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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank u coderlady,Khwaishfan and Taahir.


Kya hua tera vaada..What happened to your promise? Part 7

Raghbir takes out a diamond ring.
R:This is for the girl i love.
Pragati blushes.
Suddenly a stylish girl appears before them.Raghbir slips the ring on her finger.Pragati is shocked.She looks at Raghbir with pain.She stares at that girl.
She is a fair girl who has worn a back frock which has white spots on it.Her hair is wavy.

R:Meet my sweet heart Bani.
Pragati is shocked.

Pragati:Sweetheart?Then...what about me?
Raghbir laughs:You are one among the thousand of girls who are crazy about me..it was just a time pass affair for me.
Pragati is shocked:Time pass?Then what about the wedding announcement?
R:That was my mom's blunder.I never thought that she will do such a big blunder.She took my time pass affair seriously and announced our wedding news.I did’nt want to make my mother a clown in front of everyone.That’s why I did’nt object.
Now it's time to break the drama.
Pragati is not able to tolerate it anymore.

PRAGATI:M.Raghbir Malhotra...you are one among the spoilt rich men who consider women as a tissue paper.I thought you were nice.But i'm wrong.

Raghbir smirks.


Pragati runs out crying.
PRAGATI:How could Raghbir do this to me?
She remembers all the moments she spent with him.Her tears roll down her cheeks.

Kya hua tera vaada woh kasam woh iraada bhoolega dil jis din tumhe
Oh din zindagi ka aakhri din hoga (2)
Kya hua tera vaada woh kasam woh iraada

Bhoolega dil jis din tumhe
Woh din zindagi ka aakri din hoga (child)

Yaad hai mujhko tune kaha tha
Tujhse nahin roothengey kabhi
Dil ki tarah se haat mile hain
Kaise bhala chootengey kabhi
Teri baahon mein beeti har shaam
Bewafa yeh bhi kya yaad nahin

Kya hua tera vaada woh kasam woh iraada
Bhoolega dil jis din tumhe
Woh din zindagi ka aakhri din hoga(Hum kisise kum naheen)

Pragati:Raghbir..you promised to love me forever.What happened to your promises?



Raghbir and Bani are romancing on snow.

Tujhe dekh dekh sona - 2
Tujhe dekh kar hain jagna
Maine yeh zindagani


Sang tere bitaani


Tujhmein basi hain meri jaan haai


(jiya dhadak dhadak - 3
Jaayen) - 2
Tujhe dekh dekh sona
Tujhe dekh kar hain jagna


Maine yeh zindagani
Sang tere bitaani
Tujhmein basi hain meri jaan haai
Jiya dhadak dhadak - 3
Jaayen

Kabse hai dil mein mere armaan kai ankahe - 2
Inko tu sunle aaja chaahat ke rang chadha jaa - 2
Kehna kabhi to mera maan haai
(jiya dhadak dhadak - 3

Jaayen) - 2

Lagta hain yeh kyu mujhe sadiyon se chaahu tujhe - 2
Mere sapno mein aake apna mujhko banake - 2
Mujhpe tu kar ehsaan haai
(jiya dhadak dhadak - 3
Jaayen) - 2

Tujhe dekh dekh sona
Tujhe dekh kar hain jagna


Maine yeh zindagani
Sang tere hain bitani haai


(jiya dhadak dhadak - 3
Jaayen) – 2(Kalyug).

Pragati wakes up from the bed.
PRAGATI:What a horrible dream!Even in dreams i can't bear Raghbir romancing another girl.

Raghbir looks at Pragati's photographs.

His tears fall on the photographs.

O kehne waale mujhko farebi
Kaun farebi hai yeh bata
Woh jisne gham liya pyaar ke khatri
Yah jisne pyaar ko bech diya
Nasha daulat ka aisa bhi kya
Ke tujhe kuch bhi yaad nahin

Kya hua tera vaada woh kasam woh iraada
Bhoolega dil jis din tumhe
Oh din zindagi ka aakhri din hoga

Kya hua tera waada woh kasam woh iraada
Woh kasam woh iraada ...(Hum kisise kum naheen)


Pragati told everything to her family members.They were shocked and upset.

Grand mother Pavitra:How could someone hurt a sweet girl like you?He is heartless.

Her father Shekar:This much happened in your life and you are telling us only now?

Pragati lowered her eye lashes.

Krithika:You will not shed even a single tear for that cheater.You stay strong.We are with you.

