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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: aaakkii

oye Vandu kahaan hai yaar tu.....Do u remember ki tu ek FF likh rahi hai.... 😡

I waited for so long...that....kabhi to tu continue karegi....Sonia jee ke saath ye sab..kya gul khilaane waale hain.....jaldi post kar.....I am waiting u see..... 😭

Luv,
Akanksha 😛

hehe.......haan unfortunately yaad aagaya ki main ff likhti hoon,......hehehe!!! ab ye le next part padh aur bataa kaisa laga!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago

rightaway dear........read this part n send me your comments!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago

JEEVANSH PART -----6



Hey ppl im like really very sorry for not updating😳….there were various reasons for that…….one .. my grandparents have come over…..yippee!!! hehe!!!😛 And secondly it was my chutti time so I was busy with my cousins n relatives who'd come over ………and the main reasons were that I had encountered a writers block, as the earlier plot of my story started seeming insignificant n stupid to me, so I was wondering what to do with it🤢……..and also lack of time……..but I finally seem to have come up with a solution of sorts😉…….so im continuing n hopefully will try to post the parts real quickly to make up to u all for keeping u waiting for such a looooong time……!!!! So u can expect quick updates,…..hehe!!!😆……I think aap sab story bhool gaye honge to ek baar last part phirse padh lijiye…..😆

Pichle episode mein apne sonia ki entry dekhi, I hope you all liked it…….ab dekhte hain aage kya hua… 😳



There is a knock on the door of nandini's room…..😃

Kashish: Arey…..yeh iss time pe kaun hai??….

Nandini: Arey yaar……ashi aur tia honge!!!…. 😃

Kashish: Oh really!!! Tumhe sach me lagta hai ki wo dono junglee hamare room me knock karke ayenge…..aur wo bhi ashi…….forget it!!! Unme itni tameez nahi…… Shaitan ki reincarnation hain dono……….😆 😆

Nandini: Ye to sach hai……lekin ab darwaza khol bhi d…warna bahar jo bhi hai wo khada khada behosh ho jayega darwaza khulne ke intezaar me…… 🤢

Kashish:Haan haan khol rahi hoon!!!……. 😊

Nandini (remembers something): Kashish stop!!!!,……mat kholna!!!…..

Kashish: Kyun??????? 😕

Nandini: Ho sakta hai ki ye sujal , karan n ranveer ka koi prank ho……u remember maine tumhe bataya tha wat all I overheard ….pehle pooch lete hain ki kaun hai ???

Kashish : Ya ok……kaun hai??? Who's there??.


Nandini : Dekha no one ias answering….it means kuch gadbad hai….im sure its those guys trying to make a fool of us!!!

Kashish : Hey I have an idea!!.😉



Ussi samay malhotra mansion ke aage ek gaadi aakar rukti hai aur usme se do tired😕 n frustrated ladkiyan baahar nikalti hain!!!

Ya u r right, they are ashi n tia!! 😆

Ashi :Yaar!!! Aj to haal-behaal ho gaya….pehle admission ke liye itna que……uske baad saari formalities admission ki n college change karne ka transfer certificate ka chakkar……uske baad books lene jao….oh god!!!

Tia: Ya…….Pehli baar Tia tumhari baaton se agree karti hai……😆

Ashi: Oh really ……princess timbo kumari🤣……I'm honoured, hah!!! Do u thinki care a damn about what u think!!!!tumse to baat karna hi beekar hai😆

Prem: To mujhse baat kar lo na…….i may prove to be a better company….😳

Ashi: Hey bhaggu!!!(pointing at tia )ek paagal kam thi…jo ek aur mil gaya😆……bhaggu kya main wo ek hi intelligent prani hoon jo apne create kiya hai…..😆!!

PREM : Hey , kya hua chipkali😆…….just cool it ok,…… Chipkali's are supposed to be cold-blooded animals……so accordingly , u must behave that way!!!! why r u soo angry??? 😆

ASHI: Oh please…..gimme a break u chimpanzee🤣……its none of your business…….so just buzz off…..!!!(bechari, she's soo tired that she doesn't even wanna argue with prem…..hehe!!!😆 warna prem ko zinda nahi chodti…hehe!!😆)

Akshat: Hey tumhari problem kya hai…….hamesha katne ko kyun daudti ho sabko!!! 😕

Ashi(totally irritated by now😡): Oh !!!!!!! Another one!!!………Lagta hai main kissi zo mein aa gayi hoon🤢….jahan dekho junglee janwar dikh rahe hain..(then looking at tia😆)……aur ek bandar ko to main subah se saath leke ghoom rahi hoon😆……hey bhaggu…..thoda to pity karo mere pe!!!😉(hehe!!!😆 Ye ashi bhi na….tia ko bilkul nahi chodti….)

Tia: U 😡……Tia tumhe…..……. 😡

But before tia could complete her sentence….ek chillane ki awaaz sunai deti hai…..

Ye cheekh sunke…..tia , ashi. Akshat , prem , ranveer…..sab bhag kar aa jate hain…….dekhne ki kya hua hoga!!!! 😕🤢

Ok now ……hehe😆…….guess kya hua hoga…..who screamed??? Why??😕 Wat happened??? Kuch bura???😭 Kiske saath???🤢……till then sayonara folks……to janne ke liye ki kya hua, wait for the next part!!!! Ok I know im very mean….hehehe 😆…..to keep u in suspense!!!! Hehehe!!!!😆 But story ka asli mazaa to tab hi hai jab suspense ho……kyun??? So enjoy the suspense…….aur haan……tickle your brain cells n make a guess n tell me ki what do u think??? Kya hua???😕And ya….jinn logon ne pehle story padhi hai , they are supposed to keep quiet n not spoil the fun for the rest of the readers plzz……hehe!!!! 😆

I Promise to continue soon!!!!


And ya…..Plz do comment😳…..your comments make a world of a difference to the writers😳…….and encourage us to continue😛…..so hoping all my readers will comment!!!! 😉



Luv,
Vandu 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part dear... 👏 ...me frst 2 comment on it....hmmm...ashi is 2 mch..ab yeh..kashish aur anjali ne he kuch karnama lagta hai kiya hai.. 😉 ..do cont..soon... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 great part di...was w87ing for it..... 👏 ab plzz nxt part jaldi post karna....... 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*

gr8 part dear... 👏 ...me frst 2 comment on it....hmmm...ashi is 2 mch..ab yeh..kashish aur anjali ne he kuch karnama lagta hai kiya hai.. 😉 ..do cont..soon... 😊

hehehe........anjali??? nahi sweetz nandini,......hehe.....

will continue soon....pakka!!

thanx for commenting😉

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeev-bigfan

😆 great part di...was w87ing for it..... 👏 ab plzz nxt part jaldi post karna....... 😭

aww......im sorry to keep u waiting 4 soo long sweetz......but now i'll post the next part son....itni der nahi lagaungi....😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
hwy where were u this long........by the way thanks for continuing..and very good part.......but who yelled...wat it sujal and karan or kashish and nandani..........plz post the next part soon..........
Edited by ami_princess - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ami_princess

hwy where were u this long........by the way thanks for continuing..and very good part.......but who yelled...wat it sujal and karan or kashish and nandani..........plz post the next part soon..........

ahan!!! wo to next part me pata chalega ki what happnd n who yelled.....will post it soon ......hehe!!!😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
vandu dear masth partt tooo tooo gooood continue soooon 👏 👏 👏

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