Tere Bina (RajivAmna ff) last part updt! - Page 4

nice work 👏 couln't stop laughing at Aryan 😆 😆 😆 that was embarassing 😆 😆 anywyas cont soon 😃

nice part... 👏 ..gr8 job... 😊

hey ruku.., awesome part 👏 , bechara aryan... 😆 😆 😆
i liked the way rayan supports saima.. 😊
gug going sweety.. 😉 😊
do update soon...

Originally posted by: Paru_M

nice work 👏 couln't stop laughing at Aryan 😆 😆 😆 that was embarassing 😆 😆 anywyas cont soon 😃

thanks for comments dear 😊, Aryan to hai hi aisa 😉 😆 😆

will update soon...

Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*

nice part... 👏 ..gr8 job... 😊

thank u so much! 😊

Originally posted by: starbellz_21

hey ruku.., awesome part 👏 , bechara aryan... 😆 😆 😆
i liked the way rayan supports saima.. 😊
gug going sweety.. 😉 😊
do update soon...

thank u so much for ur comments dii 😊,

ab Rayan ke to kya kehne... 😉, aur Aryan to hai hi aisa 😆 😆

will update soon...

hey ruku pls continue soon.., me waiting eagerly for the next part

hey ruksaar wow yaar once agin mazedaar and jakhasss part toooooooo tooooooooo goooooood can't stop laughing bichra aryan bakra banh gaya continue soon waiting eagerly 👏

Originally posted by: Honii

hey ruksaar wow yaar once agin mazedaar and jakhasss part toooooooo tooooooooo goooooood can't stop laughing bichra aryan bakra banh gaya continue soon waiting eagerly 👏

thanks for ur comments...😊

Part-4

Recap-
Saima aur Aryan uss ladki se milte hai jaha Aryan ko pata chalta haiki wo ladki Saima ki cousin hai......
Dadima Saima ko ek bade project ka charge dete hai, jise Garewals finance karte hai...

Story further.......
Khanna house....
(its evening time, & Saima & Dadima are back home)
Dadima: beta aaj main tumhe iss project ke zimmedari dekhar bahot khush hu.., ab aisa lagne laga hi ki wakaye mein, meri choti si Saima badi ho gayi hai...
Saima: {smiles} Dadima hum puri koshish karenge ki hum iss zimmedari ko puri immandari se nibha sake...
Dadima: acha ab toda aaram karlo, phir kal tumhe Garewal office jana hai..
Saima: waise Dadima, Mr.Garewal keh rahe the ki kal hume koi papers sign karne hai
Dadima: yeh to iss contract ke papers hai....,
Saima: oh..acha
Dadima: ab jyada mat socho bas kal contract sign kar lena....
Saima: {smiles} ji... acha Dadima hum fresh hokar aate hai...
Dadima: {smiles} jao..
{Saima apne kamre mein jaati hai aur apni dairy nikalti hai.., aur uske zindagi ke iss din ko bhi uss mein likh deti hai...yeh
din uske liye kuch khass tha... Saima apni har choti badi baat apni iss diary mein likha karti thi... Likhte likhte use achanak Aryan ka khyaal aata hai, aur wo use phone karti hai}
Saima: helloo...
Aryan: hey Saima, main abhi tumhe hi phone karne wala tha... ek good news deni hai..
Saima: sach.... hume bhi tumhe ek good news deni hai..
Aryan: are wah! aaj ka din to bahot acha hai... anyways kaho kya good news hai?
Saima: aaj Dadima ne hume ek naya project diya hai, iske incharge sirf hum honge...
Aryan: oh, thats a great news Saima... waise kiske saath contract hai?
Saima: Garewals
Aryan: What? Garewals??? Congratulations Saima..., tumhara to pehle hi contract Garewals ke saath hai...
Saima: ha... isiliye to..
Aryan: Saimaaa, tumhe to khush hona chahiye ke tumhara pehla contract Garewals ke saath hai, aur tum u udaas sa ha keh rahi ho...
Saima: udaas nahi Aryan, hum bas yeh soch rahe the ki kya hum itna bada project handle kar payenge ya nahi..
Aryan: oh come on Saima,of course you will do it & i'm very much sure of it...
Saima: acha ab tumhari good news batao na
Aryan: meri ek good news hai aur ek bad.. Good news yeh hai ki ab kuch dino tak no more shaadi talks for me... & bad news yeh hai ki mujhe New York jana hoga..
Saima: New York??? per u achanak?
Aryan: ha, mom ka phone aaya tha, business mein kuch problems chal rahi hai, aur stress ki wajahse dad ki tabiyat bhi thik nahi hai so bas isliye i'll have to go..
Saima: per Aryan tumhara yaha ka office? yaha ka kaam kaun dekhega?
Aryan: kuch dino tak uncle sambhalenge,per abhi mujhe jana hi hoga...
{Saima doesnt say anything}
Aryan:helloo.... helloo ..are u there Saima? helloo
Saima: ha hum yehi hai, sun rahe hai...
Aryan: are baba, yen baat sunkar to mere girl friends bhi itne upset nahi huejitna ki tum ho rahi ho..
Saima: ha, kyunki un mein aur hum mein bahot fark hai, unhe shayad koi fark nahi padta hoga per hume padta hai...
Aryan: sachh...fark padta hai???
Saima: Aryan... tum na, (saying this she disconnects the phone)
Aryan: helloo...., hello...., Saima... ajib ladki hai.., paas hota hu to ladti hai aur ab jaa raha hu to upset ho rahi hai...., these girls!!!!!
Saima: {to herself} Aryan to jaa raha hai..., per..... agar..wo...
{iske aage naa hi wo kuch sochti hai , naa hi wo kuch sochna chahti thi}

