Pyaar....(LRL- RN fic - THE END- pg 31)

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Anuradha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#31

Wow last 2 epi's...greaaaaaaat ayesha...just gr88..I am srry that I missed it earlier..but do post soon..this time I'll not be late..

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Ayesha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#32

Hey Guys! as promised, Im back! thanx a lot for your love and support.... i hope i never let you down. I am posting part 5 now and will most probably post part 6 also today. Enjoy!!!! and thanx again!

PART 5

This was too much for Huda to take. He was beside himself. He snatched up his torch and stomped into the woods. But raj and naina seemed oblivious to their surroundings. Naina's hand was still in Rajs, who was massaging in slowly.
Ali- Sir…..
No response
Yudi- Sir…. Naina….
No response… naina and raj had temporarily gone deaf.
Aalekh- SIR…… NAINA!!!!!
They jumped, brought back to reality by aalekh. They were blushing furiously.
Raj- Cadet singh… aap theek to ho?
Naina- yes sir
Raj – good (he looks around) cadet Huda dikhaye nahin de rahe hai…. Kahan hai who?
The cadets shift uncomfortably. They knew the real reason for huda's abrupt departure but they could not possibly say that to raj.
Ali- who sir….. huda bhai shaayad bathroom gaye hai….
Raj- theek hai…. Tum sab dinner ki taiyaari karo…. Mein aage ka route map draw karta hoon.
Saying so he goes into his tent. There is a strained scilence between the cadets for a moment…. They don't know what to say to each other and quietly started doing wat they were told to. But naina was lost in her own thoughts. What was happening to her? Why was she behaving so strangely when with Capt. Rajveer? Why did her heart beat faster when ever she saw him? Why did she feel so comfortable when with him? Why did his touch feel so tingly? She never felt this way before….. was she in love?
Naina- no…. this cant be….. he is my sir…. How can it be??????
Yudi- you said something, Naina?
Naina- Huh? No yudi…. Nothing…..
Yudi, pooja, ali and aalekh looked at each other. They knew what was happening, and it was not right…. But there was nothing they could do.

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Huda, meanwhile was walking in the woods, kicking what ever came in his way and flickering his torchlight at an amazing speed. He did not like what he was seeing. His "phoolan" was getting a little too comfortable with Capt. Rajveer.
Huda- use us capt. Mein kya dikhta hai? Kya mujhme koi kami hai? Kya mere pyaar mein koi kami hai? Magar nahin…….capt rajveer to sab ladkiyon ke pyaare hai na!
He kicked a rock hard, grumpily.
"Cadet Huda" came a voice.He turned back, alarmed. It was some man he did not recognize….. the same "mystery man", Ritu's partner.
Huda- oye, tu kaun hai aur tu mera naam kaise jaanta hai?
Thinking fast, he replied.
Mystery man- woh…… meri behen, saloni KMA mein padhti hai. Who tumhari bahut badi fan hai, tumhare peeche diwaani hai. Use tumhari personality aur looks bahut acche lagte hai. Usne mujhe tumhare bare mein bahut bataaya hai.
Praise had always been Huda's week point and he easily got carried away, forgetting to ask important questions like what that man was doing here so late in the night. But instead, Huda relaxed.
Huda- oye haan…. Huda ki personality hi kuch aisi hai!
Mystery man (MM) -haan, aur meri behen ne yeh bhi kaha hai kit um koi naina se bahut mohabbat karte ho….. magar who to…..
Huda- arre who kya?
MM- who o koi capt. Se pyaar….
Huda- abe o! baawlaa ho gaya hai kya?
MM- kyun? Kya yeh jhoot hai?
Huda- who…… actually…..
Then he resigns.
Huda- kya pata yaar. Aaj kal who dono bahut….. mujhe nahin pata kya karma
MM- mujhe pata hai. Tumhare capt ka dhiyaan naina se door karma hoga. Uski nazar mein tumhe ek hero banana hoga
Huda- who kaise?
MM- kya koi aisi cheez hai jiske bare mein capt. Bahut hi protective hai?
Huda(rolling his eyes)- haan…. Naina. Ek minuite ruk….. haan…. Koi ek box hai jo who apne saath hi rakhte hai… kisi ko nahin dete…. Bahut proctective hain uske bare mein… pata nahin usmein kya hai.
MM- mere paas ek plan hai. Tum us box ko chura lo. Aur use yahaan isi jaga par khod ke daal do. Bas! Phir capt. Use dhoondte hue paagal ho jayega aur naina par dhiyaan nahin de paayega. Aur phir, kuch deri baad tum us box ko yahaan se le jaakar unhe de dena. Bas! Naina ki nazron mein tum hero aur capt zero.
Huda- oye haan! Yeh to bahut hi accha idea hai… mere dimaag mein pehele kyun nahin aaya? Thanx yaar!
And smiling broadly he goes back to the camp. After he leaves MM starts laughing.
MM: tumhe ullu banana kitna aasaan hai huda….. ab dekhna capt. In cadets, jin par tumhe itna yakeen hai, who hi tumhari barbaadi ka kaaran banenge.

