Shayad yahi to pyar hai-(lk)updated part! - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
👏 continue plz.............


bhumi 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
thanks for ur lovely comments i was out of town so it took me so much time 2 update i will update soon. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part-8

Laksh went to office as usual n now it's night n kt is sitting on the bed with baby in her laps.laksh comes inside n sits beside kt n talks to the baby.

L:ab tu aagaya aur meri bewi asusual tere sath rehne lagi.(kt looks at laksh smiling)pata hai kal rath jab tu nahi tha tab teri mama ne mujhse kitna pyar kiya

KT:laksh ab yeh sab chodo aur bache ke naam ke bare me socho

L:haan wo bhi to hai ………….looks at the baby.to apko kaunsa naam pasand hai

KT:laksh who bolega kya plz be serious

L:teek hai baba sochte hai

KT:laksh "kishen" kaisa rahega

L:mai kisna yeh kishen pagal ho gayi kya pura mythology hamare ghar me hoga kya kuch modern socho

KT:ab kishen me kya kharabi hai

L:kya kharabi hai hello koi 100 sal purana naam lagta hai aur waise bhi agar yeh naam rakhogi to ek ladki bhi iske paas nahi ayagi 😆 😆

KT: laksh tumhe ladki ki padi hai iski umar dekhi

L:madam par jab yeh badha hoga tab toh problem hogi

KT:mr.laksh virani ladkiyan naam dekh kar pyar nahi karti.



L:leans towards her n says to kya dekh kar pyar karti ho tum ladkiyan 😳 😳

KT: pushes him back ……..laksh chup chap naam socho badme baa mujhe dantengi.



L:kt nishant kaisa rehega

KT:nishant kyun is naam me kya hai

L:want's to irritate her so tells nisha meri pehli girlfriend ka naam tha so nisha nahi to nishant sahi 😉 .

KT:acha to yeh baat hai ……mujhe laga key rahul rakhna chahiye

L:ab rahul kyun madam..ab is naam me kya hai 😉

KT:who haridwar me ek cute sa ladka tha rahul naam ka mai aur who bachpan se bohut ache dost the aur who mujhe bohut acha lagta tha

L:before she could complete mujhse bhi gyada acha…..asks coriuosly

KT:she just loved it………laksh who mai tumhe shayad 6years se janti hoon par mein our who 10sal sey dost hain

L:acha to tumne use kyun choda


KT:mai kyun use chodti wahi haridwar chodkar chala gaya

L:get's really jealous

KT:warna itne cute ladke ko bhala kaunsi ladki chodti

L:he could not handle this more so he just get's up n goes out 😆 .
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-9

Recap:

KT:mai kyun use chodti wahi haridwar chodkar chala gaya

L:get's really jealous

KT:warna itne cute ladke ko bhala kaunsi ladki chodti

L:he could not handle this more so he just get's up n goes out.



Now:

Kt feels really guilty for irritating him so much.she makes the baby lydown on the bed n goes in search of laksh.

Laksh in standing in the garden near the swing…………..kt comes from behind n puts her hand on his shoulder.

L:tum yahan kyun ayi ho

KT:laksh kya hua kyun itne gusse me ho

L:kuch nahi maine tumse tumhara pehla pyar chinliya shayad

KT:fully confused…..kya,??kya kah rahe ho?

L:haan kt.faces her agar tumhe who rahul mil jata toh usi se shadi karti na

KT:laksh pagal ho gaye ho kya kaun rahul ……holds laksh's face in her hands.laksh mai mazak kar rahi thi…….mere pehle aur akhri pyar sirf tum ho.tum soch bhi kaise sakte ho ki mai koi aur se pyar karoongi

KT:pyar karna maine sirf tumhi se sikha hai



Both of their eyes get tearfull n they hug eachother really tight.



L:phir kabhi aisa mazak mat karna

KT:nahi karoongi par tumne bhi to who nisha ke bare me kaha tha

L:haan par who mai mazak kar raha tha par tum



Before he speaks more she closes his mouth ab mai kuch nahi kahoongi bache ka naam bhi tumhi socho samjhe.

L:teek hai ab so jate hai

KT:haan chalo.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-10

In the morning at laksh-kt's bedroom.

KT:laksh tumne naam socha………

L:haan kab ka soch liya maine

KT:phir batao na

L:abhi nahi shaam ko function me bataoonga

KT:par laksh tum aise nahi kar sakte

L:arre toda to intazar karlo waise bhi job hi naam ho maine decide kiya hai ki hum ghar mai use kishen bulayenge,jaise mujhe kisna bulate hai.

KT:laksh ur so sweet.n comes n hugs him

L:agar tumhare bat mane se mujhe itna pyar milega to mai hamesha tumhari baat mane ko tayyar hoon

KT:laksh tum bhi na n gently hit's him



L;Teek hai ab mujhe jana chahiye

KT:par khahan

L:tum kitne sawaal poochogi jaldi wapas aa gaoonga

KT:teek hai aur sambhalke jana

L:kt mai bhacha nahi hoon aur tum jake apne bache ko sambhalo

KT:mera bacha(asks angrily)

L:smiles n says I mean hamara bacha ab teek hai kya mai ja sakta hoon.

KT:bye par jaldi wapas ana

L:comes near to kt n holds her by her waist n asks kyun kya special hai madam?

KT: hello mr mai romance karne tumhe nahi bula rahi hoon shaam ko function hai yaad hai

L:tek hai agaoonga bye n kisses her on her cheek

KT:laksh tum jao ab.



