~:I wonder what this is?:~ Part 6 pg 14 - Page 5

hey prerna awesome fanfic 😊
post d next part soon and ya choose a girl for kia's charcter i suggest tia(shweta gulati)
but anyone would do it for me as you wish

Part-3

Kiara lugged her heavy suitcase along as she stepped into the four walls of the academy that was going to be her home for sometime...she stopped fpr a minute,taking in her sorroundings...'Oh great!' she thought 'now i have to spend time HERE....in this...in this...' she tried to think up a suitable name for the place...'junkyard..ya..thats what i'll call it..' she shook her head, moving on..her head down n her face starined with pulling the heavy-wheeled suitcase...suddenly,as she tried to move faster,she lost her balance, and *CRASH*!!! she banged right into a large muscular figure..she collapsed into his arms, her head banging his chest....for a minute,she stayed in the position,dazed...and then, she slowly backed away to look into the face of the wall...she stared up at two deep blackish brown eyes....they had a certain amount of honesty in them...some warmth...and looked jus as dazed as she felt..."apun..apun sorry hai..." he mumbled...kiara broke out of her thoughts,as she heard his words...she shook herself out of the daze to get back to her normal self..."uhh...its ok...but seriousely..dekh ke nahin chal sakte kya??" she demanded.."apun ne kaha na,apun sorry hai.." he repeated.."whatever...jus take my bag will u? please..mere kamre tak le jaana..n DHYAAN SE...mera kuch bahut precious saamaan rakha hai usme.." alekh stared,rather confuse.."k..kya..?" he asked.."oh god!!! coolie ho, tumse madad maang rahi hoon....now go fast coolie..." she repeated..."coolie..?" "bell boy..coolie...jo bhi kehte hai tumhe.." alekh suddenly realised her mistake..and smiled..."ab paagalon ki tarah hans kyun rahe ho???" she asked exhasperated..."uhh...kuch nahin madam..apun aapke saath chakta hai...room no kya hai..?" "963.." n saying this,kiara stormed ahead as alekh followed..still smiling slightly behind the heavy load of the suitcase..

he walked the leangth of the corridor with her,all the way upto her room...and he culdnt help not luking at her...she was fair..very fair..and skin was flawless......her eyes were proud..confident..but they had a certain innocence to them...her hair was silky smooth..'ekdum baadal ke maafik' thought alekh....as kiara walked past,boys turned back to look.....wat a babe...wat was she doing in a military academy...'model skool mein jaakar ramp pe left right left karti toh better hota..' thought arjun as he luked at d gaping boys...he turned to one of them..."muh band kar le...warna makhkhi chala jaayega andar.." kiara walked upto the room and stopped..."hmmm....room 863..yehi lagta hai..." she turned to alekh.."ok..soo....coolie...kitna hua?" "uh...koi baat nahin madam...apun ko paiasa vaisa nahin chaahiy.." kia raised her eyebrows..'ab yeh kya naatak hai...?" "no no..i insist.."she sed.."yeh lo.." she thrust a 50 ruppee note in his hand..."please,rakh lo.."she then pushed open the door and walked in...leaving alekh behind,smiling again..."kya ladki hai...apun ko lagta hai toophaanich yahaan chalkar aayela hai.."he shook his head n walked away...

"oye naina...teri nayee room mate aa gayeli hai..." naina turned round 2 face alekh..she was sitting at d canteen table along wid huda,ali,pooja n ud..."kaun? wahi jisne mere hi room se mera connection kaat diya...??" broke in pooja.."usko toh main abhi..." "pooja..ruk...jaakar main usse baat karti hoon..." sed naina getting up.."koi phaayada nahin hai...." sed alekh..naina,already got up sed.."kyun?" "kyunki woh maane type nahin lagti...woh toh mini-skirt pehenkar ramp par marchpast karne type ich lagti hai.." "matlab..?" asked naina puzzled.."aate hi humaare bandaron ki nazar usse hati nahin..mini-skirt shini-skirt pehenkar film-star jaise chal rahi thi.." huda whistled.."arrey...badi mast janaani lagti hai...ab toh yeh huda usse dekhkar hi rahega.." n saying dis,he got up 2.."chal phoolan, chal kar dekhta hai teri is roommate ko.." huda n naina walked out..

