hide and seek..ff.(a/k) part 5 pg 5~bye ~ - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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AWESUM part!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 really unique FF!!!! 😃 nice choice with Eijaz..... continue soon!!!!!!! 😃 Angad & Kripa r sooooo CUTE!!!!!! 😳 😳


p.s. next time post a longer part!!!!!! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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just read it,its awesome stupid abhinash ur a really good writer and that was a gr8 part so now can u like cont and lemme read sum more lol anyways it was awesome pls cont soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that seems interesting.. in the beggining fanfics arent that popular, just keep writing and u'll get more commenters.. lolzz

continue soonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Jus read it, its gr8, n nice interestin story, pls do cont soon... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

AWESUM part!!!!!!!!!👏 👏 really unique FF!!!!😃 nice choice with Eijaz..... continue soon!!!!!!! 😃 Angad & Kripa r sooooo CUTE!!!!!!😳 😳


p.s. next time post a longer part!!!!!!😆



thanxx....dont worry i will write longer......lol

Originally posted by: memze

just read it,its awesome stupid abhinash ur a really good writer and that was a gr8 part so now can u like cont and lemme read sum more lol anyways it was awesome pls cont soon😛



i'll continue as soon as possible...... and thanxxx....

Originally posted by: brainychild92

that seems interesting.. in the beggining fanfics arent that popular, just keep writing and u'll get more commenters.. lolzz

continue soonn



woww first you give mee a hearattack then you encourag mee.....j/k ... thanxxx...... i'll con asap



thanxx

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Jus read it, its gr8, n nice interestin story, pls do cont soon...😊



thanxxx....... dont worry i will...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART TWO

after an hour or sooo....the lorry stopped infront of a dhaba...... kripa was in deep sleep.... while angad was thinking of ways too goo and bring some food without waking kripa up..... he moved a lil and caused kripa to wake up.... angad metally kicked himself..... "sorry.... dint mean to wake you up..." he whispered.... kripa just smiled and rubbed her thumb n his chest...."its okk.... when did youw ake up???" she asked....

" i was never asleep...." angad replied......" wait here...." angad slowly got up put on his shirt and went out of the ,lorry without letting the driver knw.... kripa just sat there.... her stomach growling.... after sometime angad came back there... with some food and a bottle of water...... he sat across from kripa...." here..have it..." angad gave it to kripa..... kripa started eating it.... she looked at angad who was staring at her......with her mouth full she asked...." where is your food???" .....angad just smiled...." i am not hungry....." angad answered.....

" oh yes you are....." kripa moved a little closer and fed angad....... they both fed eachother adn soon teh food was over....it was enough for both of them..... they both were tireeed...... they sat there for a while.... angad was leanin at the side adn kripa was leaning against him.... anagd was playing with kripa's hair.... " angad..."..... angad came out of his thoughts....." hmmmmm....."..." i need t go to the bathrooom......" kripa said innocently...... angad looked at her adn slapped his forehead..... they both got off with their rucksacks.... angad dragged kripa through the woods adn asked her to do whatever she neede to do behind teh bush....... after they finished doing whatever they wwant to..... they headed back to the lorry hoping it wasn't gone..... yess the lorry was not ogne but they saw abhinash's people there...looking for them.... they turned the opposite directiona dn started running again......

after a while...when they were sure noo ne was behind them...they rested..... it was getting dark already and kripa was scared of darkness...soo she dint leave angad's hand even for a min/sec..... they bth rested for a while.... angad was looking around.... " i have been here before....." angad said breaking the ice.... kripa looked at angad in confusion...... he stood up but kripa wasn't ready to satnd up...she was too tired.... " kripa get up...." kripa shook her head stubbornly....."ufff....." angad bent down adn picked her up in his arms... kripa put her hands around his neck and her head on his shoulder....she was soo tireed and sleepy.... after a while angad put her down.... kripa lazily put her head up adn looked around....she was amused by the place...

