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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part and promos cont soon plz!!!!!! 👏
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Part 4

Angad Khanna was smoking hot when he came out of the shower. Kripa was staring at Angad the whole time when the door to the bathroom shower opened, his brown and black hair dripped of water and every part of his body just seemed ten times better then before. Kripa knew that no girl in the world could ignore the fact that Angad was hot and if that girl denied it then shed be telling a lie.

Angad was wearing blue jeans with no shirt on; as Angad looked for the perfect shirt to wear he talked his talk with Kripa "Kripa, if you need to take a shower go now because we a leaving for my house tonight around 7 pm

Kripa looked at the clock on the side table to see it was only 12 pm " ok, I go take a shower, now" Kripa got up off the bed, where she was sitting and headed for the bathroom door when Angad grabbed Kripa around the waist.

"While I was in the shower I thought about making our little challenge a bit more interesting." Angad used his sexy deep voice to say this because the truth was the guy couldn't help but do so. Kripa was one hot babe and he just couldn't deny it, Angad had not meet many women that were four years younger then him but still make him think all crazy.

"How are you planning to make are challenge more interesting, Angad?"

"Well I was thinking, from this challenge what do I get out of it if I win?"

Kripa was confused as to where Angad was going with this. "What do you mean?"

"What I mean is, if you win then you get the happiness of seeing one less killer on the street but if I win then what do I get?"

Kripa smiled at Angad's last comment. " If you win Angad, I will give you what ever you want." Kripa knew what Angad would ask from her if he won and this just caused her to work harder to keep Angad from killing another person.

"Angad, can you let go of me." Angad then realized that he was holding on the Kripa from the waist, and that was when he realized that he was holding on to Kripa real closely. Almost as if he was afraid of some thing and he was holding for protection. Angad fingers slowly loosed its grip and clearly in his eyes any one in the world could see he was feeling some thing he had never felt before but the problem was he just didn't realize what it was.

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It was true beauty and Kripa just had to admit it. Angad and Kripa had spent all night driving to Angad's house and reached early in the morning right when the sun hit the house perfectly.

The house was large with green vines going all round it. It was almost like Kripa was in a movie looking at her dream house, never in her wildest dream had she believed such a beautiful home existed in the world.

"It's a beauty isn't it" Angad said this as if his life long dream came true " I had this house built right when escaped from prison. It was my dream home when I was younger but I couldn't afford it but now…Oh well, come I will show you the backyard it is to die for"

Angad grabbed Kripa's hand and lead her to the back yard. It was weird how they were acting, if a stranger saw them together they would assume that a new wed couple that had just bought the house and were loving every part of the house as if it was there life long dream.

The backyard was fifty times more lovely then the front. In the back was a pool with a waterfall falling in to the pool. Around the pool were red, white, pink, black, and yellow roses all. Beside the pool was a swing on which at least 4 people could sit on at once and it had bells on the rope that was holding the swing together. It was a beauty for real; it was almost like heaven it self couldn't compare to this.

"Your right Angad, the backyard is to die for." Angad looks at Kripa's innocent face and just couldn't help hate him self at that moment and just think, that it was this very same girl's who's life he had ruined with his two hands, and still this girl was in front of him admiring a garden he had created with his own two hands.

For the first time ever, Angad Khanna was feeling guilty for something he did five years ago!

"Come I will show you your bedroom you must be tired from the long drive" Angad couldn't help but be nice to Kripa it was like the guilt inside of him couldn't help but do this to him. Guilt was one strong word that made any man regret all that he has done in his life.

"No, I am not tired, I want to spend more time in heaven." By saying that Kripa walked unknowingly towards the beautiful pool and just walked strait into it happily full clothed.

Angad's mouth dropped open in shock and just ran to the pool and dove in with Kripa. Angad had never once swum in his pool until today. The reason Angad never swam in the pool was because every time he would get close to it, it always seemed as if it were a pool of blood instead but today, with Kripa, it seemed a light blue pool, like the sky, never ending.

Under water Angad saw Kripa's beautiful face and a few seconds later Kripa's face left from under water to the top for air and so did Angad's.

"Nice day for a swim isn't it." Angad was back to being his devil self, he grabbed Kripa's waist in the water and let his body press into hers, this left Kripa speechless. Angad gave a devil of a grin that any girl would pay to see again. He started slipping of Kripa's jacket that she was wearing and let it fall into the deepness of the sky blue pool. His lips found there way to Kripa's neck and his hands started to crawl up her shirt when…

Sorry to leave you guys in the heat of the story but I really want to know what you guys think and untill I get a satisfying responce I will not continue, lol I am being the devil to you guys but, oh well😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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yippeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😃😃the first one to comment 😊 this part was out of the world but i guess it was a wrong spot 2 stop at 😊 😊 😊 i am dying 2 read the next part 😊 y do u have 2 torture us like this 😊 😊 😊 anyways as long as u continuew it is enough for us 😊 continue soon 👍🏼👍🏼
i hope kripa doesn't slap angad or anything tht might make angad angry 😊 😊 😊 guess have 2 wait 2 see 👏
Edited by pal89711 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: pal89711

yippeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😃😃the first one to comment 😊 this part was out of the world but i guess it was a wrong spot 2 stop at 😊 😊 😊 i am dying 2 read the next part 😊 y do u have 2 torture us like this 😊 😊 😊 anyways as long as u continuew it is enough for us 😊 continue soon 👍🏼👍🏼
i hope kripa doesn't slap angad or anything tht might make angad angry 😊 😊 😊 guess have 2 wait 2 see 👏

Trust me it wasnt a bad place for me to stop because it is better to keep every one guessing then telling because the next thing that happens is something no one wants to read lol its nothing bad but lets just say HE COMES ALONG and trust me you dont want to know who He is lol😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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by he u mean someone who lives in angad's house or maybe a neighbor 😊 😊 😊 i guess ill be waitin 2 see😊😊😊
Edited by pal89711 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😳 😆 Angad's so cute! but how could Kripa admire a house made from money earned by taking away life of people? 😡 but still angad and kripa are so cute 😳 ! love his challenges 😆 😆 😆 i bet Kripa pushed him away but i hope not 😉 😆 gr8 part n cont. soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok... awesome part 👏 but why wud u stop at right there?? now i hav to guess who this mystery person is (and it better not be a girl or even worse, PRITHVI!!!!! 🤢 cont soon plz!!!!!! 👏
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Originally posted by: pooja1221

😳 😆 Angad's so cute! but how could Kripa admire a house made from money earned by taking away life of people? 😡 but still angad and kripa are so cute 😳 ! love his challenges 😆 😆 😆 i bet Kripa pushed him away but i hope not 😉 😆 gr8 part n cont. soon 👏 👏 👏

well come on if your with a hot hunk like Angad do you think you would keep in mind that the house was made by money earned from taking lifes 😆

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Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

ok... awesome part 👏 but why wud u stop at right there?? now i hav to guess who this mystery person is (and it better not be a girl or even worse, PRITHVI!!!!! 🤢 cont soon plz!!!!!! 👏

NEVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! would I make the mystery person a girl and NEVER EVER EVER!!!!!!! would I make it Prithivi🤢

but keep guessing😛😆😃

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ok i'm guessing josh or one of angad's "clients" 😕 cont soon plz!!! 👏

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