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Posted: 18 years ago
back in india...

"neend nahi aa rahi na ritu"

"nahi yaar....itna tez toofaan hai..."
& both knew dat dey weren't referring to the weather outside...
but the storm in their hearts...

"ek baat poochoon ritu?...huda aur tere beech kya hua hai?"

after staring at shaalu a long time...she replied...

"wahin jo navin aur tere beech hua hai...
we got engaged.."
she answered calmly...

"wat??!..engaged!...bataya kyon nahi?..aur tu to raj?"

"huda ne bataane se mana kiya tha...we're facing bad times ...
aur usme kisi tarah ki khushi manaana...pointless...isn't it?"

"u mean huda ne bhi abhi tak wahaan kisi ko nahi bataya hoga?"

she shook her head....

"aur raj?...u never loved huda..."

she smiled....
"its quite simple actually....
jitna pyaar naina aur raj ek doosre se karte hain...
no one can cross dat limit...

besides maine khud rejection face ki hai shaalu...
i know how it feels....
jaane se pehle wen huda held my hand & proposed me....
told me ki ho sakta hai woh kabhi waapis na aaye...
i realised i didn't have d courage to lose him as well...
main usse disappointed nahi dekh paayi...

he may not be my first love...but he is my best friend yaar...
i wouldn't get a better partner...i'm lucky he still loves me...
mere itna kuch karne ke baad bhi....
aur raj??....i'll always respect him....miss him..."

shaalu nodded...out of words...

"i'm really happy for u yaar...
raj-naina ke beech aana bewakoofi hai....
dey're made for each other...their definition of love is
completely different it seems...
shaayad main aur navin bhi ek doosre se
utna pyaar nahi karte...jitna..." she sighed...

"i just wish dem luck....
i hope dey'll all make it bac together..."

"i hope so too ritu...i hope so too..."
& she wished to see navin...
wished to be bac at his side like always...

will she be able to??...ever??
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Posted: 18 years ago
"naaz madam...ek minute suniye..."

"bolo aadil..."

the general stared at dem...

"dekh main jaanta hoon tu usse bahut time
baad mil rahi hai...
par pichli baar ki tarah...kho mat jaana...
saara plan explain kar diyo usse...
apun general ko yahaan busy rakhne
ki koshish karega.." he whispered...

& she nodded...
"theek hai aadil...main aati hoon..."

she had kept her promise & returned by 5...

aalekh ne yeh 4 ghante bahut tension mein kaate the...

at the end of 3 hours wen she hadn't returned...
he'd begun cursing himself...

many a time he'd reached out to his cell to call navin...
par naina ki khaatir he didn't....

he'd just pressed the call button finally....
feeling like an idiot for sending her alone...

his eyes almost teary...a lump in his throat
wen he saw her arrive...safe & smiling...

relief & anger struck him together...

he rushed towards her & hugged her tightly...
den began shaking her violently....
stopping wen he remembered her condition....

"sorry...thoda late ho gayi na...waise 3-4 kaha tha...
4 ghante main aa gayi.."

"apun ko man kar raha hai ki tujhe utha kar patak doon..."
after scolding her...& hugging her brotherly again...
dey finally left for d prison..

"lagta hai tera kaam ho gaya...tu bahut khush dikh rahi hai..."

"haan...kaam ho gaya..."
.....


taken through those dark alleys again...dis time naina
kept her senses sharp...& kept a track of d directions....

finally dey reached d cell...
raj's eyes were closed....& he was lying on d floor...
*Rajeevian* thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago

naina's heart warmed at his sight...
atleast he looked stronger....
d pills had done their work...

the guard opened the cell...& let her in...
locking her...he went away....

raj still slept....he probably was too tired...

lines of worry were etched on his handsome face....

his hair ruffled....but his lips were curved into a small smile
as if he was dreaming....

she could have continued staring at his wonderful features...
but aalekh's words hit her wid a force...

a blush rose up her cheeks as she
remembered their last kiss...

yet again dey were so close to each other....

but dis time her hands trembled....
as if it would be the last time she'd touch him...
d last time dey'd hold each other....

taking a deep breath & looking at him
deeply one last time...re-memorising his every detail...
although
every inch of him was already etched..branded on her heart...
she touched him on his cheek...

"raj....."

he opened his eyes...slowly...
& was amazed to see his dream turning into reality....

dere she was sitting in front of her...
touching him...her eyes full of love & concern...

am i still dreaming?? he wondered....
staring into dose deep pools...lost in their beauty once again....
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credit goes to crystalspark(dipika)

Edited by violence_peace - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hye plz contiue soon.....i cant wait to read more about raj and naina's meeting...i think naina is preagnet....
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey good going

pl continue soon
thanks for the update
yoginisahakari thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
pl continue soon thanks for the update
yoginisahakari thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
pl continue soon thanks for the update
*Rajeevian* thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
wen he saw her standing in front of him...
he thought he was still dreaming...

he was behind bars afterall...
how can naina bhi inside...?
smiling...next to him...

he shut his eyes tightly...
but wen he still felt her cool hand
on his cheek...ruffling his hair....
he realised..dat she was indeed there...

he jerked up ....a pain shooting up in his limbs...
"ouch!"

