Laksh and Kt FanFic..LAST PART (PART 44) - Page 17

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey uru..well i think u shud PM me the intro coz then i can just add the picz on there..and YOU WILL HAVE TO WRITE THE FIRST PART.. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
yeah write the next part..wow..you are already on part 41..in one week..i type so slow..thats awesum 😊
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PART 41
recap: Kt screams, and the phone goes ingaze...
KG: (pulls her hair) tumhari himat kaise hui..(slaps her..and she falls down, starts bleeding from her lip..)
KS hears the police come, and he runs..without taking laksh or kt..
Laksh comes out looking for kt..injured..he finds her crying in the PCO booth..he goes in it..and is shocked to see her bleeding..
L: (in a painful voice) kt..yeh kya hua?? (he sits down)..(he kisses off kt's blood with his lips)..tum theek to ho..yeh kisne...
K: meri chodo laksh..tumhe itni chot aayiee hai..
before he could continue..they heard gunshots..kt got scared..
K: laksh..agar woh baa..
L: baa??
K: maine phone kiya tha..
L: kya..(laksh gets up)..(he sits back down)..kt..police neh shayad us kidnapper ko pakadliya hai...chalo bahar..
K: theek hai laksh..
They both step out..and kt get's shot in the neck..
Laksh: KT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KG: (from far away) DAMN!! that was my last bullet..and i hit the wrong person..(he dissappears)..
Everyone reaches there..and see's kt fainted..and laksh panicking..
Laksh: (crying)..kt..aankhe kholo kt..please..hamaare bacho ko tumhari zaroorat hai..kt...(hugs her)....
Everyone comes and crowds around them..(from SN)..
Tulsi: yeh kya hua krishna tulsi ko laksh..
Laksh: yeh sab meri galti hai..sab meri galti hai..main chodoonga nahi usko..(he leaves crying..in the woods/jungle)..
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IN THE WOODS/JUNGLE...
Laksh: (screaming, and crying) MUJHE PATA HAI TUM YAHI HO...BAHAR AAO...ABHI...TUMHE MUJHSE DUSHMANI HAI NAA...BAHAR AAO.....ABHI....TUM NAHI AAOGE MAIN JAANTA HOON...KYUNKI TUM KAAYAR HO....(you're a coward)...
HE COMES UP...
KG: HEY...KYA BULAYA TUMNE MUJHE? KAYAR HAAN...(GETS A HOLD OF LAKSH'S COLLAR)..
LAKSH: EKLAVYA!! TUM?? TUMNE KT KA KIDNAAP KIYA..KYUN??
EKLAVYA: HAAN...HAAN MAINE...MAINE USKA KIDNAAP KIYA..
LAKSH: KYUN EKLAVYA!! KYUN KIYA AISA TUMNE.....KYA DUSHMANI HAI TUMHARI MERE SAATH...
LAKSH AND EKLVYA HAVE A FIGHT..THEY BOTH ARE YELLING AND SCREAMING..EKLAVYA HITS LAKSH WITH A LOG OF WOOD, ON HIS HEAD, AND STABS HIM WITH A KNIFE..AND THE POLICE SAW THAT..THEY TAKE A PICTUTE OF EKLAVYA HITTING LAKSH, AND STABBING HIM..AND GO AND STOP THEM..LAKSH HITS EKLAVYA HARD..AND FALLS ON THE GROUND...
Mihir, and Mathan come running in the jungle..and run to Laksh..
Laksh: (mummering) eklavya..kaatil hai meri kt ka..usko main choddonga nahi..usne meri..(he says and faints)..
Mihir and Manthan are shocked to find out eklavya did all this..and see him getting taken away by the police..the carry laksh, and everyone escort both of them to the hospital...
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IN THE HOSPITAL...
Doctor comes out of Kt's room..
Tulsi: doctor..ab kaisi hai krishna tulsi..
Doctor: dekhiye, ghabraane ki koi baat nahi hai..humne goli nikaal di hai..abhi unko aaraam karna hai..
Tulsi: ji..shukriya..
Doctor: no problem..(leaves)..
The doctor comes out of laksh's room..
Mihir: doctor..abhi laksh kaisa hai..
Doctor: dekhiye sar par gehri chot aaiyee hai..unki haalat critical ho sakti hai..hum abhi operation nahi kar sakte..pehle patient ke x-rays nikaalne honge..phir hi hum bata sakte hain..ki unke sar mein kaise problem aaiyee hai..aur kaisa operation akrna hai..
Mihir: ji doctor..kya hum mil sakte hai..
Doctor: haan haan..abhi unko hosh aaya hua hai..
Everyone leaves to see Laksh..
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IN LAKSH'S ROOM..
Manthan: kaise ho laksh..
Laksh: theek..kt kaisi hai..
Mihir: woh bilkul theek hai..bas tu ab theek hoja..
Laksh: kya hua hai mujhe??
Mihir: pata nahi..doctor x-ray's lekar batayenge..
Laksh: kt ko zaada chot to nahi ayiee na? goli nikal gayi hai na..?
Manthan: dont worry laksh..kt bilkul theek hai..
Laksh: main usse milna chahta hoon..uski yeh halat sirf meri wajay se hui hai..agar main usse bahar nahi laata, to phir..
Mihir: apne aap ko dosh kyun de rahe ho laksh..isme teri koi galti nahi hai..
Laksh: par daadu--
The doctor steps in and interrupts..
Doctor: sorry par..inke x-ray's karne honge..
Mihir: ji..chalo manthan..
They both leave...
After 20 minutes..The doctor comes out of laksh's room..
Manthan: doctor..hows laksh??
