Shivi FF - fighting for love part 9 updated on page 16(completed) - Page 2

Interesting update👏

Shiva is so insecure about himself😭

Hoping Raavi will make him understand her feelings

Waiting for next

Both are insecure but can't stop themselves from falling in love with each other.

Beautiful ❤️...please continue 🥰

Poor Shiva 😭

He has so many insecurities. Hopefully Raavi will be able to put them all to rest going ahead and they can finally be happy

Awesome FF, read both the parts😃 Hope you are not separating them for good, that would make me 😭

Looking forward to the next part.

just finished reading both parts

loved all the flashback scenes they were so cute, mera Shiva is so insecure 😭

hope raavi thappads some sense into him 🤣

Thank you guys for all the love 🤗.

PART-3

She looked at the papers shocked.she didn't know what to say?her hands were trembling while holding the paper.

" Yeh kya hai shiva " ? Raavi asked

" Divorce papers" shiva replied with a straight face

" Woh mujhe bhi Dikh raha hai shiva .kyu? " Raavi asked

" 6 mahine pehle Jo Galti hui thi, use sudhar Raha hu. Hum dono ne majburi Mai aakar ek Faisal liya tha.aaj Mai tujhe iss anchahe rishte se Azad karta hu." Shiva said , all this while maintaining a straight face.

Galti? Anchahe rishte? What the hell is this man talking about? Few minutes ago she was thanking bholenath for bringing this man into her life.this is what he feels about her? She is a mistake?.she held his collar furiously.

" Azad karta hu? Ho kaun tum log mere liye Faisla Lene wale?. mausapa ne Kaha ,shiva se Shaadi Kar le.maine maan liya.dhara Di ne Kaha iss rishte ko dil se nibha, Maine maan liya.aur aaj Tu keh Raha hai ki Tu Galti sudhar Raha hai "raavi pushed him back.

Shiva was trying to not get affected by her tears.he had to gather a lot of courage to come to this decision.he has to stay strong.he turned away from her again to mask his emotions.

Something inside raavi broke.is it that easy? has she misread him all these days? .She felt like a fool again.no.not this time.she is done with people taking advantage of her innocence.she is done being treated like this.she is a human with feelings.she closed her eyes and took a deep breath.she folded the papers, took out a suitcase and kept them.she took out her clothes one by one and packed her belongings.

Shiva turned around and saw her packing.this was the moment he has been dreading.he wiped away a tear that fell from his eyes.there was an eerie silence in their room.in the past 6 months there room has been anything but silent.she always played songs to annoy him or would be saying something in her 2x speed.her silence bothered him.

Raavi finished packing and looked up at him.

" Mai ek aur Raat Yaha rehkar tujhe aur pareshan nahi karungi, agar Faisla le hi liya hai to jitni jaldi us faisle ke anjaam tak pahunch jaye Acha hai." Raavi said battling her tears.

She called her mausa pa to come and take her .she didn't have the courage to go alone.

"Main tujhe chod dunga.."

Raavi stopped shiva from saying anything further by showing him her hand.

Raavi headed out to the hall and shiva followed.

Everyone was sitting there .Dev and krish were running after each other. Rishita and dhara Di were taking sips of their tea.gombi was looking at his brothers and smiling.she was going to miss this.she looked at the sight before her one last time.

Everyone looked at raavi and stood up looking at the suitcase.

"Yeh kya hai raavi? Kahi ja rahi hai "? Dhara asked raavi with a worried look.

"Maine aur shiva ne alag hone Ka Faisla Kiya hai" raavi said looking at her.

Everyone was shocked.

"Alag hone Ka Faisla Kiya hai matlab? Shiva ,yeh sab kya hai"? Gombi asked

Shiva was standing there with folded hands and a was looking ahead.

"Shiva, Meri taraf dekh.yeh sab kya hai? Sab thk Chal Raha tha na tum dono ke beech? Phir raavi aisa kyu keh rahi hai" dhara asked cupping his face .

Raavi had to act fast.she knew dhara Di was shivas weakness.one word from her and again he will go back to staying with her without any question.she didn't want to be a burden on him.he is a grown up man who had the right to take his own decisions.

"Alag hone Ka Faisla hum dono Ka hai. Hum dono bade hai, apni Zindagi Ka Faisla khud Kar sakte hai.6 mahine pehle sirf Aapke kehne par shiva be apni Zindagi Ka sabse bada decision liya tha.par aaj use kuch mat kahiye.plzz dhara Di, Woh aapki baat nahi Taal Sakta " raavi said looking at her with pleading eyes .

"Par achanak aisa kya ho Gaya raavi Jo tum dono ne itna bada Faisla le liya " dhara asked raavi holding her shoulders.

" Kuch hua hi to nahi dhara Di. Hum dono ko sawere Ka intezaar tha.par Woh Kabhi Aya hi nahi, aur Bina pyar ke yeh Shaadi hum aur nahi nibha sakte." Raavi said looking down.

Shiva closed his eyes listening to her .

Bina pyar ki shaadi.what the hell was she saying.the whole house knew they were in love but they didn't.?no,she couldn't let this happen.

" Gombi, Kuch bolo na..aise chup kyu khade ho" dhara pleaded with him .

"Kya bolu dhara. Ab Woh log itne din Saath Mai rehkar bhi agar iss shaadi se Khush nahi hai to hum zabardasti to nahi kar sakte na" Gombi said

Krish ran and hugged raavi.

