hide and seek..ff.(a/k) part 5 pg 5~bye ~ - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
awww how cute!! abhinash needs to concetrate more on aarti then on a-k lol let them live in peace!! continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
Awesome part... hope he will go to aarti so he can leave angad n kripa alone!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
only three comments..??? 😭 😭 😭

PART FOUR

angad and kriap both were resting under a tree...... kirpa was sitting on angad's lap and her head was resting on his chest..... angad was leaning aginst the tree.... he was really tireeeeeeeed...... there was a silence between them.... the only sound coming were from various bugs adn the birds in the jungle...... angad had his eyes closed while kripa was just staring at him.... thinking...if she had done the right thing... she knew she would have died without angad .... but now she has put angad's life in danger..... well dying yourself was better than having him die.... she thought.... but she brushed the thought off and continued starng at him.....

angad opened his eyes just to see kripa staring at him.... he smiled.... kirpa smiled back and hugged him tightly..... angad was confused but he hugged her back....

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" angad i'm hungry....." ...angad moaned...... " kirpa you're always hungry" he said ragging her...... " i wont walk..untill i get something t eat...." kripa said stubbornly....she stopped in the middle...... angad sighed....and carried her.... she struggled to getout of his grip....but it was impossible since he was catching her tightly...... they see a small cottage by the road..... angad taes kriap there.....

" hi...umm hum yaha kho gaye hai...aur bahat bhook lag rahi hai... kya hume kuc de sakti hai???" angad asked the old woman.... she smiled.... " haa ha kyu nahi...aap dono yahi ruko..... SNEHAAA!!!!" kripa and angad had a seat on the sofa... it was a small cottage.... a young girl wearing salwaar kamez came upto them...... " OMG!! angad...." she shrieked.... angad looked up at her....adn he had a big smile on his face....." SNEHAA" he got up and gave her a friendly hug..... kripa looked at them confusingly.....

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sneha and kripa had become fast friends..... angad told them that kripa was his wife.... 😉... " comeone angad..kriap... oyu guyss have to stay for a few dayss..... i become soo lonely...."... sneha insisted.... " now who asked you to stay in such a lonely place..." angad said ...stuffing the foood into his mouth.... " i dint want to live here.... its my grandma who doesn't want to leave this place..... and since grannyis alone...i stay with her....." sneha said... kriap wanted to stay there for a while..she wa tireed .... but she dint say anything...she kept quiet......" kripa why are you soo quiet???" sneha asked.... kriap smiled..." cuz i am listening to you guysss talk...and i dont want to bee kabab mein haddi between you friends...." she answered... adn yes that was true... she never had a true friend... a best friend...soo she dint want to come between them....

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angad laid on the bed...they had decided to stay in thathouse for around two das and then leave..... kriap came to the room...... she slid next to angad...and put her head on his chest and hand on his shoulder... angad wrapped his hands around her.... and placed a kiss on her head...... " anagd...when will we marry???" kripa asked all of a sudden....." very soon kripa... first i need to sort some things... we'll marry after that......."

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"abhinash.... you idiot..." aarti hit abhinash with the cushion..... " what did i do???" he aksed trying ot defend himself....." what did you doo...??... i'll show you what you did...." aarti chased abhinash... abhinash was like this only with aarti or he was the rough and tough guy..... they both landed on the couch together..... " you know aarti.....you're the best...." abhinash said catching his breath..... " i know..." aarti replied....

just then abhinash's phone rang...." hello...." adn the the person on teh otehrline said somehthing... abhinash's face changed from a smile to a frown..adn he threw the cell at the wall smashing it into tousand pieces.... aarti got scared....." what happened abhinash??" she asked slowly...... abhinash just stormed into his rooma dn shut teh door with a bang.....
Edited by Mrs.IqbalKhan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
AWESUM prt!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 i was waiting for u to continue!!!!!! 😃
PLEASE continue soon!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
hey thats too good
continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
awesome parts!!! so abhinash can actually be a nice guy, but only with aarti? ...hope he falls in love with aarti and leaves a-k alone!! continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
i know i need to continue hide adn seek...dont worry i will... i am at florida...in this stupid wedding...i am realllly bored... cuz i dont like anything they do...excet for mehendi.....man why does wedding have to be soo long..am i the only one who hates attending wedding...or is there anyone else??..... trust mee i am never gonna marry.... it is just soo much of tension.....anywayss i'll be back at home by wednesday...will continue then..... soo till then tata bye bye.....

my new ff.......do read it....
http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=548171
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
It been a month
plz cont 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
👏 justread all its mindblowing please update soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART FIVE

it was lateee at night... kripa was sleeping in angad's arms while angad was just stroking her hair... after making sure kripa was asleep... angad slowly got up without letting kripa wake... he found a telephone and dialed someone...

???:" hello.."

angad: " hello.. its mee angad..."

???: " Ah angad how are you?"

angad: " how do you think i am?.. abhinash has left thousand people behind mee.. adn i am sure they have been ordered to kill mee..."

???: " hmm i had told you... that this affairs gonna pay you big time..."

angad: " ok ok.. i dont need to listen anything from you.. soo is teh work done???"

???: " almost... you need to wait for sometime..."

angad: " i dont know how long it takes.. i want it done by 2 days.. i am at sneha's place by the way... soo need mee call here..."

???: " okk... take care angad..."

angad: " you tooo..."

???: " bye.."

angad: " hmm bye..."

he went back to the bed adn dropped there... pulling kripa into his arms... and hugging her tightly..he fell asleep...

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next morning they were awoke by a oud knock... it was loud ad impatient... " angad open teh door..." kripa mumbed adn pressed teh pillow over her head trying to sleep... angad lazily got up adn walked to the door... sneha was standing there looking really impatient...

" what took you soo long???" she asked annoyed... " i was sleeping yaar... let mee sleep i amreally tired..." angad said.. dropiing his head to her shoulder... sneha pushed his head back up adn said.." angad.. my grandmom lives here.. if she finds you guyss still sleeping.. she will come behind you with a danda... now get your lazy butts up adn come downstairs fast..." saying this she left... he turned around dropped to the bed and shook kripa.." wake up kripa..." he said his voice heavy with sleep...

" angad wy do you always wake me up when you yourself cant wake up??" she asked... " well i dont know... just get up and shower... then i will do it as well.." " fine" kripa went adn took a shower and went down to help sneha in teh kitchen while angad went into the bathroom for shower.....

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i know very short part.. but this will eb my last part... well anyone wants to continue can continues..or i can ask my friend to continue itt.. its you guys wish.. i am leaving IF... cuz i am moving and then i wont have enough time to come here... soo bye bye everyone...

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