:Hamare Pyaar Ki Nishani::(P:74(LP) pg:101) - Page 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
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plz update soon pari i just can't wait! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i love all ur stories!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very beautiful hun.....i wish it really happens in kyunki.... 👏
ekta jus doesnt seem very romantic.... 😆
jus loving ur stories!! 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!! you should be the writer in kyunki!! I love it!!👏👏

Plzzzzz continue soon!!😳😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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very good...keep up the gr8 work 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
thx guys...
i will update it by tommorrow..
i'm sorry...
i have exams going on that's why....
but thx a lot for liking...and i wish i could be the writter for not ksbkbt but just for laksh kt scenes..... 😆 😆 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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here is the next part

Part 11

Recape:
L: (starts the car and started to drive fast again….) wooowhooo… yes/… ab to mai tumhe kahi nahi jane dunga…. Ab to kmre mai bhi…(kt put her hand on his mouth.. but he removes it..) humm.. ghar mai bhi…. (she does it again) humm… kitchen mai bhi..(she repeats it..) ummmppm… bathroom mai.. bhi (and then she hugs himm… soo tightly…)
Kt: tum bhi na…. kuch to sharam rakho..(whisper in his ear…)
L: abb to kya sharam aur kya haaayyaa….
They both looks really really happy together..
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AFTER LIKE MAYBE 4 HOURS IN HARIDWAR

L: ( stops the car in front of the house where kt and tulsi use to live. He looks at kt who is sleeping.. he tries to wake her up but she doesn't so he just goes and opens her door and pick her up in his arms… when the sunlight hits kt's eyes she wakes up and finds her self in her husbands arms…. She looked around and everyone was starring at them…)
Kt: laksh… chodo muje…ye kya kar rahe ho…?
L: (puts her down) arrree uchlo mat gir jaogi….
Kt: tum.. chalo….
L: haa to chalo na…
Kt: (takes the key out of her bag and opens the door)
They both walks in… and they started coughing because of the dust…
L: ye to kitna ganda hai…..
KT: kaa…. Ab saaf bhi to karma padega na…
L: kya…? Ai kuch saaf waaf nahi karne wala…
Kt: to maine kab kaha ke karma..
L: gussa kyu hoti ho (and goes closer and hugs her from the side way…) achhaa abhi batao saman kaha rakhu…?
Kt: tum ruko mai kuch karti hu…………..
(she manage to clean a place where they can leave their bags….)
Kt: laksh chalo tum saman yaha hi rehne do aur gadi theek se park karo, bitch mai hi la kar rakhdi….
L: ok…(he goes and park the car in a proper place…)
Kt: hum ek kaam karte hai ke soni rajji ke ghar jakar un dono ke sath mai ghar saaf karti hu aur tab tak tum wahi bethna… theek hai…
L: nahi…. Mai tumhare saath hi theek hu…
Kt:laksh tumhe allergies ho jayegi…
L: jab tak tum mare saath ho muje kuch nahi ho sakta… and hugs her.. she too hugs him…
Kt: tum nahi sudhroge…
L: aaahhhhaaaa kabhi nahi….

i hope u like it
love
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 12
Recap:
L: ok…(he goes and park the car in a proper place…)
Kt: hum ek kaam karte hai ke soni rajji ke ghar jakar un dono ke sath mai ghar saaf karti hu aur tab tak tum wahi bethna… theek hai…
L: nahi…. Mai tumhare saath hi theek hu…
Kt:laksh tumhe allergies ho jayegi…
L: jab tak tum mare saath ho muje kuch nahi ho sakta… and hugs her.. she too hugs him…
Kt: tum nahi sudhroge…
L: aaahhhhaaaa kabhi nahi….

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AT NIGHT…….

The house is clean and kt is in the kitchen making something for dinner… while laksh was doing his office work but he was tired doing it soo he thought let's have some fun…

Kt was washing the dishes when she feels something grabbing her from the waist…. She looked back and saw that it was laksh standing behind her smilling…. And suddenly he diaapeared… then when she looked by the window she saw him giving a flying kiss…. And then she feeld someone kissing her on her check when she turns to see she saw it was…… laksh…… she just ignored him cause she thought she imagining again……
L: arre mai itne pyaar se tumhare paas aya aur tumne muje ignore kar diya…
Kt: laksh ( she touches his cheek with her hand wet and soppy..)
L: kt…. Ye kya ho gaya hai tumhe…..mai hu laksh…… hello……(wave his hand in front of her face then suddenly snaps his finger in front of her…..)
Kt: hmph….. wo muje laga ki mai phirse imagine kar rahi thi issiliye…
L: phirse………?
Kt: tum bhi na jab nahi hote ho tab bhi tang karte ho aur jab hote ho tab bhi….
L: (grabs her by her waist back ways and closer and closer to her…. ) acchhaa…..(he corners her and moves closer and closer to her…) abb to yaha koi nahi ayega…… nahi koi dekhlega…….. aur nahi koi bulayega…. To abb to tumhe muje kiss deni hi padegi…..(moves closer to her lips….but she moves away and struggle to get out of his grip….)
L: (pulls her even more close to hi,.. she started feeling shy…. ) ayyyyeeeee….. (and move her hair from her face slowly….)
KT: laksh……
L: haaammmm….
Kt: chodo plz…..
L: abb to tumhe kabhi nahi choduga… aur waise bhi hum apne honeymoon par hai.. kyu bhool gayi…….
Kt: (blushes and looks down)
L: (kisses her on her cheek and moves close to her neck and then ear…) (whisper…) aaj raat muje meri wahi dulhan chahiye jo muje shadi ke raat milli thi……….. milegina….?
Kt: (blushes amd try to get away… cause her heart beat is beating really hard that even laksh can hear it…)
L: kya hua….?
Kt: (smiles shyly…)
L: (kisses her by her neck….)
KT: chodo muje….
L: kyu…?
KT: muje jana hai….
L: kaha…?
Kt: kal mera pehla karbachuath hai aur……
L: (puts finger on her lips…) to iska matlab ek aur din….. ? koi baat nahi karlunga.. wo bhi karlunga..
Kt: kya…?
L: intazaar..?
Kt: kiska….
L: meri dulhan ka aur kiska……..
Kt: theek hai baba… tum bethke karo intzaar muje chodo….
L: par kyu…?
Kt: muje sari tayariya karni hai…
L: kis baat ki…?
KT: laksh….?
L: hum….(nuzzeles her by her ear and neck….)
KT: laksh…….?
L: kya hai baba…..
Kt: chodo muje….
L: par kyu…?
Kt: muje Jana hai aur tum jao jake fresh hojao, change karlo tab tak mai khana lagati hu…. Chalo…(Lodz his wrist and push him out of the kitchen)
L: arre….
Kt: (goes back to her work….)

I will continue the next part soon…….
Hope u like it….
Love
pari
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59

it is awesome!! you should really be writer in for lakshay and kt's scenes!!😆😆

Plzzz continue soon!!😉😉

Edited by Radhakrishna123 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
wow that was gr8!!!I juss finished reading all ur parts...wow...plz continue soon...u have me on the edge of my seat wanting to read more:)

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