Laksh and Kt FanFic..LAST PART (PART 44) - Page 14

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Posted: 18 years ago
wow zinu what are you a robot or something bcoz yesterday i read till part 28th and today they are 7 more parts updated.
but your ff is awesome the cool twist and everything 👏
continue soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Zinu29

omg..u just gave me a brilliant idea😆

and omg..ive been trying to think of my other part..but *interruption..interruption..iterruption..in my family* lol..o well..it will be posted up bye tomorrow..thanks for the BRILLIANT idea😉

no plz don't kill the baby. accident is ok but no dying plz😭

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Posted: 18 years ago

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PART 36
Manthan, Sahil, and Mihir reach that place..They knock on the door..
The girl who got hit by laksh's car answer's the door..
Manthan: kya aapka kal koi gaadi se accident hua tha..
Girl: ji haan..
Aur aap hospital mein thi, aur aap ab theek hain..?
Girl: haan..
Manthan: aap humaare saath bas thodi derr ke liye chalengi..
The girl was confuzed, cause no one was home, so she just forced a "yes"...
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The Girl, Manthan, Mihir, and Sahil reach home..
L: omg..yehi woh ladki hai..isi lakdi kaa meri car se accident hua tha..
Manthan: kya yeh uncle sach keh rahe hain..?
Girl: haan...
Manthan: kya aapke family mein se koi police ke paas gaya tha?
Girl: nahi, par police ghar aaiyee thi..
Manthan: aur kya baat hui thi unke beech main??
Girl: yehi ki..koi ladki mar gayi hai..aur uska badla hum lenge..us ladke ko hamesh ke liye jail bijwaake..ya phaansi pe chada ke..
Manthan: lo..mil gaya saboot..
Manthan: (to the girl) aapka naam kya hai..
Girl: anushka..
Manthan: Ankushka..aap ice-cream khayengi..ghar jaana hai..
Anushka: haan..
Manthan takes her back home, and buys her a ice-cream..
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Manthan goes back home..
Manthan: ab saboot mil gaya hai.. ab laksh ko koi phasaa nahi sakta..
L: par manthan..humaare paas saboot nahi hai..humne to sirf yeh sunaa hai..
Manthan: don't worry bro..saboot bhi mil jayega..you just rest..
Everyone leaves laksh, kt, with their 2 babies..but they take pulkit..
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Kt gets the first aid box, and does what the doctor had told her to do..
She is cleaning all the blood off of laksh's face...
L: ah..oww............
K: sorry laksh..zaada zor se laga kya..
L: nahi..tum mere upar baithi ho..
K: omg..(gets off) sorry laksh..
L: (smiles) kt..chodo yeh sab..(he gets a hold of her)
They hear a knock on their room door..
K: laksh please chodo..koi darwaaze par hai..laksh please..
He lets go off of her..
Kt opens the door..and see's its the doctor..
D: hello..
K: hi..
L: (in his head) huh?? yeh doctor yaha kyun hai??
The doctor check's his condition..
D: (to kt) inka khoon abhi tak saaf..
K: main karne lagi thi..par..(she was too embarassed to continue)
D: (laughs) koi baat nahi..(she starts cleaning laksh's face)
Laksh makes a flirty face to annoy kt..Kt gets jealous..
K: Laksh..dard ho raha hai..
The doctor looks at him..He quickly hides his "flirty" face..
L: kt..mazaak band karo..
Kt was speechless..
The doctor, went up to his legs, and started cleaning the wounds..
And laksh made a face like..."Ah..this is nice.."..KT got super jealous..
K: (to doctor) doctor..main kar loongi..aap bas check up keejiye..
D: woh to theek hai..par..mujhe check-up karne se pehle yeh sara khoon off chahiye..
Laksh looks at kt, and teases her..
Kt makes a pissed off face..Laksh bugs her, making flirty faces, etc..
The doctor says that he is guna be good in a week or two..and i think he should start walking..and leaves..
Kt is pissed off, and closes the door..after the doctor leaves..
L: (sarcastically) kt..tumhe usse kuch seekhna chahiye..(laughs)
K: kyun?? main perfect hoon..aur mujhe doctor's nahi kuch sikha sakti..
L: naaraaz kyun hoti ho..main sirf keh raha hoon..(he gets up)
Laksh walks closer to kt, and she turns her face and walks in the other direction..Laksh gets a hold of her hand,and pulls her towards him..Laksh is facing his back to the door...
L: Owwwww....(makes a painful face)
K: (scared) omg..laksh..kya hua..
L: kya hua nahi..kya kiya..
K: kya kiya??
L: mere pair pe laat maari..oowwww.....
K: omg..laksh..m so sorry..
Laksh gets a hold of her waist..and picks her up..
K: laksh..chodo..
L: kyun..tumne mere paire(feet) ko chot pahunchaii..(laughs)..main kyun chodu..
K: (struggles) Laksh..mujhe majboor mat karo tumhe maarne ke liye..(she was joking)..
L: (in a flirty voice) haaye...ab to main tumhara khilauna hoon..
Kt blushes..and smiles..
K: laksh please chodo..tumhe chot lag jaye gi..
L: acchaaa..nice bahana kt..mujhe chot lagjayegi..tum to mujhe maar hi chuki ho..ab chot kaisi...
Kt cover's his mout..and says "aisa kabhi mat bolna..laksh"..
They both stare in each other's eyes..
K: ab seriously laksh..please chodo..
Laksh put her down, and just then ganga walked in..Laksh fell on top of kt..getting hit by the door..
G: kt..main..
Laksh and kt were just staring in each other's eyes, lying on the floor..carefree..
Ganga laughs quietly, and calls everyone else..
Everyone comes and starts laughing..Kt realizes everyone is here..and pushes laksh off of her..and gets up..laksh also gets up..
They both are embarrassed..
L: (shyly) woh mom..(picks up one of the babies) hum bas inko dekhne aa rahe thei..aur kuch nahi..aur phir..
G: haa haa jaanti hoon kitna dekhne aa rahe the kitna nahi..
Everyone starts laughing..Laksh and kt start laughing in a embarressed manner..
Everyone leaves laughing except for ganga..
G: kt..mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karni hai..zara chalogi..
K: ji maa..
laksh and kt begin to leave..
G: arre laksh?? tum kaha chale..tumhe kisse kaam hai..(laughs, and so does kt)..

