Laksh and Kt FanFic..LAST PART (PART 44) - Page 19

WOW SOOOO NICE...!!! I LUV IT I'M SOO GLAD U ARE GONNA CONTINUE UR FF...I'LL BE WAITING FOR UR NEXT UPDATE!!! 😛

I am soo happy that you are going to continue again. Afetr listening to that accident I gave it a bit of thought and I felt soo angry on the world, but you should always remeber your thoughts and beliefs before we do anything.
I just loved this part as last ones. Do continue soon di. 😊

that part was awesome. i luved it. can't wait till the next part. 😊 😊

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PART 43
Laksh is wearing a nice shirvani, and kt is wearing a red saari..
DOWNSTAIRS..
Laksh and Kt are sitting with the babies in their hands..Pulkit is with Ganga..watching..
Pandit: (puts a red tikka on the girl, laksh is holding)..inka naam akshar(letter/alphabet).."P" se shuroo kejiye..
Laksh: (smiles, and looks towards kt&looks back at the pandit).."Priti"..naam "Priti" kaisa rahe gaa..
Pandit: Bahut shub...Priti maane ki Pyaar(LOVE😆)..
Pandit: (puts a red tikka on the boy, kt is holding)..inka naam akshar "K" se shuroo kejiye..
Kt: (looks at Laksh and smiles).."Kartik"..
Pandit: Bahut shub..naam "Kartik" acha naam hai..
They have a small celebration, a.k.a. feast..and its quite late at night..so everyone goes to their rooms..after all the guests have left..
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IN LAKSH AND KT'S ROOM..
Kt, and Laksh put the babies back in their prams..
Kt goes to the closet, and laksh sneaks up behind her..he sweetly keeps his head on her shoulder, and touches her waist..she embaressly turns around..laksh..sweetly touches her chin, and lifts up her face..
They both stare into eachother's eyes..kt sweetly keeps her head on laksh's chest..he bends down his face..remove's her hair from her back, and sweetly kisses it..
He takes off her palu..(saari's dupatta😆)..but she turns around..he bends down..picks her up..
kt struggles to get out of his soft grip😆..
Laksh: kya hua?? itna uchlo mat..(he walks)..
Kt pushes him, and kt falls on top of laksh..
Laksh: Oww!! kt..itni zor se kyun giraaya..
Kt smiles, and blushes..
Laksh laughs..kt is getting up, but laksh pulls her back down..wanting her to fall on him..again and again..
Kt: (blushing) laksh..please chodo..laksh..
Laksh just lies their lauging, and smiling..he touches her waist..she giggles..
Laksh: kya hua bhai?? sirf kamar par haath hi to rakha hai..isme hasne ki kya baat..(he secretly lughs)..
Kt: laksh..
Laksh tightens his grip..which made kt giggle even more..
Kt: laksh please stop..tumhare haath itne thande(cold) hain..please stop..
Kt gets up..and see's her magalsutra attached to laksh's button..
Laksh: (laughs) dekho..ab tumhara mangalsutra bhi chahta hai ki main tumhe tang karoo..(laughs)..
Kt blushes..takes her magalsutra, and walks away..blushing..
Laksh gets off the floor..picks her up..again😆..
Laksh: uchalne se pehle..tum yeh jaanlo ki agar tumne mujhe push kiya..to phirse wohi hoga..(laughs)..
Kt: fine..chalo..
Laksh laughs..and walks to the bed..
Meanwhile Kartik starts crying..
Laksh: (makes an annoyed face) omg..abhi kyun ro rahe ho tum..(he lets go of kt, and she falls on the floor)..lo jao..hmph..(sarcastic)..
Kt: Owww!!! laksh...
She gets up goes to Kartik, and manages to get him to be quiet..She walks back to the ("so called") annoyed Laksh..and questions him..
Kt: floor ko bed samajh ke rakha hai kya?? itni zor se giraya..oww!! (makes a hurtful face)..
Laksh: ok sorry kt..ab main phirse le chalo...(laughs)..
Kt starts hitting him..and finally hugs him..(just like in the episode when he scared her, and he was the driver😆)..
Laksh: ok ok ok kt..maarna band karo..(he laughs)..
Kt sweely hugs him..and he hugs her back..
Laksh sweetly takes off her palu..and is starting to undo her saari..kt stops..and turns around..
She sweetly says.."please" in her eye language..laksh agrees..he puts her palu back on..he gets a hold of her hand..he bend down..kisses her hand..and sweetly says.."may i have this dance please?"..and ends it with a sweet smile..
kt can't say no to such a loving husband, so she agrees..she gives him her hand..
he gets up..takes her hand, and softly puts in on his shoulder..and his hand on he waist..
They are lost in eachother's thoughts..but are dancing with no music..they are looking deeply in eachother's eyes, while they imagine dancing on to the song.."Humko Tumse Pyaar Hai"..
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OK GUYS..I'LL CONTINUE NEXT PART SOON..PLEASE REPLY..
THANKS!!
😉

