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Posted: 18 years ago
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i read ur first part and was eagerly waitin for other.god it was rockin!!!!!!!!!!!!2 options for everythin?nice cntinue soon and ur promo complements ur parts.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Brillaint- this option thing is sooo annoying but hilarious. (its like his thing)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 3

Kripa was now handcuffed on the bed railing. Angad had left the Royal suite after his shower and let Kripa sleep on his bed until he got back. It was now dinner time and Kripa had her full rest, now she was unable to sleep.

Around when dinnertime came around Kripa was super hungry. She had breakfast before Angad left but was unable to get lunch or dinner because both her hands were handcuffed to the bed.

For the first time ever Kripa wished for Angad back. She was starving as hell. "If Angad doesn't come back with food I will seriously stave to death" As Kripa said this out loud the door to the hotel room opened, and Angad come in with bags of food in his hands.

"Any one hungry?" The way Angad said this it seemed as if he was a husband coming home from a long day of work, happy to see his wife.

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Angad and Kripa were having rich Spanish rice with a glass of light wine for dinner. Angad thought it would be safe enough to let Kripa eat on her own by unhand cuffing her. Now, Angad and Kripa were eating dinner in the hotel room across form each other at the dinner table.

"Your not thirsty?" Angad had noticed that Kripa had eaten every thing on her plate but never once touched her wine glass, full of wine.

"I don't drink"

"Would you like something else to drink?" Angad couldn't believe he was asking Kripa this question. He had never talked this strait with any girl before. Usually he would say things like do you want me to fill your thirst with my lips.

"No thanks I am fine"

Angad and Kripa went back to there silent dinner until Kripa spoke up breaking the think ice of silence between.

"Where, did you go all day, Angad?" Kripa didn't say this just for the sake of saying something. She really wanted to know where he had been.

"I had some business to take care of." The tone in Angad's voice was kind of upsetting. This surprised Kripa a little but she let the thought slide.

"What type of business did you have to take care of?" Angad looked strait in to Kripa's eyes, and really stared deep into her eyes. Kripa thought she saw a hit of pain in Angad's eyes but it was soon hidden with a normal stare.

"The type of business where one comes home and the other doesn't" Kripa's mouth dropped open realizing that Angad had just come back after murdering someone. All of a sudden Kripa felt sick and she had a pretty good feeling that her dinner was going to come back out the same way it went in.

"I think I am going to be sick" by saying that Kripa stood up and ran to the bathroom and Angad just followed incase it was a trick, it wasn't. Kripa went strait to the bathroom sink, throw-up then fainted on to the floor.

It was weird; Angad could have let Kripa lie on the floor until she woke up again but something about her innocent, passed out face made him think twice. Instead of leaving Kripa on the floor he picked up Kripa in his strong muscular arms and lied her down on the bed. Then, he did something he had never done before in his life, he took the floor for a woman.

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Next morning when Kripa had woken up she noticed she was on the bed and not handcuffed. Kripa quickly looked to her side thinking to she Angad but the bedside beside her was empty. "It wasn't like Angad to leave a girl on the bed unhand cuffed." Kripa thought.

Kripa then looked on to the floor to see Angad sleeping. Many thoughts rushed to Kripa's head. This was the perfect time to run, but was it a test of Angad's? Did Angad do something to her after she had fainted? Was he a good guy deep down or was it an act?

As all these questions came in Kripa's mind, Angad's eyes started to open to meet the suns rays. Angad saw an innocent Kripa staring in to him and then many questions came popping in to his head like popcorn popping over a fire. Why didn't Kripa run when she had the chance? Did she call the cops already? Is this a trick of hers? Is she more of a devil then I thought she was?

Both Angad and Kripa stared in to each other's eyes for their answer but instead they only found confusion. After a long silence of searching Angad finally decided to ask Kripa a question. "Why didn't you call the cops." In return Angad got a simple and a bigger confusing answer "I don't know, it was probably seeing you on the floor which stopped me "

"You didn't call the cops because you thought I would wake up?"

"No Angad, I didn't call the cops because I thought, maybe, just maybe, you where a good guy deep down and maybe, just maybe, I could be the one to keep one less killer off the street.

Angad gave a smirk full of humor and nothing more. His eyes laughed in humor and his lips soon went from a smirk to a real laugh, he really laughed throwing his head back and just laughing his heart out. He probably never laughed so much in his life that tears started spilling out of his eyes. Angad soon had to grab his stomach to stop him self from laughing to death.

"Kripa, I am the devil it self and there is no way I would give up killing just because a girl said so." Angad was still gasping for air from all the laughing when he said this.

"Ok then, Angad, lets see who will win, the innocent or the devil." Kripa said this in an open challenge to Angad and to her surprise Angad took the challenge openly.

"Kripa, never challenge the devil because in the end he always wins, but if you still want the challenge then fine. I take your challenge openly."

Angad got up off the floor and started heading for the shower. "Your not going to handcuff me?" when Kripa said this she really wanted to know why Angad didn't tie her down like a dog like he had done before.

"I have nothing to fear from you any more. You challenged to make me one less killer by using your innocent charm, if you call the cops, not only will I remain a killer, one way or another I will escape from prison also."

By say that Angad closed the bathroom door and Kripa just went back to lying on the bed. Kripa knew what Angad had said was true; if she called the cops he would just get away. The only way to stop Angad was to introduce him to an old friend of Kripas' something called guilt.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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please comment and tell me what you think of this part. I know it seems boreing right now but I want all the exciting parts to come when Kripa and Angad go to Angad's house in Spain
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Posted: 18 years ago
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It ws nt at all boring,infact it was a great part 👏




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Posted: 18 years ago
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that is soooo NOT boring- its really clever and funny!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow angad lives in spain... i guess wen they ge there it is going 2 be awesome 😊 😊 😊 plzzzzzz continue soon
i guess angad is starting 2 change little bit ight now 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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AWESUM!!! 👏
God... Kripa is soooo clever!!! tht's a REALLY smart challenge!!! 😆
awww.... Angad's soooooo sweet.... i knew he had a heart sumwhere
deeeeeepppppp down!!! 😆 awww.... poor Kripa.... cud have died bcoz
starving to death.... but or Hottie Superman came just in time to
save her!!! 😆 nd this prt was NOT AT ALL boring... i CANNOT wait till
they go to Angad's house!!! 😉 😆 so... continue soon!!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
Awesome parts... jus read da last 2 parts.... im totally rootin for kripa to win the challenge.... n it was soooo sweet of angad to sleep on the floor, n i cnt wait to see how kripa tries to change angad!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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glad you all like my part, I will post another part if I can but I dought it because a few of my brothers friends are comeing over and i have to baby sit even though my brother is older lol

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