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@Rajeev_gr8

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#41

M really Sorry guyz i wont be able to post the part on sunday bcoz m going out of town 2day i'll post the part once i came back hope u guyz understand

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sidivyapall

@sidivyapall

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#42

awwwwwwwwww!!!!!!! i was waiting for today with much anticipation.... but i guess its ok... i understand

but plzzzzz cont. as soon as u come back!!!!!!!! 😃

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zinny.xo

@zinny.xo

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#43

I Just caught up. I Loved your Promo, as i said earlier. I Love your Intro. I can't wait for the next part. Continue soon 😊
Love,
Zinu 👏

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@Rajeev_gr8

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#44

Guyz m really sorry 4 keeping u all on w8 4 such a long time but here im posting the 1st part hope u liked this..

K
uchhIssTarha
Suraj apni kirno ko samet-ta hua ja raha tha kuch kirne abhi bhi wapis jane ko tayyar na thi is liye aasman pe roshni bohat khobsurat lag rahe thi panchi bhi apne gharon ko laut rahe the aur IMAAN Ahmad us aasman main kho se gayi thi per use wapis aana para Qk NANO musalsal use bula rahe thi..

N= array IMAAN neechay aa.kitni martaba kaha hai is larki se ki iss waqt na jaya karo chhat pe magar na aaj k bache majal hai jo baron ki baten mane.

seriyon utarte hue Imaan ne nano ko apni makhsoos jagah jinhe wo sab nano ka "Takht" kaha kerte the wahi pe bethe hue dekha aur un k pass ja ker bare pyaar se nano k gale main bazu dal ker boli...

I= meri pyaari nanu ek baat to bataye jawani main aap kesi debater thi?

N= khair main ab bhi koi itni borhe nahi hu beta..

tabhi kitchen k derwaze pe khadi zenab(mother of our dashing heros yar) bol pari

Z= haan beta tumhari nano to mujh se bhi do saal choti hain Q sasu maa?

N= bahu kuchh to sharam karo is umar main bhi kaan laga rahe ho?

nano k samne zenab aajai or wo khamosh rahe aesa kabhi nahi hua tha to aaj kese hojata?

in dono k beech saara din khit pit chalti rehti thi..

Z= kasam se sasu maa main kaan nahi laga rahe thi wo to main kitchen main kaam ker rahe thi k aap ki awaz suni.

I= mumani jaan ab bas jane de haan to nano aap kya keh rahe thi?

N= array imaan beti tu isse khamosh kerwa rahe hai ye to jalti hai mujh se.

nano ne zenab ki taraf ek ghusse bhari nighah dali aur apni baat jari rakhi..

N= beta main apne school ki bohat achhi debater thi tumhare nana jaan ne mujhe speech kerte hue dekh liya tha aur tab se he rat laga de thi k mujhe issi larki se shadi kerni hai.

I= to un k ghar wale nahi maan rahe the.

N= array nahi beta un k gharwale to apne bete ki pasand pe jii jaan se razi the asal masala to mere Walden (parents) ka tha.

I= per Q nano? Aap ki baton se to lagta hao k nana jaan bohat achhay the phir aap k parents k saath kya masala tha?

Z= beta ji abhi aap ne kaha na k nana jaan bohat achay hian kaha na??

Zenab jo bohat dair se khamoshi se nano ki kahani sun rahe thi imaan k sawal pe bol uthi jis per imaan ne hairan ho ker haan main sar ko hilaya albata nano gehri nazron se apni bahu ko dekh rahe thi shayad andaza laga rahe thi k wo kya bolne wali hain??

Z= to yahe to masala tha k wo BOHAT achhay the..

Zenab apni baat keh k ander chali gayi 2/4 sec baad jab use samajh aaya k wo kya keh gayi to nano shuru hogayi apni bahu ki "Tareefen" kerne main aur Imaan ka hans hans k bura haal horaha tha.

