The Baby The end Pt40 Pg70 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnx 4 the comments....first parts coming up
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh well......I was waiting for that.........thanks Rach di for everything. Your fanfics are great....really great and you too!! 😉 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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this ff sounds interesting 👏 👏 👏cont soon will be waiting 4 the first part 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds great... 😆 ..jaldi se likho!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1

Sujal looked at Kashish as she sat on the sofa with tears in her eyes
S - Kashish please understand, I don't want kids
K - but why? what's wrong with having kids?
S - I just don't want any, not yet
K - who knows with you, today you say you love me and tommorow you might not
S - Kashish!! it's useless speaking to you!
Sujal stormed out of the room and headed to the main door, he opened it when something on the doorstep caught his eye, he looked closely
S - is that....a baby?
Kashish came behind him
K - Sujal wait!
She looked at him staring at the doorstep and looked down, she noticed the baby and gasped
K - oh my god
Kashish picked the sleeping baby girl up
S - Kashish what are you doing? She doesn't belong here
K - come on Sujal! look there's a note, read it
Sujal picked up the note as Kashish took the baby inside, he picked the basket up and closed the door. They sat next to each other on the sofa, Kashish was holding the baby and Sujal began reading the note
S - "First of all, I am sorry to leave my 6 months old daughter with you like this. I have seen you and your wife and I know you will take care of her and she will be loved by you. I cannot take care of her right now because of some problems, I may or may not be back to get her, please take care of her. Thank You. P.S her name is Jaspreet"
Sujal stood up and took his mobile out, he then grabbed the phone directory
K - Sujal what are you doing?
S - phoning Social Services
K - but you can't
S - why not?
K - because the mother left Jaspreet with us, not Social Services
S - Kashish we can't keep her
K - yes we can
S - no Kashish, we can't afford to keep a baby
K - her name is Jaspreet
S - Kashish stop calling her by her name! You're going to get attached then you won't be able to let go when Social Services take her away
Kashish was about to speak when Sujal put his hand up and spoke on the phone
S - yes this is Sujal Garewal, someone has left their daughter on our doorstep, ok send someone soon
K - Sujal please don't do this
S - someone will be here soon
Suddenly Jaspreet started crying, Kashish began rocking her but she kept crying
S - see you can't even make her quiet Kashish
K - she's probably hungry, see if there's a bottle in the basket
Sujal looked in the basket and found a bottle with formula and some nappies
S - here's the bottle
K - here hold Jaspreet while I make the milk
S - no....I...Kas.....
Kashish put Jaspreet in his arms and straight away Jaspreet stopped crying, she smiled at Sujal
K - see she likes you
S - no no....she's just......just make the milk
Kashish smiled and went into the kitchen to make the milk, Sujal looked at Jaspreet and sat down, he sighed and raised his eyebrows, Jaspreet laughed a little, Sujal smiled slightly, Kashish came back inside with the milk and Sujal stopped smiling and handed Jaspreet to her, Kashish fed her the milk, the doorbell rang
S - that's Social Services
Sujal got up as Kashish frowned, Sujal opened the door and a man and woman followed him inside
M - ok so we need to ask you some questions
W - where did you find the baby?
S - she was on our doorstep
W - ok, do you know her?
S - apart from what's written in the letter no
Sujal handed them the letter, they read it and nodded their heads
M - ok do you know the mother or anyone else from the family?
K - no
W - what else do you know about her?
K - her name....Jaspreet
W - anything else?
K - no
M - well then the only thing we suggest is that until we locate the mother or any living relatives, the baby should stay with you
S - what?
W - considering that the mother left her here, it was clearly on purpose and it clearly suggests she trusts you
Kashish's face lit up, she stood up
K - well then I guess you should be leaving then, sorry for wasting your time
W - its ok, we better get going now
Kashish let them out then sat on the sofa with Sujal
K - see now you can't say anything
S - you always have your way
K - ok then lets go
S - where?
K - shopping! Babies need a lot of things, now lets go
Kashish pulled Sujal up then put Jaspreet in her basket and headed for the door.
S - wait....is she.....coming with us?
K (hits Sujal) - she's a baby, she's only 6 months! we can't leave her alone
S - oh...ok lets go then
coming up - shopping spree and a very big bill
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
nice part... aww the baby is cute.. sujal is gonna get attached.. so ironic.. they were discussing bout not having a baby and the same tiem.. the baby was on their doorstep..

loving it so far..

mansi
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
gr8 strt.. 👏 ..da part was fab... 👏 ...keep up da good work... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
really good part! A baby left on the doorstep. that's really freaky. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
o god.. i thought he would know baout babies even if he hated them.. o well im sure he will get attached!


i cant wait for the BIG SHOPPING SPREE!!! he will get so confused as to wat to buy and why.. lolz

continue sooooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
👏 rach awesum part cntinue soooooon

hana

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