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Posted: 18 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

short part but do continue soon......and one more thing.....well it was a nice part...bur I didn't like the ending 😉 ...too much suspense....but wait that wasn't the last thing what I wanted to say....I wanted to say that for DESIRE 😉 😳 .....plz don't make short parts like that....coz you are ending it soon enough...and...well......yah so that was it.......

One more thing-related to your previous quote- I am actually not allowed to post as much as I want.

1) It's almost like spamming.
2) What I did previously wasn't intentionally but unintentionally I posted a few times after a part.
3) The mods here would warn me for posting more than once (especially if it's not important or intentionally) that I shouldn't post more than once after each part.

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thanks. lol don't worry i won't make the parts for desire short😊😛..oh ok i never knew that i knew spamming wasn't allowed , i didn't know that was considered spamming lol sorrt i'm slow😆..thanks for telling me 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: ash9

is angad bad guy?????? 😕
or good guy?????????
😊

seriously i wish i could tell you but then it'll give the whole suspense away but don't worry you will find out after the lovestory track is over 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: sweetangle04

tht was a short part dear...but indeed a good one...continue soon 😃

aww i'm sorry...thank you!!!😃😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
Part 4
K- Can I trust you?
A- I thought you did, I mean otherwise you wouldn't be sitting in a car with a total stranger
K- Hey don't forget I threatened you
A- Oh yeh not a very good job it but anywhere
K- Then why are you helping me, you should have just taken advantage of me
A- I told I'm a good human being, as a citizen of this country it's my job to help out others
K- Well aren't you so nice and she smiles
A- So you were saying, where are we off to?
K- Okay take me somewhere to your choice
A- What, how can you trust me so blindly?
K- Well it was you who said you're a good human being
A- Oh yes how can I forget, fine I know where to take you mind you it's a long journey to their might take us days
K- I'm okay with that, what other choice do I have except death that awaits me back at home
And with that angad keeps on driving, kripa realized she hadn't asked anything about himself, I mean she basically told her whole life story to him and he didn't eve say a word about himself except his name.
K- umm if you don't mind me asking, well since I basically told my life to you , I would like to know something about you, hope you don't mind
A- oh no its fine, actually I was waiting for you to ask me something about myself, I could have gave you a little intro about my self but I don't like to brag, and he smiles
Kripa lets a small laugh out, this was probably first time she had laughed after that night
A- well what would you like to know about me?
K- umm anything, you would like to tell me like, what you do for a living?, umm I don't like are you married?
A(laughing)- me and marriage….don't think so
K- why what's so wrong with marriage?
A- nothing just haven't found my Girl yet
K- Hmmm know how you feel, I'm still waiting for my soul mate
And with that they drive on further on listening to rain outside hitting the ground… with that kripa falls asleep, angad keeps on driving , suddenly the car stops, and kripa awakens
K- what's the matter
A- hmm I don't know , let me see
Angad go and checks the car. And he comes back
A- um kripa one of my tires is flat, and I don't have a spare so we might have to walk , coz I don't have no mechanic's number to come and fix it
K- oh okay, no problem will just walk until we find someone to help us out,
A- okay
So they both get out, angad locks the door, and they both walk off, they walked for a long time, kripa was getting tiered, she hadn't eaten properly, she didn't get enough sleep, she just wanted to rest, both there clothes were wet. Angad after while realized kripa was tired and said,
A- umm do you want me to pick you up, kripa just looked at him, I mean you look tired
K- no it's okay I should be alrite
A- no seriously it's fine , and he walks over to her and picks her up before she could say something. Kripa just looked into his eyes, he sure was a kind human being indeed. Finally after an hour Angad was getting tired to luckily there was a small motel close by, they both decided to rest till morning.
They both shared one room, as kripa had no money.

okay so heres part 4...hope you like it!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
kripa trusts angad too much...hope she doesn't get into trouble for trusting him 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
i m not sure..if angad is a good guy or a bad guy...
bcoz he is too good to be true...
lets see..

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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
nice part...do continue soon...but one thing surprised me most was that a total stranger ws willing to help someone in a way that he'd travel for days to help that person out.......not ever even thinking about his family......or other things such as work and all.......it was just way to strange and it's leading me to be suspicious of angad now.....or maybe you are guiding us to do that wheres he's innocent all along......either way your ff is intersting..do continue soon....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
GRT prt!!! 👏
👏 but i really dunt like Kripa
trusting Angad sooo much, i mean i have a bad feeling abt im, after all,
he did lie abt his name!!! ughhh!!! i am sooo confused, is Angad a gud
guy or a bad guy!!! poor Kripa, she has gone through sooo much!!!
CANNOT wait to read more... continue soon!!!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: desiqt8806

kripa trusts angad too much...hope she doesn't get into trouble for trusting him 😕

see we learnt a lesson never trust angad lolz😆😆j/k ..hmmm let's see ...thankyou

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Posted: 18 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: sweetangle04

i m not sure..if angad is a good guy or a bad guy...
bcoz he is too good to be true...
lets see..

thank you!!!...hmm yeh but this supense thing will be anwered like a long way to go coz i'm going to go through the lovestory strack first...there will be hints along the way but then i don't know lol😉

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