Laksh and Kt FanFic..LAST PART (PART 44) - Page 15

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Posted: 18 years ago
i luved the parts. this one waz so cute.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Oh I almost forgot. did you ever check out my FF? Well I stopped it now, but if you want to read it.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/509833/dilwale-dulhaniya-le-jayenge-lk-pt1-2-pg2

It's not as good as yours. Just wanted to let you know.

And one more thing. How do you change your title of your FF? I don't get it. Can you help me out plz? 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: uru_hershey

Oh I almost forgot. did you ever check out my FF? Well I stopped it now, but if you want to read it.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/509833/dilwale-dulhaniya-le-jayenge-lk-pt1-2-pg2

It's not as good as yours. Just wanted to let you know.

And one more thing. How do you change your title of your FF? I don't get it. Can you help me out plz? 😳

well..u knoe u got to ur every 1st page where u started out..and u click edit, on the first thing you wrote, you go into the editing thigy, and u can change it😆 hope that helped😉

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: uru_hershey

Thank you soo much zinu.

no prob😉

Giah thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
another great part! keep up the good work! 😊
banju thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
it was gr8 part 👏
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey thanks 4 the link.....


bhumi
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************************************************************ ************************************************************ ********************************************
PART 39
IT IS KARVACHAUTH...
Laksh has taken his day off from office..Kt is having a faast..
L: (to kt) kt..kya hua??
K: bahut bhook lagi hai laksh..
L: (laughs) acha to yeh baat hai..
K: tum hehhehehehe kya kar rahe ho..tum kha sakte ho..main nahi...
Ganga comes..
G: Kt laksh ne subhe se kuch nahi khaya hai..tumhare liye..
Laksh smiles..
L: mom...
G: well..nahi khaaya hai..(smiles)
Kt blushes..
AT 9:00 p.m.
Tulsi: Omg..chaand nikal aaya..
Everyone rushes upstairs..
Archita takes all three babies, and goes upstairs..
ON THE TERRACE..
Kt was wearing a beautiful red lehenga..and laksh was wearing a red shirvani with a white scarf..
Kt and Laksh did the Karvachauth rituals together..
everyone went downstairs, but leaving kt and laksh..
K: Laksh..paani pilao naa..
L: kyun..
K: laksh....
L: (laughs) ok ok...
K: ab khaana..
L: nahi..kal khaa le na (laughs)
K: LAKSH!!!! please...
L: ok ok....
Kt does the same to laksh..
Laksh does some romance with kt on the terrace..unknowing everyone is watching..
Laksh is about to kiss kt on her lips..but she pushes him away..she turns and realizes everyone is watching them through the window..
Laksh also looks..both of them turn red, and look embarrassed..
Laksh and kt went to their room, embarressed..
They both were socked when they enetered their room...
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IN LAKSH'S AND KT'S ROOM..
They both were shocked when they entered their room...
K: laksh..(she hangs on to him)..
L: yeh kisne kiya ho sakta hai??
They saw blood everywhere..and on their wall it said.."I WON'T LEAVE YOU..I WILL KILL YOU"
They went and called everyone else..
T: omg...yeh kisne kiya hai.....
L: pata nahi daadi..hum jab andar aaye to yeh aisa hi tha..
G: omg..
K: zaroor koi hume maarna chahta hai laksh..
L: (covers her mouth) yeh kya keh rahi ho kt..tum aisa kabhi mat bolna..
T: chal..tum sab baby room mein so jao..yaa phir guest room mein..
L: hum baby room mein do lete hai..waha par do beds aur ek sofa hai..to we'll manage..
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NEXT MORNING...
You find pulkit on 1 bed.. the 2 babies on another..kt on the sofa..and lakshu in his sleeping bag on the floor..😆...
K: (wakes up) *yyyyyaaaaaaaawwwwnnnnn* omg..aaj to mujhe jaana hai..
L: (is already up..pretending to sleep) woh to bahut buri baat hai...
K: to tum uthe ho huh...
L (opens his eyes) yup...
They both laugh..
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Kt gets ready, and is looking in the mirror, brushing her hair..
Laksh comes and hugs her..
L: (sad) tussi jaa rahi ho..
K: laksh..
L: (sad) tussi mat jao..(u knoe the sentence the kid says in KKHH--kuch kuch hota hai😆)
K: laksh..mujhe chodo..mujhe jaana hai..
L: nahi..(sad) main tumhare bina kaise rahoonga??
K: jaise pehle rehte the..
L: woh baat alag thi kt..woh tab tha jab main tumse mila bhi nahi tha..DUH!!
K: laksh please...
Laksh kisses her on her neck, and cheek..
K: Laksh please...
L: FINE!! go.....hmph...(turns away)
K: laksh main jaoo...
L: mujhe kya..hmph..
Kt comes and hugs him from the back..
K: (whispers in his ear) "I Love You" she kisses him on the cheek, and runs..
Laksh gets a hold on her hand..and is now happy..
L: (looks in her eyes) phirse kehna..
Kt just smiles, and blushes..
Laksh is about to kiss her on her lips, but pari comes in..and shakes laksh..
P: (shakes laksh) laksh bhaiyaa..yeh kya kar rahe hai..
L: pari tum..tum bhaago yaha se..
She laughs and runs..
Kt is trying to get out of laksh's grip..but can't..
L: now..kaha the hum...
Laksh goes closer and closer to kt..kt has her face down and is blushing..
Laksh takes his hand and lifts up her face with her chin..
He slowly goes closer and closer to her lips..Their lips finally meet, and let go..
Kt blushes and runs out of the room..Laksh is satisfied...
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HEY GUYS PLEASE REPLY..TELL ME HOW IT WAS...HOPE YOU LIKED IT..
THANKS!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
When pari came in the room and disturbed laksh and kt, that was really funny. 😆 Do continue. by the way, I love your siggy. Keep yp your good work.
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Posted: 18 years ago
cool i luved luved this part and the ending waz really cute. good work zinu.

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