Laksh and Kt FanFic..LAST PART (PART 44) - Page 13

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i can't wait till the next part and hope u feel better soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: drashti26

i can't wait till the next part and hope u feel better soon.

thank's😊 i hope i feel better soon also..oh! i hate getting sick! its annoying lol....šŸ˜†šŸ˜‰

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PART 33
EVERYONE IS IN THE HOSPITAL..
LAKSH IS WALKING IN CIRCLES, KT IS ADMITTED IN..
After 1 hour, the nurse comes in..
Nurse: congractulations!! ek ladka aur ek ladki hui hai..aap andar jaa sakte hain..par abhi ke liye sirf ek hi andar jaa sakta hai..
Everyone is happy..ganga is holding laksh..and laksh goes inside to meet kt..
Kt is smiling, and is happy...
L: (goes to kt first) (he kisses her on her forehead) kaise ho kt..
K: (happily) main theek hoon laksh..apne bacho se nahi miloge...
Laksh smiles and goes to the baby prams..
he picks them both up, and takes the babies to kt..he puts the boy on her lap, and takes the girl in his..
he is very happy, and starts crying while he looks at the baby..
The baby girl give a sweet *yawn*....
Everyone comes in...
Everyone smiles..
Sahil: beta laksh..main dekho..? (smiles)
Laksh gives the baby to sahil..
All the ladies, go and surround kt..and all the gentlemen go and surround sahil..
The baby in sahil's hands start's crying..
S: "omg..isne to mujhe toilet samajh liya...(laughs)..lagta hai..main isse pasand hoonšŸ˜†
Everyone starts laughing.....
The nurse comes in and changes her clothing....
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After a couple of days, kt get's discharged from the hospital..and comes home with the kids....
Laksh has decorated the baby room, with more and more toys...with the help if pulkit..
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Kt took the babies to her room...
Laksh wasn't home at the time...
everyone came in her room to see how she was doing, and also to see the babies..
Archita: omg omg, kt..dekho..yeh bilkul laksh bhaiyaa jaisa sikhta hai..(the boy)...
Kt shyly smiles..
Baa: mujhe to lagta hai ki, tumhe(kt), laksh, aur in dono bacho ko haridwaar jaana chahiye, baba se inko aashirwaad dilane ke liye, pulkit ko hum yaha sambhaal lenge..
Tulsi: mujhe lagta hai baa sahi keh rahi hai..ruk..main abhi laksh ko phone lagati hoon..
T: (on phone) hello? laksh?
L: (on phone) ji daadi..
T: laksh kaha hai tu?
L: daadi..main abhi mandir jaa raha hoon..kyun kya hua?
T: kuch nahi..tu jaldi se aaja..ghar par batati hoon...
L: ji daadi..
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Laksh is returning home, and is in the car..
L: oooff! main apni wallet to office mein hi bhool gaya..
He turns the car to go back to the office.....
His phone rings...
Tulsi: (on phone) laksh...
L: ju daadi...
T: kitne derr laga di beta..jaldi aa..
L: ji daadi..woh main bas office jaa raha tha..apna wallet bhool gaya tha main..
T: theek hai jaldi aaja..
They both hang up..Laksh was putting his cellphone on the seat, but didn't realize a little girl was running on the road..
His car hit the girl, and she fell and was unconcious..
Laksh stops his car...and gets out
L: OMG!!! kitna khoon beh raha hai..yeh maine kya kar diya..
He picks up the little girl, and takes her to the hospital..
He found a photo frame in her hand..it was of her parents...
he opened the back of it to take the photo out..and he found an address, but no phone number..
He went to that address..
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He knocked on the door...
A guy about his age opened the door...
L: um..kya yaha pe yeh rehta hai? (he shows the boy, the photo)
Boy: haa haa..yeh mere chaachu hain..aur yeh meri chaachi..kyun?
L: kya unki ek choti sii ladki hai?
Boy: haan..meri cousin hai woh..par kyun..aur aapke paas se photo kaise aaiyeee??
L: kya aapke ghar par koi hai??
Boy: nahi..abhi to nahi hai..abhi sab mandi gaye hai..
L: (in his head) omg..mandir ke paas hi to accident hua tha..
Boy: (points behind him) yelo...aa gaye...
Laksh turns back..and see's them crying...
L: kya aapki beti kho gayi hai??
The Girl's Dad: haan bete..
L: aap mere saath chaliye..please..jaldi..
everyone follows him..they reach the hospital...
The Girl's Dad [TGD]: aap hume yaha kyun laye hai?
L: dekjiye..shayad..aapki deti ka accident meri gaadi ke saath ho gaya tha..kya woh aapki beti hai? (he points inside the room)
TGD: haan..
L: mujhe maaf kar dijiye, uncle..maine aisa jaan booj kar nahi kiya tha..achaanak ho gaya tha..
TGD: koi baat nahi beta..main tumhara sukra guzaar hoon..ki tum itne ache ho, aur tum meri beti ko yaha laye..kya tumhare bhi bache hain?
L: ji haan..
TGD: main bata sakta hoon..ki tune aisa kyun kiya..tu bahut naek insaan hai..
On the other side..they show..Tulsi is trying to call Laksh..and gets worried, since he's not picking up..(he's not picking up becuz..his cellphone is in the car..)
The nurse comes out of the girl's room and says she's fine now....
Laksh says sorry and bye to her dad, and leaves..
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He reaches the car and finds his phone Beeping..he checks it..
L: (shocked) 31 missed calls?? omg..im dead......
He rushes to his office, gets his wallet, and rushes home..
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SO GUYS..TELL ME HOW IT WAS...SORRY IF IT WAS LATE...PLEASE REPLY....
THANKS!! šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
ALL THE STORIES ARE AWESOME PLZ CONTINUE!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
HI GUYS..SORRY FOR THE DELAY... 🄱

