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Posted: 18 years ago
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lovely part.... 👏 gng gr8... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: brainychild92

yummy treat.. thankx for sharing wit us 😉

happy late birthday!! great part.. wonder wat dady gotta say.. and is karan evil. i mean greedyy??? im sure nandani will set him straight.lolz

continue sooooooonn



hi yaar
thank u sweety
u r really so sweet😛
well about karan...........his mother is making him evil.............well lets see who will straight him😉

lolz
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Paru_M

aewsome part ana dear 👏 and happy birthday.🤗 🤗 sorry its late. 😊 😃 cont soon



hi parvati dear
thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu😳
well koi kabhi late nahin hota...................u wish thats the big thing 4 me😃

luv u dear

lolz
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*

lovely part.... 👏 gng gr8... 😊



thank u guriya
😛
hope u will like it further

lolz
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
guys
i know u r waiting
but i can't cont till 18
as my exams are going on
so plz wait till then 😕

luv u guys

lolz
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: cool_SK

guys
i know u r waiting
but i can't cont till 18
as my exams are going on
so plz wait till then 😕

luv u guys

lolz
ana

ana sis its okay .. we understand ..best of luck sis we'll wait till your examz are over ...continue soon😃

hana

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Posted: 18 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Honii

ana sis its okay .. we understand ..best of luck sis we'll wait till your examz are over ...continue soon😃

hana



no thanx dear 4 understanding
i m gonna cont in few min😳

lolz
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
Chapter 3

it was a hectic day for all in Oberoi's family......all were busy in doing arrangements for the wedding.......which was fixed to be on 5 of March...........but only of Nandini and Karan........

as Nikhil and his family had delayed the date of marriage with kashish...........

Nikhil just join his father's shop............his parents want him to be settled first and then wanna think of marriage...........but this all prove to be a trouble for Oberoi family as they want both the sis to be married at a same day..........coz it will reduce the expenses and both the marriages will be occured having no trouble.........

but Nikhil family's decision cause trouble for Mr.Oberoi. whether he was trying not to show it........but both the sis know that there is a prob...........

It was about to be 12 and Valentine's day will be there...........inviting all the Lovers with open arms............the day of which every girl dreams when she is especially in love.........many have many ideas about this day.........

firstly lets take a look of our lil sweet kripa

she was felling tired so after dinner..........she went to her room..........which she shared with anjali......and just change into a soft silk nighty

as she fell on her bed..........she thought about the full day routine.........and collect the memories of the day..........there was something that was frightened her............but she didn't tell that to anyone........

as she was about to sleep.........her mobile make a noise and with half heartedly........she take the call

"hello.........who is this".....kripa asked in an annoying tone

"hey sweety........but what do u mean by who is this?........i m ur ever-lasting love"......a guy said that in a soft tone

"ever-lasting love.............r u dump".....she was even more annoying

"hey.........ok.ok..........don't get angry.....why u always talk to me like this"

"coz Angad........u always disturb me"
(and yes that was Angad..........intro will be on pg 1)

"ah........u broke my heart.....krips.........u know what u are a stupid.........that u talk to such a handsome guy like this"

"Oh........if this is stupidity.........then i m better being a stupid..........ok now leave this crap.......tell me what make u call me"

"Oh how rude...........can i only call u coz i need u"

"Angad......tell me"......she just wana go to sleep thats why want him to be fast

"well actually.........the thing is that..." as he just wanna say something the clock struck 12 "ya ya.....Happy Valentines"

"Happy Valentines.........why r u wishing me that......Angad dear.........u have dialled a wrong no..........u better call ur ria, piya, jiya or what ever".........Kripa was just controlling her temper......

"Well krips...........u r right.........but prob is that ria, piya and jiya are going with raj, valraj and shekhar..........so i can't call them........."

"Angad............now its enough........i m already really tired.........ask me whatever u wanna say or i m gonna cut the call"

"wait yaar..............well i only wanna ask.....Will u be my Valentine?" he was quite nervous with that

"Nag........r u nuts........i should go with the better guy........don't u think that?" now she want to make him annoy

angad with a bit jealousy "ya.......i don't think about u dear...........that may u have selected someone......and yes..........u deserve something better......."

"now with that.........can i plz went to sleep" she was just making him jealous

"ya sure.......u can.........i m gonna cut" he said that half-heartedly

"ok then"

"ok"..........as he was about to cut.........he hear kripa voice

"one min...........if u want me with u..........then u better buy a sweet valentine dress for me.......otherwise i have many requests" .........she don't wanna hurt him........and will love to go with him..........but still making him angry.........look great to her

"ah u idiot.........i know that u will be with me.....ok i will buy a dress but u have to spend the whole day with me............ok"

"promise.........and don't call m idiot.......otherwise i can refuse now too"

"hey don't do that dear...........ok i take my words bac.........will meet u in college tomorrow.....k..."

"ok......."

