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They got married. Will the prediction come true?

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Part 8


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Thank u Kavitha,coderlady,Khwaishfan and Taahir.


Kya hua tera vaada..What happened to your promise? Part 9


Pragati’s mom Krithika and grand mother get shocked seeing her married to Raghbir.

Krithika:This guy cheated you.Still you married him.I can’t understand anything.

Pragati:That was all a misunderstanding mom.

Krithika:I can’t understand anything.

Pragati told them everything.

Her father Shekar,Grand mother Pavitra and Krithika become upset.

Pavitra:What did you do Pragati?Do you want to put your life in danger by marrying him?You both are not legally married.So there is time to end this marriage.

Pragati:Dadi,you only told me the importance of love and marriage in life.Then you are trying to break my marriage?

Pavitra becomes upset.

Pavitra:But your situation is different Pragati.It can harm your life.

Pragati:I am not superstitious Dadi.

Shekar:I agree with Pragati.Even I don’t believe in it.But I am upset that you married Raghbir without informing us.

Pragati:I am sorry dad.We did’nt do it purposefully.It just happened.Please forgive me.

Shekar caresses her lovingly.

Shekar:Don’t worry.You both will have our blessing.

Raghbir-Pragati smile happily.

Pavitra-Krithika bless them painfully.

Raghbir and Pragati enter Malhotra house.Kunti is shocked to see them together.
R:Mom...i married Pragati.
She is shocked.

But she smiles.
She thinks:My plan is going to be successful.
KUNTI:Good.The outside world does'nt know that you both are married.So we will conduct the wedding for the public.Only after that you both should live together.
R:Ok.

Kunti goes to her room without even looking at Pragati.

Pragati:Your mother did not even talk to me.I doubt whether she has really accepted me or not.

Raghbir holds Pragati's hand and tells her:Ignore it.Whether mom accepts you or not should not matter to you.

Pragati becomes upset.

Pragati enters her room.She is surprised to see the beautiful decoration.

Raghbir:I know decoration very well Pragati.

She smiles:I agree.Your decoration is very beautiful.

Raghbir smiles:I know that.But do you know why I did it.

Pragati:For us.

Raghbir:Yes.But it has got a purpose.

Raghbir holds her hand:Though we are going to get married,I want to propose you.Pragati…will you marry me?I promise you that I will protect you always.

Pragati smiles.

Pragati:I will marry you in every birth Raghbir.

They both smile and embrace each other.


They both get married in front of others.

Pragati’s parents also attend the wedding.



Pragati and Raghbir took bath invidually to get ready for the wedding reception.

Seeing Pragati,Raghbir pulls her closer.

He says romantically:With wet hair you look very beautiful.

She blushes.

She thinks:I feel that i'm dreaming.Raghbir is my husband now.
Raghbir:What are you thinking?
PRAGATI:I'm thinking how lucky i'm to get you.
R:But Pragati..i'm scared.
PRAGATI:Tommorow onwards we will go to temples.God will save our married life.I'm planning to take vrath.Till then we have to control ourselves.

Raghbir:For your safety and our togetherness I am willing for any vrath.


They both smile.

Party...
Raghbir and Pragati dance romantically.

O maahi ve, o maahi ve

Mahi mainu chhadyo naa

Ke tere bin dil naiyo lagna

Jithe vi tu chalna ae

Maahi main tere pichhe pichhe chalna

Tu jee sakti nahi

Main jee sakta nahi

Koi dusri main sharta vi rakhta nahi

Kya tere baju mera

Sachiyan mohabbata ve

O maahi kithe hor naiyo milna

(Aur naiyo milna)

Jithe vi tu chalna han

Mahi main tere pichhe pichhe chalna

(Pichhe pichhe chalna)

O maahi ve, o maahi ve

Dil vich tere yaara mainu rahne de

Aankhon se yeh aankhon wali gal kahne de

Dil vich tere yaara mainu rahne de

Aankhon se yeh aankhon wali gal kahne de

Dhadkan dil di ae tainu pahchane

Tu mera hai main hun teri rab bhi yeh jane

Tu rah sakti nahi

Main rah sakta nahi

Tere bin yaara hor kithe takda nahi

Kya tere baju mera

Rang tera chadya ve

Ke hund koi rang naiyo chadna

(Rang naiyo chadna)