"raj...raj tum theek ho?"

"meri chodo...tum yahaan phir kyon aayi ho naina?
wat d hell r u doing here?"
he asked feigning anger...although he felt he was in heaven...
glad dat she was here...

"tumhaara gussa tumhaari aankhon tak nahi pahunch raha...
so stop pretending...." she smiled...

a smile dat made his heart flip...

"guards??" he looked around

"i wanted to interview the terrorist alone...
got fake permission...."

she saw her expression change to sadness...to despair...

"i'm sorry...main tumhe hurt nahi karna chaahti thi...
forget i called u a terrorist..."

dis time he smiled...a smile dat lighted his features...

"wat makes u think ki itni trivial si baat se main hurt ho jaaoonga...
u can never hurt me....uska mujhe yakin hai..."

"phir tum tensed?"

"fake permission....u'r taking dangerous risks naina....
kyon apni jaan baar-baar khatre mein daal kar yahaan chali aati ho...?"

"u know why!" she stated

"i do...par i'll never be able to forgive myself...agar tumhe kuch..."

she kept her fingers on his mouth...
stopped him from talking...
"kuch nahin hoga raj...kuch nahin...
we'll both come out of dis together.,..
i'm sure...."

he turned away...

"wat makes u think ki abhi bhi koi hope hai??
u'r being over-optimistic...2 days ...dat's all i've got...

aur main nahi chaahta ki yeh do din bhi main is tension

mein kaatoon ki tum theek ho ya nahin...
i'd rather die knowing u'r safe...tucked away in bed...back in india..."
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Posted: 18 years ago
"tucked away in bed!!...akele??...not a
very interesting proposition...." she laughed...

but he didn't...on d contrary he turned far more serious...

"nahi akele nahin....
remember maine tumse airport par kya kaha tha?

i still stand by it....marry someone else naina..."

he finally managed...speaking each word wid difficulty...
as if dey pinched him...

"it's too late for dat..." she replied...a little angry...

mistaking her reply for love...he replied...

"listen to me ..."
he covered the distance dat he'd purposely put between dem...
so as to stop his rush of emotions...&
held her by her shoulders..

"i love you too naina...& u know dat...
par ek marey hue insaan ki yaad mein tum
apna saara future spoil nahi kar sakti..."

"u'r not dead!!"

"but i'll be...do din naina...2 days"

"i still won't marry anyone..i ....CAN'T...."
she stared at him....stressing on her last words..

it took him a few seconds...dat's all ..a few seconds dis time to
decipher the deeper meaning in her words...

"tum...." he wet his lips dat had suddenly dried...

"r u...?..naina!!"
he just stood routed to the ground...not understanding
how to react...."god dammit!!...u'r pregnant!"

naina nodded...stunned dat he'd guessed....
afraid for he sounded angry...accusing

a smile formed on his lips...& slowly he was grinning...
inspite of his nearing death sentence...
his heart filled with happiness...

not able to control himself any longer...
he held her from her waist & crushed her into him...

he hugged her tightly....
one hand caressing the nape of her neck...

slowly his other hand reached her belly...& stayed there...

"its too soon to feel any movement..." she whispered...

he simply nodded...& looked into her eyes...
"thank you....."

wen she saw him fighting back his tears...her heart melted..
& she rolled her arms around his neck...

the kiss dat came was inevitable...
dey wondered why dey'd been fighting each other
for dese past 5 minutes...
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Posted: 18 years ago
dis time their lips met not in wrath...
nor in aggression...nor in passion....
but simply in desire ...in need....in love....

although it became difficult to demarkate
the line between the two after awhile...

it was raj who broke the kiss first...
stroking her cheek ...her shoulders..he explained....

"u came here to tell me something else too...isn't it??
abhi bata do ...i don't know if i'll be able to stop again...."
his voice was rough & husky...

naina was suddenly ashamed....
"gud u reminded me...u'r too heady..." she blushed...
not able to meet his eye...

he held her chin & made her look into his eyes....

"aaj bahut dino baad i feel i'm meeting the
girl i first met in nainital....
anyway bolo...some plan to get me out...isn't it?...
sab bekaar hai!!"

"bekaar to pata nahin...par haan...
it certainly is the last option...."

he saw the sadness returning in her eyes...& it hurt him...

as she explained their plan ...raj's eyes grew wider...
he stood aghasted wen she'd finished....

"huda aur yudi yahaan hai....!
all of dem made dis plan ....
naina...go tell dem to abort d mission!.."
he was furious...

"main akele maroonga yeh kaafi hai!!...
i don't want all of u guys to escort me !

plan!!...u guys call dis a plan??...
tum logon ka dimaag kharaab to nahi ho gaya hai?
how d hell do dey think dey'll pull dis one ?...
it's impossible naina!...

none of us will survive...yeh mazaak nahi ho raha hai..."
he lectured her non-stop....
while she stared expressionless at him...

"wat??...stop staring at me as if i'm nuts!"

she sighed...
"don't u think taking dem by surprise is
our only chance of escape?
aur koi raasta dikh raha hai tumhe?"

"haan naina...ek raasta hai...& its damn safe & convenient...!"

"oh not again!!...
apna go back to india waala raag phir mat shuru karna raj!"
she was furious at him now..

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