Pragati’s parents and grand mother Pavitra hugged her.

Pragati's phone rings.She attends the call.

"Are you Pragati Chawla?"

PRAGATI:Yes.

"I'm Romil.I heard a lot about your beautiful voice.Today i'm going to propose to my girlfriend in Hotel Pearl house.I would be happy if you sing a romantic song for us.The party hall is booked for us.Only we both will be there.Payment will be done after the performance".

PRAGATI:Sure.It's my pleasure.I will be there.

The party hall is decorated with lit candles. Romil is catching a rose bouquet.

His girlfriend enters.

Romil sits on his knees:Will you marry me?

Pragati is shocked:This is Bani.Noooooooooooo!

They both look at Pragati.Bani is shocked to see Pragati.

PRAGATI:Mr.Romil..this girl is cheating you.She is after the rich Raghbir Malhotra.

Romil raises his voice:Stop your nonsense.Don’t dare to say anything against my love.You are called here to sing,not to badmouth my girl friemd.

Bani:Romil...cool down.She is the one Raghbir is in love with.

Romil is shocked:What?

PRAGATI:I was in love with Raghbir.But he ditched me fo Bani.Did Bani desert Raghbir?Did you hurt Raghbir?That is too much.

Bani:You don't want Raghbir to suffer even though he deserted you.You love him that much..

PRAGATI:No,i hate him.He is a cheater.

Bani:If he is only a cheater for you, why are you bothered about him?Whether he has been cheated by me or not..why does it bother you?

Pragati is not able to say anything.

R:Bani...you tell her the truth..

Bani:Romil...

R:I know that we are breaking our promise to Raghbir.But i don't want Raghbir to be hated for nothing.

Pragati is not able to understand anything.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#32

thanks for the pm


Part 7

majestic update

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Posted: 4 years ago
#33

Part 7


Beautiful and Mesmerizing Update


Wow such a Beautiful song


I totally loved this Part

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Posted: 4 years ago
#34

So Bani has a boyfriend and she was helping stage a drama? Why?

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Posted: 4 years ago
#35

Sorry for the late response. Read the remaining parts.

PraghhBir beach scene, song sequences & love confessions are romantic. Ragbir told Kunti about Pragati, to which she agreed.

I loved the bonding between Kunti, Pragati & Raghbir.

I was shocked to see that when Raghbir was about to slip the ring into Pragati's finger, Bani came between them.

It is sad to see Raghbir betraying Pragati.

Glad that her parents are supportive.

Romil proposed to Pragati but was shocked to see Bani yet again.

Waiting to know Bani's mystery.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#36

Thanks a lot.Romil was proposing to Bani.


Originally posted by: kavitha_r

Sorry for the late response. Read the remaining parts.

PraghhBir beach scene, song sequences & love confessions are romantic. Ragbir told Kunti about Pragati, to which she agreed.

I loved the bonding between Kunti, Pragati & Raghbir.

I was shocked to see that when Raghbir was about to slip the ring into Pragati's finger, Bani came between them.

It is sad to see Raghbir betraying Pragati.

Glad that her parents are supportive.

Romil proposed to Pragati but was shocked to see Bani yet again.

Waiting to know Bani's mystery.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#37

Thank u Kavitha,coderlady,Khwaishfan and Taahir.



Kya hua tera vaada..What happened to your promise? Part 8

Bani: Raghbir and I are childhood friends.Kunti aunty decided to conduct our wedding.But when Raghbir told her that he loves Pragati,she did'nt oppose against his wish.I was very happy.Because I'm in love with Ranbir.One day i went to see Kunti aunty.

Flashback..
Bani enters the house.

“Hi Kunti aunty...”
KUNTI:Hi Bani..

Kunti hugs Bani.

Bani:Aunty..i heard that Raghbir is getting married to Pragati.

KUNTI:I'm sorry Bani.I did not want to break my promise.But i was forced to do that because of Raghbir's horoscope.

Bani:What?

KUNTI:It is written in Raghbir's horoscope that his wife will die.If you marry Raghbir,you will die.I did'nt want that to happen.But don't worry...let Raghbir marry Pragati.I won't allow them to live together even for a single day.Pragati will die soon.After that you can enter this house as Raghbir's wife.. as my daughter in law.The astrologer assured that Raghbir's second wife will not have any problem.

Suddenly they hear Raghbir scream:Mom!

Kunti and Bani turn back.Raghbir is trembling.

