Tere Bina (RajivAmna ff) last part updt! - Page 2

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part-2

Recap:
Saima Aryan se milne ke liye nikalti hai aur raaste mein anjaane mein uske gaadi se ek chote bachche ka accident ho jata hai, aur wo use hospital le jaati hai..... hospital mein uss bachche ka blood group available nahi hota hai aur isiliye Saima uss bachche ko apna khoon deti hai..

the story further.......
{Saima uss bachche ko blood deti hai..tabhi waha hospital ke bahar ek gaadi tezi se aakar ruk jaati hai..., aur ek shaksk bilkul pareshan sa gaadi se bahar nikalta hai, usne lite blue color ka suit pehna hai.., aur wo daudta hua reception counter tak jata hai..}
nurse: yes sir.., how can i help you?
person: yaha abhi ek chote bachche ki accident case aayi hai..
nurse: ji sir.... may i know your name please
person: Rayan Garewal... {aur yeh rahe hamare dashing & handsome.......... rajeev}
nurse: yes sir.. first floor, second room to ur left.
Rayan: thanks...
{aur wo daudta hua room tak jata hai..aur waha Saima aur apne bete Aditya ko aise haal mein dekhkar hairaan hota hai..}
Rayan: adi.......... adi {aur wo daudkar uss bachche ke kareb aata hai..aur Saima bas Rayan ko hi dekhti hai} beta ..yeh ..yeh sab kya hua aapko...
{tabhi nurse waha aati hai}
nurse: ex-cuse me sir..... aap patient ko disturb mat kijiye... waise aap iss bachche ke kaun hai?
Rayan: {bilkul ghabraya hue} nurse kya hua ise...aur yeh thik to hai na?
nurse: ji ab to yeh thik hai..per aap kaun hai?
Rayan: main iss bachche ka pita hu
nurse: oh to aap hi Mr.Rayan Garewal hai..
Rayan: ji...
{tabhi doctor aate hai}
doctor: oh Mr.Garewal acha hua aap yaha gaye...
Rayan: kya baat hai doctor..aditya ab kaisa hai..aur yeh accident hua kaise? aur aditya ko yaha kaun laya?
doctor: relax Mr.Garewal.. apka beta ab thik hai..and thanks to that {pointing towards Saima} lady..jo na sirf aditya ko
yaha le aayi per use apna khoon bhi diya...
Rayan: wat? khoon...
doctor: nothing serious Mr.Garewal... darhelsal aditya ko sar pe chot lagne ki wajah se kaafi khoon beh chuka tha aur uss waqt uska blood group hamare blood bank mein available nahi tha..to inhone hi aapke bete ko khoon diya...
Rayan: oh... acha doctor ab aditya kaisa hai? main use ghar kab le jaa sakta hu?
doctor: woh ab thik hai..per phir bhi hum use aaj yehi rakhenge..aap use kal ghar le ja sakte hai...
Rayan: ok doctor..and thank u so much...
doctor: its ok... and take care of him ...
Rayan: ji...
{doctor leaves aur Rayan goes and sits besides aditya..... but in all this he completely forgets that Saima is in the same room.... he just looks at aditya..and his eyes are filled with tears..... kuch der mien nurse aati hai}
nurse: mam, ab aap bhi yeh kuch fruits khaa lijiye... warna aapko kamzori mehsoos hogi...
Saima: ji.. {her cell starts ringing}
Saima: ha Aryan..
Aryan: kya ha? kaha ho tum? main kabse tumahara intezar kar raha hu Saima, ho kaha tum?
Saima: wo hum... yaha hos.. hospital mein hai..
Aryan: what? hospital? per kyun? tum thik to ho na?
Saima; ha baba hum thik hai.., bas wo ek accident hua tha..
Aryan: what?..acha tum kis hospital mein ho..main abhi waha aa raha hu..
Saima: are nahi yaha aane ki zaroorat hai, hum ab thik hai..aur ghar jaa rahe hai.., dadima ko pata chal gaya tho khamakha pareshan ho jayenge...
Aryan: are you sure u'll manage?
Saima: ha Aryan..tum hamari fikar mat karo..acha ab hum tumse baad mein baat karte hai...
Aryan: ha thik hai... waise bhi aajka din to gaya na ab.. anyways....., u take care
Saima: ok..bye
Aryan: byee..
{Rayan waha baitha Saima ki saari baate sunta hai..phir uske taraf mudta hai} Rayan: aaj aapne adi ke liye jo kiya hai uske liye shayad thanks bhi kam hai...
Saima: ji nahi... uss waqt jo hume thik laga humne wahi kiya... aur phir is sab ke zimmedar bhi to hum hi hai..
Rayan: {looks at her surprisingly} kya matlab? main kuch samjha nahi....