Jithe vi tu chalna han

Maahi main tere pichhe pichhe chalna

(Pichhe pichhe chalna)

Maahi mainu chhadiyo na

Ke tere bina dil naiyo lagna

Jithe vi tu chalna ae

Maahi main tere pichhe pichhe chalna

Maahi mainu chhadiyo na

Ke tere bina dil naiyo lagna

Jithe vi tu chalna ae

Maahi main tere pichhe pichhe chalna(Kesar)



Raghbir and Pragati visit temples.
They reach home.Raghbir goes to the room.
Kunti says to Pragati:However you pray...you can't save your life.You can't change your destiny.
Pragati becomes upset.



Kunti smirks seeing her upset.

Pragati is sitting on the bed.Raghbir finds her upset and goes near her.He caresses her face and hair.
R:What happened Pragati?Why are you upset?

PRAGATI's eyes are full of tears.

Pragati:Nobody is supporting our pilgrimage.They think that i will die.
He keeps his finger on her lips:Don't say like that.Pragati...now i have faith in God.God will not give us pain.

He wipes her tears.
Pragati smiles.He smiles at her.

PRAGATI:I have arranged a puja.We have to buy some stuffs for the puja.
R:Ok.

Pragati is in the kitchen.Raghbir gts cozy with her and says romantially:You look very pretty.
She blushes.

Pragati:Raghbir...don't forget our vrath.

Raghbir moves away from her:Oh no...when I see you I forget everything.

She smiles:It's ok.I will keep reminding you..Shall we go for shopping?

Raghbir:Sure.
He gets a phone call.He attends the call.
R:No..i can't attend the meeting.
PRAGATI:What is the matter?
Raghbir cuts the call.
R:They are calling me for the meeting.I will not go.I will accompany you for shopping.
PRAGATI:No need.You attend the meeting.That is important.I will buy everything for the puja.Don't worry.
R:But Pragati...
PRAGATI:Go...attend the meeting..
R:Ok..

Pragati is walking on the road.Suddenly a car hits her.She falls down.The guy who was driving the car takes her to the hospital.

All are in the hospital.Raghbir is nervous.

Pavitra:I had told Pragati not to marry Raghbir.See what happened.

Shekar:Don’t talk like this Maa.Raghbir will hear it.

Krithika:You said that you don’t believe in such superstition.But what happened?Our Pragati….

Shekar becomes upset.

Shekar:Krithika,I am sure that God will not let anything bad happen to Pragati.Don't think negative.

Krithika rests her head on his shoulder and weeps.


Kunti tells Raghbir:I told you...we can't change destiny.Pragati can't be saved.Even the doctor could not give any guarantee.But don’t worry Raghbir.I will get you the best girl in this world.

R:Mom!How can you be so heartless?Pragati is fighting for life now and you are celebrating it.You are disgusting mom.

Kunti feels embarrassed.Raghbir walks away.
The person who hit Pragati goes to Raghbir:I'm sorry...because of me.. your wife...I did'nt do it purposefully.I don't know how i did this mistake.

Raghbir just looks at him painfully and walked away.
Raghbir weeps and goes near the Lord Shiv's Idol in the hospital:Pragati went out to do puja for you.Still you tried to take away her life?Please...you have to return her life.
Raghbir cries.

Raghbir:Pragati...you promised to be with me in every birth.What happened to your promise?You can't break your primise.

Kya hua tera vaada woh kasam woh iraada bhoolega dil jis din tumhe
Oh din zindagi ka aakhri din hoga (2)
Kya hua tera vaada woh kasam woh iraada
(Hum kisise kum naheen).

Bani and Romil reach there.

Romil:Ranbir..I know that words are not enough to console you.But have faith in your love.



Bani:Yes Raghbir..nothing will happen to your Pragati.

Raghbir weeps silently.

Edited by jasminerahul - 4 years ago
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Part 9

Amazing update

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Part 9


Fabulous Update


Beautiful song choice

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Ragbir & Pragati got married much against the wishes of their families. Glad that Pragati's families accepted Raghbir's wedding.

