Shivi FF - fighting for love part 9 updated on page 16(completed)

Hello everyone...I am obsessed with shivi😂. I have a concept in mind, and I wanted to write it down.you all have been so loving and supportive about my previous oneshots, it gives me encouragement to write more🤗.do leave your valuable comments and feedbacks.

Background- it has been 6 months since shivi marriage.they have grown used to each other, they still have their Nok jhoks but girte sambhalte they have made it to half a yr.there is no haveli track, they have pretty Decent rooms in their own house.

PART - 1

Raavi was sitting by the window in her room and thinking about the past 6 months of her life.

How her life has drastically changed. She was always a believer of her bholenath and was angry on him when her marriage with Dev broke, but after getting married to shiva and coming to the pandya house she couldn't help but think what did he like in that man. He never stood up for his wife, nor did he make any effort to diffuse the tension in the house. It was all due to her and dhara bhabis effort that Rishita was able to adjust in the family.suman kaki was still a bit cold to her, but she was coming around gradually.shiva always stood up for her when needed.she couldn't thank her bholenath enough for bringing shiva in her life.

Flashback -

She was going out of the house for the first time since their marriage. Dhara Di had insisted that she gave the Tiffin to shiva in the store. She could feel some eyes in her as she went down the street.

She reached the store and saw shiva busy with some customers.she kept the tiffin on the counter and waited.

Two ladies were standing outside the shop and gossiping.

" Bechari. Kitne sapne the Uske. Bachpan se pure Somnath Mai Dev Dev Karke ghumti thi, aur Mila kaun. "One of the ladies said

" Han kaki, suna hai isne khudki Jaan dene ki bhi kosish ki Thi " another lady said

"Aur karegi bhi kya ? Kitni beizzati ki baat hai yeh. Uska dulha use Mandap par Kisi aur ladki ke liye chod ke bhag Gaya "the other lady sighed

Tears came to Raavis eyes in hearing them. She didn't feel anything for Dev now, but it still hurt her when she remembered her wedding day.

Shiva stiffened listening to them.he noticed Raavis eyes.

These ladies didn't have anything better to do. He thought.

" AE kaki" shiva shouted

The ladies looked at him terrified.everyone knew shivas temper, he diidnt leave anyone who raised an eye on his family.but didn't he hate this girl?

" Suna hai Teri beti Kisi NRI ke Saath bhaag gayi. Jinke khudke Ghar sheeshe ke hote hai na, Woh dusro ke Ghar par pathar nahi maarte " shiva chuckled

The ladies left in a huff.

Raavi looked up at him with gratitude in her eyes.

Raavi smiled as she remembered this incident.he had stood up for her, when rishita kept referring to her as iss ladki. That was the first time he had taken her name.in these 6 months he had called her raavi many times, but still it always gave her a tingly feeling in her stomach. In these months,she had realised one thing that she was falling in love with shiva.how could she not? He protected her, cared for her, respected her boundaries. She remembered the time when he had fixed her pallu when they were kidnapped, helped her while she fell into the bathtub without looking at her even once. And on top of that he was so handsome.he had such a hot body.she wandered how come she hadn't noticed it earlier. Rishita and Dev had gone on a date to celebrate their half yearly anniversary. She had not wished shiva and nor had he, dates were never important for them anyway.but what did shiva feel for her? She had a feeling that he liked her, but she was too scared to make assumptions this time.she had suffered a brutal heartbreak for this mistake.she can't do it again.she can't make a joke about her feelings again.shiva has to confess to her, then only she will be sure this time. she looked at the watch she had bought for shiva.she was excited to give him her first gift, she can't be vocal about her feelings but she sure can give small hints to her bhootnath.

Shiva entered their room.he was looking a bit lost today.raavi quickly hid the gift behind.

" Tu aa Gaya shiva " she said smilingly

Shiva forwarded a paper to her, she was about to give him the watch when she saw those papers. The watch dropped from her hands, tears filled her eyes.

Divorce papers? She couldn't believe it.why? They hadn't had a fight recently. Everything was going so well .why was he doing this to her?