Saima: wo..darhasal... aapke bete ka accident hamare gadi se hi hua tha..
Rayan: what????
Saima: per humne yeh jaan bhujhkar nahi kiya.., uss waqt hum kuch samajh hi nahi paaye kab kaise...hua..
{tabhi aditya ko hosh aane lagta hai}
Aditya: papa.... papa......
{Rayan immediately turns towards him...}
Rayan: ha.. beta.., papa yehi hai.... dekho..
{aditya slowly opens his eyes}
Aditya: papa..... oouch!!!! sar mein pain ho raha hai...
Rayan: kuch nahi beta.., bas thodisi to chot lagi hai na.., aur phir hamara adi to strong hai na.. jaldi thik ho jayega..
Adi: papa...
Rayan: ha beta papa yehi hai...
{then Rayan turns towards Saima}
Saima: hum jante hai ki anjaane hi sahi per humse bahot badi galati hui hai, aap agar police ko inform karna chaho to kar sakte hai..
{Rayan bas Saima ki taraf dekhta hai...kamre mien bilkul khamoshi chaa jaati hai}
Rayan: sazaa galati ki nahi gunaho ki dii jaati hai..., ha main police ko tab inform karta jab aap adi ko wahi zakhmi haal mien chodkar chali jaati...., per kyunki aapne waise nahi kiya...aur adi sahi salaamat hai... to ise main bhi galati samajhkar hi bhool jaunga, aur bhi bhool jana....
Saima: {smiles a bit} ab main kya kahu... aap ne to..{aur wo bed se uthti hai..aur adi ke kareeb jaane hi wali hoti hai ki usi thodi chakkar aane lagti hai aur wo girne hi wali hoti hai ki Rayan use pakad leta hai... Saima Rayan ki baho mien hoti hai.., dono ek dusre ki aankho mein iss kadar dekh rahe the... maano ki kho kahi kho gaye ho....,
Rayan ka ek haat Saima ki kamar mein hota hai aur dusre haath se usne Saima ka haath pakda hota hai..., dono ek dusre ke kaafi kareb hote hai...tabhi Rayan apni palkein hata deta hai}
Rayan: aap..aap thik to hai?
Saima:ji... {apni palkien neechi karti hai} ji....bas wo..{aur apne aap ko ekdum se Rayan se dur karti hai... aur adi ki taraf jaati hai...aur pyar se uske sar pe se haath ferti hai...}
Saima; ab kaise ho aap bete?
{adi koi jawaab nahi deta.., bas Rayan ki taraf hi dekhta hai}
Adi: papa.....
Rayan: ha beta.., papa yehi hai...
Saima: koi baat nahi...., hum adi se kal milne aayenge....
Rayan: aap chaho to main aapko aapke ghar chod du
Saima: ji shukriya...., per hum chale jayenge..... aap yehi adi ke paas rahiye.... Rayan: are u sure?
Saima: ofcourse..dont worry i'll manage.... aap bas adi ka khayal rakhiyega.... acha ab hum chalte hai..
Rayan: ok...
{saima waha se chali jaati hai.., aur Rayan wahi adi ke kareeb baithta hai}
{Saima ghar pohochti hai..., aur bas kuch der baad dadima bhi ghar aate hai.., Saima apne kamre mein hoti hai.. dadima seedhe Saima se milne uske kamre mein jaate hai}
Dadima: Saima..., kya hua beta main kabse tumhe dhund rahi hu aur tum yaha akele baithi ho..
Saima: kuch kaam tha dadima, hum to bas abhi abhi aaye hai.. thoda thak gaye hai..
Dadima: kya baat hai beta, tum kuch udaas si lag rahi ho
Saima: kuch nahi dadima.., aap khamakha pareshan ho rahe hai... hum bilkul thik hai, bas thode thak gaye hai..
Dadima: Saima, kya ab dadima se jhoot bolenge?
Saima: {smiles} aap se kabhi koi baat chupa hai bhala... wo hua u ke .... {aur Saima dadima ko uss accident ke baare mein sab kuch bata deti hai}
Dadima: per tum to thik ho na?
Saima: ji dadima.., bas thodi kamzori hai..
Dadima: aur wo bachcha?
Saima: wo bhi thik hai..., uske papa uske saath hai..
Dadima: chalo acha hua ki bachche ko jyada chot nahi aayi..., lekin ab tum bhi aaram karo.., abhi kahi bhi jane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai... main tumhare liye juice bhijwa rahi hu...
Saima: ji dadima, hum kahi nahi jaa rahe hai..
Dadima: waise tum jaa kaha rahi thi...
Saima: wo hum Ar...., {saima aryan ka naam kehne wali thi per nahi kehti} Ar..Arzoo se milne gaye the....
