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Hey Guys.......

Me back with an other intresting n dhamakay daar story.........
But b4 starting it..................i would like to thank the readers of my last's ffs ......

Thank u guys 4 appreciating my stories..............Capable of Love.......Pyar ki Proper Arrangement(don't u worry guys............i will cont that soon), Khushboo ki Zuban............War & Pyar.............Izhar ki hajat hai

n this story is dedicated to all the readers of my all these ff's

"Thats Da Power Of Da Female"



Make by my sonu
Griffinmonster
aka
Griffy

Main Characters R

Nandini Oberoi: A great human being........doing masters in architecture..........final year...........have a great stamina to face the problems...............always full of life................love her friends n family..........n can do anything to keep them happy................she is a really beautiful n charming girl..........

Kashish Oberoi: twino of Nandini Oberoi..............doing masters in media n mass communication.......n in final year............same as her sis............love to be with peoples..............having a huge no of friends...........but she admires her sisters alot more on her friends.........she n nandini are always together n having the same friends..............she is as charming as her sis..............

Anjali Oberoi: yonger than kashish n nandini..................n called as da "Jaan" of them...........doing bechelors in psycology............2nd year....both kashish n nandini...............never let her face any problem...........as she is 4 year younger to them...............she always like to be "baccha typo" of them..............she used to spend time with her books n her sisters...................she is truly a bookoholic......

Kripa Oberoi: youngest of all n also the more "LADLI" of da house...........1 year lil to anjali................doing bechelors in IT ...always spend most of the time with her friends n in parties...............but as exams were coming close..............she also cover her face with the mask of bookoholic n always get 1st division................her sisters r her inspiration................n she is said to be the mixture of all..

Gauri Singhania: She is about 3 year younger to nandini n kashish...........n elder to anjali n kripa...................but still her mix habits make he close to four of them.............she is Mr.Oberoi's friend daughter n also in the same college as the four of them................which give her a chance to come close to da 4 sis.......n she consider them her own sis as he has no one............she go 4 shopping with nandini n kashish...............study with anjali.................parties with kripa.............n she mostly now-a-days living in Oberoi's house as her father n Mother is out of country for some reason.

Guys gang:

Karan Mehra: a middle class family guy........want to earn money as quick as he can.................love nandini alot...........but beside love 4 nandini............he want to have "dahaij" too................
as he know that Mr.Oberoi's best friend has a huge property.................and 4 his best friend's daughter.........Mr.Singhania can help them financially.............paisoon ka deewana

Nikhil Khanna: (played by swayum of KTH)A greedy man too.............ah......called to be same as
Karan...............a very clever..........n greedy man...................kashish n he is in same college.............n have an affair...............but kashish don't know that its all for money..............his mother is in best friends list of Mrs.Oberoi..........thats why his marriage has been succesfully arranged to kashish...............he can be called a senti

Angad Khanna: totally opposite of nikhil...........his elder bro.......equal to kashish and nandini..........thats why share a frankness level with them.....a very simple.........but hot........😆😆😆.......always try to make someone smile.............love a girl............but never got confidence to tell her that.................don't care of money....but always respect others feeling...........in short.................a fun-loving guy

Kavya Kapoor: a magzine cheif-editor............26..........had done masters in media and mass-communication.............now a days working 4 a popular mag............very dedicated towards his work.........don't have any intrest in girls

Armaan Suri:- Was the step-son of the one of the friends of Gauri's step mother''.Gauri's mother treat him like his own son as his own step-mother never like him ''..he is now a well-settled and rich businessman'''..dashing, handsome, rich all qualities were in him''.and some thing happened in his past'''''..that make him more serious than ever''''Gauri's Mother and Father love him and want him to be as there son-in-law'''.but waiting 4 gauri's decision........and Gauri call him "Mr.Egoistic"

Sujal Khandelwal: A famous Serial maker..........mostly do stage shows in different cities...........he is the most eligible bechelor of town.........he want to remain simple .............he love his family alot............his parents and his sister is everything mean to him...........looking 4 a girl who see his heart rather than his money

The story is about the 5 girls................there way to fight with problems...........it is a romantic story too...........but mainly will around the girls....................there lover boys will be there

I hope U guys will like the intro
plz comment.............either u like it or not

lolz
ana

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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 awsome continue soon
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gr88 awesum introo..waiting to see those hotties intro...nice start ana dii.. 👏 👏 👏
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interesting, continue soon!!!!!!!! 😃
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hey ana!! great start yaar..i love the concept... 😉 ...continue soon..will be waiting for the intro!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsum intro...luved it 👏
cont soon
and shudnt the title have nkakg instead of nkakj if its from initials of girls...unless i have got it rong
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great intro can't wait for the first part 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chapter 1


The life is not bed of roses, one day u have u sleep on bed of thorns coz only that make u realize the value of the roses.

