~:I wonder what this is?:~ Part 6 pg 14 - Page 3

its not at all terrible.actually it is terrific.mindblowing amazing.we will never get bore with ur fanfic.so pls continue writing.plsssssssssssssss.

wow prena ur apro at it go on its awsome too cool
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Awesome work prerna 😃 👏
Kiara is gonna b one interesting character 😛

Hey Prerna,
First of all I m really sorry main prelude pe reply nahin kar paayi,bt its only coz of my stupid net connection.Secondly the prelude was damn intresting & this first part is toooo coool,just a perfect way to take off.
Waiting for ur next part.
Luv,
Sanya..

Awesome...darling...awesome..
who is the new girl..i mean her age..??
hope no misunderstabding 4 RN..

good job prerna...I liked the first part...luks interesting....plz update soon...

prerna that was awesome 😊 canteen scene was superb 👏 👏 👏 plz post the next part waiting 4 your next part

lovely prerna...it's very nice...extremely excellent work...especially d cadets' part...really nice and very realistic.plzzzzzzz post d next part really soon.... 😊

Part-2

naina put down her pen sighing..."finally..kaam khatam!!" pooja turned round..."uff...tu bhi na..kyuun befaltu calltime khatam hone se pehle hi coupon recharge karaana chaati hai???shah rukh ne ek hafte ka time diya hai na??"

"toh kya hua...maine toh khatam kar liye na..." retorted naina defesively...pooja shook her head n smiled..."tu bhi na naina..sach much phoolanhai..." "achca?" sed naina.."aur tu nahin hai,mobile ki dukaan??" "naina dekh tu ab us sharabi ki tarah shuru mat ho ja.." cried pooja jumping up...n naina began laughing...

suddenly,dere was a loud rap on d door...naina jumped up frm d bed n opened it...n dere stood...lolita.."ma'am...aap yahaan.." lolita walked in n turned to pooja.."cadet pooja ghai...aapke liye urgent orders aaye hai...aap kal subah tak apne bags ko lekar cadet surily goel ke kamre mein shift marengi..smjhe??"

"kya?? woh ud ki nayi girlfrnd??" asked pooja in shock....lolitas eyes went up.."cum agn cadet??" she demanded.."uh..ma'am woh...pooja ka matlab tha ki kyun?? yeh suddenly shifting kyun??" naina broke in..."well cadet...KMA mein ek nayi student aa rahi hai...aur woh,cadet naina ke saath room share karegi...toh.." "yeh fair nahin hai ma'am!!" both naina n pooja yelled together..."YAHAAN KYUN??" "eeek! cadets! behave urself..." ordered lolita strictly.."yeh headquarters se orders hai.." "headquarters..?" wundered pooja.."matlab brig chandhok ke office se.." sed lolita.."now,i dont want anymore arguments..do you get me? kal subah,i want cadet poojas things cleares frm here, as well as her.." n wid dis dramatic statement...lolita walked out..leaving naina n pooja in utmost dismay..

"yeh koi military academy hai,ya koi aira-gaira college jahaan jo bhi jab bhi aake apna connection jod le..." cried pooja angrily..."discipline naam ki bhi koi cheez hai u know!!" "sach mein...pata nahin..yeh nayi student..tera shift hona...mujhe toh kuch samajh mein nahin aa raha..." sed naina angrily..pooja turned n jumped on her,bed.."main so rahi hoon..." n she pulled d covers over her head...naina stared at her,deep in thought..

d next morning,she rushed upto rajveers room..n banged hard on d door..raj opened n stared.."naina..tum...itni subah subah yahaan kya..?" "sir...mujhe aapki help chaahiye...woh..pooja aur main..hum ek room mein hai aur kal raat ko lolita ma'am keh rahi thi ki.." "ki cadet pooja ko shift karna padega..rite?" sed raj....naina luked taken aback.."sir...aapko kaise pata..." "woh isiliye naina..kyunki brig chandhok se maina hi request kiya tha ki woh humaari nayee student ko tumhaare kamre mein accomadate kare...kyunki use ek dost chaahiye hogi..aur tumse behtar kaun..?" "magar sir..is tarah pooja ko kyun..i mean..sir...yeh nayee student hai kaun?? aur woh yahaan term ke beech mein kyun aa rahi hai??" raj luked down..."bas itna samajh lo naina..ki yeh ek bahut spl student hai,jiska khayal humein rakhna hai..." naina luked puzzled..magar sir..."naina...plzz...main tumse bas itna hi maang raha hoon...ki use apna dost banaao...for me naina..plzz...itna kar do.." naina luked at him...his eyes were so...nice..n he'd dun so much 4 her....she culd do dis..culdnt she....she nodded her head slowly...

back in d canteen..naina sat down next to alekh,narrating her convo wid raj..."abbe..kyun befaltu mein unki baat ko maan baithi??" "alekh yaar...kya karti..unhone mere liye itna kiya hai...main.." "tu unse pyaar karti hai..theek hai...magar yeh.." "alekh..kabhi kabhi jab hum kisi ko pasand karte hai,toh unke liye aisi choti choti cheezein kar dete hai..aur yeh sirf pyaar ki baat nahin hai...ehsaan ki bhi hai.." alekh shook his head.."yeh pyaar bhi kya lafda hai.." "jab tujhe pyaar hoga na,tab tu smjhega..." "apun ko kabhi pyaar nahin hoga.." "kyun..? kyun nahin hoga...sabke pyaar hota hai..toh phir tujhe.." "dekh naina..khaali-peeli apun ka bheja mat kha..." naina began 2 smile..."kya pata alekh...tera pyaar tujhe aaj,isi waqt..kahiin aane waali raahon mein mil jaaye..." alekh got up n left exhasperated.."faltu filmy dialogue.." he mutterd...n as he stepped out of the canteen...in stepped 2 beautiful feet clad in designer shoes...carryin a load of bout 2 tonnes...lukin tired,irritated...her fair face frowned at d walls of KMA n her eyes sprakled wid a fire....Kiara Sinha had entered KMA....

deres d next part guys! 😃
i know d storys a bit slow at present,but now dat kiaras entered...deres gonna be a lot of fun cuming up.. 😊
plzzz plzzz do comments if u liked it guys 😳 😳coz i dunno if its gud or not...
its ur comments dat keep me going.. 😳