it was kind of a playground...not the palyground for kids but.... there was a tabletennis board...... a soccer field.... a long tennis field..... basketball place.... and a small place to sit.... which was made of glass... it looked soo pretty..... angad caught her hand and took her inside the glass place..... he dropped on his knees......" are you gonna propose to mee???" kripa asked him stupidly..... angad just gave her a look and shook his head.... soon he foundsomething and pulled it.... the trap door opened..... kripa was amused and shocked by that....." lets go in......" angad said.. but as it was dark inside kripa dint have the courage to.... angad understood soo he went downstairs and switched teh light and called her in.... kriap was amused by wha was inside..... it dint seem it was underground...... there was only large kingsized ebd..a small couch.... a telephone....adn it had a bathroom and a kitchen tooo....

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they both sat on the couch...after changing...... " this place was constructed by...obviously mee, my brother, and my cousins..... with the help of our dads.... we come here every year as a picnic..... but noone except for me, my brother and my dad knows about this underground room...." angad said answering all krpa's question...well maybee not all...." soo why is there only one bed....??" kripa asked....." because..... we never used to sleep all night....we used to play.... talk...chatter the whole night away..adn teh bed was only for lieing down not for sleeping...it isn't soo comfy....." angad replied...." ohh...." was all kripa answered.....

" you must bee really tired... you sleep on the bed...i'll sleep on the couch here...." angad said with a yawn.... " ria loked at the couch.... that couch must be half your size..... you'll probably have a very uncomfortable night....." kripa suggested as she stood by the walll.... watchig angad make her bed more cozy for her....." what else can i do??? share a bed with you???" angad laughed it off...... " i dont mind... i trst you...." kripa replied.... slowly .... angad looked at her...adn walked towards her..... her put his hand around her..and brought his face closer.... kripa heart sipped five or six beats.... her heart was pounding..... " you trust mee???" angad whispered..... kriap just nodded... adn closed her eyes...... angad brougt his face closer and asked....." you still trust mee....." he ran his nose up and down her throat...... finally kripa answered...." i trust you/..... its myself i dont trust...." ...

angad picked kripa up and put her in the bed..... he took her shoes off..... after he tugged her in..... he kissed her forehead....and sw her staring at him with questions in her eyes....." you muct be tireed..... you dont have the habit of running or in the jungle and stuff.... have a good night sleep....." he was about to goo but kripa caught his hand.... he turned around.... and went towards her..... " you dont trust yourself... and i dont trust mself... id ont want to do something i am not supposed to...." he kissed lightly in her lips... and then it grew passionate and deep.... angad unwillingly pulled away.... adn walked towards the couch....he hopped in.... as kripa said t was half his size... he had difficulty adjusting himself..... he looked at kripa who was starinf at him.... the song is in the background..... "jiya dhadak dhadak...."

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abhinash is in his bar room..... where he is drinking non stop.... he as flashes of angad and kripa...he imagines them making love tonight as noone is there to stop them..... he throws the bottle at the mirror.... " KRIPA IS ONLY MINEEEEE!!!!!! SHE BELONGS TOOOO MEEE...!!!!!" he yelled....... a girl come running towards the room..... " omg.... abhinash..." she says and runs to help him.... " leave mee alone...aarti... just leave mee...." he puch her away but aarti(played by anita...)help him too his room...

AARTI SAXENA is ABHINASH'S best friend....who is dearly in love with him.... but she knows he loves kripa soo she doesn't come between them..... she helps him in everything...eery good thing and every bad thing..... all the dark things he has done....AARTI's name comes along with them...... she is trying to find KRIPA and ANGAD....but she doesn't want to kill ANGAD.... as he had always treated her like his sister.......