Garewal house.......
{Rayan's back home..., but is surprised to see someone at his house at this hour...., he just stares that person for a minute and just walk away towards Adi's room...}
{Adi is busy in his drawings & colors}
Rayan: Adiiii...
Adi: papa..... {he hugs Rayan}
Rayan: kya ho raha hai?
Adi: yeh dikhaye humne car banayi hai...
Rayan: wow beta, aap to papa se bhi achi drawing karte hai...
{tabhi Rayan ki nazar Adi ki ring pe padti hai}
Rayan: Adi, yeh ring kisne di? Dadi ya Dadu?
Adi: nahi papa, yeh to neeche jo uncle aaye hai na unhone di hai...
{yeh sunte hi Rayan gusse se bhadak uthta hai}
Rayan: what? unki himmat kaise hui tumhe chune ki... Adi neeche chalo zara...
{Rayan Adi ko neeche le jata hai...., jaha Rayan ke papa Mr.Siddhant Garewal, Rayan ki mama Mrs. Raina Garewal aur ek wo shaks maujood hota hai jisse Rayan sabse jyada nafrat karta hai, Rayan
Adi ke haath se wo ring nikal ta hai aur uss shaks ke saamne rakh deta hai}
Rayan: mere bete ko kuch bhi dene ki aapki himmat kaise hui Mr. Rai? Aur aaj kis haq se aap yaha aaye hai? Aapki beti sab kuch to khatm karke barso pehle chali gayi thi, phir aaj achanak yeh pyar kaise jag utha?
Mr Rai: aaj Shikha ki barsi hai, aur ab hum bhi hamesha ke liye New York jaa rahe hai, bas jaane se pehle Adi ko ek baar dekhna chahte the....
Rayan: kis liye? aaj aapko uss bache ki yaad kaise aayi jise aap hi ki beti chodkar chali gayi thi?
Siddhanth: Rayan...., shaant ho jayo beta.... please Adi ko ander le jao...
Rayan: dekhiye Mr.Rai maine aapse pehle bhi kaha tha aur aaj phir keh raha hu, meri zindagi, mere parivaar, mere Adi se dur rehna... Adi se naa hi baat karne ki koshish karna aur naa hi milne ki..
aur ha yeh apni ring bhi le jayiye..Adi ko iski koi zaroorat nahi hai..,
{yeh kehkar Rayan Adi ko lekar waha se chala jata hai}
Raina: humne aapse pehle bhi kaha tha Mr.Rai ki aap Adi se dur rahiye. Jo rishte the wo sab aapki beti apni marzi se todkar jaa chuku thi... ab uski kisi bhi cheez se hume koi fark nahi padta...
Mr.Rai: aap jo chahe kahe, per sach yeh hai ki Adi meri beti Shikha ka beta hai, aur iss nate main usse milne bhi aa sakta hu, aur use kuch de bhi sakta hu.....yeh naa hi mera farz hai per mera haq bhi..
Siddhanth: haq??? kis haq ki baat kar rahe hai aap? aapki beti ne kaunse farz nibhaye hai jo aap aaj haq ki baat kar rahe hai? Adi bas ek mahine ka tha jab Shikha use aur Rayan ko chodkar chali gayi thi... ab yeh uski kismat kahiye ya badkismat ki aaj wo hamare beech nahi hai, per sach kahe to mujhe iss baat ko koi bhi afsoos nahi hai...
Raina: dekhiye Mr.Rai hum wo sab kuch bhula chuke hai , aur beheter yehi hoga ki aap bhi wo sab bhool jayiye... Rayan aur Adi apni duniye mien khush hai, for god's sake unhe waise rehne dijiye...
Siddhanth: aap jaa sakte hai...
Mr.Rai: abhi to jaa raha hu, per yeh wada raha ki bahot jald mulaqat hogi...
{saying this Mr.Rai walks out}
{yaha Rayan apne kamre mein bilkul pareshan sa baitha hai}
Raina: Rayan...,
{Rayan is completely lost in his thoughts}
Raina: {shakes him} Rayan...., pareshan mat ho beta, ab wo hamesha ke liye jaa chuke hai
{Rayan kuch nahi kehta, bas khamosh baitha rehta hai.., wo apni aakhein bandh karta hai aur uski aankho se aasu girta hai}
Raina: Rayannn..... kyun beta? kiske liye?
{Rayan kisi tarha se aapne aasu chupane ki koshish karta hai}
Rayan: Adi kaha hai mama?
Raina: apne kamre mein
Rayan: main abhi aaya...
{Rayan was about to leave then Raina stops him}
Raina: Rayan, mujhe umeed hai ki yeh aasu dubara nahi aayenge
{Rayan just looks at her and leaves}

