:Hamare Pyaar Ki Nishani::(P:74(LP) pg:101) - Page 5

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Riyaa147 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#41

I just started reading, and it is wonderful!!👏👏

Plzzzzzz Continue Soon!!😳😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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GR8 JOB.....BUT>....STILL MISSING SUMTHIng../////LENGTHhow many times did i tell u....WRITE MOREEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! 😡 N DO NOTTT AT ALLL STOP AT EXCITING POINTS>>>>!!! 😡 😡 😡 WAT PART OF DAT DONT U NOT GET HUN!!! 😡

😆 heheheh....lmao...jus kidding...hope u didnt take it seriously... 😆
continue sooon hun!!!!

rani
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
its awesome i loved it very curious wht'll happen next when they reach
haridwar 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
here is my next part guys and thx a lot for liking.....

Part 9

G: Sahil…. Tum….?
S: haa… kya kushe phuar ho rahi thi saas bahu ke bitch (what's cooking)
G & kt: kuch bhi to nahi… kuchnahi.. hehe…
G: sahil wo laksh aa gaya tayar ho ke?
S: kabka..?
G: ok to phir chale….?
S: chlona… jaldi karo..
They goes outside….
Laksh and kt are ready to leave…

Laksh's wearing something like this……


And Kt was wearing this sari….



They took blessing from everyone and then at last they took blessings from ganga and sahil….. ganga hugged kt and sahil hugged laksh..
G: (in kt's ear) muje wapas ate waqt kush kakhbari chahiye… samji…
Kt: maa….
S: sahil ye lo phir se shuru ho gaye…
L: mom… ab hum chale..? (and huged her)
G: haa.. jao..(smiles)
L & kt: ok bye…. Mom… (and they wave their hand as bye..)
G: (yells) kt…. Meri baat mat bhulna….
Kt: (turns around) ok maa,…
L and KT both sits in the car and their car drive away…
Laksh and kt were not taking to eachother remember, laksh was starring at kt who was looking out the window…
L: driver…
D: jee sahib..?
L: gadi rook…(stop the car)
D: par kyu sir…?
L: kaha utna karu… sawal mat karo..(in angry ton)
(driver stop the car and laksh comes out of the car and so does the driver and kt)
L: gadi ki keys lav…(give me the car's key)
D: (hesitantly gives him the keys)
KT: laksh.. ye kya kar rahe ho…?
L: ab jao ghar…
D: jee….?
L: (laughs and puts his hand on his shoulder) dar gaye na...? tum ghar jao ghadi mai chalalunga….(i'll manage it)
D: jee sir..
Kt: (sits where she was siting)
L: (makes and what? Face… and drive away)
Kt was sitting in the back and laksh was driving. Laksh stops the car at a signal and ask her to come front..
L: kt… mai lagta to hunga par tumhara driver nahihu.. ab chalo age ajao come in front…
Kt: hmph….
L: kt… ab zid mat karo aur age ajao.. signal hone wala hai….
Kt: mai yehi pe theek hu..
L: (takes the car on side) kt…..
(she doesn't listen and laksh comes out of the car, opens the back door and gives her a hand to comeout. She still doesn't listen and he gets mad….)
L: theek hai mat aao phir mai jar aha hu wapas ghar… muje kahi nahi janna… (he yells out more loudly) jaa rahu hu wapas ghar suna….
Kt: (feels scared that no..) (she quickly comes out and hold his hand when he was about to go…
Kt: laksh… nahi… mai.. mai.. mai beth rahi hu na... chalo...
L: (smiles and both sits in the car.. and he started to drive) laksh beta acting buri nahi thi…
Kt: (to herself) hai bhagwan… meri zid ki waje se aaj mai aur laksh…. Hai bhagwan… aisi nobat phie kabhi mat ane dena… (and she looks up and made a phhheewww face…)
L: (sees her and amiles) kya hua… dar gayi…?
Kt: mai bhala kyu daru..
L: acchhhaa..
Kt: aur nahi to kya... aur haa gadi zara age dekh ke chalana varna accident ho jaye ga…
L: ok…(he lets go of the driving thingi and turns to face her…)
Kt: laksh…. Laksh…. Ye… kya kar rahe ho?

