in his eyes , charu ne to ro ro kar boora haal kar rakha tha....lekin akshat ne use sambhal rakha tha....saksham ws really worried abt her sis.....

ks:beta...khush rehna...(he hugged her daughter fr long time...)
c:di apna khayal rakhna....waise jiju to rakhenge hi....(kashish smiled n hugged her)
rs:beta....mera aashirwaad hamesha tere saath...!!(she hugged him too)
sak:di....jij se bachke rehna.....bohot bhaari haath hai inka....(she smiled....n hugged him...)

sujal who ws seeing all this ws worried fr kashish...he had never seen crying her so much...he ws restless....he wanted to hug her n console...he wanted to reassure that no matter what....he is always there...finally they sat in car n slowly the car drove...kashish waved out to her family till they were out of sight.....and then she once again burst into tears....

s:bas kashish...bas....i promise ki tum kisi ko bhi miss nahi karogi....plzz kashish dont cry...

kashish knew sujal meant every word he said...she buried her head in his chest n started crying again.....she cudnt help crying...while sujal stroked her hair...n kissed on her forehead.....

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s:achha batao kashish tumhari aur meri shaadi mein sabse achhi baat kya hai....

he asked while resting on bed...he laid down besides her n pulled her in crook of his strong arms....she raised herself on her elbow n kept other hand on his chest

k:ummm...hamara milna...
s:nahi us se bhi achha....
k:tum batao....
s:yahi ki main tumhe bridal wear mein dekh paya...aaj tum bohot pyaari lag rahi ho...(she ws still in her wedding attire)

kashish blushed n kept her face on his chest....and played with the kurta of his sherwaani...
after sometime he got up n sat...kashish too sat beside him...she gave a questioned look...

s:tumhare liye kuchh hai..(she smiled...sujal went to cupboard n brought a tiny bag)...ye...

it ws a bracelet in platinum n diamond....it had to letters hanging as charms..SK...kashish ws delighted to see it...she gave him her hand...

k:tum pehnao...
s:lekin kahan...itni saari shoodiyaan tumne waise hi pehen rakhi hain....achha theek hai....main hi inhein utaar deta hoon...

kashish backed away...she knew wt it might end in...but 2day she ws ready...they are officially married....
she gave him her hand....it ws all normal initially...but by the time he ws removing the last bangle they ws so lost in each other's eyes that anything didnt seem to happen...the world stopped fr them....it ws just sujal n kashish....he removed all the jewellery pieces she wore....removed the dupatta she ws wearing n almost fiercely took the jangle of pins that held her hair in a bun....to let the tresses fall on her shoulders n on her face....he carefully pushed her on the bed n adjusted himself on her...once again....showered her face with kisses...n finally took her lips inside hers....feeling both the lips...their tongues inside playing n fighting....his hands reached her choli n started opening up the hooks at back....while kashsih struggled with his kurta....and it ws kept aside aftr sometime....he kissed her everywhere...shoulders , neck , cleavage , around cleavage...n she too pushed him more on herself...massaging his back...n kissing around his chest....neck n abdomen....wat they cared fr at this moment of time ws.....nothing....they wanted the time to stop , the planet to stop spinning , the moon in night to stay there..the dim light to b more dimmer.....she didnt knew when his hands worked at the piece of cloth that she wore closeset to her skin n it lay down with the choli...while he didnt knew when he lay on her while his thigh skin touching hers...when the last remenant of clothing ws lying on the floor...wat remained ws final act of lovemaking....with the fact that there is bo fight in crossing the lines......after this what left ws two passionate lovers , satisfied n sleeping in each others arms with a smile n glow of love on face , with sheet that covered them....!!!!!

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end of part-60...
plzzz guys do tell me how ws it....i m really tense in knowing abt the last bit....
nxt part:-
epilogue

Edited by liquidfantasy - 17 years ago

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Bhumika amin

@ami_princess

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#763

awwwwwwwww so romantic yaar...finally thier marrige is done i am so happy....and now they are one...LOVE IT....cant wait to read more........ 😳