Next morning.........
Khanna House
{Saima bahot jaldi mien apne kamre se nikalti hai.., kuch files lekar}
Dadima: are Saima breakfast to karlo
Saima: nahi Dadima, hum already late ho gaye hai, Mr.Garewal hamara intezar kar rahe honge..., hum chalte hai...
{she touches Dadima's feet & just rushes out hurriedly}

Garewal office....
{Saima Rayan ke cabin tak pohochti hai aur darwaza knock karti hai..,per koi jawaab nahi aata.. do baar knock karne per koi jawaab nahi aata to wo ander chalti jaati hai}
Saima: ex-cusme Mr.Garewal..... Mr.Garewal..... {wo yaha waha dekhti hai, tabhi ahista se Saima ko peeche se koi kehta hai..}
person: yes, kisse milna hai aapko...
Saima: {turns around} ji hume Mr.Rayan....... (she stops) aap... Adi right?
Adi: Adi nahi, Mr.Aditya Rayan Garewal.... Adi to sirf hume papa, dadi aur dadu kehte hai...
Saima: {smiles} oppss!!! I'm so sorry Mr.Aditya Rayan Garewal
Adi: aap papa se milne aaye hai?
Saima: ji,per wo hai kaha?
Adi: wo to nahi pata, lekin jab papa yaha ayenge to unhe batana nahi ki hum yehi iss table ke neeche chupe hai
Saima: thik hai, hum nahi batayenge, per aap unse chup kyun rahe ho?
{isse pehle ki Adi kuch kehta, Rayan aa jata hai aur Adi jaldi se table ke neeche chup jata hai}
Rayan: oh Miss Khanna... i mean Saimaji.. i'm so sorry aapko intezar karna pada...
Saima: it's absolute ok Mr.Garewal, per hume lagta hai sirf hum hi nahi koi aur bhi aapka intezar kar raha tha...{yeh kehte hue Saima Adi ki taraf ishaara karti hai
aur Rayan samajh jata hai ki Adi wahi chupa baitha hai}
Rayan: ohh.... i'm so sorry
Saima: waise Mr.Garewal aapko ice-creams jyada pasand hai ya chocolates?
Rayan: hmm... hume to dono bhi bahot pasand hai..
Saima: to thik hai, abhi hamare paas kuch chocolates hai, filhaal yeh ap lijiye , phir hum ice-cream khaane chalenge, ok
Rayan: wow, yeh chocolate to Adi ki bhi favorate hai..
{chocolate aur ice-creams ka naam sunte hi Adi ekdum se bahar aata hai}
Adi: aur hamari chocolate?
Rayan: acha, to aap yaha chupe baithe hai, aur waha dadi aapko bahar dhund rahe hai... u naughty boy Adi...
Adi: papa hum yaha chup nahi rahe the, hum aapka intezar kar rahe the.., hai na Aunty?
Saima: yes, Mr.Aditya Rayan Garewal
Rayan: what??? {laughs}