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PART 34
Laksh rushes to his office, gets his wallet, and rushes home..
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Laksh enter's his room....
Kt is crying...
L: sorry im late....
K: (gets up, and walks to him) (crying) laksh..itni derr kaise ho gayi..tum theek to ho...
L: haan kt, bas woh...(he explains to everyone..what happened)
Tulsi: he bhagwaan..woh theek to hai naa..
L: haan daadi..woh bilkul theek hai...
K: (crying) tto tum phone toh uthaa saktye thhe naa...
L: sorry kt, main phone gaadi mein bhool gaya thaa....
L: to daadi..aapko koi zaroori kaam tha naa...
T: haan...woh..(she tells him everything about the trip)
L: ok daadi..jaisa aap kahe...
They both pack there bags, and go to sleep..waiting for next morning..
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NEXT MORNING..
Laksh and Kt took everyone's aashirwaad, and were about to leave..when the dorbell rang..
Mihir opened it..It was the police..
M: ji inspector..kahiye..kya baat hai..
Police: yaha par Laksh Virani kaun hai?
L: ji..main hoon...
Police: we will have to arrest you mr.virani...
Everyone is shocked..The police put the handcuffs around laksh's rist..
M: rukiye, ispector..aap laksh ko arrest kyun kar rahe hain??
Police: inki wajay se ek maasoom bache ki jaan chali gayi hai..ji haan..kal kisi bache ka inki gaadi ke saath accident hua tha..aur aaj subha uski mauth ho gayi...iski ki wajay se..hum inko arrest kar rahe hain..
They start to leave....
Tulsi: Ek minute inspecor sahab..kya aap mujhe yeh bata sakte hain..ki..is report to kisne banwayiee thi...
Police: ji..ladki ke maa-baap ne..
L: kya?!! par unho ne to..
Police: bolna band kar..aur chal yaha se..
L: (turns back) Kt..maine kuch nahi kiya..(the police starts hitting him)..kt.....
Kt was holding both of the children...and she fell to the floor..and started crying..Archita and Bhoomi picked her babies, and her up..
Bhoomi: kt..tum chinta mat karo..hum laksh ko jail se bahar nikalwa lenge..chalo police station..
Everyone leaves for the police station..
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On the other side...
Laksh is in a dark room, and the police officer is asking him, why he killed that child...
L: maine kuch nahi kiya..accident hone ke baad main usko hospital leke gaya tha, aur phir unke maa baap ko bulaya tha maine..aur doctor ne kaha tha ki woh theek hai..
The police starts hitting him with sticks, chains, etc..saying that he is lying..and after he is bruised, they put him in his "jail room"...
The inspector comes...
Inspector: chal..tere family members ayeen hai tujhse milne..
it is hard for laksh to walk..but the inspector just holds him with a hard grip, and throws him in front of his family...
mihir and sahil help him get up.. everyone walks towards him crying..
K: (crying) laksh...
Laksh is crying..Kt puts her hand on his cheek..and he feels pain..
K: (crying) yeh kya ho gaya laksh...tumhara aisa haal kisne kiya..
L: maine kuch nahi kiya kt..maine us ladki ko nahi maara...
K: main tumpar yakeen karti hoon laksh..
Bhoomi: Sochne ki baat to yeh hai ki jab laksh se kaha gaya tha ki woh ladki bach gayi hai..to phir yeh sab uske maa-baap ne kyun karaya??
Manthan: tum theek keh rahi ho bhoomi..ab toh yeh pata lagana hi hoga..ki yeh sab..kaun..aur kyun kar raha hai..
Manthan: (to laksh) don't worry bro..hum sab kuch pata karke hi rahenge..
Laksh is happy to hear everyone is with him..but is still crying..
L: kt..bache kaha hai...
Archita: yeh leegiye bhaiyaa..
Laksh has nothing to say/do but to cry infront of his babies..He hands them back to archita..and right then..The inspecor comes and takes him to the same dark room..and everyone can hear him screaming in pain..and saying that he didn't do anything..
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SO GUYS..TELL ME HOW IT WAS....DO YOU LIKE MY NEW TWIST??....PLEASE REPLY..
THANKS!! šŸ˜‰
Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago
drashti26 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
these parts were really intersting. oh yeah n even i hate getting zinu.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 35