That's it for today I'll write more tomorrow..
I hope u like it….
Love
pari


Riyaa147 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45

awesome!! continue soon!!👏👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
OMG!!! That was really awesome. Plz continue soon. Its really interesting to read your FF.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
MIND BLOWING story pls pls continue i cnt wait for the next bit...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
its was really nice do continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 10

Recap:
L: (sees her and amiles) kya hua… dar gayi…?
Kt: mai bhala kyu daru..
L: acchhhaa..
Kt: aur nahi to kya... aur haa gadi zara age dekh ke chalana varna accident ho jaye ga…
L: ok…(he lets go of the driving thingi and turns to face her…)
Kt: laksh…. Laksh…. Ye… kya kar rahe ho?
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L: pehle bolo ki tumne muje forgive kiya..
Kt: kiske liye…?
L: bolona varna mai aise hi beta arruga…
Kt: (she holds on the stearing thingi from where she was sitting) laksh... plz.. masti mat karo..
L: Kt…. Mai kuch sunne wala.. pehle bolo ke you love me…
Kt: kya…? Abhi to tumne kaha ki.. ye bolo ke maine tumhe maff kiya aura b keh rahe ho ke I love u bolo… ye kya mazak hai laksh?
L: bolo varna…?
Kt: achha baba mai hari.. mai tumse bahoooooottttt pyar karti hu aur muje nahi lagta hai ki mera pati asi koi harkat kar sakta hai jisse use apni biwi se mafi magni pade....
L: (comes close to her and kisses her ear then neck and then....)
Kt: (sees a car coming right in front…) Laksh……..
L: (handles the situation some how…but god knows how)
Kt: hai bhagwaan…(puts a hand on her heart )
L: (laughs at her situation..)
Kt: kya hehe.. kar rahe ho..? abhi accident ho jata to…?
L: to kya mai tumhe bachha kar khud mar jata… aur kya..
Kt: (puts her hand on his lips and tears started to roll down her chicks) laksh plzz tum aise mat bola karo.. mai.. muje achha nahi lagta…
L: sorry…(wipes her tears away)
Kt: achha wo muje kuch kehna tha ..
L: kaho..
Kt: wo… tum naraz to nahi hoge na….?
L: mai kabhi apni biwi se naraz ho sakta hu kya...?
Kt: (shyly smiles..)
L: abhi bolo bhi...
Kt: wo hum haridwar iss liye nahi ja rahe he ki babji aa rahe hai balki iss;iye jaa rahe hai kyuki maa ne ye planning apne honeymoon ke liye ki thi...
L: kya....(suddenly stops the car...)
Kt: haa wo ye ma ki planning thi … muje bhi tabhi bataya jab hum jane ke liye nikal chuke the….
L: (his face is like what…?)
Kt: sorry wo muje mai kya karti maa ne….(she sees laksh still in shock, she shakes him) laksh.. laksh….
L: huunmmmmmm….. ye sach hai..
Kt: haa baba ha…
L: (starts the car and started to drive fast again….) wooowhooo… yes/… ab to mai tumhe kahi nahi jane dunga…. Ab to kmre mai bhi…(kt put her hand on his mouth.. but he removes it..) humm.. ghar mai bhi…. (she does it again) humm… kitchen mai bhi..(she repeats it..) ummmppm… bathroom mai.. bhi (and then she hugs himm… soo tightly…)
Kt: tum bhi na…. kuch to sharam rakho..(whisper in his ear…)
L: abb to kya sharam aur kya haaayyaa….

They both looks really really happy together..

That's it for today guys… I'll put up my next part soon.. can't tell when…
Hope u like it,…..
From now on thw scenes are going to be romantic…
Love
pari
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thx a lot for liking guys u guys are sooo nice...
thx

love
pari

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