Not just awesome, it was soo romantic. Good job. Wanna go out and have an ice cream again with me??? Take it as a treat from me. 😉

Uru ur so sweet 😆 im guna miss you sssssssoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy much..luv you alwayz..have a awesome trip 😆 😉 God Blees You!! 😳 👏 😉

cool awesme part and very romantic. luved it coutinue soon plz.

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PART 44 - LAST PART
THE STORY TAKES A LEAP😆..
AFTER 5 YEARS..
Pulkit is 7 years old..and Priti and Kartik are 5 years old..
Laksh: KT!!! main jaa raha hoon..
Kt: ek minute..aayiee..
Laksh: (to his kids) ok bacho..chalo..jaldi..school ke liye derr ho jayegi..
Pulkit, Priti, and Kartik comes running down yelling.."wait..wait..wait"...
Kt comes with laksh's tie..She sweetly puts it on him..He kisses her a "Bye"..she insits to come home early..he agrees..and leaves with the children..
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AT NOON AROUND 2:00..
Kt was getting Lunch ready..since the kids, and Laksh were coming home..She was busy cooking..
Meanwhile the phone rang..
Tulsi: (yells) Main utaati hoon..
She picks up the phone and starts talking..
After 2 minutes, she comes running to the kitchen..
Tulsi: (paniked) Krishna!!..Krishna!! Jaldi chal mere saath..Abhi!!..
Kt: par baa..kya baat hai..bataiye to sahi..
Tulsi: Tu pehle chal..jaldi..
Tulsi grabs kt's hand, and runs out the door..in a rush..They both sit in a car..
IN THE CAR..
Kt: baa bataiye naa..kya baat hai..
Tulsi: driver jaldi chalaiye naa..please..jaldi..
Kt: baa please batiye naa..baa..
Tulsi: krishna!! laksh aur bacho ka accident ho gaya hai..
Kt: (panicked) KYA?! KAISE?! KAB?! (starts crying).. DRIVER GAADI JALDI CHALAO..
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IN THE HOSPITAL..
They reach the room's everyone is admitted in..
Laksh comes out of one room..with bandage on his arm..and head..
Kt: (runs to laksh) Laksh!!..
Laksh hugs kt..and kt hUgs him back..She looks at the badage on laksh..and gets shocked..yeh kya..fracture to nahi..
Laksh: nahi kt..fracture nahi hua hai..(starts crying)..meri chodo..bacho ko..kartik..
Kt: Kartik?? kya hua usko?? bache kaise hain..
Laksh: (crying) Priti, aur Pulkit theek hai..par kartik ko zaada chot ayiee hai..
Meanwhile everyone from SN comes down..and are worried..
Laksh and kt go to them..
Kt: laksh..kartik kis kamre main hai??
Laksh: (crying)..ICU mein..
Everyone gets shocked..Meanwhile Priti and Pulkit come out of the rooms..they are not hurt..They run to Laksh and Kt..
Kt hold them both..and hugs, and kisses them..
Meanwhile the doctor comes out of the ICU..
Laksh: Doctor?? Kartik--
Doctor: I'm sorry he's no more..
(Echo in everyone's heads: He's No More [sevral of times])..
Doctor: Unko kaafi zaada chot aayiee thi..
Kt lets go of the children, and falls to the ground..but laksh cathes her with one hand..[since he can't move the other one]..
Everyone has tears in their eyes..
Laksh: (crying, to kt) kt..sambhalo apne aapko..
Meanwhile the nurse comes running to the doctor..