L: mom aapne hi to kaha kaam hai..

G: (sarcastically) woh kt se tumse nahi..(laughs)
They both leave.. and laksh is just smiling..standing on the door..
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SO GUYS..TELL ME HOW IT WAS...PLEASE REPLY..
THANKS!! 😉

Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

plz get kt kidnapped or something torture her but dont do anything to laksh and or plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dont kill any kid !!

Edited by halimah - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
What can ganga be thinking of? Let's wait. 😃 I am just going to school right now. Wow last night at 11:00 i read your last second part, and in the morning you wrote one already. 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 37
Kt comes back after 20 minutes, happy, and horrified at the same time..
L: (standing on the door, still) kt..kya hua?? itni derr kaise laga di..
K: kuch nahi laksh..bahut raat ho gayi hai..tum so jao..
L: ok..
They both walk towards the bed, but their (room) phone rings...
K: (picks up) hello??
Police: (on phone) hello..police bol rahi hai..
K: ji kahiye..
Police: Kal aapke pati kaa court case hai..hum unko lene kal subha aa jayenge..samjhe..
K: ji...
They hang up..
L: kaun tha kt..
K: woh..woh..police.......
L: kya kaha hunhone..
K: tumhara court case kal subha hai..main sabko jaakar bata deti hoon...
L: main bhi chalta hoon..
K: nahi laksh..tum aaraam karo..main bas abhi aayiee..
L: ok....(makes a "i'm so bored" face)
Kt comes back after a couple of minutes..
WHILE THEY ARE SLEEPING...
Laksh is fast asleep, dosen't know whats going on..since he lost his sleep, getting hit =(
K: (crying) (in head) kaash ki yeh baat sach ho ganga maa..kaash ki yeh baat sach ho..(she thinks and goes to sleep)
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NEXT MORNING
9:00 A.M. SHARP...
Police enter's the door's on SN..
Police: chaliye..ab usko chalna ho ga..
Laksh had nothing to do but to leave..he kissed a bye to his kids, and kt, took everyone's blessing's..and he left..
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THAT MORNING...IN COURT...
Laksh's lawyer was....well you'll find out lol..you'll be shocked 😆
Laksh is standing in his witness box..
First ill get you all clear.. The lawyer who is running for the opposite team, from laksh..is Mr.Dev..and you'll find out who'se laksh's lawyer..(its not mr.vajay) 😆
Mr.Dev: kya yeh sach hai mr.laksh virani..ke aapki gaadi se inki (points at the girls parents, who are standing in the other witness box)..inki beti ka accident..aapki gaadi se hua tha..ki nahi..
L: haan..par..woh ladki..
Mr.Dev: HAAN...KI NAHI....
L: haan.......
Mr.Dev: for right now thats all your honor..(he sits down)
JUDGE: doosra lawyer, apne questions poochiye..
Manthan gets up.......😆.......
Manthan: thank you your honor..
Manthan: (walks towars anushka's parents) kya yeh sach hai ki..accident hone ke baad..mr.laksh virani..aapke ghar gaya tha..? aapko hospital laane...
Parents: nahi...
Manthan: to phir..aapko kaise pata chala..ki..laksh hi aapki beti ka kasoorwaar hai...kis haq se aapne usko jail ke andar karwaya..kis haq se...JAB AAPKO PATA HI NAHI THA KI...LAKSH KE GAADI SE AAPKI BETI KA ACCIDENT HUA THA..TO KIS HAQ SE AAPNE USKO GIRAFTAAR KARWAYA..KAHIYE..MUJHE JAWAB CHAHIYE...ABHI!!!!!!
Anushka's parents were speechless.....
