:Hamare Pyaar Ki Nishani::(P:74(LP) pg:101) - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
YAAY!!! They are not going to be alone anymore!!! I like them together. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
very kute pari.... nxt tyme plzzzzzzzzzzz make it....LONGG.....cuz da part jus gets interesting n u STOP IT!! 😡

lol....jus kidding.... do wat u prefer... 😆 😆

continue sooon...

rani...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
she just used a cliffhanger so we'd keep readin
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
sorry rani but what can i do..... 😆 😆 😆
anyways thx a lot u guys for liking u all r really sweet...
here is the next part

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Part 7

Recap:
S: wo uska kaam ke papers vagera sath lekar to ja sakta hai na….?
G: haa… thak u thak u sooo much sahil(she kisses him on his cheek and runs out of the room saying..) mai kt ko ye khabar suna ti hu…..
G: kt….. kt…..kt……

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Ganga knocks on the door… knock….knock…
Kt wipes her tears away and puts a fake smile on her face and opens the door.
G: kt… beta… ready ho…?
Kt: jee ma.. aap andar ayena….(ganga comes in and sees laksh still in his bed)
G: arre… ye abhi bhi soo raha hai…? Isse jana nahi hai kya… tumhare sath..? laksh….. ee laksh… uth..
Kt: (kt stops ganga): maa… mat uthaye unhe…
G: kyu..?
Kt: phir wo aisse jane nahi denge..
G: arre uthega nahi to jaoge kaise..
Kt: par mai to tayaar hu…
G: par isse kon tayaar karega…? Kab tayaar hoga ye..?
Kt: maa.. ye aap kya keh rahi hai, muje kuch samaj mai nahi aa raha hai…
G: arre… baba agar ye uthega nahi to kaise ayega tumhare saath..
Kt: kya..? (shocked) mere sath..?
G: haa.. (smiles and put her hand on her cheek) maine sahil ko manna liya hai aur usne kaha ki tum dono ja sakte ho…
Kt: such….?
G: much…
Ganga & Kt both laughs..
G: achha tu iss kumb karan ko jaldi se tayar karke necche ajao… nahi to ger ho jayegi… theek hai…
Kt: jee.. (and blushes)
G: mai neeche jati hu…
Kt is soo happy that her love is going with her….
Kt: yes…
Kt: laksh….(and runs toward the bed and jumps on it and right on laksh's tummy) laksh…. Laksh…. Oye kumbh karan… utho…
L: haamm.. haaaamm…(and faces the other way)
Kt: ooooffffoooo…..laksh… utho… aur jaldi karo hume jana hai…( she gets off him and is about to get off the but bed too but laksh grabs her by her waist and she struggle to get out of his grip but then he gets on top of her and hols her even tighter…)
L: haaa…. To kya keh rahi thi meri biwi…?
Kt: phele muje chodo….
L: kyu..? aap khud hi to ayi thi mere pass…
Kt: tumhe uthane ayi thi…
L: (he look at her shyness and trys to kiss her on lips but kt looks away)
Kt: kya kar rahe ho…?
L: ( suddenly get off her and just sleep next to her… and faced the other way)
Kt: (goes up to him….) kya hua..?
L: hume tumse bahes nahi karni…
Kt: achha bachu to jaiye hum bhi aapse baat nahi karenge…
L: hume kya…(going towards the bathroom)
Kt: hum jaa rahe hai haridwar issiliye jaldi kijiyega aapka hi intzaar kar rahe hai.. agar time pe nahi aaye to hum akele hi chale jayenge… (and leaves)
L: what….? man.. (and scrath the back of his head) yes.. (and goes into the bathroom… but he stumps in to the door and) : oooooouuuuccccchhhh…..
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I'll put the next part when I get time….
Hope u like it…
I know it was not that romantic but I'll try to improve it….
Thx u all
Love
pari

Edited by pari213 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: dood10_158

i thought it was suppoed 2 be soooooo romantic......where was the soooooo romantic part....but thats ok, it was cute nyways, i luv their jodi the way u describe them n the kubmkaran n the turning round like kid thing was so adorable, very cute, continue soon

hey i know i was suppose to put the romantic part but i didn't get time to type all of it that's why this part was suppose to be long but i couldn't finish typing it sooo.... and ya i was typing when i as in achool.. so....

love

pari

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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
it's awesome.keep it up 👏 .please continue it soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
please continue soon, when u find the time to!! Its really very good, i love it!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
That was really cute! Plz continue soon. I think you only posted this part here. Not in the FF section. I didn't see it.
I really liked this part. You are really improvong.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
Thx a lot for liking guys here is the next part.....

Part 8

recap:
L: hume tumse bahes nahi karni…
Kt: achha bachu to jaiye hum bhi aapse baat nahi karenge…
L: hume kya…(going towards the bathroom)
Kt: hum jaa rahe hai haridwar issiliye jaldi kijiyega aapka hi intzaar kar rahe hai.. agar time pe nahi aaye to hum akele hi chale jayenge… (and leaves)
L: what….? man.. (and scrath the back of his head) yes.. (and goes into the bathroom… but he stumps in to the door and) : oooooouuuuccccchhhh…..
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Kt is downstairs waiting 4 lakshwhile tulsi and ganga are explining her everything….
Kt: jee…
T: sab kuch saaf kardena.. aur haaa wo kal karvachuth hai to bhool na mat… theek hai…
Kt: haan.. baa nahi bholo gi….
G: kt beta ye leti jao apne saath….
Kt: ye kya hai ma…?
G: ye sargi hai… ek saas apni bahu ko deti hai… karvachuth par….
Kt: thank u ma.. (take blessing from her )
G: jeeti raho aur sada suhagan raho… (and hugs her)
G: acha tu zara aa to mere sath kuch kehna hai…
Kt: kya…?
G: tu chal to saahi(and pulls her towards the room next by)
T: arre ab kya baki reh gaya… jaldi karo der ho rahi hai…
G: ha ma.. bas abhi aye….
Ganga enters the room and closes the door)
Kt: kya baat hai ma…?
G: achaa soon…. Ye actually tumhare aur laksh ke honeymoon ki planning thi… jo maine aur ma ne mil kay kithi….
Kt: kya….?
G: haa… abhi laksh kaam mai busy thana isiliye sahil use kabhi nahi janedeta kyuki wo laksh aur nakul ke bagar kuch kar hi nahi sakte par anyways hamne kaha hai ki babaji rehne ane wale hai aur ghar saaf karma hai issiliye tum log jaa rahe hoo…. Theek hai…
Kt: par ma…?
G: kuch par var nahi aur tu ye baat kisiko batayegi nahi…..
Kt: par ma agar papa ko laksh ki zaroorat hai to phir….
G: arre yaar tum samaj nahi rahi ho sahil laksh ko kabhi nahi jane dega abhi maine usko manaya to jaona… aur haaa vapas ate vakat kushkhabri (goodnews) zaroor sunana chahugi….
KT: (lushes…..) ma….
G: achha chal jaldi kar….
They both opens the door to go out but when they open it sahil is standing right in front of the…….
They both gets shocked and look at eachother in a confused way………????????????

hope u like it i know it's not much romanic but it will be after they reach haridwar....
do comment hope u like it

love
pari
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
i just read this fan fiction in one go and its great, hope u post the next part soon 👏

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