Ok guys. This was the first part.the next part will have shivas point of view.i will be giving flashbacks about their marriage.should.i continue?what do you think of it? appreciation and criticism are welcome 🤗

Hey There

The story looks very interesting

Please continue

Please update soon

Part 1 ❤❤❤❤❤❤

Loved it

Will u be updating everyday?

😚😚😚😙😙😍😍❤❤🙂🙂😙😙😙😙😙

Interesting start!

Do write more 😊

Interesting start😊

Waiting for next

Such an amazing start ,can't wait to read more. ❤️

Nice concept

Waiting for next ☺️

Of course you should continue, plot looks very promising❤️

That is was super awesome.Ravi was already insecure n shiva in his own insecurities has increased her fear of abandonment. Would love to read further.😘

You should definitely continue writing this story!

It's such an interesting start, I so wanna know how Raavi will handle this situation😳

Why did he present her with the divorce papers in the first place?🤬

I am curious! So please update the next part soon, okay!❤️

PART- 2

Shiva sat in the store contemplating the last 6 months of his life.6 months since he had married his mamikibehenkibeti.he had hated her from childhood because she was from a family that had destroyed his own.but how can one hate her? He had married on the insistence of his dhara Bhabhi, for the sake of his family reputation. He hadn't thought much.but after their marriage he couldn't help but fall for her. She was such a pure soul,an epitome of innocence. sometimes he couldn't believe she was raised by his Mami. From the very first day, she treated his family as her own.she even forgave Dev easily,how can she have such a big heart? Despite rishita's taunt she wholeheartedly accepted her.what was this girl made up of?

Flashback

Shiva had returned from the store late at night only to find raavi standing at the hall silently shedding tears and looking down.

Dev looked on guiltily.

" Dekha Dev, yeh phirse shuru ho gayi. Pehle khud Galti Karo aur phir sympathy gain karne ke liye aansoo Bahao. Sharam nahi aati tujhe aise dusro ke romantic moments interrupt karte huye..khudke ke life Mai to pyar hai nahi.."rishita stopped after hearing a loud voice

" Bas rishita. Jo romantic film banani hain na Apne kamre Mai banao, yeh hall hai aur Yaha koi bhi aa Sakta hai.aur dobara agar Meri biwi se is Tarah baat ki na to Mai hamare rishte ki Maryada bhul jaunga" shiva roared and took Raavis hand and took her to their room.

Rishita was scared of the intensity of his anger.she did feel a little bad though.in her frustration of not being able to spend more time with Dev she shouted on raavi, when she has been nothing but nice to her. Dev walked away angrily from there .

" Shiva kya Kar Raha hai chod mujhe.." raavi said while being dragged by her hand by shiva.

He pulled her in front of him.

" Mere saamne to bahut zaban chalti hai Teri. Kya kya nayi nayi galtiyan deti rehti hai, aur wahan aise Murti banke kyu khadi thi." Shiva shouted irritated by her tears and silence.

"Kya bolti Mai.." raavi said looking down.

Shiva grabbed her by the shoulders and pulled her close to him.

" Rishita ko Jawab deti.hamesha Mai nahi rahunga Teri chowkidaari karne.tujhe khud ke liye bolna sikhna Hoga" he left her and looked the other way.what was happening to him? Why were her tears affecting him?

"Thank you " she whispered

He calmed down a bit.she was already upset and he was upsetting her further.he turned to face her when there was a knock on the door.it was rishita.

He glared at her.

" I am sorry yaar.maine apni limit cross ki .plz mujhe Maaf karde" she said sounding guilty

Raavi didn't have the energy for any fight or misunderstanding.she just nodded.

" Koi baat nahi " she meekly replied.

Rishita came forward and Hugged her.

Seriously.koi baat nahi? Shiva felt like smacking her head. What would he do with his gadhedi?.wait...did he just refer to her as his gadhedi?

