~:I wonder what this is?:~ Part 6 pg 14 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
Woow....cool....
proceed..😃😃..
this seens 2 be quite interestin'....
m happy its a RN jodi story.😛😛.
cant wait 4 the 1st part😍..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
nic imagination preru 👏

dusra part jaldi liko yaar 😃 me waitin here
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
Girl... you're on a go!! You've got me all excited.. keep writing.. looks like I'm going to start a prerna's FF Fans' club 😉 looking forward to reading the rest of the story..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnxxx a lot 4 d amazing response guys!!🤗
i'll surely post d first part by 2nite 😳 ...i hope its gud tho..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cumon..Prerna...its gonna rock...we r sure f it....
😛 😛 😛
u r a marvellous riter.....
cum soon..m waiting .. 😛 😛 😛

luv u..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
luved it 👏
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part-1

Kanchenjunga Military Academy.....an academy of heroes...every bright soldier,wid patriotism in his heart,has passed out from this prestigious institution....a model house of discipline,strength,courage and unity...our story begins wid d first year cadets, a batch of wild yet innocent beings...

"DUDE DUDE DUDE!!!!! main simran ma'am ke saath DATE pe jaa raha hoon!!! u no...i swear,aaj mera sapna poora ho gaya..mujhe gaana gaane ka mann kar raha hai, i mean.."

"abbe oye nautanki...gaana mat gaa..."

"kyun??"

"sheesha todne ka iraada hai kya??"

cadet naina singh ahluwalia appeared at d scene of d argument.."oh gr8! shuru ho gaye sab...alekh,yaar, tu plzz do minute ke liye chup nahin reh sakta??" alekhs expression changed from disinterest to hurt..."kya re, tu bhi ab apun ke peeche pad gayi??" "o god! alekh...sry...lekin mujhe plzz ab kaam karne de.." "haan...haan...yeh kaam toh naina madam karegi hi na?? aape dear rajveer sir ke saath jo iska connection juda hua hai.." naina punched pooja on d shoulder..."ab tum log chup bhi rahoge???"

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"Brigadier Chadhok...sir...aap nahin jaante use yahaan aane ki permission deka aapne mujhpe kitna bada ehsaan kiya hai....."

"not at all sir,the pleasure's all mine...." replied BC wid a smile...he gave his hand forward,and the deal was sealed with a formal handshake..."but u r sure sir, ki yahaan pe woh safe rahegi..?"

"sir,plzz aap chinta mat kijiye...KMA se safe jagah use aur kahin nahin milegi...she will be very safe here..."

a smile broke across the face of Vinod Sinha.."thnk u very much sir...thnk u.."

he took his leave...n a few minutes later, BC called in d orderly..."orderly....Cptn Rajveer Singh Shekhawat ko mere office mein bulaao...its urgent.." "rite sir!" n d orderly left...

a few minutes later,Cptn Rajveer entered d office.."yes sir! aapne mujhe bulaaya?" BC luked up.."yes Cptn...plzz sit down.." in a few brief minutes,BC explained d entire situation 2 raj, and raj's face waas dead serious after hearing wat he had 2 say.."cptn....i hope u understand ki kiara sinha humaare liye kitni important student hai..."

"yes sir..i do"

"then,her full security is in your hands cptn...mere alaawa,ab is academy mein sirf aapko yeh baat pata hai.."

"ek sawaal sir...aapne,yeh baat MUJHE kyun bataana munasibh samjha?"

BC smiled..."main jaanta tha tum yeh poochoge cptn..aur iska jawaab simple hai...is academy mein aur kisiko bhi bataana dangerous hota...aap ek bahut highly-esteemed army officer hai...maina major nair ko bataa sakta tha,magar tum toh jaante ho ki women cadets pe unki kya rai hai..."

raj nodded..."ji sir...main achchi tarah jaanta hoon...dont worry, kiara siha ko kuch nahin hoga..she'll be absolutely safe..."