Doctor: dekhiye..unke sar pe gehri chot ayiee hai..i dont think he should do office work for a couple of months..agar uske dimaak par koi bhi dabaav aaya..to woh bihosh ho sakte hai..aap inhe dischaarge to kar sakte hain..par aane wale 1 mahine{month) main..inko chakar aa sakta hai..he might faint..but for no reason..agar aisa hota hai to inhe simply bed par letaye, aur 5 minute ke baad..thoda sa paani inke face par chidkein..and he'll be find..but u need to take care of him, for some upcoming monhs...
Manthan: ok...
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Both Laksh and Kt are discharged from the office..
IN SN..
AT NIGHT...
Laksh is getting ready for bed..while downstairs..
Manthan: everyone..i have something to say about Laksh..
Kt: kya baat hai??
everyone is ready to listen..
Manthan tells everyone everything the doctor said to him..
Kt: itna sab kuch ho gaya..mujhe yeh samajh nahi aata..ki yeh hai kaun..jo laksh ke peeche pada hai..
Manthan: i hink you all soud go to your rooms now..especially kt..or he'll hear everything..ok..good night..bye..(smiles, and leaves)..
Everyone says goodnight, and leaves..
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IN LAKSH AND KT'S ROOM..
Laksh: arre kt..itni derr laga di..
Kt: haan woh..baa neeche baatein kar rahi thi..isliye..
Laksh: ok..(walks up to her)..tum theek ho na..
Kt: haan laksh..kyun kya baat hai..
Laksh: tumhe goli lagi thi..isliye..
Kt: laksh..mujhe kuch nahi hua hai..mai bilkul theek hoon..(she puts on a fake smile)..
Laksh smiles..happily..
Kt: (in her head) main tumhe kaise batao laksh..mujhe kuch nahi hua hai..par tum...tumhe kuch hua hai...(she gets tears in her eyes)..
Laksh: kt..tum ro kyun rahi ho..(hugs her)..kt mujhe maaf kardo..meri wajay se tumhe goli lagi thi..im sorry....
Kt: laksh..isme tumhari koi galti nahi hai..
Laksh: ok ok..ab sone chale..
Kt: haan chalo..par pehle tum apni dawayiee khalo..
Laksh: ok..fine..
He takes his medicine and they both go to sleep in each other's arms..
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NEXT MORNING..
Laksh: ok kt..main office jaa raha hoon..
Kt: nahi..tum kahi nahi jaa rahe ho..tumhe doctor ne mana kiya hai..tum..tum..baitho..
Laksh: par kt..kaam...
Kt: kuch nahi sunna mujhe..tum baitho..(she makes him sit on the bed)..main khaana leke aati hoon..(she leaves)..
She comes back with food, and finds laksh is not there..
Kt: (keeps the food on the dresser) Laksh..kaha ho laksh..laksh..
Laksh comes out of the washroom behind her and hugs her tightly..
Laksh: main yaha hoon..(smiles)..
Kt: laksh..
Laksh: kt..chup..(smiles, and higs her even tighter)..
Kt: laksh please chodo..
Laksh: nahi..kabhi nahi...
Kt: ok ok..pehle khaana khaalo..phir pakad lena..
Laksh: sach..?..(smiles happlily)..
Kt: haan laksh..
He has his food...with kt..
Laksh all of a sudden goes into flashbacks, of how nakul and eklavya betreyed them..and starts feeling dizzy..but dosen't show it..
Laksh: lo ab ho gaya khaana..ab main pakad lu tumhe..(laughs)..
Kt: (laughs) tum bhi na laksh..
Laksh gets up and walks towards kt..
Kt: (worried) laksh..kya hua..tum theek se chal kyun nahi paa rahe ho..laksh..(she gets up and holds him)..Laksh..
Laksh's head falls on her shoulder's..
Kt: (yells) Manthan...Baa...Koi hai?? laksh..laksh..laksh...Baa..................
Everyone comes running down, hearing kt scream..
Manthan, Mihir, and Sahil support laksh to the bed..
After 5 minutes..Kt sprays some water on Laksh..right as Manthan told her..
Laksh dosen't wake up..
Kt: (worried) Manthan..laksh uth kyun nahi raha hai..
Manthan: (worried) i don't know kt..maine to wahi kaha jo doctor ne mujhse kaha..i have no clue..
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SO GUYS..TELL ME HOW IT WAS...SORRY FOR THE DELAY....PLEASE REPLY....
THANKS!!
😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
That was soo good zinu di. i felt like i was in it. But whta happend to out poor laksh? Hope he is alright. 😊 Do continue soon, but tell me something. How can you manage to write dil ka ridhta, laksh and kt fanfic, and your new one.Like there is 3 FF that you write, and how can you keep on writng? 😕
zinny.xo thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
i have no clue uru..i guess im just in a mood to write diffrent ff's 😆 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
When are you going to continue di? You stopped your story at the suspenceful climax. I reaally want you to continue [ASAP].... I am just joking. 😆 You can continue whenever you want. No Presseure. 😊 I know how much work you have.
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Posted: 18 years ago
cntinue soon.. xxcoolxx story.. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
continue soon 👏 👏 👏
-Nisha❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago

NOTE GUYS!! I'M OFFICIALLY..THIS IS HARD FOR ME TO SAY!!

I'M OFFICIALLY ENDING ALL MY FANFIC'S..EXCEPT FOR "DIL KA RISHTA" SINCE URU..IS CONTINUING..(WELL IM NOT SURE..HOPEFULLY)..I MIGHT CONTINUE..THAT THAT WILL BE AFTER A VERY LONG TIME OR WHEN EVERYONE ACCEPTS TULSI..AND LAKSH AND KT ARE MARRIED..SIMPLE BECAUSE IM DEPRESSED AFTER WATCHING TODAY'S EPISODE..AND I DON'T FEEL LIKE DONG ANYTHING..

I OFFICIALLY HATE WATCHING "KYUNKI SAAS BHI KABHI BAHU THI" NOW!!!😡😡😡thanks for your "home wrecking" episode ekta..😡{no offense to anyone}..😡

Love,

Zinu😉

PLEASE LEAVE YOR COMMENTS!!

Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Zinu29

NOTE GUYS!! I'M OFFICIALLY..THIS IS HARD FOR ME TO SAY!!

I'M OFFICIALLY ENDING ALL MY FANFIC'S..EXCEPT FOR "DIL KA RISHTA" SINCE URU..IS CONTINUING..(WELL IM NOT SURE..HOPEFULLY)..I MIGHT CONTINUE..THAT THAT WILL BE AFTER A VERY LONG TIME OR WHEN EVERYONE ACCEPTS TULSI..AND LAKSH AND KT ARE MARRIED..SIMPLE BECAUSE IM DEPRESSED AFTER WATCHING TODAY'S EPISODE..AND I DON'T FEEL LIKE DONG ANYTHING..

I OFFICIALLY HATE WATCHING "KYUNKI SAAS BHI KABHI BAHU THI" NOW!!!😡😡😡thanks for your "home wrecking" episode ekta..😡{no offense to anyone}..😡

Love,

Zinu😉

PLEASE LEAVE YOR COMMENTS!!

NOO!!! please don't stop..i know the episode was disturbing..and not worth watching..but please...please don't end your FanFic(s).. i luv reading these..ur the best writer..and the fastest..i luv your stories..please please please dont stop..😭😭

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