Tere Bina (RajivAmna ff) last part updt! - Page 6

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Part-5

Recap-
Aryan Saima se kehta hai ki use New York jana hoga, jise sunke Saima kaafi upset hoti hai.. Mr.Rai Adi
se milne Garewal house jate hai, jiske wajah se Rayan unse kaafi naraz hota hai aur unhe Adi aur apni zindagi se dur rehne
ko kehta hai....

Story further.....
Its a New day.Saima apne office mein hai, aur badi hi bariki se kisi cheez per kaam kar rahi hai.Tabhi Darwaze per koi aata hai
per Saima apne kaam mein itni masroof hoti hai ki jawab hi nahi deti. Dubara darwaze per knock hota hai, iss baar bhi Saima jawaab nahi deti,
teesri baar koi ekdum se cabin mein aata hai...
Saima: tum? tum yaha kya kar rahe ha Aryan?
Aryan: mujhe logo ke office mein jakar unke cabins ka interiors dekhne mein kaafi mazaa aata hai, bas wahi kar raha hu
Saima: Aryan please, hum iss waqt bilkul bhi mazaak ke mood mein nahi hai.
Aryan: ab tum sawaal hi aise karti ho ki kya karu. Waise na to tum mere messages ka reply kar rahi thi, aur na hi mere calls ka, isiliye mujhe khud
yaha aana pada. Yaha bhi main kabse darwaze pe knock kar raha hu, tab bhi koi jawaab nahi.... Pareshan kar ke rakh diya hai tumne..
Saima: {laughs} ab aisi bhi kya baat ho gayi hai, jiske liye humari wajah se tum itne pareshan ho gaye
Aryan: bhool gayi? Are ab tak to main gaya bhi nahi ki tum meri baatein bhi bhoolne lagi hai..., hey bhagwan yeh kaisi dost hai meri!!!
Saima: Aryannnn, please mujhe bahot saraa kaam hai. Agar main kuch bhool rahi hu to tum batado na
Aryan: thik hai, main aaj raat ke flight se New York jaa raha hu...
Saima: what? per .....
Aryan: {interrupts} ab mat kehna ki bataya nahi tha, maine kal hi tumse yeh keh diya tha, per tumhi ne phone disconnect kar diya tha...
Saima: ha bataya tha, per itne jaldi?
Aryan: ha Saima, mujhe bhi nahi pata tha ki itne jaldi jana padega, papa ki tabiyat kuch kharab hai, so mujhe aaj raat hi jaana hoga...
Saima: aaj hi?
Aryan: uff ho kitne sawaal karti ho? Main to yaha aaya tha ki hum kahi bahar jaa sake.., ab tumhare birthday pe to main yaha nahi rahunga to socha jo
din do baad manana hai wo aaj kyun na manaya jaye?
{Saima bas Aryan ki taraf dekhti hai}
Aryan: kya hua? tumhe kya laga ki iss baar phir main bhool gaya?
Saima: u know sumthing Aryan kabhi kabhi hume lagta hai ki hum kabhi tumhe samajh hi nahi payenge...
Aryan: are ek tum hi to ho jo mujhe samajhti ho...., anyways yeh batao ki tum free kab tak hogi?
Saima: bas yeh kaam khatm karlu phir free hu...
Aryan: thik hai, tab tak main bhi apni packing puri kar leta hu, tum jab free ho jao mujhe bata dena...
Saima: {smiles} ok...
Aryan: chalo ab byee....
{saying this Aryan leaves, While Saima just stands there smilingly... after a minute or two her phone rings and its Rayan}
Saima: hello...
Rayan: Saimaji kya wo sample designs ready hai?
Saima: almost ready hai, bas thodasa kaam baki hai
Rayan: thik hai, jaise hi ready ho jaye aap unhe lekar yaha aa jayiyega. Staff members ke saath meeting hai aur main chahta hu ki aap bhi hume
join kare
Saima: thik hai Mr.Garewal, hum bas kuch hi der mein yeh kaam khatm karke waha aate hai... {and she wanted to say sumthing but she stops}
Rayan: ok then, see u later... {hangs up}
Saima to herself: oh god, iss meeting ko bhi aaj hi hona tha, aur aaj hume Aryan ke saath jana bhi hai... hmmm...,
{and she gets back to her work, after an hour she finishes off with the designs, then Dadima calls her in her cabin so Saima just keeps those papers on the table and leaves}
Dadima: so beta ho gaya kaam?
Saima: ji dadima bas abhi abhi ho gaya hai, aur abhi hum Garewal office hi jaa rahe hai..
Dadima: thik hai, waise beta hume kuch kaam se bahar jana pad raha hai, hum raat tak aa jayenge
Saima: thik hai Dadima... abhi hum chale? Garewal office mein bhi koi meeting hai
Dadima: thik hai beta, jao...
Saima: bye Dadima...
{saima apne cabin ki taraf aati hai, woh dekhti hai ki uske cabin ka darwaza khula hua hi hota hai... }
Saima to herself: are yeh darwaza khula kaise hai, humne to bandh kiye the na...
{lost in her thoughts she enters her cabin}
Saima to herself: shayad hum darwaza khula hi chod gaye he.., anyways...
{she collects all the papers and the files and heads off to Garewal office}

