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Posted: 18 years ago
#81
i know zuman... seriously! he had chosen a wonderful place, na? thanx a lot. 😆 😆 😆 i've already written the next part. par jab tak koi aur reply nahin karta, i won't post that part.... 😭 .....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
Awesome part... kool they hav started likin each other.. dats awesome!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
alright ppl......... u toh aren't interested in replying... 😭 ... okay. i'm posting this next part now. part13. hope u like it......... and pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee reply!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
Hey.. prakriti! Great going.. the story's pretty interesting.. waise can I request you to update a little more reegularly.. yaar story ki link toot jaati hai.. looking forward to the next part...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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"Hey!" "Hey… Naina!" "Hey Alekh, how are you?" "I'm fine, how are you?" "Uh…. Me too!" "Hmmmmm… Any problem?" "Uh… bbbb…. Problem? Nahin toh!" said Naina, shyly. Hmmmm… There definitely WAS a problem! She was nervous, very hesitant, restless, maybe. "Hmmmm… I think, maybe I know what the problem is. See Naina, don't be afraid, or nervous. I'm Alekh, your neighbor, remember? Yes, I AM Alekh!" "Alekh… but…" "Okay, wait a moment." Alekh, as told before, WAS definitely very proud of himself, but yes, as we say, there IS always a woman behind a changed man, kyunki ladkiyaan change naa hone waale ladkon ke peechey nahin bhaagtin!

HAHAHAHAHA… Okay, now I just know how stupid it was, but still, I got a bit too much inspired by Hum Tum!

Okay, where were we, haan, and then, you won't believe what happened, rather, what Alekh did. Like the boy Alekh is, I NEVER expected that he, ALEKH would do this. Chill people, don't worry, he didn't leave Naina alone in the restaurant to pay for his food and drinks! He stood up, went toward that boring band, which was playing all that sleepy stuff, took the mike in his hands, and said, "This one's for you, Naina…"

'Mere man yeh bataade tu... kis oar chala hai tu... kya paaya nahin tune... kya dhoond raha hai tu... jo hai unkahi, jo hai unsuni, woh baat kya hai bata...

Mitwa... kahein dhadkane tujhse kya... Mitwa... yeh khudse toh naa tu chupa...'

Now that WAS cute, wasn't it? Yes, of course. Main keh rahi hoon naa, toh it IS cute, samjhe? Anyway, of course, by listening to this 'PYAARI ALEKH KI AWAAZ', everyone HAD TO clap, na? Naina started sobbing, what do they call, yes, 'Tears of Happiness', but seriously, being so emotional was never expected from her. You know, if you've read THE FAMOUS FIVE series, by Enid Blyton, then you obviously must have read about Georgina aka George, isn't it? What I used to feel about Naina is that she resembles George. Not by her looks, but yes, by her behavior, etc., etc. And now, suddenly, she seemed to me as if her sole was exchanged with that of Anne's, another character in the series. Seriously, she had changed, a lot! All of you must have watched Kal Ho Na Ho. After Shahrukh's entry in the movie, you must have noticed the change in Naina (Preity Zinta), and that was exactly the same thing which happened to Naina, our Naina. She had started enjoying, started loving… Yes, she was now… NAINA…

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Alekh came back to the table, and everyone congratulated the lovely couple. You know how people are na, they can do anything for eating all that lovely food of the marriage!

"So, Ms. Naina Singh. Hello, I'm Alekh, Alekh Sharma. I study in the Oxford. I'm 19 years old, and I'm going to get engaged to a very nice, yet mischievous girl, Naina. I know that she's currently feeling shy and nervous, but yes, I also know that slowly and gradually, she'll understand me, and she'll come to know, that I'm not at all that bad, after all. Hm?" "Very funny!" said Naina. Naina had got into mood now. "Well… Hi, I'm Naina. I live with my brother, my parents, and yeah, of course, my very cute, little, Oye, my doggy! I too study in The Oxford, and I too am gonna get engaged to a very cute and lovable boy-Alekh, who looks just like my doggy! Haila! Both are so very handsome!"

Oops! If I forgot to mention about it in the beginning, let me tell you, Naina was CRAZY about Oyester, and yes, she swore to marry Alekh only on the day, when Oyester finds a suitable match for himself. She even decided to take him along with herself after marriage. Yahaan tak ki, she even wanted to take him to her honeymoon! Thoguh Naina was quite serious, but yes, she could be the funniest, when it came to Oyester, and she could do anything, mind you, ANYTHING for him! Funny!

"Idhar Oyester, udhar Oyester, jahaan dekho Oyester-hee-Oyester!" "Ahan! Behave yourself! Don't you dare say anything to my cuty Oye!" "As you say madam! Can we go now?" "Kahaan? Abhi toh humne kuch khaaya bhi nahin, and I'm extremely hungry, I haven't eaten my lunch.", said Naina, starving. "Nor have I. We're going to The Meredian for lunch." "WHAT?" shouted Naina, and her voice was so high, that she almost scared everyone around! "Naina! Behave yourself. Dheere bolo thoda." "Sorry, but… What?" Yes, this time she was 'COMPARITIVELY' low. "Tum paagal toh nahin ho gaye naa Alekh? You know how expensive it is out there! They charge, I mean, 15 dollars for 1 SINGLE DISH!!!" "It's okay Naina. Aur waise bhi, hum kaunsa roz-roz jaate hain wahaan. This is the FIRST time we're going there, together. Chill! And you know, sabse achi baat kya hai- Dad paise bhar rahe hain!", and saying this, he showed Naina his dad's credit card. "Uf! You're too much, just TOO MUCH! Let's go!"

Hand-in-hand, they go out, and live happily ever after. Nahin, nahin, abhi kahaan. Abhi toh bahut kuch baaki hai, na? Do you want to know, what happened further?

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Edited by praks - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
hey guys. so sorry! yeh raha next part. i hope u like it. and yeah, thanx a lot, and i promise 2 update a little faster.... pakka! 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
heyyy i just read ur FF
awww its rlly unique n cute!!!!
i find it abit confusing though...maybe coz ive never watched the show...lolz...but ill continue reading this 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
hey praks

good story

is Rajveer not a part of this story?
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Posted: 18 years ago
#89
😆 you know what?after reading the last chapter I think I'll become a alekh-naina shipper..really,they'r soo cute together!!!!!!I mean ur fanfic is soo cute!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
well, well. thanx a lot. even i feel so, zuman! 😆 . gosh! neway, thanx a lot ppl. 😆 😆 😆 .

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