naina hurried upto her room, n upon opening the door,she went into a.....a mass of terrific colours..new besheets lay on the bed,make-up kits covoerd the side-table...a brand new rug...she even had curtains..wat WAS this??? naina rushed in, shocked.."yeh KYA hai??" she demnaded to whoever was aound..kia spun arounnd from behind the curtain she had been holding in front of her..."well..finally tum aa gayi..great!! ab see...main kuch curatins ke choices laayi hoon..jus select watever u like...of course..final choice th meri hogi...n yeh rug ek hi hai,aur chaahiye toh catalogue mein dikha doongi....make-up maybelline kab hi hai, but i personally prefer only maybelline lip gloss...warna l'oreal ka eye shadwn n mascara bahut achcha hota hai....n .." "STOP!!" cried naina...her head was spinning..maybelline..l'oreal...rugs...curtains..??? she shook her head..."i'm sry..but i seriousely dont know tum yahaan kar kya rahi ho..n karna kya chaahti ho..??" "xcuse me.." sed kia..."yeh room mera hai...n as far as i can see..ur sharing it wid me...n since yahaan sab itna PATHETICALLY drab n boring tha..main ise revamp kar rahi hoon..." naina walked upto her bed, picked up d bunch of bedsheets n dumped dem on kias bed.."now listen..tumhe jo bhi stupid revamp karna hai...doosre kamre mein karo..kyunki main tumse waheen REQUEST karne aayiee thi,ki tum pooja ka kamra le lo...taaki pooja waapas apne kamre mein mere saath aa jaaye..."

"WAT??" cried kiara.."listen gurl...point no 1...mujhse TAMEEZ se baat karo..kiara sinha ke saath KOI aise nahin baat kar sakta hai..n point no 2...yeh kamra mujhe mila hai..aur mera hai...n ya...main apne kamre se nahin shift karoongi.....tumhe jaana hai toh ur most welcum 2 go..." she turned her head up to a side, n stood haughtily lukin at naina..naina got up n walked towards her.."fine.." she sed her eyebrows going up.."nahin jaana chaahti,mat jaao..but main is kamre mein pehle se thi..so I'M not moving..lets see...ki tum is kamre mein ktine din tikti ho..." kiara folded her arms n stared right into nainas eyes,her own eyes glaring angrily.."haan...tikti main hoon ya TUM?? woh toh dekha hi jaayega..coz mera naam KIARA SINHA hai...n main kabhi koi war nahin haarti...n this.." "is war.." completed naina...the two gurls stood glaring at each other n finally...slowly,huda muttered.."uhh..jannaniyon...canteen chalo...lunch ka time ho gaya hai..."

Preview for part 4

"Mere paas ek foolproof plan hai..iske baad toh woh ladki wahaan tikegi hi nahin.."

"Kya plan..?"

"Gather round.."

hey every1!! 😊
thnxx a lot 4 dose wunderful comments 😳 😳 ..heres d next part 😊 ...n ya, d storys now gonna move faster wid two opposite poles crashing in d same room.. 😛 😆
many of u asked me 2 choose a gurl 4 kiaras character, so i guess SHWETA GULATI who played the role of TIA in REMIX would be great for it 😊 ..neetal also suggested her,so i think she wuld be perfect.. 😃
plzz plzzz do comment ppl 😳 ..coz ur comments only keep me going... 😳

wow great part 👏 👏 👏 And Tia is perfect 4 kiara's role 😆

awesome parts prerna 👏 and very interesting story

Awesome part Prerna!!!!Luuuuuved it.Alekh a coolie.....haiii kitna dashing coolie hai yaar.Bt dat was tooo guud!!!!Waiting for ur nxt part!!!

that was awesome.and ya as someone sugessted ki y not give shewta gulati kiara's character.i think it suits her a lot.but that depends on u.ur fanfic is mindblowing like always.pls continue.

alekh's 2 cool..yaar,he's 2 much....omg! i just love him..... 😊 😳 😃

prerna...it's just one thing...u wrote sumwhere...."model skool mein jaakar ramp pe left right left karti toh better hota.." thought arjun as he luked at d gaping boys......u wrote arjun and i think u had 2 write alekh...right? 😊 😳

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
waiting eagerly 😉