"Nahi bhabi...Aap kahin nahi jayenge.kaun mujhe Gombi aur dhara bhabi ke maar se bachayega?.apne clg ke Sare secrets Mai kisse share karunga? Kaun mujhe ladkiyon me mamle Mai advice dega?" Krish cried .

Raavi smiled .he was the baby of the family.she adored him. This boy had showered her with so much love from the day she has entered the family.she wiped his tears.

" Gadha hai kya Tu Krish? phone nahi hai tere paas? Somnath Mai hi hu main.jab chahe mujhse mil Sakta hai Tu samjha?" Raavi consoled him but he was not convinced.

Rishita came forward and Hugged raavi.

" Tere Bina Mera kya Hoga yaar.kisee gossip karungi Mai?aisa mat Kar raavi .ek Baar phir se soch me" rishita explained her.

She was getting overwhelmed with all the love.this was what she had wanted all her life .love. but all her relations with this wonderful family was through shiva,if he didn't love her ,then there was no way she could stay here.she has to be strong.

"Soch liya.bahut acche se soch liya Maine rishita.aur Tu bhi mujhs milne aana, Samjhi "raavi took her suitcase .

Her maasi and mausa arrived by then.she hugged her mausa.

"Meri bacchi ko itni takleef Di hai tum sabne.mai tum logo ko Kabhi Maaf nahi karungi, aur khass Kar me tujhe dhara " maasi screamed.

Raavi urged her maasi to leave from there.she didn't want to create a scene.she just wanted to go to her home and lie down.

"Mai Meri bacchi ki dobara Shaadi karwaungi.are iss shiva se lakh Guna Accha ladka dhundungi, dekh Lena tum sab."maasi said while crying.

Raavi was shocked.what was maasi saying.she held her hand and pulled her away out of the house .

"Dhara.bahut vishwas ke Saath iss Ghar Mai Meri beti Di thi.sab tere bharose. Par tune Mera bharosa Tod Diya" mausa pa said with tears in his eyes.

"dhara Di ki koi Galti nahi hai mausa pa.shayad mere Kismat Mai yehi tha. Plzz mujhe Ghar ke chaliye " raavi sighed.

Shiva felt guilty.his family had to hear so Many things because of him.this will get over soon .he thought.its all for the greater good.his chipkali will also understand it soon.

Dhara fell to the floor crying.her kids lives were getting spoiled.she felt helpless.

Gombi was consoling her

Krish and Rishita were also crying.

Raavi turned around to give one last look to shiva,he was still standing like that .this man does not have a heart.she thought.

Shiva didnt dare to look into her eyes.

She reached home . finally after convincing her mausa and mausi that she is fine and she won't harm herself, she was alone in her room.she lay down on her bed exhausted.

Idiot, gadhera,bhootnath, she cursed shiva in her mind. Didn't he understand that she loves him.?why did he do this to her?

Sleep was far from shivas eyes .he tossed and turned in his bed.his whole family was upset.no one had dinner properly.his bed felt empty.his life felt empty without her .it hasn't been few hours since she had gone and he missed her already.how was he going to survive like this?he sighed and closed his eyes preparing himself for a sleepless night .

Dhara was sitting in the angan of her house.she

Was in deep thought.she knew raavi and shiva since their childhood, she was sure that she had seen love in their eyes for each other.she cant do such a grave mistake in reading her children's mind.she had to do something before it was too late.she stood up and started walking towards Raavis house.

Maasi opened the door.

" Tu Yaha kya karne Ayi hai "? Maasi said glaring at her

"Plzz mujhe raavi se ek Baar Baar karne dijiye" dhara pleaded with Mami

Raavi woke up hearing the doorbell ring.a tiny part of her heart hoping that it was shiva.

" Dhara Di ...Aap?" Raavi was surprised

Dhara rushed to her side and held her hand.she took her to the terrace of their house.

"Raavi, bas ek sawal puchungi, kya Tu shiva se pyar karti hai ?" dhara asked getting straight to the point.

Raavi stared at her .

" Dhara Di..Mai .."raavi stuttered

"Bas Haan ya naa raavi.simple sa sawal hai." Dhara said

Raavi broke into a sob.

" Haan dhara di.mai shiva se bahut pyar karti hoo.par kya faida?Woh to nahi karta na ." Raavi said looking down.

" Mai daawe ke sath keh Sakti hoo ki shiva tujhse bahut pyar karta hai.uski ankhon Mai dikhta hai raavi.tu apne past ki wajah se darr rahi hai, mai samajhti hoo par ek mauka de raavi.plzz" dhara pleaded with her .

Raavi wanted to believe her. She wanted to see hope in her situation.but what can she do?

"Main kya karu dhara Di?"raavi asked

" Mere paas ek plan hai raavi.shiva khud tujhse apni Dil ki baat kahega" dhara smiled at her.

Raavi looked confused.what was cooking in dhara di's mind.?

I am not that good in writing family dramatic scenes.😷.Do tell me your opinion guys.🤗

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Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

just finished reading both parts

loved all the flashback scenes they were so cute, mera Shiva is so insecure 😭

hope raavi thappads some sense into him 🤣

Thank you ❤️

Updated the third part 😁.

Yess shiva ko sense and Mai abhi time hai😉.

Omg loved it ❤️❤️❤️

Can't wait to read the next part 🥰🥰🥰

Omg I love this concept ♥️♥️ you’ve written the sad parts also really well, my heart broke for ShiVi!

Super excited to se what Dhara has planned now!