Manthan: Your Honor.. jab inko pata hi nahi tha ki kiski gaadi se inka accident hua tha..to phir kya aap mujhe bata sakte hain ki..police ke paas saboot kaise aaya..aur kaisa saboot....
JUDGE: police..answer this man's question...
The Police were speechless....
Manthan: Your Honor..kya main aapki ijasat se..uss ladki ke maa baap se uska naam..aur photo le sakta hoon..uss ladki ki...
JUDGE: ijaasat hai..
Manthan: thank you your honor...
Manthan: (to the parents) aapki beti ka naam..aur uski tasweer...layiye...please...
They take out her photo and give it to him..and say her name is "Anushka"...
Manthan: your honor..mere paas ek aur gawa hai...
JUDGE: please call them..
Anushka appears in the witness box....
Laksh, anushka's parents..and everyone else are shocked to see her...
Manthan: your honor..agar yeh ladki mar gayi thi..to phir yeh aapke..aur ham sab ke saamne zinda kaise khadi hai...
The judge was speechless.....
Manthan: mere paas ek aisa saboot hai, your honor..jo yeh saabhit kar de ga..ki..mr.laksh virani..bekasoor hai...
He takes out a tape recorder..and plays the whole thing..he plays that when he went to anushka's house, and the stuff she told them in their house...
Laksh was shocked...............and so was everyone else...............
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SO GUYS..TELL ME IS THAT WAS GOOD...SHOULD I CONTINUE....PLEASE REPLY......
THANKS!!
😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 ff!!! 👏 manthan the lawyer?!<-lmao 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
contiiiiinue sooonnnnnnnnnnnnnn really soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
************************************************************ ************************************************************ ********************************************
PART 38
Manthan: (to anushka) kya yeh jo maine abhi play kiya, kya iski saari baatein sach hain......?
Anushka: Ji haan.......
Manthan: toh phir your honor..saara sach aapke saamne hai...That's all your honor..(he sits down)
JUDGE: iske baad judge is faisle pe pahunch ti hai...ki...Mr.Laksh Virani bekasoor hai..And we are sorry for all the hitting, etc..aur Anushka ke maa-baap ko giraftaar karti hai..
The whole Virani family get up, and are happy...Laksh comes out of his witness box..
L: (to manthan) thanks manthan..agar tum naa hote to..
M: he look..i maybe mean..but when a person from my family is innocent..i will not leave the one who did this on purpose..
They both smile, and hig each other..
Anushka's Parents: humari beti ka ab kya hoga..
JUDGE: of-course..she will go to foster home, and someone will abopt her..
CASE CLEARED.....
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Everyone is back home..
Everyone is thanking manthan for what he did for Laksh..
Manthan: OMG!!! enough thanking..i'm bored..im going out!! byee....
Everyone laughs...
Laksh: Mom..kal raat aap kt ko kya batane ke liye le kar gayi thi?? mujhe bhi batao plz..
Ganga: haan..woh..kich nahi..
Laksh: Mom..plz..(makes a cute face)
Ganga: NO!!
L: mom..pleassseeeee..(he makes a cute puppy dog face)
G: fine..kt ko archita aut pari ke saath, Chandigarh jaana hoga..tumhari tabiyat abhi theek nahi hai toh..maine kt ko archita aut pari ke saath bhej diya hai..
L: omg..kya?? main bhi jaaonga..NO FAIR!!!!!
G: no laksh..tum ghar par rahoge..