Saima: ji Mr.Garewal, hume abhi abhi pata chala ki inka pura naam Aditya Rayan Garewal hai aur sivaye inke papa, dadi aur dadu ke inhe koi bhi Adi nahi keh sakta...
{Rayan just laughs}
Adi: per aap bhi hume Adi keh sakte hai...
Saima: okiiee..., so {gives him a chocolate} friends?
Adi: {looks at Rayan}
Saima: kya hua? yeh aapke liye hai , papa ke liye nahi... lijiye
Rayan: le lo...
Adi: friends...
{Raina enters}
Raina: to yeh badmaash yaha hai... Adi hum aapko sare office mien dhund rahe the...
Rayan: mama, yeh Saima Khanna hai.., Mrs Khanna ki grand daughter.., Saimaji yeh hai meri mama, Mrs.Raina Garewal
Raina: hello beta.., i really wanted to meet you..humne aapke designs dekhe..., i was really impressed... Maine usi waqt Rayan se kaha ki hume immediate yeh contract sign kar lena chahiye...
Saima: {smiles} i hope i wont let you down..
Raina: aapke designs dekhne ke baad hume pura bharosa hai ki yeh contract dono companies ke liye profitable hoga... anyways you both continue with your work, and Adi chalo ab beta
Adi: nahi dadi, hum yehi papa ke saath rahenge
Rayan: Adi, papa ko abhi kuch kaam hai. Abhi aap dadi ke saath ghar jayiye, i promise hum kaam khatam karke jaldi ghar aayenge
Adi: per papa.....
Rayan: please beta
Adi: ok papa, per aap jaldi aa jana... i will miss u
Rayan: ha beta, papa will be back soon...
Raina: ab chale....
Adi: ha, bye papa... bye Aunty
Saima: byee...
{Raina Adi ko lekar chali jati hai}
Saima: bahot hi sweet hai Adi
Rayan: ha aur badmaash bhi
Saima: ab bache to thode naughty hote hi hai na....
Rayan: ha... {smiles} my naughty Adi... Anyways lets get to work now
Saima: ji...
Rayan: yeh rahe contract ke papers, waise to iske details Mrs.Khanna se discuss ho chuke hai per phir bhi main chahunga ki aap yeh papers ek baar check kar lijiye..
Saima: Dadima ne approve kar diye hai to phir hamari check karne ki kya zaroorat hai... {and she signs the papers without reading them}
Rayan: ok then, ab officially congratulations Ms.Khanna
Saima: thanks
Rayan: aapne jo sample designs diye the i think those were really good. Ab aap baki designs per kaam shuru kar sakte hai
Saima: ok then... abhi hum chalte hai
Rayan: ok.., aur ha kuch bhi problem ho to kehne mein hichkichana mat...
Saima: ji, thanks...
{saying this Saima leaves}

~~~end of part 4~~~~
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