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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
nice part.. 👏 ..angad was v sweet out of all guyz.. 😳 ..cont soon.. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*

nice part.. 👏 ..angad was v sweet out of all guyz.. 😳 ..cont soon.. 😊



thanx guriya
well till now angad is sweet.................but later.............u will say angad is sweetest............along with others
😳

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ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
gr8 part ana 👏 [=D> 👏 👏 👏 poor kash. nikil didn't even wish her 😭 😭 hope she dumps him 😉 😛 😆 angad is the only nice one 😳 😉 😃 cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Paru_M

gr8 part ana 👏 [=D> 👏 👏 👏 poor kash. nikil didn't even wish her 😭 😭 hope she dumps him 😉 😛 😆 angad is the only nice one 😳 😉 😃 cont soon



hey paru
no thanx dear
nikhil is too rude😕...........well u will see either she dumps him or what
angad is really cute😳my sweet pie

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ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
aaaaawwwwwwwweeeeeeessssooooommmmmmeeeeee
i didnt notice it b4 so red it at 1 go 👏 1 request plz itroduce kavya soon i can see ma anjali alone 😭 😭 😳
waiting 4 da next part..... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: eijaz-anita

aaaaawwwwwwwweeeeeeessssooooommmmmmeeeeee
i didnt notice it b4 so red it at 1 go 👏 1 request plz itroduce kavya soon i can see ma anjali alone 😭 😭 😳
waiting 4 da next part..... 👏



hi dear
welcome to my post🤗🤗🤗
don't u worry dear............eiju will be here really soon
😉
just wait & watch............anjali will never be alone
😳

lolz
ana
Edited by cool_SK - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
Chapter 4

All the girls were ready.........Kripa anf Anjali left for the college while nanadini and kashish were waiting 4 there MR.Valentines...........as they hear the bikes voice they both take a shawl on there shoulders and went outside and both of the guys took them 2 diff places............

Nikhil take Kashish to one of her friends party..........and started meeting with his friends whle leaving kashish alone

kahish felt humilated but............he don't want him to be hurt so she went to the bar and ordered a orange juice.........

One of Nikhil friends was passed by her and look at her with mercy..........went to her and took a seat next to him along with one of his friend

"ah........how can Nikhil leave this beauty alone.......i m seriously feeling bad 4 her " the guy was talking with his friend but was continously looking at her

"well...........if he had left her..........then we can grab her".......the other friend said having an evil grin

kashish was listening it and stand up

"where r u going dear?"........he said holding her hand

kashish burn with anger"how dare u?..........leave my hand"

"dare........i have dare thats why holding u dear".......he said that while giving her a flying kiss

kashish in anger place a slap on his cheek...........he immediately leave the hand and take it to his cheek..........

on the voice of slap the music stops.........all looked at kashish.........and nikhil was too.........he come to her.........kashish hug him and tear start flowing from her eyes but nikhil sperates her

"how dare u kashish slap my friend?".......Nikhil said that in angry tine while kashish was shocked

"how dare me?.........he was the one who make to do this"........kashish said pointing at the guy

nikhil left kashish and went to his friend and say sorry to him and asked kashish to say sorry tooo

"why should i say sorry?"

"kashish, i said say sorry to him"

"if this is...........i m leaving"kashish without even caring of NIKHIL ans

Nikhil felt humilated and to rush after him but before he catch her..........she left 4 home in a rickshaw


Kashish went home with teary eyes and locked herself in her room...........no one knows that she is there

she fell herself on the bed and engrossed her face in pillow...............all her decisions, her strenght was seem to be fake.............Nandini had asked her several times to leave nikhil..........but she never agree and now her heart was really feeling to leave her..........but nothing can happen now

her father is a man of will.............if he decide to do something.........he can't turn back from that...........she dn't know what life has stored 4 her.........but she really want to change it

Karan take nandini to a 7 star hotel and they have a sweet lunch there............while kripa to went with angad to a party and after that they went to the lunch as kripa was feeling hungry

anjali went to gauri house after her work

all the girls have to go 4 a party at night........it was the biggest Valentine party of the town........ but till now gauri and anjali didn't have any partner........so they were upset what should they do.........as only couples were allowed

"we have to hire two partners" anjali said

"hire?........anju these books really make u dumb.......how can we hire any guy.........and if we then we have to pay 2 him..........and we don't have money

"oh yeh"..............in frustration..........they start walking and hit each other many times between that but nothing was comming to there mind

atlast.............gauri said

"ops...........i got 1 idea"

"what"

"see..........like we want a partner.........some guy will also wanna have a partner........right?"

"ya"

"then we will go there without any partner........and will find one from there"

"that really cool".........anjali in excitment kissed her cheek

"ok ..........now u too get ready.........i have to just give some touches"..........anjali said while looking in the mirror

anjali wear this


and gauri


it was evening.........when nikhil called kashish and said sorry 4 his behaviour and said that other guys told him that my friend was wrong

"so that mean............u don't trust me?"

