my first fanfic.(ak)~WHY?t~3rd part pg 6

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Awesome part cont Soon 👏 👏 👏

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Neha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#32

Excxellent part... im sure that person is sahil, from the character list... cnt wait for u to rite da nxt part!!!! Soz cnt think of any names at the moment but ill try to come up wid something!!!!

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Hana

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Posted: 18 years ago

#33

wow wow ritu jaaan great ff yaaaaaaar toooooooooo tooooo goooooooooooood just fantastic 👏 continue soooon can't wait more

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ritu

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Posted: 18 years ago

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thankss everyone... i am really in no mood to reply to every comments... my lazy fingers are too lazy for that... anywayss thankyou alll of you for liking itt.... i am reallly happpy... anywayss here goes the third part....

PART THREE

the kiss soon turned passionate and after a while.. we broke itt... he hugged mee and whispered... " i missed you kripa...!"

kripa and 'him' hugged for a while... and finalll pulled apart... (very less of you got it) the guy is sahil... sahile rubbed his hand on her cheeks adn whispered... " just look at yourself... what have you done to yourself... i wasn't there for a minute and..." he trailed off... kripa giggled.....

" thats why i said..dont leavemee alone and go to your stupid trip.... btw what are you doing here???" kripa asked...

" ohh... umm i had gone t your house to meet you... cuz my trip starts tomorrow and i wasnted to spend today with you... but when i reached your home i saw you're house was a wreck.. i tried locatin you but you were not found... then when i called angad...he tld mee he 'found' kripa kapoor lying on the road... adn i couldn't help myself i came here...." sahil finished...

kripa frowns..." you're leaving mee again in this state.??"

" kripa... angad is here to take care of you...and i know he will not try to steal you from mee... if i take you to my place.. i wonder what my brothers are gonna do with you..." he said... kripa hit his chest... and then dropped her head to his chest...

" i am too tired to walk to my rooom..." kripa said...

" no problem..." sahil carried her in his arms and slowly poped his head out..when he saw that the coast was clear... he walked... more like rushed to kripa's room...

" why are you rushing...??" kripa asked...

" cuz i dont want angad seeing mee... he doesn't knw i am here.. i came in through the window..." he said... he slowly put her to bed and made her sit up... " sit here.. i'll put ritu to bed and come back..." he picked ritu and slowly put her t her own bed and kissed her forehead... when he came back...he saw kripa was fast asleep.. in a very awkward position.. he made her sleep well adn kised her and then jumped out of teh window almost breaking his leg...

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" kripa wake!!"

kripa was startled by this... she had teh habit of sleepinguntill your eyes dont want to close adn your body starts aching.. but right now shewas too sleepy to wake up... she caught her pillow adn threw it at whomever was yelling...

" kripa... wae up will you???" kripa opened her eyes slowly and looked at teh door to find angad standing there.... she grinned and sat up.. her eyes still half closed...

" good morning angad... now finally you remember me??" krpa asked inocently...

" kripa shut up... i had never forgotten you... i just dint want yu to find out i still remember you.." angad said cooling down a lil...

" uh-huh..and why dint you want mee to know???" kripa was getting mad know.. what did he think of himself...? why was he acting soo strangely..?? if it was eleven years earlier...he would have hugged her squeezing teh life out of him...

" because i dint want to go through everything i went through eleven years ago...now stop questioning mee and answer my question... was this really an accident or yo lanned it???" angad asked with a smug...

kripa jaw dropped to teh ground... how dare he think she would fake an accident..where she is suffering soo much... " WHAT MAKES YOU THINK I FAKED THIS ACCIDENT???" she practically yelled at him..." WHY WOULD I FAKE AN ACCIDENT WHERE I WOULD HURT MYSELF???"

" gosh kripa... i have ears too you know.. you dont have to yell... " he rubbed his ears adn then had a serious face and looked at her... " in't it weird that you had an accident with MY CAR...?"

what teh hell does he think of himself..." WHAT TEH HELL ANGAD... I HAD AN ACCIDENT.. THAT WAS AN 'ACCIDENT' AND IT IS AN COINCIDENCE HAT IT WAS YOUR CAR!!" she was in teh verge of tears now... how can he think of her like that...wasn't he her best friend?? why does he think she wants to coem to his life...

" (sarcastic)haha..what a coincident...(real tone) whatever is cooking in your mind kripa.. take it off... i DONT want you back in my life...stay here untill you are wel... which is about a week...adn then elave from here neer returning again before ritu comes back..." saying hthis he was about to elave but kripa stopped him...

" Why?" she asked... anagd taurned around adn saw tears which shocked him... he ahd never seen kripa cry..she had alwas been happy-go-lucky type... always cheerful...wild parties... always hyper... soemtimnes overly hyper... he had never ever seen erh cry... adn now seeing her lik that hurt him...

" why what?" he asked finding his voice...

" why do you think something in cooking in my mind?... why do you think i have come back to your life on purpose..? why do you think this accident was planned...fake?..(her voice trembling now) why did you leave before our graduation? why dint you ever try to contact mee? you had moved.. i couldn't reach you... but i was there.. you couldve easily reached me.... why dint youc all mee in your wedding.. when ritu was born... hadn't we promised to share every happiness together...no matter how silly or small it is... but that wasn't silly nor small.. it was a very big moment of your happiness... but you dint share with mee.... why dint you call mee even when u needed mee...when your wife died... dint we prmise to share every single sadness together?.. then why anagd.... WHY?" she started crying hysterically.... she wiped her tears and walked upto angad with great effort..

" i still think of you as my best frend angad... and i can see hat you are hurt.. you have pan and loneliness hidden under those attitude and arrogance... angad you cans still share it with mee... (she cupped his face) your pain will lessen if you share them..." kripa said ...angad just stared at him...he had never been as guilty as he felt now..yes he had done all hose things... and he hadn't called kripa for one reason... he looked away adn thre her ahnds off his cheeks and harshly he said...

" i dont want to share my pain.. cuz it wont lessen but will double ... ad i am just happy teh way i am..." he said thsi adn walked away...

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at arond 7 ritu woke up and was packing her stuff... sulking... soon she got ready with kripa's help... bid goodbye with kripa... adn then stood there for a while hoping angad would come to bid her goodbye tooo... but he dint..soo she went to school with teh driver with tears is her eyes... kripa saw this and wondered why was anagd soo distant with ritu... his own daughter...

preview- angad, tanya and kripa... 😉 😉 keep thinking what gonna hapen....

Edited by ritu_the_gr8 - 18 years ago

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Hana

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Posted: 18 years ago

#35

ritu dear geat part loved it toooo tooooo goooooooood continue soooon 👏

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ixi-shaj

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Posted: 18 years ago

#36

awwww- such a nice speech yet he wasnt affected by it ( i was) 😊

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nerdybrody

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Posted: 18 years ago

#37

great part really interesting
😃 👏

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pooja1221

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Posted: 18 years ago

#38

aww... angad still didn't melt after what kripa said. i wonder who ritu's mother is? tanya? anyways, great job! 👏 👏 👏

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Marauders

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Posted: 18 years ago

#39

I just caught up withh ur ff.. It is amazing.. Plz cont soon.. Gosh Angad is sooo rude. 😡 but hot at the same time 😆 so won't say anything against him...lol..
anyways cont soon 😃

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brainychild92

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Posted: 18 years ago

#40

i wonder who is her mom.. and was she evil u no the one who forced angad-kripa to seperate even when they were apart.....

great part and cont soonn!!

Edited by brainychild92 - 18 years ago

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