Shayad yahi to pyar hai-(lk)updated part! - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
Plz Continue 😆
I Like Reading It 😉
Lov,
Zini 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I agree with you zinu29...i also love reading this fanfic. Continue soon. 👏 👏 👏
-Nisha❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nisha i have updated myt fanfic in kyunki section do read it. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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It's a bright sunny morning n kt in her room is standing before the mirror n thinking......that.
KT:she first touches her mangulsutr n then her maan..n think."yakeen nahi hota hai ki mujhe mera pyar mil gaya, yeh cheh(6 yrs)kaise guzar gaye pata hi nahi chala.aur ab to hamare pyar ki nishani bhi hai-adiyya yani ki mera kishen(n smiles....) ab koiaisa hai jo mujhe mama bulata hai.aur laksh ko papa
she suddenly realises that it's too late n her pyare pati laksh is still sleeping

as any housewife even she starts her bad-bad in the morning.

KT:(murmering..)yeh mai bhi subah -subhah kaise soch me pad gayi aur yeh laksh abhi tak nahi utha kya karoon mai iska.

she goes n sits beside laksh on the bed n starts waking him up.

KT:shakes him ........laksh utho bohut der ho gayi hai utho naaaaaaaa.



it's something like this but the difference is that kt is wearing a saree now."she's a wife plus mama na"

laksh pulls her in to the bed n gets on top of her.kt stuggles but laksh had a tight grip.
KT:laksh kya kar rahe ho.phir shuru mat ho gana.8 bag gaye hai office nahi jaana hai kya.
l:jaana to hai par mai apne din ki shuruwat achi tarah se karna chata hoon so jaldi kiss me.n moves closer to kt.
KT:laksh no way!!chup chap uth jao.kishen aajayega laksh
L:to anne do na use bhi pata chale ki mai uske mama se kitna pyar karta hoon.
KT:blushes.n in soft tone laksh plz woh phir sawal karne lagega aur uskje sawal keliye mere pas koi jawab nahi hoga
L:kyun jawab nahi hoga mai deta hoon tumhare bete ko jawab
KT:laksh plz.he dosent listen n moves closer

then here comes a voice........"mamma".
L:oh! no

plz leave ur comments
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
PART-15

RECAP:
KT:laksh plz.he dosent listen n moves closer

then here comes a voice........"mamma".

L:oh! no

NOW:

both aur mamma-pappa realise that adi is comming so kt soon pushes laksh off her n gets out of the bed before adi enters. 😳 😳 .
L:ouchh.........inta zoor se dhakka kyun deti ho

and here comes aur handsome part-2 that is adi running towards his mamma.a cute boy(obviously laksh's son u see........... 😳 😳 )in his school uniform comes near his mamma that is aur kt. 😳

adi:he first takes deep breath as he came all the way running.........mamma..woh....apko.baa bula rahi hai.
KT:kishen kitni bar kaha hai ki bhagte nahi.
she kneels down to adi n says .agar kuch ho jata to.
adi:mama par ap itna chinta kyun karti hai take a chilpil. 😉
KT:haan haan aagkal nakhre jyada hone lage hai tere

laksh stars giggling n burst's out laughing.
KT:laksh tum chup baito isme hasne wali bat kya hai
L:arre woh teek to kejraha hai tum har bat seriously kyun leti ho 😳 😳
KT:haan aur udalo baap-bete mera mazaak mai jaa rahi hoon.n goes out of the room.

L:kt baat to suno meri...

but she had already left.n adi goes n near the bed n laksh lifts him up n makes him sit on his lap.

L:aap yahan aaayiye
ADI:papa.
L:haan bolo
ADI:aap bhi galdi se tayaar ho jayiye breakfast ready hai
L;oh no shayad aag kuch zyada hi late ho gaya
ADI:laughts
L:tujhe hasi aa rahi hai agar galdi tayaar nahi hoga to teri maa phirse chillane lagegi
ADI:papa galdi kijiye warna kt phirse shuru ho jayegi.
L:kt ke bache.......tu ruk mai batata hoon
ADI:quickly runs out of the room n laksh smiles sweetly 😳 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-16
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In kt and laksh's room.kt comes back n now kt is teing adi's tie.n here comes laksh from the bathroom in towel ruffling his hair .
ADI:mamma jaldi
KT:kar rahi hoon na ...rukh har baat pe jaldi

laksh comes n hugs kt from back.
KT:laksh kya kar raho ho....adi hai (in a mild voice so that only laksh hears clearly)
L:arre problem kya hai kt adi tu hi bol tujhe koi problem hai kya mai mamma ko hug kar sakta hoon na.
ADI:haan papa mai bhi to karta hoon .

both laksh n kt start laughing seeing his innocense.
KT:sunliya tumne tumhi bigadte ho ise.
L:arre maine kya kiya

gets outr of his grip.
KT:lo kishen ab tumhara tei bandna ho gaya chalo ab neeche jao b.f keliye.
ADI:teek hai ma.n kisses kt on her cheeck n runs down.

kt turns to leave.then laksh holds her hand.
L:aap hamare tei nahi bandenge
KT:Laksh chodo mera haat aur haan apna tei khud bandlena.

L:achha adi keliye tei bhi aur kiss bhi aur mere liya kuch bhi nahi.
KT:laksh chup karo tum school keliye deer ho rahi hai n moves her hand out n goes down.
as usual laksh has to do everything by himself.