"no kashish.........its nothing like that........i said i m sorry 4 my behaviour..........and if u say i will make my friend said sorry too"

"no that's ok".......Nikhil know that kashish is an emotional fool so thats why he always said some emotional things to her and she said ok every time

kashish said ok and nikhil said that he is gonna pick her 4 the party.........and kashish agree with that

while smiling........she wash her face and then apply lil makeup aong with light skin lip gloss and get ready

Nikhil came and pick her up

firstly, kaan and nandini reached to the party and enter having hands in hands..........the entered there and was followed by angad kripa.............but they entered normally.........then kashish and nikhil

all sis meet each other and discuss the day

"umm..........where is anju and gauri.......they both are too coming na?" kashish said while changing the topic when all asked her about her day

"ya.........they have too.........probably are about to come"........nandini said

"ok till then........lets move toward the table".......the guys walk away and the girls reached to a table and ordered 4 some mango shake........

on the other side...........anjali and gauri were standing outside........searching 4 a partner

"gauri.........now search.........my idea of hiring can be prove more benefited..........now all will be inside and we are hear.........wandering 4 a guy.........look so odd......shit"..........she said that and sit in the parking........above a car

"anju...........lets move yaar...........why r u shouting at me......if no guy want a partner.........that what can i do?"......she said looking helpless

then right then a guy.............wearing black stylish goggles, and white dress suit

"hey u...........why r u sitting here.........my car will have a dunt"

both girls look at the guy and anjali stand up........and yes yes................the guy is Kavya(our own eiju)
intro on pg1

"well............sorry 4 that........really sorry"

both started walk up from there....but the man calls

"hey if anyone of u can be my partner"

both girls turn at that and stop there

kavya walk towards them and said

"actually, i don't have any partnr..........i was just wondering can u be my partner"

"ya sure.............actually we were too finding partners........all my siblings are inside ........must be waiting 4 us".......anjali said while thanking God 4 this

"oh....that's cool".......kavya said while having a smile.......on that both girls too smile.

"well do u have any fiend or any one u know......who tooo wanna have a partner.......actually my friend to want"

"ya........my friend Shlok........he is too single"

kavya call him on his mob and he was too there.......both girls went inside the party

kripa saw them first.......and her mouth opened looking both the girls with cool guys

"look........at them"

both nandini and kashish look back and saw anjali and gauri

"finally.......these girls are here".....nandini said and call them by her hand

"oh..........how are talking about them........i m talking about the guys..........they are so cool"

"krips........hold urself".......kashish said while giving her a warning

angad nikhil and karan too come back to the girls

anjali and gauri along with guys reached to them

"hi dii's and krips".......both gauri and anjali said at a time

"well hi dear...........what make u took so much time"

"well dii..........same prob........no partner.......thank 2 them........we finf them and come inside".........gauri said

"thanku 4 that"............kripa said in a sweet tone which make angad alert

"well.....he is.........oh i didn't even ask ur names?"

"well hi..........i m kavya........and he is my friend Shlok".......kavya introduce himself

"kavya.........these are my elder sis......kashish and nandini".........both bid hi to her and the guys too

"and he is karan, nandini dii's fiance.........gonna be her husband soon and he is nikhil ,kashish dii's fiance"

the guys shake hand and bid hi to each other

"and who is this sweet girl?".......Kavya said looking at kripa

"hi.......i m kripa.........anjali's lil sis"

"hi kripa..........nice to meet u........but who is anjali?"......kavya was confused

"oops.........i m anjali........sorry didn't tell u before"

"and ur name?" Shlok asked

"my name is gauri"

"nice name".........Shlok comment on her........which make gauri blush

angad was waiting but no one introduce him........and kavya was giving quite looks to kripa(well he was actually looking here and there but angad think that he is looking at kripa)

"well..........is anyone gonna introduce me?"

no one give him a look..........as all were busy in themselves

"well hi.........i m angad............krips's sone gonna be fiance"

"what?".........all look at him instantly

"what? when? where?"........all started asking kripa about this...........but kripa was hell shocked while angad was smiling

"angad.........what did u say?"................kripa ask him in rude tone

"hey...that was just a joke babe.........well no one introduce me so i think that is the better way to have an attention"........angad said while smiling

"very cheap joke".........kripa said while getting to normal and all other who were happy with that(actually all know that angad love kripa........but he can't be able to tell her.........and while hearing fiance thing......all got happy as they know angad will keep kripa happy forever)

then a guy invite all the couples to be on the floor............all went to that and start dancining

well guys
this is the half part of Chapter 4
the next half part will be here soon

please comment either u like or not

lolz
ana
Edited by cool_SK - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
its ssccchhhhhhhhoooooooo sweet
excellent fanfic
thnx 4 introducin kavya
nowim assured anju won be alone 😉 😉
kripa angad patsr also nice post soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59
its ssccchhhhhhhhoooooooo sweet
excellent fanfic
thnx 4 introducin kavya
nowim assured anju won be alone 😉 😉
kripa angad patsr also nice
postthe remaining part soon unresistable fanfic
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
woah wah ana sis awesome part just great .... superb ... the best i loved my jaanu eijoo's entry 😳 gr888888888 and this nikhil urggghh is such a pain he is fooling kashish aur kashish samaj hi nahi rahi hai 😡 😡 😡 ... i love angand his role is so sweet continue sooooon wil be waiting 4 the next part 👏

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