It was the winter season. As it was about to evening, all the people went towards there home to keep themselves away for the wit winter. But right then, when all were sitting in there houses, enjoying lil chit chat alonh with hot cups of coffee n tea, a girl was walking on the road, aimlessly, covering herself with a woolen shawl. She turns on the right or the left, whenever she wants.

"Kash, zindagi ko bhi main iss tarhan see jee patti. Apni marzi se apni rahain chunti."

She had slight tears in her eyes but as it was about to fall, she wept that n took a rickshaw n move towards a house.

The rickshaw stopped in front of a lil house, from which light was coming

"kitna howa" girl ased the rickshaw man

"20 rupaiya" he checked the metre and told her

She takes out her bag and gives money to him and move towards the door of the house

"Ting, ting" she rang the bell

"Kaun hai" another girl asked from inside

"ISH Di, Main hoon"

A girl opened the door and looked at the girl damn angrily

"GAURI, tum kahan chali gaiee thi, patah hai kitna pareshan ho rahay thay hum."

The girl gives her the way and Gauri move inside and sit on a chair

"adhay ghantay ka keh k gayee thi, or dekho pooray do ghantay baad aaye hoo, howa kia hai tumhain"

"kuch nahin KASHISH di, bus waisay hi. Library se bahir nikli tau koi rickshaw nahin mill raha tha, so issi liye late ho gaya"

"Gauri, sach sach batao. Tum mujhay kashish di tab hi bulati hoo jab tum udass hoti hoo yaan pareshan hoti hoo. I am a friend of u yaar. Batao bhi" she got tensed on seeing her

"Kuch nahin di. Bus Mama ki yaad aa rahi thi. Aj agar who hotin tau yeh sab jo mere saath ho raha hai na hota"

She again got some water in her eyes, Kashish notice that too

"Gauri" she too sits beside her and started calming her down

"Tum aisi batain na socha karoo. Aunty bhi tumhari maa hain. Tum se bohut pyaar karti hain. Yeh alag baat hai k who dekha nahin patin"

Gauri lay in her lap and kashish start combing her hairs with her fingers

"Janti hoo, har maa apnay bachay se bohut pyaar karti hai. Jab bachay pay baat ati hai tau saga sautaila kuch nahin rehta. Rehta hai tau sirf aik sach or who yeh k who aik maa hai."

"likin mere saath tau kabhi unhoon ne pyaar se baat nahin kii, hamesha mujhe danti hi rehti hain" Gauri was about to loose her control

"nahin, tum unh ki dant ko galat tarhan leti hoo. Agar tum gaur karoo tau tumhain unh ki ankhon main apnay liye pyar hi pyar nazar aaye ga. Who sirf jatana nahin chahatin. Darti hain k kahin tumhain bepanah pyaar kar k who kamzor na par jain. Tum unh ki taqat hoo, kia kamzoori ban k rehna chahoo gi"

Kashish look at her for her answer and Gauri moved her head in no way

"that's like a good girl. Chalo utho. Warna meri mama mujhe dantay gii kyoun k mujhe chai banani hai or unh donon lil kids k liye coffee bhi. Tumhain kia chahiye"

Kashish want to lightened the mood

"a hot coffee" gauri smiles a bit

"ok madam, I m at ur service"

as kashish was just about to leave gauri called her

"ISH dii"

Kashish turn around

"Thanx dii"

"No problem dear"

Kashish was again about to turn when she again called her

"ISH di"

kashish again turn around

"haye, mar dala" Gauri says while smiling………….kashish too get a wide smile

"tum teenon nahin sudhroo gii………….mera logo hi bana liya hai"

