my first fanfic.(ak)~WHY?t~3rd part pg 6

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ritu

@ritu_the_gr8

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Posted: 18 years ago

#21

i will continue tomorrow.... guyss plss help mee pick a title for the storyy... plsssssssssssssssss

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ritu

@ritu_the_gr8

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Posted: 18 years ago

#22

ok sonce i am fre right now although its already 9:30... i will right this part... this part wil bee kripa's POV...

PART TWO

after about two hours of sleep.. i couldn't sleep anymore... maybe because i heard some noise downstairs... although i was still a lil weak i went out to see who was there... when i reached out of my room... i could see angad and some girl enter the house... they were standing by the door making out...ugghh!!! making out??? how could he??? how could he make out with some girl infront of mee??? well although he cant see mee! he cant just make out with any girl....oh wait is his the tanya ritu was talking about??? hmph... soo there goes another point i am mad at him..... youw anan know what teh otehr are ok..soo here goes...

no.1... he disappears just a week before high school graduation...
no.2... doesn't care to have any contact with mee after that... adn calls mee best friend...best fried my foot..
no.3... meets after about ten/eleven years adn doesn't recognize me...
no.4... i come to know hes married and has a ten eyar old daughter...
no.5... he wantes mee out of the house although i am in a really bad health!!
no.6... HES MAKING OUT WITH SOME GIRL INFRONT OF MEE!!!!!

i had to do something to break their lil making out session... i looked around adn sw a fragile vase... walked upto to it... and push it sligtly with my finger... oops!! this surely did teh magic and they broke it hearing teh noise...angad right away looked up and i held my head..hanging it as if i was really in pain adn walked towards teh bathroom... then i popped my head out adn watched them walk towards a room downstairs... angad leaned to teh edge of teh door... damn he was looking HOTT... with an extra capital H... yea yea yea... i am his best friend and i am not supposed ot be sayign this..but what can a person do when the guy she had a crush on since middle school..adn who also happened to bee my best friend since 4th grade..!!!

ok soo back to teh room... he was eaning against teh door...one hand in his pocket.. his legs crose over teh other...adn one hand around teh girl's waist... leaving teh hand around teh waist part... the pose was pretty good!... OMG! he leaned forward to kiss again.... what should i do? what should i do?.. oh yes... i started fake coughing... and they were disturbed from their romantic mood again!!!! then hoping they wouldn't kiss/make out again... i went into teh bathroom... after 15 mins i walked out of the bathroom... and as iw as walking back towards the rooom... two arms pulled mee into a dark room adn pined mee against teh walll... before i could react his lips were on mine... it was a sweet gentle kiss... as i recognized teh kiss... i wrapped my armsa round him and kissed back...

the kiss soon turned passionate and after a while.. we broke itt... he hugged mee and whispered... " i missed you kripa...!"

preview- who was teh guy?? kripa and angad have a heated arguement...kripa and angad, a week alone in the house...(ritu needs to go to her school...adn she stays there teh weekdays adn comes back on weekends)

i will continue tomorrow... and pls pls pls help mee with teh title...

ritu😳

Edited by ritu_the_gr8 - 18 years ago

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

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Posted: 18 years ago

#23

wow. great part. cant wait 2 find out who dat guy is. but i have a feeling its angad. cont soon.

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zoya

@legallyzoya

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Posted: 18 years ago

#24

wow ur storie seems intresting....good work 😛

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ixi-shaj

@ixi-shaj

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Posted: 18 years ago

#25

Angad- since no-one else has been introduced- or maybe even Prithvi (dont ask y, everyone always has Prithvi in their FFs)

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sukhi

@Kay.Gi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#26

baby that rocked ur gr8
i wonda who that man is
plzzzzzzzzz update soon

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

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Posted: 18 years ago

#27

wati that wasnt angad?? it has to be cuz he lives alone.. i mean with this daughter but still.. u no wat i mean

continue veryy soon.. its a very goood fanficc!!!

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Madiha

@Dark Love

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Posted: 18 years ago

#28

great part!! its her boyfriend who's been wanting to propose to her!! cuz he is angad's best friend and all...hmm, sorry cant think of any title at the moment cont soon 👏