Pyaar....(LRL- RN fic - THE END- pg 31) - Page 6

kya yaar bas aur thoda paas ane dena tha 😆
ok next part me dhyan rakhna 😆

awesome again truly gr888 👏

Originally posted by: ayeshacassim

Arre sanya.... suspense mein hi to maza aati hai! thanx a lot! im very happy a gr8 writer like u liked it!

Point hai.......Suspense mein maza to aata hai bt think abt them...paas mein aa ke latke hue hain ki kab Ayesha aaayegi aur batayegi ki ab hamein kya karna hai!!
& BTW mere liye itne heavy type k adjectives mat use kiya kar yaar!!Tooo heavy to handle u c!!! 😊 😊 😊

Originally posted by: sanyamalhotra

Point hai.......Suspense mein maza to aata hai bt think abt them...paas mein aa ke latke hue hain ki kab Ayesha aaayegi aur batayegi ki ab hamein kya karna hai!!
& BTW mere liye itne heavy type k adjectives mat use kiya kar yaar!!Tooo heavy to handle u c!!! 😊 😊 😊

hahaha!!!! it sounds so funny.... latke hue....i will try 2 update as soon as possible.... latak latak kar thak jaayege na! and fine.... i wont use heavy adjectives for u.... just 1.... U ROCK!!! simple na?😉

excellent part.... kool... but u ended it at the wrongest time possible... n ali n pooja passionately kissin... sumthin i wudnt have even imangined myself!!!! loll 😆 😆 😆

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

excellent part.... kool... but u ended it at the wrongest time possible... n ali n pooja passionately kissin... sumthin i wudnt have even imangined myself!!!! loll 😆 😆 😆

bilkul realty mein to sirf reverse action hone ki possiblity hai😆

awsome part.. 👏 👏 👏 plz..continue soon..omg i m spousse to be doing my homework right now.. 😆..plz..continue soon 😃

hey ayesha


good part again 😛

well presented 👏 👏 👏 d. 😃


pl cont soon 😳

Yay, finally updated!! Sorry for not commenting before now, I've only just found the fanfiction section of IF, that was excellent, I love the Ali-Pooja jodi, now please let RN have some kissing as well!

hey ayesha.. another gr8 part.. but dude way too much suspense in the end.. i jus hope nothin spoils the moment.. that wud be soooo bollywood..anyways.. will wait for the next part to find out wat happpens.. update soon

Thanx so much guys! I cant believe the awsum responses I got 4 Part 7! Im so happy! Thank you so so so so much! I hope I continue getting such gr8 reviews and never disappoint you! Enjoy!!!!!!

PART 8

"you are always there for me, there to protect me for ever…" Naina's voice was barely over a whisper. Now their faces were hardly an inch apart. But something naina said rung a bell in Rajveer's head. "Protect me for ever….." Protect….. OH NO! he had to protect the triggers….. He jumped away and yanked a startled naina's hand and started running.
Naina (annoyed)- Kya hua?
Raj- Hume camp waapas jaana hoga.
Naina- kyun???
Raj- mein ne tumhe nahin kaha….. hum actually yahaan triggers ko chupaane aaye hain… hum ne triggers ka location badal diya hai…. You know that many people are after the triggers…. Humne ek trigger base banaya hai .3620 par. Aur who triggers mere paas hai… mere tent mein. Lekin as you know, dushman bhi in triggers ke peeche haath dho kar pade hain. Im sure that Dr. Ritus partners must be waiting for an opportunity for me to get away from my tent so that they can steal the triggers…. And this is perfect timing…. Most of the cadets are sleeping save Ali and Pooja who are………well….. too busy right now. I cant believe we gave the spies such a chance…. You understand, don't you naina?
Naina's look changed from anger to tensed concern. Her face turned pale. She was scared……. Wat if he also became the victim of the same problems created by the same people just like her bhaiya…… wat if she lost him too…… how wpuld she live without him……
They reached the camp and saw that Huda was awake and sitting near the bonfire.
Huda- itni subah subah kahan chale gayee thi phoolan?
But naina did not have time to answer. She was very tensed as raj went to the tent to check on the triggers. But when he came out the expression on his face said it all.
"its gone….." he said looking horrified….. "gone…."

Okay guys….. now don't murder me…. I know I spoilt a wonderful romantic moment….. but I swear I have something doubly romantic coming up in the next 1-2 parts. So plz don't stop reading. I promise I won't disappoint you. Plz comment and enjoy !

COMING UP NEXT…… A unique twist in the story.... and raj and naina's fight….. wat will it lead to….. undying love???