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nikita

@beauty_niki

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#764

hmmmmmmmm.......... i am still in that spell which u have cursed by writing this part 😆 .my heart is beating faster that ever and i am all blushing,smiling and getting all worked up 😳 . mehndi the part was extreeemmmmmelllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy fantastic,fabulous,excellent , evry well and perfectly written and superb 👏 . agar mujhe iss part ko rating karna ho toh i would give 100/100 it was that exclusive 🤗 . the marriage ceremony was perfect,just perfect, saab kuch bilkul sahi tarike se tha, every rasam was perfect mehndi 👍🏼 .lagta hai tum shadiyaan bohot attend karti ho.even i go for many marriages and in all this was very nicely and the word perfect automatically comes 😉 . saab kuch ekdun accha tha and i am really proud of u ki tumne itna khubsurat shadi ka part likha .jisme there were emotions of nervousness 😕 😕 😕 ,tension 🤔 🤔 🤔 ,happiness ,excitement 🥳 🥳 🥳 ,eagerness 😍 😍 😍 , sadness cause she has to leave her house,love ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ,romance 😉 😉 😉 and finally starting of revolution of one's world with immense love 😳 . today's part was beyond description and appreciation mehndi 😉 . i was amazed ki tumne harr choti baaton paar gor kiya and u showed it in the story 👏 .everything like shadi ke surrounding,decoration se lekar kareeb rishtedaron ke mazak, hasi tak and last but not the least sujal aur kashish ke aik hone tak ❤️ .this was the best part i ever read ⭐️ .well done 😉 !!!keep it up 👍🏼 !!!great exclusive part mehndi 😉 . will be waiting for epilogue .but plzzz....don't show them getting middle aged or something yaar 😭 . atleast for a while let them be young married couple after some months of marriage 😳.hey the last bit was the best written part ever 👍🏼 👍🏼 .continue soon yaar plzzzzz.....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

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Dhvani

@dhvanisoni

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#765

are yaar...i M IN LOSS OF WORDS HERE...I mean...jsut donno wht to say...me blushing and smiling😉 hehe...this was the best part ever..👏.and nikki told it right tht u looked at every small thing tht a marriage cud have....everythign was awesome...great...excellent part...and the last bit was nice...I think u did justice to it...LOVED IT ...from the bottom of my heart...seriously...😳

Edited by dhvanisoni - 17 years ago

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sheela

@Aamnakideewani

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#766

very nice part the whole ceremony n their very 1st night every thing was just aweosome 😳 ab yeh honeymoom pe kub jarahay hain 😉 tehre will be lots of fun na 😃 waisay na bhi jayin to ab her din hi 😆 after all sujallll 😆 n e wayz v nice part n cont soon

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neha

@neh0307

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#767

ooooohhhhhhh mmmmyyyyy god....amazin yaar....
idiot akshat charu ke chakar me sujal ke joote de diye aur apna hi nuksaan karva liya....
now lets come to our jodi MR n MRS SUJAL GAREWAL.....
before marriage woh nervousness so sweet bechara jis din ka wait kar raha tha ussi din itna pareshan ho gaya.....but thats ought to happen whn one is gettin married....
then the shaadi,,,both were lookin awsume...
then the vidai,,,the sad part...but sujal hai na aasu poochne ke liye....
now the main thin...THE SUHAAG RAAT...AMAZIN YAAR...the way u expressed the fellins was tooo good.....yaar maan gae aapki imagination ko..... 👏
ab to poor AKKI ki bhi shaadi kar va do....
waitin for next part.....

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saba

@aishwaria

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Posted: 17 years ago

#768

totally loved it it was awesome. Next part Epilogue? u ending this story?

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kashish

@goodkashish

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+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#769

yaar it was too good 👏 ........i just love every single word of it.......mind blowing..........yaar you r too good in romantic scene 😳 ...........ple continue soon........thanks........keep post romantic parts like this in the future.........i am so happy for sk.....love the wedding........thanks

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kashish

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Aalia

@Kashish_88

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#770

First of all i m extremely sorry for replying late its just tht my stupid net stopped working n now i got it to work again :D
Next, my name is Aalia, what's ur name?
I have read the wedding part and well the part was awesome, really u have written awesomely well, n u did justice 😉 lol neways i relli loved the part, it was described very well, and u r an awesome riter.... 👏 👏 👏
i guess u would b posting the epilogue next n tht will b the end of this but seriously i wil relli miss ur fic n i encourage u to start another fic as u have the ability to
i will relly miss ur romatic scenes n ur cute parts b/w sujal n kashish..
Again great work n looking for the next part to b posted soon hopefully...
till then gud luck n cya
👏 👏 👏

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