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Posted: 4 years ago
#91

Feel sorry for Viveka.

Nothing will change unless Raanav acknowledges the issues they have between them and acts on it.

When will he realise it is the question.


Smrita had pointedly left Raanav out, I mean WHY would she want middle class genes in her grandkids, she would wait for him to “find the right bilionairess (billionaire heiress) after he flushes Viveka Mathur out of his system and then she will pester him… yeah… that’s the plan


I thought Raanav and Rakshit too did not have "pure blood" genes and they had muggle genes in them from Smrita's side. 😬

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Posted: 4 years ago
#92

Remembering to dry his head this time, if he was going to get l—then he had to behave 😆

He agreed with her idea that they could potentially never leave the room and be happy the remainder of their lives 😳


I curious to know what brought about Satyen's change of heart? Just Viveka's words?

What is Saintly Smrita's reception waiting for? For Viveka to get the pink slip from Parashar residence?


Sometimes I wish others don't ever get to know of Smrita's thoughts.. she has had no qualms so far. She can be so hurtful just so casually!


just not MY Raanav’s

Reminds me of how Anu coolly told Raanav that he belongs to her daughter now! 😉


@canapoem you're so right.. her kids are half blood too, by her standards. But I guess Smrita would choose to turn deaf and dumb before she ever accepts that!😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
#93

It’s hurts to even read a mother thinking like that.

Just can’t imagine a mother like Smrita. I want her to voice it once to Ranaav in clear terms and see Ranaav’s reaction.

If he too doesn’t want kids with Viveka coz of her genes, he should set her free right away.

Viveka deserves better.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#94

The universe will show her dont worry😳😃

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Posted: 4 years ago
#95

Smrita makes me murderous but who makes me more angry is Ranaav with his cluelessness or unwillingness to acknowledge his and his mother’s view of the middle class.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#96

“Not ours”

Smritabarely smiled at Viveka the next morning. It was time to return to Delhi

Raanavdid not ask her if she was taking the job, she wondered if he was going toemploy a different strategy.

He wasthe most easy to get along with, live with guys. She was closest to her cousinsand best friends with her sisters, Raanav was different

Thosedark jeans and gingham shirts and having a dog, arghh the running habit going from intellectual discussion tocomplete seduction in less than 10 minutes. He was even willing to getpiercings if she wanted him to

Shetexted Rhea about it as she began eatingbreakfast

Satyenand Rakshit and Raanav were all at the office their bags were packed and pulledup by the front lounge

Smritacould be heard talking on the phone

Raanavsent her memes he found funny, usually in the mornings

Theywere beginning to have a good dynamic she realized blushing, he expected hercomments on the most provoking ones

“Idon’t think so” she commented on one that was too risqué for her taste

“We cantalk about it”

“Wecertainly may not” she responded and looked up chewing and smiling

Smritaappeared frazzled she noticed, she looked fit and was always well dressed

“doesn’teat paranthas and makhan like her DIL idiot!” her mind voice told her

“YoungerDIL bol na” she corrected her mind friend

“Yes…that too”

Shegiggled, and looked at her plate

“Yep…REAL food” she gently let her fingertips feel her hip, “Yep… its all here” she muttered to herself

“Wereall your girlfriends skinny?” she had asked him during honeymoon

“I willnot answer that” he had told her

“Youjust did” she smiled cornering him

She wasrewarded with purposeful lovemaking the next hour

Vivekawondered of Raanav wished she was skinny like his Mum and and his Bhabhi Lekha

“Hemust be a practical man… he knows it aint happenin in this lifetime so heprobably wont seek it”

“Hi”Smrita walked past

“Hello”she smiled

Smritawas gone

“Ican’t, Satya knows I am leaving you have to give me other dates or have someoneelse do ribbon cutting, I cannot do charitable things if I don’t have the time…we donate millions every year… haan I know… I know… OK… but (listening) This isnot my life…. I am not a”

Vivekawondered who was at the other end

Shecuckled when her mind voice spoke

“Shemust be wanting to tell the woman at the other end my DIL is a charity workernot me don’t expect me to slum for u”

“IsRaanav asleep?” Smrita asked

“Atwork I think”

“Oh”she turned and walked away

“thanku” Viveka muttered to herself

“She islike MY DAUGHTER in fact SHE IS A DAUGHTER” Smrita was again on the phone

Sheassumed the conversation was about Lekha

Shewent back to her room to pack up

Satyenkept her busy in the car when he conferenced Mr Nahar about the endowment tosome crafts initiative

Raanavchecked in her bag, Satyen was still nottalking to raanav she noticed

Raanavhad sent her a picture of a creatively cooked omelette at a local joint, it wasshaped like a rooster

Sheassumed father and son were patching up

But notso…

Theywaited for the plane by the gate

Smritisat by her and did not say a word, Raanav Rakshit and her her played a word game, she let Raanav win and told himshe did

She gotup to use the rest room as the brothers wandered, and satyen was taking a quicknap

“I amgoing to the rest room” she said pointing to her purse

Smritagot up with a smile and said “Oh sweetie I wish I could I have to go buy gum”she smiled

Walkingaway after apologizing silkily

Vivekawent to the rest room and returned for boarding

Rakshitsat by Satyen, Smrita actually took the center seat, and kept Raanav immersed in some inaneconversation the whole time

Shethought it was odd but wore her airpods and listened to music and took a nap

Thebehavior continued after they landed in Delhi, though much of it went unnoticedby Viveka. She was too busy texting family and talking to work team and friends

Smritahad guided the airport worker with the cart containing her and Satyen’s bags,

Inorder to leave Viveka’s bag behind she accidentally ignored her darling Rakshit’sbag as well, Raanav only had a cabin bag

Hepicked up the remaining bags off the carousel

“Ummyou might have forgotten these Mum” he laughed as Rathiji was about to shut thetrunk

“Oh,Rakshit’s? Oh no…” she was seriously upset

“Haha”

“Whoseis that other one, galat le aaye shaayad” she told her son”

“Its Vi’s”he said shaking his head

It wasnot LV or Aviator or Terminal 1 luggage of course

“Weneed to get her decent bags” she muttered

HopingRaanav heard it

But hewas busy pulling the air pod out of his wife’s ear

“RaanavvvDO mujhe” as he dodged and she chased him thru the airport, dropping the sheafof papers and journals she read on the plane after her nap

Thecouple picked it all up, Raanav kept her airpods, as they went to the secondwaiting car

Smritawould do overt and covert things from then to signal Viveka about her loathing.

Satyencould have approached it differently

Hewould realize later

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Posted: 4 years ago
#97

I am not worried about Smrita much if Ranaav stands by her in thick and thin.

It’s Ranaav that matters. Even though Satyen is gem still him being good won’t be of much help if Ranaav is not worth it.

So how stands up for and by his wife is what will matter to Viveka in long run.

Smrita in all likelihood will lose one son. And the other DIL’s attitude will make her realise what a huge mistake she has done. Might take time but this will happen.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#98

For all we know this could become none of contention in Satyen and Smrita’s relationship as for first time Satyen is seeing how shallow Smrita is. Having respect for one’s partner is important I guess.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#99

Viveka should have baby and Smrita should be deprived from even having look at the baby.

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Posted: 4 years ago

She is breaking all the boundaries.....

Thebehavior continued after they landed in Delhi, though much of it went unnoticedby Viveka

😘😘 So she did noticed some.... 😭😭

Dont know if raanav is also taking her moms attitude as silly.... If so, he is taking viveka for granted.... To make peace with his mom, he is allowing her to hurt viveka.... 😞😞😞😞

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