ok guys i hope this is long enough....anywaysss.... ENJOY....!!!
Edited by Mrs.IqbalKhan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome part!!!! Really liked da part between A-K!!!! 😳 Cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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GREAT part, i LOVED it!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 A-K r sooooooooooo CUTE!!!!!!!! 😳 😳 yes it was long enuf, all the parts should be this long or mayb longer!!!!!! lol!!! continue soon!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great work yaar...now will you plsss be kind and continue 'adhoori kahaniyaa...'
Edited by MUNNIBABA2006 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART THREE

it was night..... when kripa was having a really weird dream.... she woke up with a start...... adn screamed..." ANGAD!!!"...this caused angad fall of the couch.... he ran to kripa...... kripa just hugged him tighter and tighter every second..... in between sobs she said...." angad...plss... plss... dont goooo..... plsss.... dont goo....dont leave mee alone...... plsss anagd..... dont leave mee alone...." she repeated the same thing again and again..... angad tried consoling her but she kept on crying harder and harder....... finally when she was just sobbing..... he pulled away and looked at her eyes which were blood shot red adn her cheeks were pink too..... he cupped her face......

" i wont go anywhere.....kripa i am right here see..." angad said alowly in a whisper..... " but you will leave mee.... you ownt leave mee will you???? plss tell mee you wont....." kripa sobbed more..... angad sat in the bed next to her and pulled her into his arms...... kriap comforted herself in his eyes while wiping her tears away...... " i will NEVER....EVER leave you alone..... i promise kripa..... i wont...." angad said hushing her....

kripa finally stopped sobbing..... angad looked at her and saw her eyes were fluttering... he knew she was tired and must bee really sleepy..... he tugged her in againa dn was about to go.... but kripa caught his hand.... and mumbled... " plss stay here with mee angad.... plsss.... till i go back to sleep...." angad sat down next to her.... kripa put herself in his arms ...her head resting on his chest and hands on his shoulder........ angad slightly caressed her back......

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the next morning.... kripa woke up when she heard angad's voice..... his voice seemed heavy... really tired...s he flet his breath in her neck... she slowly opened her eyes and saw.... his hands around her waist... tightly.... and his face buried into her neck....... he mumbled..." wake up kripa...." kripa knew he himself dint wanna wake up.... soo she dint respond to him.... " kripa... i know you're awake..... " angad mumbled again.... kriap put her hands on huis cheeks and careessed it.... she slowly got up..... angad too got up...his eyes were red..... it seemed as though she ahdn't slept all night.... he tried to stand up....but she caught his hand and laid him down on the bed...... she got on top of him....

" even mr.superman needs some rest..." she grinned at angad..... " but i......." before he could protest... his lips were sealed off by kripa's lips...... the kiss got passionate and angad deepened it...... kirpa unwillingly pulled away....... she made him close his eyes and ..in noo time they both drift off too sleep again.......

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" doo weee have to gooo???" kripa moaned as they climbed up from the underground room...." yes we doooo" angad asked a lil irritated......she followed angad lazily... woww she thought she never felt soo fresh...she never had such a good night sleep...... she thought this was prefect..... when they were in the middle of the jungle.... angad pulled her back and pinned her to the tree..... he presed her body with his..... then kripa thought...what was he doing..... but then she heard footsteps.... they were soo close... not even air could pass through them.... soon the footsteps disappeared... angad sighed..... he looked at kripa who was staring at him with her big brown eyes....he couldn't help but stare back at them... she blinked once...twice..... and then in no time......her mouth was in his..... they kissed.... it was the best kiss they had had till now.......

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abhinash woke up with a severe headache..... he looked around it was a familiar room but..... he dint remember whose...... he was in his thoughts when the bathroom door opena dn out came aarti wrapped in a towel.... abhinash grinned.... he thought she was hot...... aarti felt someone staring at her...she turned around...

" OH SHIT!!!" she grabbed her clothes and ran into the bathroom...... abhinash just smiled at her.... this was his crazy best friend....who helped him in anything...whether its good or bad....everything he does is good for her...... he smiled at the thought and walked out of the room.... for teh first time he dint think about kripa or angad....but aarti.....

sorry couldn't write long enuff... wil write a longer pat next time....
Edited by Mrs.IqbalKhan - 18 years ago

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