Laksh and Kt FanFic..LAST PART (PART 44) - Page 18

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Posted: 18 years ago
😲ur an awesome writer zinu plz don't end. u know what i think who eva write lakshya n kt ff can make all the depressed people happy after what happen 2day. why because we won't get 2 enjoy lakshya kt romance in the serial atleast in ff's we will get to get 2 c them 2gether. plz continue it will make us all happy. u don't have 2 but it would be nice though if u contiue atleast it will surely make me happy seeing them 2gether atleast in a ff.

p.s. i am so sad 2 after what happen 2day i feel i think i should quit watchin. i just hate ekta. 💔
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Posted: 18 years ago

ok guys..i've made my choice..i guess i was just really angry and sad at the moment..but sumone made me feel a lot better..so i'm gonna continue😆😉

p.s: drashti i hate ekta also..grr..😡

Love,

Zinu😉

NEXT PART COMING UP SOON..TODAY!!😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
thnx zinu 4 contiuning 😊
Edited by drashti26 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
no prob..thanks for you too drashti 😆 😉 and also iluvpulkit and also (mostly)..laksh_ktfan..she really helped me get over my sorrow.. 👏 😆 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
ur welcome. now hurry up n write the next part. just joking take ur time. 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
im almost done writing the next part..dont worry i promise u it will be up by today for sure 😆 😉 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
i can't wait till the next part.
Edited by drashti26 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
sorry i won't beable to read it today i need get off n let my annoying brother get on. sorry once again.
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Posted: 18 years ago
its ok!! u can read it anytime later..its not running lol..well atleast i hope not 😆 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

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PART 42

Recap:

Laksh's head falls on kt's shoulder's..

Kt: (yells) Manthan..Baa..Koi hai?? laksh..laksh..laksh...Baa...............

Manthan, Mihir, and Sahil support Laksh to the bed..

After 5 minutes..Kt sprays some water on Laksh..right as Manthan tols her..

Laksh dosen't wake up..

Kt: (worried) Manthan..laksh uth kyun nahi raha hai..

Manthan: (worried) i don't know kt..maine to wahi kaha jo doctor ne mujhse kaha..i have no clue..

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Kt: (puts her hand on laksh's face) Laksh..laksh utho..please laksh..(starts crying)..laksh.......

Manthan: wait..hang on..i'll call the doctor..

He takes out his cell and calls the doctor here explaining everything that happened..

The doctor arrives after 10 minutes..

The doctor check's Laksh's pulse..and takes a quick chekup..

Doctor: he is breating..mujhe lagta hai ki..inko koi bahut bada shock laga tha..koi jaanta hai ki kya hua tha..

Tulsi: krishna..kya hua tha..

Kt: mujhe zaada kuch nahi pata..bas yehi hua tha ki..laksh ne apna khaana kha liya tha..woh uth kar mere paas aaraha tha..par usse theek se chala nahi jaa raha tha..jab maine usko pakda..to woh bihosh ho gaya..(crying)..

Doctor: Oh..i see!!..inhe shayad koi baat yaad ayiee hogi..jo inko bahut pareshaan kar rahi hogi..issi ki wajay se shayad..inki yeh halat hui hai..but no need to worry..he should be up in some time..if not then..you might need to admit him into the hospital..we'll have to take his xrays again..to see what's the problem..

Everyone is shocked, and worried for laksh..

Doctor: ok..ill leave now..

Manthan: thank u doctor..ill guide you to the door..

Manthan and the Doctor leave..

Kt is crying..

Mihir: i hope ki isko jaldi se hosh aajaye...

Meanwhile pulkit comes running to his dad..and is trying to wake him up, by shaking him saying "papa...papa"...

Everyone leaves..and kt holds pulkit..

Kt: (crying) dekho pulkit beta..abhi papa so rahe hai na..unko sone do..aap bhi so jao..

Pulkit sweetly nods, and lays down by pulkit..keeping his head on laksh's chest..