L: (makes a pissed off face) hmph...(leaves)
Everyone starts laughing...
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IN LAKSH'S ROOM...
Laksh is laying on one side of the bed..angry...Kt comes in...she goes and sits beside Laksh...
K: laksh...(shakes him softly) laksh..(now hardly) Laksh....
L: mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni..tum jao naa..Chandigarh..hmph..
K: naaraaz ho laksh...
L: (in a girly voice) "naaraaz ho laksh.." (out of girly voice) haan...
K: (laughs) laksh..main bacho ko leke jaa rahi hoon...
L: (sits on bed, shocked) kya..tum tum...tum bahut mean ho..ab mujhe bacho ke saath bhi nahi rehne deti..tum jao..maine tumse koi baat nahi karni..hmph..(he gets up and leaves the room)
Kt starts laughing..He comes back embarressed...
L: tum jao..mujhe bejh diya..hmph...(he goes and sits near the window..
K: main jao?
L: whatever...
Kt starts to leave..but laksh holds her hand..
L: ek conditon pe...
K: fine..bacho ko yaha chod jaoungi...
L: woh nahi...
K: phir kya..??
L: give me a kiss and say that you love me 😆..
K: paagal ho gaye ho kya laksh..chodo..jaane do..
Laksh holds kt in a tight grip, so she can't leave..
L: agar tum aisa kare bina chali gayi..to main apni jaan..
Kt cover's his mouth..
K: tum bahut bure ho..har baat par aisa karte ho..(starts crying)
L: sorry..to ab phir..woh karo jo maine bola hai..
Kt pushes him..and leaves..laksh runs across the room, and stands infront of the door...
L: agar tum chali gayi..to main tumhe yahan nahi miloonga..
Kt gets confuzed..
Ganga comes and opens the door..again..this time kt pushes laksh which causes the door to close..
G: what the heck was that? KT!!!!
L: (laughs) dekho tumne kya kar diya..
Kt opens the door..and see's ganga standing..
K: omg maa..aap theek to hai..
G: haan..main bas yeh batane aiyee thi..ke tum parso jaa rahi ho..aaj nahi..
K: ok..
Laksh was standing, and looking in the closet...laksh got his suit out..and kt came and closed the closet....
L: OWWWWWWWWWWW.......
K: kya hua....
L: haat(hand) kaat diya tumne mera..
Kt see's blood coming out of laksh's hand, and him sucking on it..
K: omg laksh..im so sorry...main jan booj ke nahi kiya...
Laksh gets a hold of her waist..holds her close to him..
K: laksh..chodo..main abhi band-aid kar dati hoon..
Laksh fills Kt's maang with his blood...Kt starts crying...
L: waise kt..ek baat batao...
K: kya..
L: tum jaa rahi ho parso..karvachauth hai ussi din..to kya hum karvachauth nahi celebrate karenge..(he frowns)
K: oh haan..main abhi jaa ke maa se poochti hoon..
L: haan chalo..(they both leave and go to ganga's room)..
K: maa..
G: haa bolo beta...OMG!! laksh..tumare haath me se yeh khoon kaisa..
K: (slaps her forehead) sorry laksh..main band-aid lagana to bhool gayi..main abhi leke aati hoon..
G: ruko kt..tum meri use karlo..
K: ji maa...
She ties a patti around laksh's hand...
G: haan to beta tum kya keh rahi thi..
L: woh mom..parso karvachauth hai..aur kt..
G: oh haan..main to bhool hi gayi..tum aisa karo kt..karvachauth ke agle din chali jaana..ok..main sabse baat karloongi...
L & K: (happily) Ji..thank you maa...(and they leave)..
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SO GUYS TELL ME HOW IT WAS....PLEASE REPLY...
THANKS!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 update 👏
plz continue soon!

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