hide and seek..ff.(a/k) part 5 pg 5~bye ~

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey peeps.... i have been here for a long time but just registered today...as wanted to know about everything first and now i am kind of addicted to this forum....specially the avy and signature shop and ff sections..... soo this is my first fanfic ever.... plss tell mee how it isss....

CHARACTERS

KRIPA SHARMA is ms.universe 2006..... she is rich and beautiful but very down to earth/....she doesn't like showin offf..... she had small dreams as every other girls in the world.... about her mr.perfect...... her dad died when she was twelve and her mom married someone adn left her...... she was alone.... but she was raised up by JAI SINGHANIA..... who was in love with her mom........ he gave her all the happiness in the world....yet one thing was missing in her life...love..........which she find very soon...... ANGADKHANNA..... teh sweetest and the cutest guy she had ever seen...s.eh is madly,deeply,completely, in love with him.......

ANGAD KHANNA is not rich....he lives in a chaul and works hard to keep his family up.... he has gained soo much respect in the past fifteen years.... he is a typical guy..... a lil flirty but never crosses his line...... he stays with a girl untill he noo longer thinks she is THE one...... looking for his ms.perfect..... which he finds pretty sooo..... KRIPA SHARMA.... the only girl who can make is day as good and as bad as possible....... the only who can make him dance in her fingers..... not because she controls him but because he wants her to control him....he is completely,deeply,madly in love with her........

ABHINASH SINGHANIA is the son of JAI SINGHANIA..... friend of kripa.... but KRIPA always has a weird uncomfortablity with him..... he thinks he owns the world... he is the richest and most eligible bachelor in town..... he has connections with underground tooo...... teh only thing he wants now is KRIPA SHARMA.....


BACKGROUND

KRIPA and ANGAD are n love with eachother...... they have been dating for sometime now and want to marry eachother..... but ABHINASH returns from america and forces KRIPA to marry him...... KRIPA is not ready to do that as she is dearly in love with ANGAD...... she asks JAI SINGHANIA but who was she infront of his own son.....there was noo way of getting away of this...sooo ,ANGAD and KRIPA run away...adn now the are playing the game of 'HIDE AND SEEK' with JAI and ABHINASH and their people..... lets see what they got hrough along this gamee....... for help .... but what could he do...after all she was nothing to him infront of his own son....soo

i know it is not good but plsss tell mee if i should continue.....plssss
Edited by Mrs.IqbalKhan - 18 years ago

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angeleyez_786 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
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great concept
cant wait 2 read the first part
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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lovee it!!! sounds really interesting!! plz continue soon and welcome!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds really interesting!!!! 👏 👏 continue soon!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww


so they are step brother and sisters but he likes her!! ewwww thats nastyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.. ughhh 🤢 🤢

a real nice, real-life concept.. lolzz

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ummm, i dont think they r step siblings, coz it does not mention that he ADOPTED her, he just RAISED her, so i guess they r just friends!!!!!!! 😕 anywazzz, this FF sounds interesting, continue soon!!!!!!!! 😃
Mrs.IqbalKhan thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: brainychild92

ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww


so they are step brother and sisters but he likes her!! ewwww thats nastyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.. ughhh 🤢 🤢

a real nice, real-life concept.. lolzz



OMG... i thought you said ewwww cuz the story was bad.... you scared teh hell out of meee....... yaa theya re NOT step brother/sister... cuz JAI just couldn't see kripa like that as he loved kripa's mom...... soo he just raised her...he DINT adopt her....... gosh i am still recovering from the shock you gave meee.....😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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looks like a really good story... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: angeleyez_786

great concept
cant wait 2 read the first part
continue soon



thanxxx.... yaa i willl

Originally posted by: erier101

lovee it!!! sounds really interesting!! plz continue soon and welcome!!👏



awww thankyou..... i will continue asap....

Originally posted by: desikudi818

sounds really interesting!!!! 👏👏continue soon!!!!!😃



thanxxxx.. i willl

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

ummm, i dont think they r step siblings, coz it does not mention that he ADOPTED her, he just RAISED her, so i guess they r just friends!!!!!!!😕anywazzz, this FF sounds interesting, continue soon!!!!!!!!😃



yep you got it right..... he just raised her not adopted her..... abhinash is actually was just a friend.....

thanxxxx i will contine asap


Originally posted by: lillzakz

looks like a really good story...😃



thanxxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART ONE

we see a guy sitting in a chair.... his back is turned towards us..... infront of him is a dart board where there is angad's pics.....behind him are some people.... he throws a dart and it hits angad's eye..... we see his evil smile....." this is jus too much.... i gave him a chance.. now... just shoot angad at sight..... and bring kripa to mee....alive.... GO!!"

the people behind him goes to look for angad and kripa..... while we see the guys face...its noo other than ABHINASH SINGHANIA....(played by--eijaz khan....ummm first i thought of amit tondon as abhinash but he dint suit the character..... soo welll i put eijaz...he is the one and only who suits this character...and plsss eijazians dont get offended...)

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we see angad and kripa running through the woods.... while there is gunshots behind..... their paln had been ok...they were fins untill kripa sneexed and they heard them.... soo they have been running from the gunshoots for the past one hour...... they stop for a while behind a tree... they had reached a edge off ther jungle....there was noowhere to go....there was only a road starting below.....

" angad....angad....-- i cant... run anymore....." kripa said breathlessly.....

" dont worry.... we wont have to run anymore...." angad said...as something caught his eye.... " kripa when i say jump.... just jump.. okay???"

" but why??? 😕 " kripa asked confused....

" just trust mee.... well you do trust meee...right???" angad looked at her.... she just nodded......" then JUMP!!!"

they both jumped together... kriap thought this was the end..... but since anad was soo confident nothing will happen..... soon enough thay had a soft landing.... kripa's eyes were closed...she slowly opened her eyes.... to see herself on top of angad....adn in a lorry full of hay/straw.... she saw angad staring at her....

" i told ya..... trust mee......" angad smiled at kripa.... she just buried her face into his chest..... she was about ot get up but angad dint let her.... " dont..... they are still looking for us......" he said quietly...

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it had been three hours now...and they had been in teh lorry..... angad was lieing at one side with his shirt and jacket by his side...... he was shirtless as it was too hot..... while kripa was on theother side... sitting up... she was playign with teh straw...she looked boreed and annoyed...... she threw one hay/staw at angad...... angad just gave her a look..... she threw another one and he sat up....

" whats teh matter kripa.???" angad said crawiling closer to her adn pulling her into his arms..... kripa burried herself in his arms and answered...." i am boreed and sleepy....."

" sooo go to sleep.... that what i was doing....well tryign to do..." kripa shook ehr head...." its soo itchy...." she replied....... angad laughed..... he slowly lied down and pull kripa on top of him...... after sometime..there was noo reply from kripa soo angad slowly whispered....." you okay now???"... in answer kripa just brushed her lips in his bare chest..... .

i know it was sort of boring...sorry abotu that.... but it will get good after one or two parts..... tahnxx fro teh comments...plss comment... and why are there 100 views and only like 8 replies and on top of that... two replies are my own.....
Edited by Mrs.IqbalKhan - 18 years ago

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