Kt takes care of the two babies..while tulsi comes in..

Tulsi: krishna..main jaani hoon ke abhi yeh waqt nahi hai yeh karne ka par..kal shaam ko in dono bacho ka naam karan hai..

Kt: ji baa..

Meanwhile they both are talking laksh starts to come in his senses..

Laksh: (eyes closed, mummers)..no...kt...........

Kt and Tulsi notice hum mummering, and call everyone..kt goes and sits beside laksh..and sprays some water on his face..laksh opens his eyes in a gasp..

Manthan: oh thank god you woke up..its been two hours..we were all so worried..

Laksh: why what happened??

Laksh looks at pulkit sleeping on him..he sweetly picks him up..hugs him..and puts him against his chest..so he can sleep on his dad😆..

Laksh sits up..and asks what happened..

Manthan: you fainted..you won't wake up..we called the doctor..and yeah!..(he couldn't continue)..

Laksh: ok...

Tulsi: laksh beta..kal in dono bacho ka naam karan hai theek hai..

Laksh: ji daadi..(smiles)..

Kt stops crying..Laksh puts pulkit on the bed, and covers his body with the blanket..and pulkit sweetly cuddles, and sleeps..

Everyone leaves..

Laksh: to naam socha hai..

Kt: humne to pehle hi socha tha..

Laksh: arre haan..main toh bhool hi gaya..(laughs)..

Kt: acha ab sone ka waqt ho gaya hai..main khaana laati hoon..tum so jao..

Laksh: kt..mijhe bhook nahi hai..tum khaana rehne do..hum bas so jaate hain..

Kt: ok..

Laksh: par tumne khaana khaya..

Kt: nahi umhara hi intzaar tha..

Laksh: very wrong..tum abhi jaa kar khaana khaa ke aao..abhi..main bhi chalta hoon tumhare saath..par maine kuch nahi khana..im full

After a litlle whilt they both come back to the room..

Kt: laksh tum bahut bure ho..

Laksh: kyun??

Kt: tumne khaana khaya nahi..aur mijhe khila diya..(sweetly pulls his ear)..

Laksh: oooowww! kt...please...oooowwww! (laughs)..kt..

Kt lets go of his ear..

Laksh: sorry kt..par aaj mujhe bhook nahi thi..kal..ok..(smiles)..ok now chalo..sote hain..

Kt agrees..and they both go to sleep..

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NEXT MORNING..

Laksh and kt are sleeping in eachother's arms..

Laksh wakes up with a yawn..he noticed kt is still sleeping..he sweetly kissed her on her forehead, by sweetly removing her hair off her face..

After laksh sweetly higged her..and kissed her on her neck..a couples of times..then her chin, her rosy cheeks, and is about to kiss her on the lips but stops..

Kt wakes up..and see's laksh feeling uncomfortable..

Kt: laksh..kya hua..kya tumhe chakar to nahi aa raha?? (are you feeling dizzy or something??)

Laksh: nahi kt..aisi koi baat nahi hai..jo mujhe feel ho raha hai..usko main..(he gets out of bed)..kt mujhe..

Kt: (gets out of bed and walks towards him) kya baat hai laksh..

Laksh: main samjhaa nahi paa raha hoon kt..main..(he falls on the floor)..

Kt: (sits down)..(worried)..laksh tum theek to ho?? kya hua..

Laksh: kt main..mujhe saans nahi lee jaa rahi..(he puts a hand on his chest)..pata nahi..bahut weakness fee ho rahi hai..

Kt panicks and starts yelling "omg"..everyone rushes down to their room..and everyone gets worried seeing laksh..

Tanya: beta laksh?? kya hua..kt..yeh kya ho raha hai laksh ko..woh theek to hai..

Manthan rushes to laksh..Laksh's head is faced down into kt's shoulder..

Manthan: Laksh....kt..kya hua laksh ko??

