:Hamare Pyaar Ki Nishani::(P:74(LP) pg:101)

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mysterygurl1427

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Posted: 18 years ago

#21

please cont whenever u can!!! Its a really great ff so far!!! i love it!!

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Angelic_Pari

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Posted: 18 years ago

#22

thx u guys here is a little bit more i wanna added to part 5

Recap:
(Kt is really sad.. and thinking how she will tell laksh about this)( she is really sad and going up the stairs)
Kt: abb mai laksh ko kaise batau...? ( she reach their room and she goes in)

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(Kt is really sad.. and thinking how she will tell laksh about this)( she is really sad and going up the stairs)
Kt: abb mai laksh ko kaise batau...? ( she reach their room and she goes in)

she sees laksh sleeping soo peacfully... she goes near him and sit by him... she was gonna wake him up but then she thought that: agar maine inhe uthaya to phir ye muje jane nahi denge..ya to phir mere saath ane ki zidd karenge.. nahi...

she goes away and she gets ready..... she takes out laksh's suit and towel... she placed it on the other side of the bed.... then she opened her closet to find a showl for her because a it's going to be a bit cold in the mornin morning.... when she was finding it in her closet she sees her diary that laksh wanted to see last night.... she smiled and brings that diary and put it on top of laksh's clothes and towel so that he can see it... she also write a letter to him.... and she placed it where she have placed the his clothes and stuff...

i will continue the next part soon....
thx a lot for liking.....
love
pari

Edited by pari213 - 18 years ago

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princess4120

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Posted: 18 years ago

#23

nice fan fic.. please do continue..

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-mango-

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Posted: 18 years ago

#24

awww... That was really cute of kt that she left her dairy for him to read Please continue soon. I can't wait anymore!!! 😊

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FULTUSI

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Posted: 18 years ago

#25

it's awesome 👏 .please do continue.

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Gurleen

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Posted: 18 years ago

#26

Please continue. Its really good so far.

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RaNi4LifE

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Posted: 18 years ago

#27

omg... very nyce hun!!!

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rani

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mysterygurl1427

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Posted: 18 years ago

#28

i'll be waiting very patiently.....please cont soon though!!! At least if can't see them married in the serial, but in the ff i can see them being together!! 😭

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reklod

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Posted: 18 years ago

#29

oooooooawesome.....really sweet ,i liked Ganga bein the Saans not that
Tripti .nice work.... 😛

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Angelic_Pari

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Posted: 18 years ago

#30

thx u guys thx a lot for liking..... 😉
here is the next part

Part6

Recape:
(Kt is really sad.. and thinking how she will tell laksh about this)( she is really sad and going up the stairs)
Kt: abb mai laksh ko kaise batau...? ( she reach their room and she goes in)

she sees laksh sleeping soo peacfully... she goes near him and sit by him... she was gonna wake him up but then she thought that: agar maine inhe uthaya to phir ye muje jane nahi denge..ya to phir mere saath ane ki zidd karenge.. nahi...

she goes away and she gets ready..... she takes out laksh's suit and towel... she placed it on the other side of the bed.... then she opened her closet to find a showl for her because a it's going to be a bit cold in the mornin morning.... when she was finding it in her closet she sees her diary that laksh wanted to see last night.... she smiled and brings that diary and put it on top of laksh's clothes and towel so that he can see it... she also write a letter to him.... and she placed it where she have placed the his clothes and stuff...
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Kt was a bit crying and she doesn't wanted to go anywhere without laksh, she doesn't wanted to go alone.
Someone knocks on the door and kt opens the door, it was Archita…
A: bhabhi chaliye, soni rajji aur apka jane ka intzaam ho gaya hai…
Kt: haammm… tu chal mai ati hu…
A: ok… par apne bhaiya ko bataya?
Kt: nahi…
A: par..?
Kt: agar bata diya to mujejane nahi denge aise.. issiliye…(and a tear drops down her cheek)
A: (feels sad about what was happening and leaves)
Kt: closes the door and cry a lot leaning against the door…
They didn't notice but ganga was watching all this. She thinks it's wrong and goes to sahil to talk about laksh…

G: sahil…
S: haamm…(he was studying some files)
G: shil muje tumse huch baat karni hai…
S: (no response busy studying his files)
G: (sees him not responding snatches the file from him)
S: arre.. ganga ye kya kar rahi ho….
G: maine kaha na ki muje tumse baat karni hai…
S: haa to mai sun raha tha.. na…
G: ye baat thodi zaroori hai..
S: ohh… ok…. Bolo….
G: wok t ko haridwar jana pad raha hai aur hum soch rahe the ki laksh ko bhi sath bhegde..
S: (interrupt..) par wo kaise ja sakta hai wo project..
G: (inturrup..) tum muje ye batao ki project zarrori hai ke unka saath..?
S: ummm mere khayal se unka saath zaroori hai…
G: exactly yehi to mai bhi keh rahi hu ki usko saath jane do project woject baad mai hogayega…
S: ok agar tum kehti ho to theek hai par…
G: par… par kya..? (she was soooo happy)
S: usko project to finish karma hi padega..
G: sahil…. Kaise…?
S: wo uska kaam ke papers vagera sath lekar to ja sakta hai na….?
G: haa… thak u thak u sooo much sahil(she kisses him on his cheek and runs out of the room saying..) mai kt ko ye khabar suna ti hu…..
G: kt….. kt…..kt……

That's for this part guys….
Do comment and hope u like it…..
Next part is going to be sooo romantic….
Love
pari

Edited by pari213 - 18 years ago

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