Oh no huda! What have you done???? For the sake of your jealousy of Raj and obsession of naina you have unknowingly put your country in danger!

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Ayesha

@ayeshacassim

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Posted: 18 years ago

#33

Here is part 6. but 1 request... plz Huda fans dont stoop reading.... i promise there is something very nice i have planned for him a few parts later. but rite now, this is necessary. plz trust me! and enjoy!

PART 6

Huda came back looking very happy and this made aalekh suspicious, but he later forgot about it as the mood in the camp lightened. They all started laughing, talking and joking with each other. After finishing dinner and talking for a while they all went to their tents and went to sleep. Naina had a very unusual dream - where she and her Rajveer "sir" were having a very romantic candle light dinner on the seaside and they later danced to slow romantic music…….. what did they mean? She got up quite early and washed up and changed. She came near the bonfire – now extinguished- combing her open hair. To her surprise she saw raj there lost in thoughts and walking around.
Naina- sir aap…… aap is wakt jag rahe ho? Soye nahin?
Raj- Good morning naina. Mein to roz hi jald uth jaata hoon…. Ek sipaahi ke liye neend haram hoti hai… magar tum bhi jag rahi ho? Kyun?
Naina- bas… aankhein khul gayee aur phir neend nahin aayee.
There was silence for a while.
Raj and naina then say at the same time- to….
Naina giggles
Raj- tim kaho
Naina- mausam itna accha hai aur hawa kitni fresh hai…. Chaliye ne walk ke liye chalet hai
At that time the wind had started blowing and naina's open hair started fluttering around her face. Raj was mesmerized by her beauty- her pretty face, open hair and delicate body wrapped tightly in a pink shawl over her uniform. Raj forgot about everything….. and just thought about her….. he wanted to be with her always.
Naina- to sir…. Chale?
Raj- sure…..
And they walked together into the woods. But they did not notice something….. unfortunately, Huda was awake. This was the perfect opportunity for him to set his plans to action. He quickly took the box from Raj's tent and set off to hide it. And fortunately for him, the location, which he had marked on his route map was exactly opposite from where naina and raj had set out. He did what he wanted to and returned to the camp, self satisfied. But what he did not know is that our dear MM, who planned all this had beeen hiding there and as soon as Huda left, he dug out the box and ran away from there, thus making his plan successful!
Oh No! Does this mean that the triggers are now gone forever? Does this put Raj in trouble? Huda….. what have you done??????

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Ayesha

@ayeshacassim

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Posted: 18 years ago

#34

the next part will have some cute RN scenes and a very surprising thing about another jodi. hope you enjoy and plzzzzzzz do comment guys! it makes me feel very great. thanx again!