"abh aisi hi nahin banaya……….app ka devdas…….app ki rahoon main betha…….app ki kahin na kahin tasveer lo liye hoga" she winked at her

"Gauri" she starts running towards her n gauri run to escape herself

Then the Girls make tea for all n went towards a room. As they open the door, they found a girl sitting near fire, warming her hand…………an aged women was sitting on the bed having a blanket on herself along with a girl laying in her lap…………….and a girl was sitting on the easy chair reading a Shakespeare book

"hello guys…………..here is ur tea n coffee"

as kashish and gauri entered all looked at them and smiled to them

"hey gauri………..meri book lay aaye kia"……..the girl stand from easy chair and went towards her n hug her

"yes anji dear…………lay aaye………..bahir table pay rakhi hai"

kashish move towards th gir sitting near fire

"hey twino…………..here's ur tea" that's nandini………….

"thanx twino" she smiled at her and take the tea

"array gauri beta………..yeh kia…………..itni thand main tum sirf aik shawal liye gaiee thi…………aisay bimaar par jaoo gi………….kam se kam aik sweater hi pehen leti"

the old aged women ask who was Mrs. Oberoi……………..

Gauri was quite embarrassed

"agay se jana tau pehen k jana ……………ok"

"ok aunty"

"hey gauri di……………….aj meray friend k ghar pay party hai………chaloo gay"…the girl who was laying in Mrs. Oberoi's lap…………..sit straight

"oyee kahan………………..itni tand main tum loogon ko kahan jana hai……………aram se ghar pay rahoo………..or waisay bhi aj tumharay papa ne mujhay kaha tha k sham ko sab ghar pay rehna as k sham main aj unhoon ne humain dinner pay lay k jana hai

"diner pay……………..no mummy………….papa phir humain ussi dhabay pay lay k jain gain…………..i don't wanna go there"………the girl said frustrated

"Shut up krips…………papa jahan bhi lay k jain…………hum unh k saath jain gain……….as k papa k saath se bhar k hamaray liye kuch nahin……….or hum kaun sa roz roz aisay family dinner pay jatay hain"………..nandini said

"ok……..actually……………u r right dina dii…………I will go with u guys………..as k app loogon se bhar k mere liye mera koi friend nahin……….she said this while hugging mrs. Oberoi

"that's like my good bacha"

"oh……….us ko hug……….hum ko kuch nahin"

Nandini too went to her mom n give her a side hug

"twino………….tum mujhay bhool rahi hoo"

kashish too went to her but give side hug to nandini

"opps………….main peechay reh gayee"

anjali too went to the bed n hug kripa

the full family was on the bed sitting beside eachother while hugging

Gauri looked at them and was quite amazed to see that

"kash meri maa mujhay bhi aise pyaar se galay lagati" gauri thinking

"oyee gauri beta………..tum wahan kia kar rahi hoo…………..tum bhi aoo……..akhir tum bhi tau eri beti hi hoo"

gauri looked at her while the girls look at er with smile and called her to join them in this hug

gauri quickly moved towards the bed and lay in Mrs.Oberoi lap while hugging her from her waist…………..n wishing her mother to be there when she needed her

(So guys…………it is the first part…………..hope u guys liked it)

Kashish family is a middle class family………….have lil joys…………….but always have big dreams……..Gauri is the daughter of a well known business man………Mr Oberoi n Mr Singhania were childhood friends…………..both come to delhi at the same time and start searching 4 job…………Mr Oberoi got a job in a small firm while Mr Singhania got job in a multi-national company………….Mr Singhania want his friend to join his Company but Mr Oberoi was an egoistic man………never want to have anyone's favour………….say him that he is happy with his job as he can fulfill the needs of him n his family…………….n the same thing come to his children…………never ever let anyone help them…………never use any application to be on a good job……….whatever they have done is on there will power……………the girls got Scholarships n was studing on its basis…………..n that's why Mr Oberoi was always called to be a proud father of 4 girls. Now Mr.Singhania is a rich man n Mr.Oberoi is a middle class person but there friendship is still there

lola
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rajeev_gr8

👏 gr8 start partner



no thanx partner
me soo happy to see u yaara😛
love to know u like it
😃hope u wll like it further too

lolz
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thats great story and part.. cant wait till u continue it.

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