Do tell me how was the part.i know its short but will try to write bigger part next time😊

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zinny.xo

@zinny.xo

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#45

Aww..continued after a long time. Very nice. Continue Soon 👏

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

@Imaan-Ki-Duaa

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#46

hi dear jus saw ur new ff now....sorry 4 being late....lovely ff... 👏 ..great concept..intro was v nice..n part one was awesome 2.. 👏 ..do cont soon... 😊

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sidivyapall

@sidivyapall

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#47

VERY nice beginning dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thank goodness u continued!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! long time we all had to wait!!!!!!!

continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳

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@Rajeev_gr8

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#48

K
uchh IssTarha
It was a new day & all were sitting on dining table 4 breakfast..

When Imaan says..

I= pata hia ali….

& b4 she can say anything further ali (AKA lakshya) cuts her in btwn..

A= nahi imaan kassam se mujhe sach main nahi pata.

& we see a handsome guy sitting there beside her he is wearing a black shirt which says "cool dude".

ali hairani aur masoom si shakal bana k kehta hai.

Ali ki baat sun k farooq (lalit 4rm kth) & zenab (veena 4rm kth) hasne lagte hian. While imaan mu bana k baith jati hai..

Zenab sees imaan ka mood & ali ko dantne lagti hian..

Z= ali mat tang kiya karo meri beti ko. Khamkha he us k peechey pare rehte ho.

Ali ko dant parti dekh k imaan ka mood theek hojata hia.

Magar ali kahan chup rehne walon main se thaw o ek dam se bol parta hia..

A= Q mama kya aap meri dado ko tang nahi kerti?

Ye sun k sab muskurane lagte hian when zenab says..

Z= array beta ji mere dil main meri saas k liye dheron pyaar hai aur ye jo ham sara din larte rehte hain na ye bhi pyaar ki jang hoti hai magar ye tum nahi samajh sako ge.

Zenab k lehje main apni saas k liye bohat pyaar tha aur sach bhi yahe tha k wo dono chahe aapas main kitna bhi larayi Karen per pyaar bhi bohat tha ek doosre se.

Ye sab sun k ali phir bol parta hai..

A= jii jii bilkul theek kaha aapne main sach main samajh nahi paunga QK na to main kisi ki saas ban sakta hu aur nahi kisi ki bahu.

Ali ye sab ek miskeen si shakal bana k kehta hai

Ali ki baat sun k ek baar phir sab hansne lagte hian tabhi we see that a man is coming there he is wearing a suit & is looking just awesome with sweet & killing smile on his face & thats DAWOOD (Rajeev) aata hai. Sab ko sallam kerne k baad wo apni jagah pea a ker beth jata hai…

F= berkhudar kahan hote ho aaj kal? Nazar he nahi aate?

Farooq said this while hiding his smile.

D= papa ham to wahe hote hian jahan aap hote hian haan ye alag baat hai k mere boss apne sare kaam bhi mujh he se kerwate hain.

Dawood ki baat sun k zenab ki mamta josh main agayi 😆

Z= farooq ye zyadati hai aap mere bete se itna kaam kerwate hain dekhe zara kitna kamzoor hogaya hai.

F= array begam sahiba koi kamzoor vamzoor nahi hua ye mazak ker raha hai wese mera weight bhi ek pound lose hua hai per meri taraf dekhne k liye aap k pass waqt he kahan hota hai.

Ye kehte hue wo uth kare hue..

F= achha bachon main jaraha hu aur dawood tum kab tak aarahe ho?

D= bas papa abhi kuch dair main nikalta hu asal main mujhe pehle raza sahib k ghar jana hai ek zaroori file unse leni hai unki tabiyat theek nahi thi to maine unhe 2 din ki chuti di thi.

Dawood ne apni office k ek senior employee k bare main bataya.

F= achha achha.. theek hai tum aaram se aana achha bacho allah hafiz.

Allah hafiz

Dawood imaan & ali ne ek he awaz main kaha..

I= dawood aaj mujhe university to chor dena.

D= Q driver kahan gaya?

Z= wo kisi kaam se bazaar gaya hua hai.

Zenab ke kehne per dawood ne ok main sar hilaya aur uth khara hua..

D= theek hai chalo imaan main tumhe chor duga.

Imaan ne apna beg uthaya aur dono sab ko allah hafiz kehte hue bahir nikle.