my first fanfic.(ak)~WHY?t~3rd part pg 6

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PART ONE


i was running... dont know where, why or from whom? but i just knew i had to get away... i just ran wherever my legs took mee... it was freaky.. dark adn chilly ... the florr/road was damp because of the three hours of raining this afternoon... i cant believe i am here.. i was at home.. in my comforter having a nice cup of coffee...reading a book..almost sleeping..adn here i am an hour later running for life..from whom tho?? i gathered my guts and looked over my shoulder nothing was there.... and yet i was scared... scared of something... i looked infront and BAMM!! a car hit mee... i fell down...

" oww... my head.." kripa slowly opened her eyes to find herself in an unfamiliar room... her head was throbbing... she dint know where she was or what had happened.. all she know is she was running... running for her life... she looked around teh room...she tried to sit up but a hand stopped her... she looked to her side and saw a young girl..around 10 sitting beside her with a smilee... she leaned closer and asked in teh sweetest wayy...

" are you feeling better???" she had a british accent..kripa concluded.... but she looked indian... kripa smiled weakly...

" not reallly... i feel like my heads gonna burst open..." she answered...

the girl gigled..." dont worry i felt teh same when i fell off the slide.... you'll be alright... the doctor said you should rest for about a week... then you'll be fit adnfine..." she said cheerfullly... " btw i am ritu... ritu khanna..."

" i am kripa... kripa kapoor... you indian??" kripa sked unsure....

" well not really.. i mean my dad's indian but my mom was british... " she merely answered...." ooh dad asked mee to get him when you wake upp..stay here..dont stress yourself.. i'l call dad..." she hoped off the bed and ran out of teh room elling "PAPA!!!"

kripa looked around..adn then put her hand on her bandaged head and mumbled..." lagta hai kissine mere sar par hammar mara hoo...kahin kissine mara to nahi...oww..." saying this she heard a laughter... it was deep... kripa looked at teh door... a guy was standing there leaning against the side... kripa just stared at him for sometime...

" humne to aapko nahi mara... agar humko milne se pehle kissine maara ho to pata nahi...." he walked upto kripa... kripa was checking him out.... he must bee ritu's unkle or maybe brother she concluded...he looked young... he was damn sexy adn hott... those green eyes looked soo cooool and yet it gave warmth... " soo how do i look???"

kripa confused asked him..." excuse mee??"

" well the way you're checking mee out i wanted to know how do i look??" he answered simply... kripa blushed... " anywayss how do you feel know??"

" i feel terrible... my head is throbbing... adn i feel really weak...." she answered... the guy slowly got upp and checked her forehead....

" hmmm you still have a slight fever.... btw... were you by any chance in a track team or something??????" he asked...

" umm noooo...y??"

" well because... the way you were running yesterday.. i thought you were running crosscountry...." he grinned as he saw her face turn red again...." y were you running anywayss???"

" i dont know... i just felt i had to run..." she answered... adn chocked....

" you take rest..dont talk to much.... if you need anything ask sia..." he said and turned around..." RITUUU!!!"

ritu came running to teh room..panting she said... " Yess papa..!!" kripa was stunned...papa?? he was ritu's dad??? she couldn't digest teh fact... she thought he must bee ritu's unkle or maybe even brother but dad??? her thought were interrupted by the guy or shall we say man... kripa looked at them adn saw ritu on his lap whining about something... she only managed to hear.. " you know what dad... tiya was right... you're an insensitive moron.... " then she smacked his arm and hoped onto teh bed next to kripa.... " cant you see she is in such a bad state...??"she pointed at kripa..." she will stay here untill she's fine...adn that is my order..." she said in a strict ordering voice... the man frowned and walked out of teh room.... kripa gigled..

" soo hes your dad???" kripa finally asked...." adn he doesn't want mee too stay here???"

" yup... hes my dad...the great ANGAD KHANNA...very sweet... but can bee really insensitive and overly possessive at timess...dont worry...he will never say no to mee..." she answered...and loked at kripa...." dad said you should rest... i will stay right here..as i have noone to play with right noww... and dad will go with tiya again..."

THE GREAT ANGAD KHANNA !! awesomeee... how dint i regognize him...mabe it was his eyes.... he had brown eyes but this guy has green...she was about to ask it too ritu but instead she said..." awww.... i would play with you if i could.but i cant even sit up... i cant play... and btw whos this tiya...??"

" tiya is dad's newest girlfriend...and hes very serious about their relation... but i hate her..." she crossed her hand across her chest... " she jus wants to steal dad away from mee..."

kripa laughed...." well maybe she wontt...and wheres you mom??"

" uhh.. my mom's with god... thats what dad said... adn i know she will steal dad..... i was soo happy goign to the simple school liek everyoen else... but since dad has been dating her he sent mee to this stupid school..where i have to stay all week adn come hme on weekends..just soo that they can have some privacy... and i am sure after they marry...if they doo which i wontlet happen.... they'll send mee to a boarding school... to never bring mee back..." she said sadlly...

kripa felt bad to even bring up this topic... she slowly sat up adn hugged her..." dont worry ritu...your dad would never do that... he loves you.... every parent love their children...."

ritu first felt wird..but then kripa's hug..her warmth was very soothing and relaxing soo she hugged her back.." i hope sooo...." she mumbled.... after sometime kripa realized ritu had fallen asleep.... she slowly put laid her down beside her...adn stared at her... she was soo cute... kripa then fell asleep carassing ritu's head...

NOTE: italics means any of the character's POV or thought


i always wanted to write a fanfiction...but my stupid bro never let mee... dont ask why.. hes just an idiot... anywayss soo this is my first try.. i am ritu... and this is my first fanfic...do help mee with the topic for this fanfic...as i am really bad with choosing a topic.....

😳~ritu~😳


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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part ritu!! sounds real cool!! looking forward to the next part 😳 cont soon šŸ‘
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awww...i love it!! it's soo cute!! and poor ritu!! cont. soon!!
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WOWO!!!!! sounds interesting, continue soon!!!! šŸ˜›
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Awesome start... n jus from the start i can tell u ur ff will be totally rockin, cnt wait for u to cont!!!!
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sounds very interesting continue soon
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great part but i'm alittle confused wats the girls name sia or ritu and coont sooooonnnn
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Originally posted by: erier101

great part ritu!! sounds real cool!! looking forward to the next part 😳 cont soon šŸ‘



thankuuu... i will write soooon....😳

Originally posted by: zeenat_786

awww...i love it!! it's soo cute!! and poor ritu!! cont. soon!!



thankuuu.... hehe yup poor rituu..... i will write sooon...


Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

WOWO!!!!! sounds interesting, continue soon!!!! šŸ˜›



thankuuu... i will continue sooon....


Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Awesome start... n jus from the start i can tell u ur ff will be totally rockin, cnt wait for u to cont!!!!



awwwww thankuuuuuuuuu!! i will continue asap


Originally posted by: nerdybrody

sounds very interesting continue soon



thankuu....


Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part but i'm alittle confused wats the girls name sia or ritu and coont sooooonnnn



sorry for teh confusion.. i think i made itt... its ritu not sia...😳
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kewl n vry interesting...cnt w8 2 read more!!! šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘...does kripa already know angad..just a bit confused lol newayz cont soon
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šŸ‘ wow really cool ff šŸ˜‰
cont soon 😃

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