Shiva smiled remembering this.he had never seen her as a woman.for him she was always his mamikibehenkibeti who annoyed the hell out of him.he laughed at her when she said that she was the prettiest girl in Somnath, but in these months he realised she was more than just beautiful, she was gorgeous. He was never an early riser, but now he woke up early to admire her sleeping face in the morning.he remembered the first time he was smitten by her.

Flashback

He hated these nach gaana functions.why can't they go without him.but dhara bhabi had insisted that it would look bad if raavi went without her husband.so he half heartedly agreed to go to kanta kakis daughter in law's function.they were blessed with a daughter and had invited them to a feast. Dhara bhabi had told them they are going to go early and he had to bring raavi with him to the function after closing the store.

He entered his room to find raavi wearing a pink saree with a silver blouse.she had light make up and had paired the attire with silver earrings.he noticed her struggling with the Dori and quickly turned around .

" Rishita , Meri help Kar de na, Tune yeh kya blouse Diya hai..dekh iski back Kitni deep hai aur samne..." Raavi was interrupted with shivas voice.

" Mai hoo.." shiva said not being able to hear the description of her blouse further.

Raavi was flustered. She stood silently for a minute not knowing what to say.

" Sab Nikal Gaye hai function ke liye " shiva continued

What? Everybody left already? What would she do now? Should she change? But she wanted to wear this saree . She looked so pretty in this.she pouted.now there was only one way.

" Shiva...Meri Dori bandh de na Plzz " she said with a puppy face.

Shiva took a deep breath and made his way towards her.he went and stood behind her in front of the mirror.her hair was on one side and her back was exposed to him.it indeed was a deep cut blouse.raavi had her head down and her cheeks were crimson red in embarrassment.he gulped seeing her like that and averted his gaze. He closed his eyes , and raised his hands towards her and got hold of the two ends of the dori .he knotted them carefully so as to not touch her, but still his hands grazed lightly on her back towards the end and it sent shivers down her spine.she looked up in the mirror to see his eyes closed.she smiled slightly and whispered a thank you.

Shiva was brought out of his daze.he quickly went to the other room to change.

Shiva sighed as he looked at the divorce papers in his hands . This was the right thing to do, even though his heart ached.she deserved a lot better than him.he had seen the pain in her eyes when she saw rishita and Dev together, she had been looking at them doing the rituals in their marriage function. She almost died when her marriage broke with Dev . He shuddered at the though itself. She was not in a state to take a rational decision, so she had been married off to him by her mausa pa. But how painful it would have been to see the guy you loved your whole life with someone else everyday?. staying under the same roof as him.

He remembered her words

"Main kuldevta se puchungi ki unhone kya sochke Meri Shaadi tujh jaise jahil, gawar aur unpadh Indian se Kara Di "

" I hate you shiva"

" Tu mehekta hua Tel hai aur main saaf Pani, hum dono Kabhi ek nahi ho sakte "

She is right.he was a dehati.he didn't go to college.it never mattered to him when people called him jungles,gawar but her words hurt him.she was pretty, educated. She deserved much better. She deserved to be with a well educated, sophisticated gentleman who can keep her happy, and that innocent bean deserved all the happiness in the world. Whom she will proudly introduce to the world as her husband.

Flashback

He was at the store, raavi had come to lend him a helping hand.

Kirti , Raavis school friend entered the store and hugged her.she had just come back from mumbai.

" Raavi..sorry Yaar..Mai tere aur Dev ki Shaadi Mai nahi aa payi.mujhe chut ti hi nahi mili.kaisi hai Tu? Tujhe finally tera Dev mil Gaya .Tu toh aasman Mai ud rahi hogi..nahi? " Kirti f

Said excited.

Shiva flinched hearing her words.

Raavi held her hand and they quickly went out of the store.

He can't be selfish this time.he has to set her free.she can't stay like this in a loveless marriage under the same house as the person whom she once madly loved . knowing her she will continue to live like this smiling for their families, taking care of his mother, his bhabi, and being the perfect bahu.he has to be strong, for her.

He clutched the divorce papers and went to his home with a determined look on his face.

Here is the second part guys, do give your opinion on it 🤗