Laksh: kt..hospital...(he coudn't continue)

everyone gets shocked..and manthan calls the ambulance..

Laksh starts coughing like crazy..it is hard for him to breathe..(they are still in his room)..manthan turns laksh's faace over..and see's his face turning blue..

Laksh: (in a painful and choking voice)..kt..paani..(he faints)..

After he faints in about 15 minutes the ambulance comes..and takes him to the hospital..

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IN THE HOSPITAL..

Doctor comes out of Laksh's room..

Kt is crying and crying and crying constantly..

Meanwhile..Doctor comes out of laksh's room..

Mihir: doctor..hpws laksh??

Doctor: not to worry..he just has breathing problems..don't keep him near any dust or anything..he'll be fine..

Manthan: ok..thanks doctor??

Doctor: he needs to take these medicine's on a daily basis..(hand him the list and leaves)..

Manthan: ok..

Everyone is happy knowing, nothing is wrong with him..kt goes and meets laksh..and everyone decides to stay back..and let her talk to him..

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IN LAKSH'S ROOM..

Kt: (crying) laksh..

Laksh: kt kya hua?? tum ro kyun rahi ho..

Kt: itna daraane ki kya zaroorat thi..tum bahut bure ho..hamesha aisa hi karte ho..(she sits down on the chair beside him)..

Laksh: kt..tum kyun itni chintaa karti ho?? kuch hua hai mujhe?? nahi naa..(he manages to laugh, without letting her know)..

Kt: laksh..

Laksh: kt..plz no lecture nahi toh main phirse bihosh ho jaounga..(smiles)..doctor se please poocho ki main yaha se kab nikal sakta hoon..

Ganga: (from entering the door) abhi..

Laksh: (happlily) sach?? ok..thats good...hospitals are..i will not finish that sentence..(he gets up)..lets go..

Ganga: laksh paagal ho gaye ho kya?? leto..doctor ko to aane so pehle..

Laksh: (makes a annoyed face) fine.............is he here??

Kt and ganga laugh..

Laksh: not funny...i wanna get outta here..(makes an annoyed face again)..

They both laugh even more..and meanwhile the doctor comes and discharges him..

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AT HOME..IN THE AFTERNOON...

IN LAKSH AND KT'S ROOM..

Kt put the babies to sleep..

Laksh holds her by her waist, and moves her hair off her face..and sweetly kissed her neck..and cheek..

Kt dosen't mind...since she knows how much he went through for her..

Laksh: (in his head) yeh ajeeb hai..yeh mujhe dhaka kyun nahi de rahi, yaa kuch bhi..?? well..try karte hain..

Laksh sweetly tickles her, and she giggles, and pushes him..he starts laughing..

Laksh: (in his head) finally..(smiles, and laughs)...

Laksh goes near her, picks her up, and stares into her eyes..Kt seems to be lost in his thought, staring right into his eyes..Laksh sweetly walks up to the bed..lays her down..and kisses her on her neck, etc..

Kt: laksh..baa..

Laksh looks up embarresly..

No one is there..

Laksh: (looks at kt)..kt..tum bahut khraab ho..(he tickles her)..

Kt starts giggling, and wants him to stop but is unable to say it..

Voice in background: Ahem..

It's ganga..

Kt: (giggling) laksh..ganga maa..

Laksh: main nahi dekhoonga..(laughs)..

Ganga: Laksh..tum tayeaar ho gaye??

Laksh stops in embaressment..

Laksh: (embarrassed) mom..aap?? i mean..haan abhi tayeaar ho jayenge..

Kt and Ganga laugh..while laksh walks across ganga to go to the washroom..his cheeks pinched up red..and rosy..=)

Both kt and Laksh get ready, and go downstairs for "Naam Karan"..

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To be continued...so guys tell me how it was..please reply..sorry for the delay..i was bussy lol..please reply..👏

Thanks!!😆😉

Love,

Zinu😳

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