Nurse: Doctor..Doctor..Patient ko kuch ho raha hai..
Everyone gets confuzed..
The doctor runs to the ICU room..
Kt: (crying) yeh kya ho gaya laksh..yeh kaise..(she couldn't stop crying)..
Laksh wipes off her tears with one hand..
Laksh: kt..yeh sab ek haadsa tha..agar bhagwaan ko yeh hi manzoor that to isme..hum kya kar sakte hain..
Kt: tumhe theek se dekhkar gaadi chalani chahiye thi laksh..ab dekho kya ho gaya..
Laksh: main jaanta hoon kt..isme meri galti hai..
Manthan: no laksh..isme tumhari galti kaise hai..it was an accident..pehle batao ki yeh kaise hua..
Laksh explains everything..
Flashback
Laksh went to the school to get the kids..The kids come running to him..and hig him..All of them sit in the car..and he starts driving..
While driving he didnt see a fast car coming behind them..and a fast car coming infront of them..
Laksh's car got bashed in between both the cars..
Priti and Pulkit fell out..but Laksh and Kartik were trapped inside the smashed car..
Laksh: KARTIK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..(he fell unconsious)..
Everyone was unconsious..and somehow they all were admitted in the hospital..
We are out of Flashback
Laksh: (crying) yeh sab aise hua..
Everyone was horrified..
Laksh hugged Kt really tight..and everyone was crying..but mostly Laksh and Kt were crying the most..
After a little while the doctor comes out of the ICU..
Doctor: (to laksh) i'm sorry..we mixed your kid with another one..you kid is fine..but is is hurt badly..
Manthan: (comes in front of the doctor) (slaps him) yeh kaisa mazaak tha..dekhiye aapne uski maa ki kya halat kar di hai..aap theek se pehle check karke nahi bata sakte the..sharm aani chahiye aapko..apne aap par..shey..
Doctor: we are really sorry sir..
Laksh and Kt go to the ICU room..
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IN THE ICU ROOM..
Kartik was consious..
Laksh and kt walked up to him..
They both were crying..
Kartik: papa..mama..aap ro kyun rahe ho??
Laksh: (crying) kuch nahi beta..kuch nahi..(he couldn't say what had happened)..
Nurse comes in the room..
Nurse: aap isse discharge kar sakte hain ab..
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AFTER A COUPLE OF DAYS..
Laksh's arm got better..and Kartik also got better..
Since then on..they never had any problems..that they had to face..
And thus, all of them lived Happily Ever After..
~*~!!~*~!!~*~!!~*~!!~*~!!~*~The End~*~!!~*~!!~*~!!~*~!!~*~!!~*~
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HI GUYS..WELL THIS IS THE END OF MY STORY NOW..I REALIZED THAT I DON'T HAVE THAT MUCH TIME TO UPDATE ALL MY 3 FAN FICTIONS..SO I DECIDED TO END IT..WELL SO THAT'S THE END OF ONE OF MY FF'S..PLEASE REPLY..THANKS URU!!..BYE!! LOVE YOU GUYS<3 👏
LOV,
ZINU
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Cool story. You did put a lot o effort in your FF. You improved a lot in your writing too. Keep it up! So you mentioned that you were starting a new FF.

zinu ur ff was awesome 😛 you definitely deserve a lot of appreciation for writing such an awesome ff 👏