"ok i m gonna cut the phone as Bhai has to wish ISH too..........k.........bye"

"bye".............they both cut the call and got a smile on there face

"stupid.........don't even know how to ask someone directly".........she look at the phone and then went to sleep

Now on the other side…………….Karan called Nandini and wish her Valentines

"ok Nandi…………will u come with me on a dinner"

"well u have to ask papa for that……………..as in our family………….after the date is fixed………….the groom and the bride can't met…….." nandini said disappointingly

"well………..u don't care 4 that…………I will surely ask Papa…..and I know he will not say No to me"………….Karan said with proud

"ok then……….bye……….luv u"

"luv u too"

nandini cut the call and went to her room to see what is happening inside……..hey don't be wrong k……………Well kashish & Nikhil were talking as they were fianc too

"Nikhil……….why did u do that?…………why did u postponed the marriage date……….u know na that Papa want us both married at a same day"

"ya………I know that………..but what can I do………Mom want me to be settled first ………..so that I can take responsibility of u…………the whole family"

"I know that…………but we can do that together too………..if we got married at the same day as of nandini………….we can support each other………and can help out each other"

"ya I know that……………I asked mom too…………but she want me to be settled first……….now what can I do with that"

"ok"……..she was upset with that

"ok………..be ready in the evening ………………u have to come with me in one of my friends party"

"but….."…………kashish don't wanna go

"no but what…………..u r coming………….that's it"……….Nikhil was a very great over-actor and do what ever he wants

"ok baba…………I m coming k………..bye……….sweet dreams………..and Happy Valentines"

"ok…………bye" he didn't even wish her valentine

as she cut the call…………….she noticed that someone is there in the room………as she turned she found nandini

"is he was NIKHIL"

"yup"

"didn't even wish u na"…………….kashish was upset with that but not wanna say anything

"why do u love him Ish when he even doesn't care for ur feelings"

"that is not the main thing……….he cares………..but can't express it"

"oh plz……………..don't make me a foolish"

"I m not dani………..the biggest thing 4 me is that he love me………..and that's enough"

"but"

"ok dani………..lets go to sleep"

she just buried her face in the pillow………and tears started coming out of her eyes………nandini know that…………but don't wanna stop her……….so she just covered her with blanket and went to sleep……….(they both share a room too)

well anjali don't have a partner yet………..and neither gauri……..

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next day

there was so much noise in the house…………..it was like a tornedo pass through the house

the dresses were on the floor…………..nandini and kashish check there every costume………..but nothing was seem to be gonna suit them………..especially this day…………

one one side kashish and nandini were engrossed in there cupboards while kripa was sitting on the dressing……………continuously brushing her hairs

"ah dii's…………….see I m an intelligent one na…………….that's why I asked angad to buy a good and suitable dress…………..if u guys had done the same………..i m sure u will not be worry about the dress"…………….

saying this she stands up and give kiss both of there sisters and wish them valentines and went to her and anjali room

"hey anju………….with whom are u gonna with"

anjali , who was engrossed in her book………….look at her

"krips………….u know me dear………………I don't believe in this love shove………so I better wanna spend my day with my books…………u guys carry on"
anjali said while wearing specs and again started reading the book

after hearing this kripa come beside her…………..hug her from the back and kiss ger

"but still I can wish u…………..right"

anjali got a smile on that "ya…………..and I know………….u will not let me spend my day……….with what ur so called boring books……………right"……….she make a "I know" look

kripa suddenly back off but still was hugging her " hey anju………..i didn't know that u know me that better…….so get ready…………I will find a partner 4 u"

"no need"……..anjali free herself from her grip and look at her "I will find one myself"

"oh bravo"kripa look at her with meaningfull eyes…….."ok ok……..first u get ready………..i think angad is about to come……………he said me that he will come here first with my new dress"

kripa started helping anjaliwith the dress but about 2 min later…………..they hear someone's bike screeching voice

"hey that's must be angad"

"how do u know………………..it can either be Karan Jeeju or Nikhil Jeej………."

"my sweet sis anju…………be practicle………………this screeching voice is of angad bike"……………both laugh at this and kripa went to window to confirm that it was angad

the bell rings and Mrs.Oberoi open the door

"Hey Angad Beta"

"hi Aunty………how r u"

"me fine"

"aunty…………u r looking marvelous in this red sari………….has uncle give any compliment on this"………..he winked at her

"oh naughty"she hit him slightly on his shoulder"…………….go inside…………kripa is waiting 4 u"

"ok…….." he moved inside the house…………….but turn back"aunty u r looking just too good…………..now I know from where ur daughters caught this superb look"

Mrs. Oberoi smile wih that and angad move inside


"This………angad u bought this for me"…………….kripa asked looking at the dress which angad buy for her

"ya………is any prob"…………..he look at the dress tensed…….while sitting on the dressing

"ya…………..now I know that why ur's ria, piya and jiya preferred to go with those guys except u

"why?"……….he look at her confused

"angad…………..has anyone wear this shalwar kameez for going to a party especially onValentine day"

"krips"…he stand up from the dressng and come to her…….."I know u don't like shalwar kameez………..but u look just fabulous in it"…….then he cupped her face" and I want u to be look different"……….kripa look in his intense eyes and angad was too went deep in her eyes but suddenly said "as u gonna be with me………….angad khanna……… the handsome gy of the college".
"ah don't fly in air ……………..k." she turn her face…………don't know what happened to her………and don't wanna him to know that something is there between them….