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down in the breakfast table everyone has come except laksh.
T:kt laksh khahan hai
KT:baa bas aata hi hoga.
GANGA(g):mera beta to tumhare bete se bhi zyada aalsi hai 😆 😆
KT:maa yeh bhi kuch kam nahi hai.......kishen teek tarah se bait
G:smiles........
laksh now came and sat before adi that is opposite to adi.

KT:tum agaye itne jaldi kaise(sarcastically...)dekho kishen bhi agaya
L:slightly embarrised........haan ise to uski mamma tayyar karti hai mere liye kaun hai iske aane ke baad aap to mujhe bhool hi gayi. 😳 😳

everyone start laghing.kt blushes. 😳
Pari &archita:dekho kt bhaiya kitne udaas hai.
G:laksh kal se tumhari mamma yani ki mai tayaar kardoon tumhe. 😆 😆
L:mom aap bhi uske side le rahi hai.
KT:ab bas jalsdi dse khalo aur kishen ko school me chod dena.

L:teek hai .........adi fast haan. 😳
ADI:ya dad.

to be continued soon..plz leave ur comments
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
awe such a cute scene between laksh and adi 😆
continue soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zinu29

awe such a cute scene between laksh and adi 😆
continue soon 😉

I totally agree with you Zinu di. Laksh and his lil kid looks really cute together, and the kt running after the kid, and then laksh, lil kid, and kt all love each other. Awww... Soo cute.😆👏👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-17
recap:
KT:ab bas jalsdi se khalo aur kishen ko school me chod dena.

L:teek hai .........adi fast haan.
ADI:ya dad.
now:
L:kt meri car keys cupboard mai hai zara lana plzzz
KT:laksh ek bhi kam teek tarah se kar nahi sakte tum
L:acha baba kal se galti nahi hogi ab jao na
KT:teek hai lati hoon.she leaves........(n as usual i think everyone know this trick..... ) 😉
L:maa mujhe apna file bhi lena hai mai abhi aata hoon.n leaves
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IN their room kt is searching for the keys in the cupboard n laksh comes from back n shows the keys to ktthat is extending his arm in front of kt so still laksh is facing her back.

L:yeh raha key's
KT:laksh tumhe kahan se mila.turns to face laksh.
L:woh madam.....pulls kt closer by waist.keys mere pas hi toh the 😳
KT:ok ab samjhi laksh tum kab sudhroge kabhi to apne umar ka rihas karo.
L:hello mai budha nahi hoon.aaj bhi office ke sari ladkiyan mujhpar marti hai.
KT:laksh mujhe kabhi nahi pata tha ki tumhare office mai itne sare andhiyan hai(.........sarcastical tone) 😆 😆 😆
L:acha mai batata hoon tumhe n suddenly kisses her on her lips. 😳 😳

kt's eyes wide open n after few secs they come to normal n she pulls out.

KT:she blushes n turns to the other side so laksh is facing her back now."bahar niklo tum" 😊
L:kyun madam acha nahi laga kya aap chahe to aur ek bar..............
KT:laksh..get out abhi is waqt n shes him out of the room 😳 😉 .

plzzzzzzzz leave ur comments
-abhi
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-18
I think there is no need of a recap so laksh n adi leave to office n school respectively after all the morning mischeive's. 😆
------------------------------------------------------------ ----------------------------------------------------IN the evening adi comes back from school in their car with the driver.
ADI:mamma.......comes shouting n running towards kt 😳 😳 .
KT:kya kua aisa kyun chilla raha hai.bat kya hai
ADI:in his sweet voice..mamma pata hai aag running race me pure class me mai hi first aaya
KT:achha mera pyara bacha n hugs adi 😳
KT:ab tu jhake haat muh dhole mai doodh garam karti hoon.
ADI:mamma doodh plz.........nahi maa.........plzz 😉
KT:kishen dekh tu agar doodh nahi peeyega to kaise takatwar banega jaldi se agga haat dokhar no arguments n kt goes into the kitchen.
ADI:with a frown in his face goes to his room n freshes up.
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In the dinning table.
KT:yeh le tera doodh
ADI:mamma woh actually.....
KT:kya hua bat kya hai
ADI:drinks the milk woh mai.....woh
KT:kishen ab bolega bhi
ADI:kuch nahi bas aise hi
KT:mamma se jhoot bole ga.jaldi bol kya hua.
ADI:mamma woh mera friend rohan aur uski family lonawala ja rahi hai aur hamare baki ke dost bhi aa rahe hai.kya mai bhi ja sakta hoon.plzz bas ek rat ke liye. 😆 😆 😆
KT:no way ek rat tu ghar se bahar rahega kya.
ADI:mamma plzzz waise bhi abhi mai bada hogaya hoon.
KT:janti hoon kitna bada hogaya hai tu.she sits on her knees n holds adi by his shoulders.kishen tu janta hai ki mammma tere bina nahi reh sakti to plz mamma ki baat man ja. 😳 😳 😳
ADI:could not say anything else so keeps quite
KT:good mai papa ko bolti hoon ki tumhe kaheen bahar le jaye.n leaves
ADI:thinks........ab only choice papa ko patana padhega 😉 😉 😉 .

plz leave ur comments.
-abhinaya

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