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oMG! wow! can;t wait for monday 😃
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It's great 👏 👏 Plz continue soon 😊
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awwww.its so cute.i lubbb it.i love it.u gotta continue fast!! 😳
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plz continue.........i'am very eager to read.
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it's great 👏 .please continue soon.
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u said ..u'll post da nxt part monday... itz tuesday...whrere iz da nxt part 😡 😡 😡

lol....jkz hun....do it when ever u hv tyme....

by da way EXCELLENT JOB!! 👏
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Ahhh it was so cute. Keep up the good work Pari.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: rani712

u said ..u'll post da nxt part monday... itz tuesday...whrere iz da nxt part 😡 😡 😡

lol....jkz hun....do it when ever u hv tyme....

by da way EXCELLENT JOB!! 👏



it's because of my SPA exams😡 i couldn't go to library and i have typed the next part in my school account and i am not getting chance to go on the computer in school for two days 😕and i know i won't be able to do it tommorrow too so i'll just type it over so i can put it today..... i am sooo sorry guys 😭😭😭
ad thank u all for liking it....
thanks a lot it feels gr8 to know u all liked it....

love
pari
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WOW gr8 job!!! can't wait till the next part. write soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Here is my next part u guys
thx a lot 4 liking.....

PART 5

Recap:
L: muhje tumhare baal koole aache lagte hai…
Kt smiles
L: ek ladko wala sawal poochu?
Kt blushes….
L: ladkiya raat ko itni cute nightys (night dress) kyu pehenti hai….?
Kt: turns around and put her hand on his mouth and puts her face by his left side off the face.. (kind a hug) chhe….(eeeww.)
L: (moves her hand from his mouth) kahona…?
Kt: blushes and tries to run away but…….

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Kt: chodo muje.....
L: kyu...? (kisses her ear and neck)
Kt: muje abhi sara kan bhi khatam karna hai aur phir tum muje aise tung karoge to phir kaise khatam hoga.
L: to..?
Kt: (try moves his hand from her waist) to kya.. chodona...
L: theek hai baba ye lo chod diya....
Kt: (fells relieved and get back to her dishes)( and laksh stands by her and keep staring at her)

When she is done with everything.. laksh comes close to her and picks her up in his arms...
Kt: laksh....... ye kya kar rahe.... ho....? chodo.... ( and strugle in his arms)
L: (doesn't listen to her ans carry her directly in their room and slowly puts her down on their bed..then he turns off all the lights and kt gets scare then he comes back to kt and the position is laksh on top of kt)
Kt: Laksh...?( in a scary ton)
L: (cober her mouth) shhhh.....
Kt: (heart beat start getting higher and her)
L: (goeas near her face and tries to kiss her on her lips but kt shyly look away)
Kt: kya kar rahe hoo...?(blushes)
L: kyu.. apni biwi se pyaar bhi nahi kar sakta? ( whisper in her ear)
Kt: Koi dekh lega... to.....? (shyly)
L: (pulls her up from her chin) koi ghaar me hoga to dekhega na....

He kisses her on her cheek , her forehead, her nose, and then her lips,..... then the scene shift to the morning.....

IN THE MORNING

Kt gets ready and sees laksh sleeping soo peacefully so thought that she will wake him up later as it's just 5:00am...
she goes downstair in the kitchen and sees ganga and tulsi talking to eachother and look like they are worried about something

Kt goes towards them : baa... ma.... (and take their ashrwaad)
T: jeeti reh.. sada suhagan reh...
G: jeeti reh beta .... sada suhagan rehna...
Kt: aap log kuch preshan lag rahe hai kya baat hai..?
G: wo kuch nahi...
T: ganga mai keh rahi hu wo mana nahi karegi...
Kt: kya baat hai baa.. kon mana nahi krega.?
T: tum...
Kt: jeee..?
T: wo kya haina ki haridwaar mai ghar saaf karne jaana hai kyuki guruji the na wo, wo waha rehna chate hai issiliye abb problem hai kon jayega...?
Kt: haan to isme konsi badi baat hai mai chali jaugi.. waise bhi soni rajji ja hi rahe hai apne mama papa se milne....
G: problem ye hai beta ki hum chahte the ki laksh bhi jaye tumhare saath par...?
Kt: par...?
G: wo kya hai na ki wo naya project sahil ne ready kiya hai uspe laksh hi kaam kar raha hai to usko ye khatam kiye bina sahil usse jane nahi dega aur phir agar laksh ne suna ki tum usse door ja rahi ho to wo tumhe bhi nahi jane dega aur yaha par hum sab busy hai.. issiliye...
Kt: (gets a bit sad about hearing that laksh is not going with her and now they will be saperated 4 some days..) koi baat nahi maa laksh ko mai samja dungi aap chinta mat kijiye bataye kab jana hai?
T: dekha maine kaha than na ye kabhi mana nahi karegi...
G: abhi....
Kt: abhi...?
G: haa guruji parso aa rahe hai.. waha pe...
Kt: theek hai to phir mai tayar ho ke ati hu...
G: achha theek hai beta...

(Kt is really sad.. and thinking how she will tell laksh about this)( she is really sad and going up the stairs)
Kt: abb mai laksh ko kaise batau...? ( she reach their room and she goes in)

Will continue soon.....
hope u like it
and sorry 4 the delay....

love
pari
Edited by pari213 - 18 years ago

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