"mujhe tumse yehi ummeed thi cptn.."

raj left d office,in deep thot...sumhow, dis whole thing didnt seem rite 2 him...before meeting dis kiara sinhe itself,he had a bad feeling...he entered d canteen amidst laughte n as if on cue,his worry vanished,jus by luking at one face...she laughed heartily...her eyes lighting up, and her smile taking his breath away...

naina noticed raj at d door.."sir..dekhiye...yeh log kitna disturb kar rahe hai...mujhe kaam nahin karne de rahe.." she sed...raj smiled and walked upto d table.."kyun cadets...aap apni hardworking dost ko kaam kyun nahin karne de rahe??" d oder cadets exchanged a smile..."woh kya hai na sir..ki naina baar baar humaare signal ko delete maar rahi thi,kyunki woh aapki kaam itna busy ho gayi..toh humnein socha,ki kuch der tak uska signal hi kyun na jam kar de??" replies pooja wid a wink...raj shook his head in despair.."cadet singh..aap plzz apne dosoton ke singal ko 'delete' mat maariye taaki woh aapki signal ko 'unjam' kar de...homework abhi toh next week submit karna hai na?" naina stared up into his eyes..he luked cute even speaking mobile-tongue..she smiled.."yes sir.." n raj turned round towards d serving table, but not befor giving d oder cadets a teensy-weensi wink...n one dat naina jus culdnt miss!

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"MILITARY ACADEMY?????? DAD!!! HAV U GONE MAD???? MAIN WAHAAN KABHI NAHIN JAAOONGI...AAPNE SERIOUSELY APNE BRAINS LOSE KAR LIYE HAI...WATS WRONG WID U..??"

"KIA!!! STOP SHOUTING!!! ek baat tum kaan kholke sun lo...tumhaari saari zindagi maine tumhe waheen karne diya jo TUM chaahti thi...."

"naturally dad...zindagi toh meri hai...main wahi karoongi jo main chaahti hoon.."

"STOP IT!!! u hav forgotten all manners and respect....u r talkin 2 ur father here..."

"aur dad...aap bhi apni beti se baat kar rahe hai....n i repeat...i WON'T go to ne stupid faltu military academy!!"

SLAP!!! Vinod Sinha placed a resounding slap on his daughter's face..."now listen to me,n listen straight...i hav spoiled u enuf all my life....i hav given u wat u want,n its my fault..it's time u were starightened out...tum KMA jaaogi...and i dont care how u feel about it...u are going there, n dat is final!!" and wid dis outburst,vinod sinha turned on his heels n walked towards d door..."agar aaj mom yahaan hoti, toh woh aapko yeh sab kabhi nahin karne deti!!" sinha turned round to face his daughter..."watever happened to ur mom..u no who's to blame for it kia..i'd rather not repeat the tale if..."

kia scrambled up from her bed and slammed the bedroom door shut....she turned back and collapsed down sobbing....rushing to her bedside acabinet,she pulled out a wooden box with sum beautiful carvings on the top...opening the gold-plated clasp, she pulled out an old framed photograph...a beautiful face stared back at her,smiling...her eyes twinkling wid naught joy..."bahut mazaa aa raha hai na mom?? isiliye aap hass rahi ho....but u no...if u hadnt left,dis wuld never hav happened.." and as if on an impulse,her father's voice echoed in her head....'u no who's 2 blame 4 it...' kiara sinha put down d photograph n collapse onto her pillow,sobbing....

Edited by coolgirl_13 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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dere it is ppl!!! 😃
d first part...i no it may seem slightly boring ,but i had 2 start wid d background of d chars..sply kiaras character...
i really really hope its fine ..plzzzz plzzzz plzzz comment on it ppl!!! 😳
as i sed even wid my FF before...its ur comments which keep me going! 😳 even it is terrible..plzz do comment!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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dat was awesomeee prerna!! 👏 like u alredy sed... da kaira part was a bit serious but da canteen scene was amazin!! 👏 luvdd ur first part 😃 plzzzzz post da next part asap! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
prerna!!..that was too good!! 😳 😳 😳
i agree the canteen scene was superb! 😳 😳
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wud love to read more!! 😊 😊 😊

take care lots!,
devyani 😊

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