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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ImPrEsSiVe_Grl

hey vandana just caught up wid ur ff its really good...and last part was awesome...this ashi na is too much khare kahre sab ki baizati ker dete hai 😆 😆 ..poor tia prem and aki.and ya cont soon cant wait to know whoz screming was tht 😊

hey thanx yaar....yup ashi is tooo much😆

to know who screamed, keep reading!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey very nice part......but it was small.....dont u think....waise....ashi & tia fight is just awesome.....
& then ashi calling prem Chimpanzee 🤣 ....he..he..he...just too much.....

Now curious to know....who screamed actually.....
Wild guess------KASHISH 😆

Luv ,
Akanksha 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

hey thanx!!!!😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: aaakkii

hey very nice part......but it was small.....dont u think....waise....ashi & tia fight is just awesome.....
& then ashi calling prem Chimpanzee 🤣 ....he..he..he...just too much.....

Now curious to know....who screamed actually.....
Wild guess------KASHISH 😆

Luv ,
Akanksha 😛

yup me too love the ashi-tia fights....hehe!!!😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
yaar vandana..itni achchi achchi parts likhne ke baad kaha gayab ho gaye ho??? 😉
gr8 parts !! 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: easygold

yaar vandana..itni achchi achchi parts likhne ke baad kaha gayab ho gaye ho??? 😉
gr8 parts !! 👏 👏

hehehehe😆!! dont worry will post by tonight!!!😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
toniiite??? 🤢 okay kya kare aab w8 to karna hi parega!!! 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago

JEEVANSH PART --- 7





So lets start ……last time we heard a loud scream……..hehehe…..time to kill your suspense……..hearing the scream all the people had gathered , to know what exactly was going on in their house!!!! Hehe!!!

Sujal : What the hell iz going on here???

Wanna know what happened…..ok ok don't kill me, and don't grab that flower-vase next to u to hit me with it……..khud hi dekh lo kya hua tha!!!! I know u have waited long enough to know what happened!!!!hehe!!!

(Flashback)

Kashish: I have an idea nandini…..
Nandini : What?? Jaldi bataa !!!

Kashish : Hum pehle chilled paani ka ek bucket bharke late hain and then we'll open the door and seedhe paani daal denge unn logo pe……humpe prank play karenge ye log……..ab bajega inka band…!!!

Nandini : Hey good idea yaar……..ek to thand ka mausam aur upar se thanda paani……….mazaa ajayega……tab unhe pata chalega ki humse panga lene ka anjaam kya hota hai.

Kashish : Ok I'll bring the water !!!
Nandini: Haan jaldi kar !!!

There iz a knock on the door again !!!



Nandini (Whispers to kashish): Where are u…..jaldi aa !!!


Suddenly the door opens and sonia was standing with her back to the door….as soon as she turns……..chilled water iz thrown all over her………completely shocked n taken aback ……..she screams at the top of her voice……..

(End of flashback)


SUJAL (coming towards nandini's room): Will someone kindly tell me whats going on here!!!!…….

Sonia is just glaring at kashish n nandini : Hah!!! I wish I knew what 's going on……..i myself am in no position to tell u……!!

SUJAL (Suddenly he sees sonia, nd notices that she's all wet….and fuming with anger): Mam, what happened to u……u are all drenched……how did this happen???

NANDINI : Mom ……plzz come in and change, or else you'll fall ill..

Kashish , nandu come in, and by this time tia and ashi had also witnessed all this, they too come in…..all the guys are completely confused as to what going on in their house,they go back to their own rooms!!……..(special emphasis on "their" house….hehe!!)

Ashi : Hey bhaggu……Mom whatever were u doing??? Anywayz……..ap to hamesha hi gadbad karti rehti hai……..ap disneyland ke joyride pe nahi ho, aap kya ajkal "taarzan " film ke liye audition kar rahe ho………jo unn chilla rahe the………ap na, kabhi nahi sudhroge
(all those who have seen remix will know ashi n her mom sonia's relationship…….hehe…….that's one of the main reason's I choose sonia to play her mom……I really cant imagine ashi having any other mom…..hehe!!!)

In sujals room -

Sujal : Whats up with these people…..they are just crazuy man!!!!…….god knows what they were doing screaming about like that……..and inspite of asking , they never told what was the reason for that ear-splitting scream…..!!!

Karan: Ya actually……that was soo rude……aisa lag raha hai ki wo humare ghar pe nahi….balki hum unke ghar pe reh rahe hain

Ranveer: Lagta hai unhone mom ki baat kuch zyada hi seriously le li hai

Sujal : Mom ki baat??? Kaunsi baat???

Ranveer : Ya mom ne hi kaha tha na……… (mimicking vasu) kashish beta, isse apna hi ghar samjho……to lo ….samaj liya apna ghar

Karan : Ha ha ha !!Ranveer…..tu bhi na…….haha !!

Ranveer : Hey…….main pata karke aata hoon ki baat kya hai??

Sujal : No need….chod de yaar…….ye unka personal mamla hai…..let it be….waise bhi who cares !! wo chillaye ya tribal dance karen……

Akshat : Bapre, koi bharosa nahi……wo ashi to tribal dance bhi kar sakti hai…..aur wo bhi drawing room ke beecho beech aag jala ke…..