At Garewal office.........
{Rayan was talking on phone and was sounding a bit annoyed.., Saima knocked the door but there was no reply.., all she could hear was Rayan's voice.., So she slowly
opened the door & looks at Rayan... she was a bit nervous, Rayan just disconnects the phone and realises that Saima was standing there}
Saima: ag..agar aap busy ho to hum baad mein aate hai...
{she was about to leave just than Rayan stops her}
Rayan: no no its absolutely fine..., bas yeh kaam ka tension tha... please have a seat
{saima immedialtely gets seated there, but was still a bit nervous.., she cudnt speak properly}
Saima: wo.., hum..., humne sare..i mean ye sample designs... pure... i mean ...
{Rayan gives her a glass of water}
Rayan: i'm really very sorry..., aap please relax ho jayiye
Saima: i... i'm fine
Rayan: are you sure?
Saima: ji...
Rayan: ok then, so... designs ready ho gaye hai?
Saima: ji .., yeh rahe {and hands over the file}
{Rayan was going through the designs but Saima was being a bit restless now.., she wanted to say sumthing but cudnt say}
Rayan: kya baat hai Saimaji?
Saimaji: ji..., actually hume kahi bahar jana tha, to bas wahi...
Rayan: thik hai, waise bhi meeting kal ke liye postpone ho gayi hai, so ap jaa sakte hai...
Saima: {smiles} thanks....
Rayan: {smiles} kis liye?
Saima: bas aise hi.., actually baat yeh ki jab bhi hum kisiko itne gusse mein dekhte hai bahot darr jate hai..., pata nahi kuch samajh hi nahi pate..
Rayan: bilkul Adi ki tarha.., {smiles}
Saima: ji?
Rayan: ha.. anyways.., aap ko agar jana ho to aap ja sakte ho..
Saima: thank u so much...
{and Saima leaves... and calls up Aryan}
Saima: hey Aryan...
Aryan: ha bolo.. are you done?
Saima: ha, to kaho kaha milna hai?
Aryan: ghar hi aa jao
Saima: ghar?
Aryan: are main tumhe kisi purani haweli mein nahi bula raha hu, apne ghar hi aane ko keh raha hu..
Saima: {laughs} thik hai baba.., aa rahe hai....
Aryan: jaldi aana...
{saima waha se chali jati hai.., Rayan un designs ko approve karke production process ke liye forward kar deta hai..,
yaha Saima Aryan ke ghar pohochti hai, per Aryan use bahar hi mil jata hai}
Saima: Aryan tum yeh bahar kya kar rahe ho?
Aryan: tume receive karne ke liye aaya hu..
Saima: Aryann....
Aryan: are sach, mera sara kaam ho gaya socha ki tumhe seedhe wahi bula lu...
Saima: wahi? kaha?
Aryan: tum na bahot sawalaat karti ho... , acha chalo ab
{Aryan aur Saima sabse pehle ek mall mein jate hai jaha Aryan Saima ke liye uske favorate chocolates leta hai aur ek pyara sa locket gift karta hai.., phir
wo usi restaurant mein jate hai jaha wo aksar jaya karte the.., waha Aryan ne Saima ke liye ek pyara se birthday cake pehle se arrange karke rakha hua tha...
Saima iss surprise se kaafi khush hoti hai.., yeh din shayad uske liye uske birthday se bhi jyada special tha...,
Kuch waqt ke baad Aryan kehta hai ki use airport jana hoga.., aur wo Saima ko airport aane se bhi mana karta hai per wo nahi maanti aur uske saath airport jati hai}
Aryan: acha Saima, ab mujhe jana hoga, tum apna khyaal rakhna... aur ha please choti choti baatein lekar pareshan mat hona.., aur jab bhi apne iss pagal dost ki yaad aaye to
please mujhe tang mat karna...{laughs}
Saima: Aryannn....
Aryan: ok ab upset hone ki zaroorat nahi hai.., main jald aane ki koshish karunga... and, i'll miss you yaar..
{hugs her..., Saima bilkul khaamosh rehti hai, use Aryan ke jaane ka dukh bhi hota hai per iss ek pal ne uske sare dukh bhula diye the..,
uske dil ki dhadkane tez hoti jaa rahi thi, wo isi tarah se Aryan ki baaho mein rehna chahti thi.., shayad yehi wo apne aap ko mehfuz samajhti thi}
Aryan: acha ab kuch kahogi bhi yeh u hi chup rahogi?
{aur wo saima se dur hota hai}
Saima: kya kahe.., bas apna khyaal rakhna, Aryan main tumse kuch kehna chahti hu...
Aryan: finally!!! kaho kya baat hai?
Saima: main .., Aryan main tumse...
{tabhi flight ka announcement hota hai}
Aryan: Saima yeh last announcement hai, mujhe jana hoga.., jo bhi baat hai phone karke bata dena..ok....
Saima: per main.., thik hai...