Scene shifts to the kitchen

T:Krishna naam kya socha hai

KT:pata nahi baa

T:Krishna pagal ho gayi nkya shaam ko naamkaran hai aur tu hai ki

KT:baa mai kya karoon laksh hi ne decide kiya aur usne kaha ki who function ke waqt hi batayega

T:yeh laksh bhi nah abhi tak bacha hai .tu do-do bachon ko kaise sambhalti hai

Kt blushes n says

KT:jaise aap ne sambhala tha

T:Krishna tu n catches kt's ears

KT:ouch….plz.baaplz…sorry mazak kar rahi thi

Tulsi leaves her ears ab jake dekh ki sab tayariyan chal rahi hai ki nahi

KT:ji baa abhi dekhti hoon.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-11

Kt is getting the baby ready n she thinks yeh laksh kahan chala gaya abhi tak kyun nahi aya.kahan reh gaye the as she thinks laksh comes from behind n hugs her by her waist.

KT:laksh kahan the ab tak

L:kuch zaroori kaam tha

KT:aisa kya kaam jot um mujhe nahi bata sakte(askes angrily)

L:Whispers in her ears woh kya hai na kt mai apne girlfriend se milne gaya tha

KT:acha to wapas kyun agaye wahi rehte uske pass(in a very annoying voice)

L:kt mazak hi toh kar raha that um bhi na

KT:acha ye lo ise sambhalo n gives the baby to lash…mujhe tayyar hona hai



She goes to the wadrobe n picks up two sarees

Kt:laksh kaunsa pehnoon

L:job hi tum chaho waise bhi tum to sabhio me achi dikhti ho

KT:laksh teek tarah se batao

L:teek hai laal wali pehno

KT:teek hai



Laksh keeps standing there

KT:lakshhhhhh……….

L:kya hai

KT:mujhe kapde badalne hai

L:to mai kya karoon dekho kt hamara ek bacha hai mai tumhe saadi nahi pehna sakta

Kt:laksh maine kab tumhe saadi pehnane kaha tum kamre se bahar niklo

L:par kyun pati hoon tumhara ab mujhse kya sharmana

KT:blushes tum bahar jao mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai n pushes
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-12

Kt comes down in her beautiful red sari while laksh is starring at her with baby in his hand.she comes n stands beside him.n he still keeps starring .

KT:(she whispers) laksh kya hua aise kyun ghoor rahe ho.kuch teek nahi hai kya n looks at her sari if it is proper

L:kt.tum.faces him kt tum aag bhohut khoobsurat lag rahi ho………….she blushes.maan kar raha hai ki tumhe aise hi dekhta rahoon.

KT:laksh sare mehmaan aagaye ab tum flirt karna band karo.

Laksh smiles cutely.n kt takes the baby in her arms n panditji call them for the ceremony.



(hey! People I'am nor a Punjabi nor gujju so I don't know the rasm properly so I'am not getting into details)



T:idhar ao tum dono waise bhohut pyara lag raha hai khaheen meri nazar na lag jaye.

L:hugs kt from back n saya akhir beta kiska hai ba

KT:yam era hai isliya pyara lagta hai

L:hello madam mai apne colledge ka "prince charming" tha samjhi

KT:looks at laksh nsays tumhare colledge me sare andhe the kya



Everyone start laughing n laksh say's.

L:phir aap ne mujhe pasand kaise karli

Kt blushes n looks down shyly n could not say anything.

T:laksh bas bhohut hogaya ab chalo naam rakhte hai.kya naam socha hai

L:baa who aditya mujhe yeh naam acha laga.kyun madam apko kya lagta hai n hits kt's shoulder with his.

KT:ok mujhe koi problem nahi hai..n snmiles



Laksh comes close to her ears n whispers l:tum use kishen bula sakti ho n kt smiles.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-13

recap:
L:baa who aditya mujhe yeh naam acha laga.kyun madam apko kya lagta hai n hits kt's shoulder with his.

KT:ok mujhe koi problem nahi hai..n snmiles



Laksh comes close to her ears n whispers l:tum use kishen bula sakti ho n kt smiles.
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now:

everything is done ,all the ceremonies r completed.it's night n kt made the baby sleep n baby is sleeping sorry aditya i.e kishen is sleeping in his cradle.laksh entered the room n he comes towards the cradle.and"aag hamare kt ka mood acha tha isliye "as soon as laksh comes near her she hugs him. 😳 😳

but laksh pulls out n goes near the cradle.kt is surprised because always it's laksh who wants to romance but today suddenly he is not intrested.she goes n hugs him from behind.nlaksh is facing his baby.

KT:laksh kya hua mujse naraaz ho.
L:smiles. n says aisa kuch bhi nahi hai.mai kuch laya hoon
KT:kya?aur kiskeliye???
L:batata hoon ruko...kt pulls out from laksh.

laksh takes out a box from his pocket n gives it to kt.
KT:yeh kya hai?
L:kholke dekho to sahi n grins
she opens the box n she finds a cute chain in it
KT:mere liye
L:ji nahi.n takes it from kt.tumhare liye nahi mere pyar keliye 😉
KT:laksh....tumhara pyar.n pulls him towards her holding his colar.
L:arre..re gussa kyun hoti ho.yeh mere bache keliye hai. 😳 n takes out the chain .
L:yeh dekho.the chain has a pendent "LK"l for laksh n k for kt.
KT's eyes get tearful :how sweet to tum iskeliye hi bahar gaye
L:haan.n makes the baby wear the chain.

plz leave ur comments 😊


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Posted: 18 years ago
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awe..so cute 😆
plz continue.. 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
hey! i think there r not many intrested 😭 😭 in my fanfic so plz tell should i continue or end it. 😭

plzzzzzzz comment everyone 😳 😳

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