Everyone is horrified, hearing that he is getting beaten up for the thing he never did...
Manthan and Ganga decide to get him bailed..
Police: theek hai..hum inki bail to kar dete hai..par in par court ka case chalega..samjhe..
Manthan and Ganga are speechless...
Laksh has been taken out of the "dark room" and he looks awful..his body is all bruised, and bleeding in some places..he looks like he hasn't eaten anything for ages..which made everyone Horrified..Laksh was just walking saying nothing, wit tears in his eyes...
Everyone took him home..While they were on the way home, they decided to go to the hospital first..
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IN THE HOSPITAL..
They had the same doctor..who did kt's check-up..
The doctor comes out of the room..
K: doctor..laksh kaisa hai..
D: dekhiye..kisi ne unko bahut buri tarah se maara hai..inki poori body bruised hai..aur karib 2 mahino tak yeh properly chal nahi payenge..im sorry..humaare paas iska koi ilaaj nahi hai..bas hum yeh kar sakte hain ki..aap inko apne ghar le jaayiee..aur main ek nurse ko bhej doongi..inki treatment ke liye..ya phir main aa sakti hoon..ya phir kisiko inki bahut dyaan se treatment khud karni hodi..aur main harroz check-up ke liye aaoungi..aap soch lijiye..kya karvana hai..
She leaves..
Everyone is horrified..
Tulsi: tujhe kya lagta hai krishna?? kya karna chati hai tu??
K: aakhri wala..(turns around, and face tulsi) haa baa..main khud laksh ka khyaal rakhoongi, aur baad mein doctor check-up kar lengi..
Bhoomi: I agree with kt..
Manthan: me too..
Doctor comes back..
D: aapne kuch socha..?
Tulsi tells her the decision..
D: Okay..main unko discharge kar deti hoon..
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Laksh is unconsious..since he can't bare the pain..
Mihir, Sahil, and Manthan help him get to his room..they keep him on his bed..
Everyone is sitting in his room, thinking of who would do this..and laksh comes in his senses...
L: (opens his eyes) where am i..?
K: laksh..tum ghar par ho..
He tries to sit up..and kt helps him..
Manthan: Laksh..hum usko dhoond nikalenge jisne tumhare saath yeh ghinoni harkat ki..kya tumhe kuch yaad hai?? koi address..koi phone number..kuch bhi??
L: haan..kal jo maine suit pehna tha..ussme uske maa-baap ka address tha..kt..tum please check karogi..
K: haan laksh..
She goes and finds a peice of paper, in his suit..she hands it to manthan, and keeps the suit back..
Manthan: ok..sahil chahu..mihir daadu..koi aa raha hai mere saath..
S & M: haan..chalo beta..
L: main bhi chalta hoon manthan..
Manthan: Nahi laksh..tum aaraam karo..hum ho aayenge..
L: par manthan..
Sahil: laksh beta..manthan theek keh raha hai..
L: ok..
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SO GUYS TELL ME HOW IT WAS..HOPE YOU LIKED IT..PLEASE REPLY..
THANKS!! šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
do cotinue......we r waiting for ur next part...... šŸ‘


bhumi 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Your new twist is breathtaking. I almost feli like crying when laksh was getting beated up. I think you should make that inspector fake, because they don't hit people without proof.
And another thing, I think 3 kids is a lot of work for laksh and kt. Pulkit is fine to me. If you want t keep the baby girl, that's fine. But maybe if you kill the new born baby boy, maybe that would be the coolest twist you can add. What say? 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: uru_hershey

Your new twist is breathtaking. I almost feli like crying when laksh was getting beated up. I think you should make that inspector fake, because they don't hit people without proof.
And another thing, I think 3 kids is a lot of work for laksh and kt. Pulkit is fine to me. If you want t keep the baby girl, that's fine. But maybe if you kill the new born baby boy, maybe that would be the coolest twist you can add. What say? 😊

omg..u just gave me a brilliant ideašŸ˜†

and omg..ive been trying to think of my other part..but *interruption..interruption..iterruption..in my family* lol..o well..it will be posted up bye tomorrow..thanks for the BRILLIANT ideašŸ˜‰

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