{LRL}.....Doomed...End Pg-54 {See Pg-55}

sanyamalhotra

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Posted: 18 years ago

#331

Dis is d last RN romance part...Tho pehle waale parts se comparitively thoda dull hai...bt bahut romance kar liya ab zara story ko aage badhayenge nxt part se..A major twist coming up nxt!!
Luv,
Sanya..

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yoginisahakari

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Posted: 18 years ago

#332

hey sanya

great going

the romance part is really well presented

agar aisa Real LRL me hota to ( itna nahi par atleast they confess their love for each otherto acha hota)

great going

pl continue

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KSG_qubool_hai

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Posted: 18 years ago

#333

hey sanya... very hot part.. sorry cudnt comment on the last one.. ws kinda rushed.. i'll be lookin forward to all the twists u've got comin up.. but i wont be lookin forward to not hvin another fic by u.. but u need a break to recharge.. so i guess i'l jus hv to be patient and wait.. continue soon..

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saivarsha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#334

wow,wonderful part yaar 👏 ,cont soon....

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Aamna Saran

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: sanyamalhotra

U made my day wid dat comment 7 i m short of words to explain u wat dat compliment means to me.THanxxx darling!!🤗

i did it 4 da 1st tme, bt u make my day everyday by writing this awsome fic!!!!Awsome part again!! luv uuuuuuuuuu.........w8ng for da twist

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pooja sohinda

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Posted: 18 years ago

#336

guddoo thoda thanda pani milega 😆 😆 😆 itna hot part hai ki kya boluuuuuuu 😆

n waise wats dis major twist..."major" entry marne wala hai kya waise bhi mujhe ab major nair se badla lena hai aur isme ur rajveer will surely b d right person 😊

as usual it was ossome n gr88....keep rocking 👏
muwwwwaahhhhhh sweeety u rock 😳 😃

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Bluefalls

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Posted: 18 years ago

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I am also sweating after reading this part.Nooooo....dont get me wrong!!!The reason behind my sweat is different.Waise hi kitni garmi hai aajkal,meri city mein to 38 degree celsius temperature hai,Uske upar tumne itna hot part likh diya to pasina to aega hi na!!!Anyways, Gr8 part 👏 .

Edited by SAHELIGSWM - 18 years ago

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pooja sohinda

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Posted: 18 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: sanyamalhotra

Kyaa yaar!! Aaj k epi ka last scene dekh ke dono is role mein misfit lag rahe hain mujhe!!!!Raaaajjjjjjj kinna cute lag raha tha...Is type ki hoshiyaari usko suit nhin karti. He is our cuutie-pie!!

true apna shonaa jo hai😃😃😳 n yes us scene ko dekhne ke baad to main bhi 😳 n abt hoshiyari i guess lrl me uski zyada zarurat padegi janab ko....😆😆😆

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