(lolzzzz…….hehehehe…..akki is too much…….but haan I don't trust ashi one bit, akki dheere bolo, agar ashi ne sun liya na, to aur kuch nahi to, tumhe irritate karne ke liye wo ye bhi karegi………..she is one khtarnaak n bindaas person………bachke rehna usse )

In kashish's room –

Sonia (To kashish n nandini): Now girls…..explain yourself…..what made u give me that shock treatment………or that scary welcome !!! Is this your idea of fun……..Then lemme tell u, I didn't find that amusing at all…….!!!

I didn't expect this from u both (kashish n nandini) I thought ki sirf ashi aisi harkatein karti hai…….

Ashi : Hey bhaggu !! ab isme main beech me kaha se aa gayi……..i wasn't even at home since morining……..so plzz keep me out of this haan……..isme mera koi haath nahi hai…….infact haath kya , pair , sar, fingers , nails , ears , eyes…..kuch bhi nahi hai (bapre….bola tha na , ki ye khatarnak hai……..isse pehle ki yew apne pure body parts ginee….koi kuch karoo…..)

Sonia : Ok enough ashi, main samaj gayi……..agee kuch bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai (phew, thank god…….kissi ne to roka ashi ko…warna wo to apni sari haddiyan bhi ginwa deti….hehe )

Kashish n Nandini tell everything and explain their actions to sonia…….

Ashi : Lolzz…..hahahahaha…….hehehehe…….well done sis,…….today you have proved that you both are my sisters…..akhir kuch to asar hua , mere jaisi dhamakedaar n intelligent copmpany ka………Mom , u were looking a sight , I tell u ……..oh I wish I had taken a pic of yours…..and given it to the press………hehehe….tomorrow's screaming headlines…………"Thakeli chudailon ka badla"…….kashish n nandi laugh while ashi quietly moves away,……..and then they realize ki ashi ne thakeli chudail unn dono ko kaha tha…….they look around angrily,…….but ashi ab kahaa milegi…..wo to bhaag gayi………
Ha ha ha !!!……..

Sonia : Ashi ……..how can she even say that……..i'm her mom…..and these are her sisters….ye ladki bhi na, she's just too much !!!!

Tiya : How mean of her to say that…….maasi im soo sorry about what happened…………r u fine now !!!

Sonia : Itz ok dear…..im fie …….mujhe kuch nahi hua…….main yeh kapde change karke aati hoon……!!!

Kashish : We are sorry maasi….this is all my fault,……..maine socha ki wo ladke honge………aur wo humpe prank play karne aye honge……so we did all this !!!

SONIA : Itz ok dear……ab tum sab apne apne rooms me jao n so jao…..its too late already !!! (saying this , she takes the towel from kashish's hand )

Kashish n nandini (scream in unison ) : Arey nahi , not that towel……(wo apecial towel tha……jisme black - paint lagaya gaya tha, taki ladko pe paasni phenkne ke baad unhe diya jaa sake muh poochne ke liye!!! )
But they were a bit too late, coz sonia ne already muh pooch liya tha………and ab wo surprise hokar dekhne lagti hai ki ye dono ab kyun chilla rahe hai !!!

Ashi (jee haan ye wapis aagayi, coz inhe pata tha ki abtak sabka gussa shant ho gaya hoga….aur aate hi ) : A…ha ha ha ha…..he he he he (haste haste usne iss baar mauka nahi gavaya n clicked a picture of soonia with her cell phone)

Sonia : Ashi …….what up with u??……..pehle ye dono chilla rahe the…………..ab tum yun hass rahi ho…….have u gone mad???

Ashi : Aap zara khud ko aine me dekhne ki himmat karen…….mazaaa ajayega……….hehehe hehehe !!

Sonia (Looks into the mirror): Aaaaaaaa……..(lolzz khud se hi darr gayi)…….huh!! oh my god!!! Yeh kya hua?? Main black colour ki kaise ho gayi……???

ASHI : Hey bhaggu !!!! Kya maa di hai apne mujhe…..inhe itna bhi nahi samaj nahi aata ki inke muh pe paint lag gaya hai……na ki ye black colour ki ho gayi hain……pata nahi inka kya hoga??? Ek wo timbo, timbe ,timbaktu hai……aur ye ek meri mom…….dono bilkul ek dusre ki carbon-copy hain……!!!

Kashish n nandini look at each other helplessly……they dunno ehat to do or what to say, and upar se ashi ki baatein sunke unhe hassi aa rahi thi,………they were really confused ki ab wo kya karen……..hehehe!!!

Ashi (to nandini n kashish): By the way …..my sweet sis……I am proud of you two…….aj apne mere dil ke armaan pure kar diye……ha ha ha ha….keep it up …….aur mom ko beech beech me aise shock –treatments dete rehna………shayad isse mom ka dimag thoda bohot theek ho jaye…….that iz agar inme dimag hai to……(saying this she runs away before sonia can bash her up……hehehe)


Well ranveer ko to sujal ne instructions de diye the ki don't interfere in kashish's family matters……!!!!

Par koi aur tha jo sonia aur kashish-nandini ki baatein sun raha tha…..

luv,

vandu😉

Edited by togepe30 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey vandana gr8 part. 👏 👏 👏 ...I cant stop laughing 😆 😆 pehle pani then paint 😆 😆 and this ashi na hahaha.. 😆 ...ab ye person kaun hain..... 😕 ..cont soon dear 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey outstanding part......bichaari sonia......hahahaha.......& this Ashi just too much.....
I think prem's the one who's listening to them...lolz....

Cant wait for the next part.....post sooooooooooon.....ye dil maange more 😉

👏

Luv,
Akanksha 😛

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