R:So this is your plan?No...i won't allow Pragati to die.Pragati is my life and i don't want to lose my life.Bani...don't think that i will marry you.

Kunti and Bani became upset.
Raghbir goes out.Bani follows him.
Bani:Please listen to me Raghbir.


R:No.
Bani:Though Kunti aunty want us together,I have never seen you that way.I love someone else.


Raghbir is surprised.He was relieved too.

Present:
Bani:You said Raghbir saw you as a tissue paper.But remember..he never touched you with a bad intention.Then how can you say that you were just a tissue paper for him?Pragati...that day what you saw in the restaurant was a drama...to avoid you...because Raghbir wants to save your life.


Pragati shed tears.

Bani:Raghbir never wanted you to know the truth.But…

Pragati wipes her tears hiding her pain.

Pragati:I forgot why I was brought here.I will sing for you guys.

Romil:But if you are not feeling well,you don’t need to…

Pragati:I am fine.I will sing.I don’t mix up my professional life with my personal life.

Romil and Bani keeps silent.
She sings for Ranbir and Bani...


"Kyon ki itna pyar

Tumko karte hain ham
Kya jaan loge hamari sanam
Kyon ki itna pyar
Tumko karte hain ham
Kyon ki itna pyar
Tumko karte hain ham
Kya jaan loge hamari sanam
Kyon ki itna pyar
Tumko karte hain ham
Kya jaan loge hamari sanam
Kyon ki itna pyar
Tumko karte hain ham
Hamare dil ki tum
Thodi si kadar kar lo
Ham tumpe marte hain
Thodi si fikar kar lo
Fikar kar lo
Kyon ki itna pyar
Tumko karte hain ham
Kya jaan loge hamari sanam
Kyon ki itna pyar
Tumko karte hain ham


Tune o jaana deewana kiya hain
Deewana kiya is kadar
Deewana kiya is kadar
Chahat mein teri
Bhulaya jahaan ko
Na dil ko kisiki khabar
Na dil ko kisiki khabar
Rago mein mohabbat
Ka ehsaas jara bhar lo
Ham tumpe marte hain
Thodi si fikar kar lo
Fikar kar lo
Kyon ki itna pyar
Tumko karte hain ham
Kya jaan loge hamari sanam
Kyon ki itna pyar
Tumko karte hain ham


Tumse hain saansein
Tumse hain dhadkan
Tumhise hain deewangi
Tumhise hain deewangi
Rab ne hame di hain
Tumhare liye zindagi
Tumhare liye zindagi
Wada sang jeene ka
Tum jaane jigar kar lo
Ham tumpe marte hain
Thodi si fikar kar lo
Fikar kar lo
Kyon ki itna pyar
Tumko karte hain ham
Kya jaan loge hamari sanam
Kyon ki itna pyar
Tumko karte hain ham..."{Kyonki}.

Her mind is full of Raghbir while singing.

Raghbir is in the temple.He prays:God...please save my Pragati..
He opens his eyes.He sees Pragati smiling at him.He is surprised.
He pretends to be angry:Why are you infront of me?
PRAGATI:No need of any drama.Bani told me everything.
Raghbir is shocked.
PRAGATI:Marry me Raghbir.i can't be away from you.
R:Pragati...no...if you are in my life..you will lose your own life.I can't put your life in danger.
PRAGATI:No...nothing will happen to me.It is just a superstition.
R:No..i can't take a risk.
PRAGATI:Ok..i don't mind dying.I want to just live one day as your wife.
R:You are crazy.
PRAGATI:If you don't marry me,i will die now.
R:Pragati!
She hits her head on the wall.Raghbir is shocked.He pulls her back.
She is really tired.Raghbir sits down.Pragati sits close to him...almost on his lap.Her tears are falling down.
Raghbir takes a garland from the temple and puts it around her neck.She looks at him with surprise.

She also took a garland and out it around his neck.They both look at each other's eyes.

He takes her to his guest house .Then he takes cotton and wipes wound.She is staring at his face.

He applied ointment there.

They shared an emotional eye lock.

Edited by jasminerahul - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#38

Surprised that Bani told the truth to Ranbir & told that she loves someone else.

Pragati banging her head only to get Raghbir was shocking

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Posted: 4 years ago
#39

Part 8

interesting update..... well written

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Posted: 4 years ago
#40

So now we know the reason for that staged drama. He wanted to save her life. But now what?

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