Dadima: Arzoo??? acha wo tumhare college ki saheli... kaisi hai wo?
Saima: pata nahi , hum to mil hi nahi paaye...
Dadima: to koi baat nahi... kal use ghar bula lena... per filhaal aaram karo..
Saima: ji dadima...
{dadima chale jate hai..,per saima ko yeh baat bilkul achi nahi lagti ki usne dadima se jhoot kaha ki wo arzoo se milne jaa rahi thi}
Saima: {to herself} yeh kya...humne dadima se jhoot kyun kaha? kyun nahi kaha ki hum Arzoo se nahi Aryan se milne jaa rahe the...
{Saima apni soch mein khoyi hui rehti hai tabhi use kisi ka phone aata hai}
Saima: hello....
person: hello... is this Miss Saima Khanna?
Saima: yes..speaking, whose this?
person: Rayan Garewal here...
Saima: ji aap? sorrie hum aapko pehechan nahi paaye...
Rayan: its ok.. baat yeh thi ki aap apna purse yehi bhool gayi hai..., aapke driving license se aapka phone no. mila..to socha ki aapko inform kardu
Saima: oh ha..hum to bhoool gaye the... hum abhi aakar pick kar lete hai...
Rayan: nahi aapko yaha aane ki zaroorat nahi.., aap bas apna address dijiye main bhijwa deta hu....
Saima: thik hai..., 26 park road, Khanna house.. {Saima adress bata hi rahi hoti hai ki call disconnect ho jata hai} hello.. hellooo..Mr. Garewal...
Rayan: hello...hellooo... oh god!!!! iss battery ko bhi abhi hi khatam hona tha.. {tabhi nurse aati hai}
nurse: Mr.Garewal..., aapke bete ko ab puri tarha se hosh aa gaya hai.. wo aapko bula raha hai...
Rayan: thanks... {and he runs towards adi's room}
Rayan: adi beta..., ab kaise hai aap?
Adi: papa..., hum yaha kaise aaye?
Rayan: beta aapko chot lag gayi thi na.., to bas isiliye aapko hospital lana pada...
Adi: per hume yaha nahi rehna, hume ghar jana hai....
Rayan: ha beta.., bas aaj hi ki to baat hai, kal hum aapko ghar le jayenge... lekin abhi aap aaram kijiye... papa
yehi aapke paas hai...
{yaha Rayan Adi ko lekar kuch pareshan hota hai to waha Saima Aryan ko lekar.... bahot sochne ke baad wo Aryan ko phone karti hai}
Saima: hello.. Aryan....
Aryan: hey Saima..., main bas tumhe hi yaad kar raha tha, kaisi ho ab?
Saima: hum thik hai
Aryan: aur wo bachcha?
Saima: ha wo bhi thik hai.... per tum yeh batao ki aisi kya baat thi jiske liye tumne hume milne bulaye the? wo baat to adhuri reh gayi na?
Aryan: baat???? baat nahi musibat kaho Saima....
Saima: musibat???? kya matlab?
Aryan: ab mujhe masoom ki dukh bhari kahani kya sunaye.....
Saima: Aryannn.... mazaak karna bandh karo aur batao ki baat kya hai?
Aryan: ab tum to jaanti ho ki jab bachche bade ho jate hai to ma baap ko unki shaadi karvane ki kitni jaldi hoti hai... to bas aaj kal main bhi isi
pareshani mein hu...
Saima: kya? shaadi??? per tumhare parents to yaha nahi hai na... kya yaha aaye hai?
Aryan: nahi..wo to wahi New York mein hi hai, per unhone uncle se kaha hai ki agar koi achi indian ladki mile to hamare Aryan ke liye baat chalana..and guess what? unhe ladki bhi mili hai... aur kal mujhe uss ladki se milne jana hai.. Saima: what? iska matlab tumne shaadi ke liye haa kardi...
Aryan: are nahi... isiliye to mujhe tumhari madat chahiye.... tumhe kal bas mere saath chalna hoga...
Saima: Aryan yeh tum kya keh rahe ho meri kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai... ladki dekhne saath chalna hoga...
Aryan: oh god, lagta hai uncle aa rahe hai, listen main tumhe kuch der baad phone karta hu, yaa phir kal tum seedhe mujhe baristaas mein hi milna..thik
shaam 5 baje.... bye bye byee
Saima: per Aryan suno to...
{per Aryan Saima ki baat sune bina hi phone disconnect kar deta hai}
Saima : {to herself} oh god! ladki dekhne..... ab hum kya kare, yeh Aryan phir kuch ulti sidhi harkat karega... .. god help that girl now..........

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Great part Ruksaar di!!!!! Loved it.........especially the scene between Saima and Rayan when she falls and he supports!!!!! Continue this sweet story soon!!!!!!!