"there are many better than u"……………kripa gather her courage and turn back to him

"better than me………….forget that……………ok now get ready . I m waiting 4 u out side"……………angad left the room and kripa smiled looking at the dress

angad went to meet kashish and nandini

"hey ISH BHABHI………….hey dani"………angad was standing in the door

"hey angad………." Nandini wish her first "HAPPY VALENTINES"

"Happy Valentines to u too" angad now come inside "ISH BHABHI……..r u not gonna wish me Valentine"

"nothing like that angad"…………kashish said still confused with the dresses

angad goes near nandini and ask her slowly…."what happened to her……….why she is not fighting with me over "BHABHI" word"

nandini look at her and said "nothing much…………….like always…………ur bro didn't wish her…………..that's why her ood is off"

angad look at kashish and said to nandini "my bro…………always spoil a day…….don't u worry lets chear her up"

then loudly she said "angad…………….its good that u r here………..now plz help me with dress yaar"

"ok…………no prob"…………..angad take out a sweet red dress 4 her

"ah dani………..that will really suit u"

"do u think it will look good to karan?"

"ya ofcourse"………….he said with a surety………….

"ok then……………….i m gonna wear it"………..then angad move towards kashish

"can I help u kashish?"……..angad said laying upon the closet

"ya sure…………plz"……….angad take out a beautiful dress 4 her too

"u wear this."……..he said giving that to kashish

"and why do u think that it will look good on me?"

"simple kashish……………the thing I don't like is mostly like by my bro"…….he said that and winked at her and then turn while humming towards nandini

"ahan"…………kashish said first………..and then turn to the closet………while nandini was smiling along with angad

and suddenly kashish turn while opening her mouth "ah………….do u indirectly wanna say that u don't like me………….that's why ur brother like me"

"actually………"……….angad look at nandini who was trying her best to control her laughter

"angad…………..don't u like me"………..kashish said with a sad face

"well kashish……………the main thing is that I only like u from the likes of my bro………….i don't know why he like u……….if he didn't do that na……….i will surely in the place of Nikhil"…..

"well …………..that's coz I m sooooo beautiful"………….kashish said with proud

"no"……….angad want to irritate her more

"then"

"coz u r a dump…………….and having a dump wife is a blessing of God"………saying this he wink at her while kashish mouth was wide open and angad run from there

kashish follow her…………….they play 4 sometime and then the door of kripa room open

kripa had worn that dreass which angad buy 4 her with high heels, a long red beed Mala in her neck along with lil sweet red tops…………..kripa has open her hair fully and was looking just awesome

kashish immediately call nandini and said

"see dani.he gifted such a sweet dress to krips..and tell us to wear these western dresses………how mean"…………….kashish said while making a face while nandini join her too

"am I looking good?"….kripa asked instantly

"u r looking awesome krips"…………….nandini went to her and apply a black mark or her kajal behind her ear………….

"ok guys…………..lets leave"…..angad said while coming bac to senses and said to kripa…………."and u too get ready"………to kashish and nandini………."ur fianc will be here any time

"ok" ashish and nandini went inside to there room

"lets leave kripa"

"wait……..anjali is coming………………she has to go college"

angad face falls down on that but said

"but there is only place for 1 on my bike"

"who said I m going with u"…………kripa want to irritate him "u go on ur bike………and we will come in rickshaw……..ok dear"

angad went out side and start his bike

"I will meet u in college and then we will go to party"………..kripa said while standing in the door

"ok",………angad said half-heartedly………..as he was thinking that anjali will to go with them

"Alone angad"……..kripa said this and went inside

while hearing alone……………angad face shines and he went to college with full spirit

ok guys
the part ends here

plz comment whether u like or not

luv u

lolz
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
ana sis jaanu great part just tooooooooo toooooooooo gooooood you write so well your ff rocks one of the best continue soon will be waiting 4 the next part 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Honii

ana sis jaanu great part just tooooooooo toooooooooo gooooood you write so well your ff rocks one of the best continue soon will be waiting 4 the next part 👏



hey hanaa dear...
but the credit goes to my friends suri dii and khyati..............if they didn't ask me to write PKPA first................then this part can never be so good as k PKPA likhne k bad mujhay iss part ka idea aaya😃

no thank u dear
luv u😳

lolz
ana

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