Aryan: ok then byeee....
{aur Aryan palatkar chala jata hai aur Saima use dekhti bas wahi khadi rehti hai}
Saima to herself: koi baat nahi Aryan iss baar naa sahi per agli baar hum tumhe apni dil ki baat zaroor kahenge...
{Saima apne ghar chali jati hai per har waqt wo Aryan ke baare mein hi sochti rehti hai..,
uss raat wo bilkul so nahi paati...bas uss ek pal ko yaad karti hai jab wo Aryan ki baaho mein thi....}
Next Day.........
{Saima apne office mein baaki designs complete karne mein busy hoti hai..., tabhi use Rayan ka phone aata hai aur wo use immediately Garewal office aane ko
kehta hai..., Saima thodi darr jati hai so wo pehle Dadima ke paas jati hai}
Saima: Dadima
Dadima: are kya hua? Pareshan kyun ho?
Saima: abhi abhi Mr.Garewal ka phone aaya tha, unhone hume isi waqt Garewal office bulaye hai...
Dadima: ha to isme kya hua? kisi kaam se bula liya hoga, pareshan hone wali kya baat hai
Saima: pata nahi kyun Dadima, hume lag raha hai ki kuch hua hai.., Mr.Garewal kaafi pareshan se sound kar rahe the...
Dadima: oh ho..., Saima ab yeh to tumhe waha jakar hi pata chalega na?
Saima: ji...
Dadima: to ab jyada der mat karo aur waha jakar dekho ki baat kya hai...
Saima: ji...
{Saima Garewal office pohochti hai..., kaafi nervous hoti hai.., bas Rayan ke cabin ke bahar khadi hoti hai}
Rayan: please come.., main aap hi ka intezar kar raha tha
Saima: ji kahiye..,
Rayan: yeh jo kal aapne designs diye the, aapne kab banaye?
Saima: ji kal hi.., bas jaise hi yeh tayyar ho gaye hum inhe yehi le aaye...
Rayan: are you sure?
Saima: ji ha..., per baat kya hai?
Rayan: aur yeh designs aapne kise dikhaye the?
Saima: kisi ko bhi nahi..., per baat kya hai?
Rayan: how is this possible then Ms.Khanna ki aapne jo designs kal hi banaye the, aaj wahi designs hamare competitors launch kar rahe hai?
Saima: what? per yeh kaise ho sakta hai, humne yeh designs kisi ko bhi dikhaye nahi hai to yeh ....
Rayan: ab yeh to aap hi jaan sakte hai ki yeh sab kaise hua?
Saima: hamara yakeen kijiye Mr.Garewal hume nahi pata ki yeh designs bahar kaise gaye...
Rayan: yeh to acha hua ki hume pehle hi pata chal gaya ki yeh designs already launch kiye gaye hai warna aapne to hamari company ki barbaadi ka pura intezaam kar diya tha..,
i thought you are a responsible person Ms.Khanna , shayad maine aapse kuch jyada hi expect kar liya tha..
{Saima starts crying}
Saima: humne koi bhi galat kaam nahi kiya hai, hum nahi jaante ki yeh sab kaise hua hai..,
Rayan: {raises his voice} kehna kya chahte hai aap? koi bhi aapke office mein aakar, aapki wahi designs lejata hai aur agle hi din uska launch bhi hota hai,
aapki iss kahani pe kaun yakeen karega?
{saying this he just throws that file on the table.., Saima aur bhi nervous hoti hai aur rone lagti hai}
Rayan: main nahi jaanta ki aapne aisa kyun kiya aur abhi naa hi main yeh jaanta hu.., aur mujhe nahi lagta ki hum aage saath kaam kar payenge..
Saima: dekhiye Mr.Garewal, hum nahi jaante ki yeh sab kaise hua hai, agar hamari galati hoti to hum apse u nazrein milakar kabhi baat nahi karte, aur hume aisa karna ki kya
zaroorat hai? thik hai hum bhi aapke saath kaam nahi karenge per ha yeh jo kuch bhi hua hai iski sachchayi zaroor aapke samne layenge.... jhooth na to hum bolte hai aur naa hi humse
bardaasht hota hai.....
{saying this Saima just leaves the Garewal office}

end of part 5
Do comment !!!

luv,
Ruksaar 😊


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wat a twist! Hope saima sorts out the problem...
grt going ruku... 👏 👏 👏
update soon 😊
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Originally posted by: starbellz_21

wat a twist! Hope saima sorts out the problem...
grt going ruku... 👏 👏 👏
update soon 😊

thanks for ur comments dii.., n i especially wanna thank u for the lovely siggies u've made for my fanfic.., thank u so very much dii...😳 😊

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ruksaar dear awesome part toooo tooooo gooooood masth ,wnderful loved it continue sooon can't wait more 👏

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