{LRL}.....Doomed...End Pg-54 {See Pg-55} - Page 33

hey very very good part.....mkae the next part soon........ 😛

its excellent 👏 ur really gr8 yaar,i luv this -ve RN characters,but yaar plz last main unki senses unhe deke maaf karo,un logoko kuch mat karna.un logon ko itni young age main badi punishment mat do.

yaar yeh banda rajveer to bada chalu nikla 😆 kya hoshiyari hai...
waise kehte hai hoshiyar insan bhi kabhi-kabhi galti kar dete hain 😉 😉
but one thing for sure he is too cute to be chalu n hoshiyaar.....raj rocks!!! 😊

again a superb part guddoo 👏 as usual my writer sahiba d bessstttt 👏

Originally posted by: pari213

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😃THanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx........

Originally posted by: SAHELIGSWM

Great part. They are really evil,I must say.Killing somebody in the evening & making love at night,what sense of humour?Waise u really deserve a break after 3 long fictions.But apart from Love station & doomed , what did u write?.I did not read it.

I thot dat was d best way to potray their wickedness.
Bt Thank God u agree I need a break..Before Lovestation my fic was De Novo....Dat was my first fic!!!

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

hey sanya

i ave read ur ff after 3 days because of weekend

it is great though negative characters RN rock here too.

and along with them u too

hats off to you for this wonderful presentation

great going

I was expecting u on friday....Phir mujhe laga u r in a big shock after u found RN evil😉....Baad mein yaad aaya u mite not be around bcoz of weekend.
Bt Thank u so much..Atleast u r not left heart broken...dats more imp for me!

Originally posted by: ami_princess

hey very very good part.....mkae the next part soon........

Thanxx Bhumi.I'll update soon!!!   ;

Originally posted by: violence_peace

ts excellent &nb sp; &nb sp; ur really gr8 yaar,i luv this -ve RN characters,but yaar plz last main unki senses unhe deke maaf karo,un logoko kuch mat karna.un logon ko itni young age main badi punishment mat do.

maafi?????C'mon yaar...Dono ne ek ek murder tumhare saamne kiya hai & I did hint it to u all ki woh pehle bhi aisa kar chuke hai so even if they manage to find their lost brains & hearts they'll be hanged even if left on d law procedures.

Originally posted by: mahek-e-gulab

yaar yeh banda rajveer to bada chalu nikla kya hoshiyari hai...
waise kehte hai hoshiyar insan bhi kabhi-kabhi galti kar dete hain
but one thing for sure he is too cute to be chalu n hoshiyaar.....raj rocks!!!

again a superb part guddoo as usual my writer sahiba d bessstttt

Kyaa yaar!! Aaj k epi ka last scene dekh ke dono is role mein misfit lag rahe hain mujhe!!!!Raaaajjjjjjj kinna cute lag raha tha...Is type ki hoshiyaari usko suit nhin karti. He is our cuutie-pie!!

PART-20

She entered his bedroom but Rajveer wasn't there. She stepped inside. The room was lit with at least 50 candles. The bed was covered with a red satin sheet. She smiled. He very well knew how much she liked the soft feel of satin. Suddenly she heard the door behind her close. But even before she could turn around she felt those strong arms around her waist pulling her closer against his bare chest. Finally their eyes met and they smiled at the thought of the night that is going to be filled with love and passion.

"Liked the arrangements?" He asked her planting a peck on her lips.

"It's nice but don't you think something is missing."

"I don't think so. A bottle of chilled champagne is ready for a hot lady."

"Perfect."

He lifted her in his arms and carried her to the bed. He brought the bottle of champagne and 2 glasses.

"Cheers to our success."

"Cheers."

They raised a toast to celebrate their success. They were celebrating the deaths of two army honest officers who were killed to take away the blame for their treachery. They have never ever felt guilt but today they didn't had any fear either.

He brushed his lips on her neck as she gulped down the champagne. She kept the empty glass aside and took his face in her hands. She moved her face closer to him and planted repeated and quick pecks on his lips until he took her lips inside his mouth. He bit her lips slightly as he kissed them tenderly. He loved those supple lips. He drew her face closer taking her lips deeper inside. That one kiss was more than enough to stir their passion. Their kiss was getting more intense, more passionate and more deeper. Finally they parted.

Rajveer took her hand in his own and they both got down from the bed. He played some soft music and pulled her closer into himself for a slow close dance. Her hands went around his neck while his grip around her waist tightened. After a while, he removed her hand and unzipped her jacket.

"Don't you think you are overdressed for this beautiful night?"

She smiled and took it off. Thereafter she removed her wrap-around. She stood there in front of him looking gorgeous in a red tube top and a denim micro mini.

"I couldn't have come here like this. We both would have been dead if I was seen."

He smiled back and kissed on her shoulder pulling her closer again. They resumed their dance. He kissed her fondly on her cheeks gradually shifting to her eyelids and then her forehead. He buried his face into her hair. He lifted her top a little bit baring her sexy midriff. He caressed her gently on her bare midriff. Her skin exposed to his direct touch sent shivers to her heart. The more he caressed, the more her heart ached for that 'out of the world' feeling.

She rested her head on his bare chest and clung to him tightly. After a little while she kissed him on his chest moving upwards towards his neck and finally reaching his lips. It was a short kiss. She softly whispered in his ears as they parted from the kiss.

"This soft music and tender kiss is so not you.... I want my hot and wild lover."

He stopped and looked at her with a big smile. He again lifted her in his arms and put her on the bed. He lied down over her, bit on her neck and then directly reached to her lips. He kissed her passionately as their bodies rubbed against each other arousing them to an altogether different level of pleasure. It didn't take them long to remove all the impediments that hindered their intimacy. They laid there making wild love.... wilder and hotter than ever since it was their much awaited celebration of success.

Her moans were getting louder as she was taken over by the bliss of their love. She was cherishing every moment of his warm touch over her body and the softness of satin against her back. The entire sheet had crumpled badly.

After four continuous hours of love making they both were exhausted. They were breathless and their entire body felt frail because of a sweet yet painful sensation that was running through them. He lied down over her holding her tightly. Their bodies were completely drenched with sweat. Within a few minutes they regained their lost composure. The sweat dried up and they could feel the chill in the air. Naina pulled the sheet and wrapped it over themselves. They finally parted and Rajveer lied down next to her. She rested her head on his chest and held him tightly. He pulled her closer and very soon they were lost in sweet dreams within their deep slumber.