Sad to see Kunti discouraging Pragati.

Praghbir dialogues & dance scenes are romantic.

Raghbir telling that he will come with Pragati to the market was passionate.

Pragati was not wrong in telling Raghbir to attend the meeting.

Sad that Pragati met with an accident.

Kunti is irritat8ing that she wished Pragati's death.

I hope Pragati recovers.

Edited by kavitha_r - 4 years ago
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Kya hua tera vaada..What happened to your promise? Part 10

Bani:I hope that Pragati will be alrght.Otherwise Raghbir will blame himself for his whole life time.

Romil:I also hope so Bai.Otherwise Raghbir will break into pieces.

The doctor comes and says:There is a happy news.It’s a miracle that Pragati is saved.

All were very happy except Kunti.Her face becomes dull.

Raghbir:Thank God.You heard my prayer.

Shekar:See…I told you that God will not let anything bad happen to our Pragati.

Krithika and Pavitra smile.

Raghbir goes near Pragati when she becomes conscious.

Raghbir holds her hand and says:I got scared whether you will leave me.

Pragati:I promised to be with you in every birth.I am not someone who breaks promises.

He caresses her face.

Raghbir and Pragati smile emotionally.

Raghbir-Pragati’s vrat get over and they go for honeymoon.

Pragati gets excited about the snowy place where they have come for honeymoon.

They romance in the snow.

Iss tarah se khudse aa mujhko jod tu
Thoda bhi mujhme na mujhko chhod tu
Na yaad teri tujhko
Na yaad mujhe hoon main
Aa mujhko pehan le tu
Aa tujhko odh loon main

Katra katra main girun
Jism pe tere theharun
Katra katra mein girun
Tujh mein hi kahin reh lun

Dariya tu khaali kar de
Mujhme saara tu bhar de
Tujhko aa main pee jaaun
Pyaas bujha do..

Laana kuch baadal laana
Unko mujh pe barsaana
Boondein teri ho jinme,
Unse bhigaa do…

Na yaad teri tujhko
Na yaad mujhe hoon main
Aa mujhko pehan le tu
Aa tujhko odh loon main

Katra katra main girun
Jism pe tere theharun
Katra katra mein girun
Tujh mein hi kahin reh lun

She thinks:That day in my nightmare I saw Raghbir romancing Bani on the snow.But that was only a nightmare.In real I am the one who is romancing Raghbir in this beautiful snowy area.

Their passionate romance took them to the next level.



Khud se khaali ho jaaun
Aaja tujhse bhar jaaun
Tinka tinka jal jaaun
Aise jalaa do..ho..

Tairun mein tan pe tere
Thehrun angon pe tere
Gehari jo khawahish teri
Unme duba do..

Na yaad teri tujhko
Na yaad mujhe hoon main
Aa mujhko pehan le tu
Tujhko odh loon main


Katra katra main girun
Jism pe tere theharun
Katra katra mein girun
Tujh mein hi kahin reh lun

Katra katra main girun
Jism pe tere theharun
Katra katra mein girun
Tujh mein hi kahin reh lun(Alone).


Time passes by…


For the Janmashtami festival Pragati is standing on a stool and decorating the wall with flowers.Suddenly she feels dizzy and loses balance.

Raghbir holds her tight preventing her from falling down.

Then they share an eye lock.

Raghbir:Pragati..you are pregnant.In this condition why are you doing this?

Pragati:Raghbir…stop complaining and hold me tight.I will continue decorating.

Raghbir:I have not seen a stubborn woman like you.

Pragati smiles and continues decorating while Raghbir holds her tight from down.

25 years later...

A party....
A stylish guy and a cute girl come upon the stage.
He:Hi...i'm Angad.
The cute girls leans onto him and says:I'm Kalindi.

Angad:My beloved wife.


ANGAD:We are here to celebrate our parents' 25th wedding anniversary.

Kalindi:Raghbir dad and Pragati mom are like my parents only.

Bani:Though by birth Romil and I are Kalindi’s parents sometimes I doubt whether Kalindi is really Raghbir and Pragati’s daughter seeing their love.

Romil smiles.

The others also smile.

Angad:We invite our parents here.
Raghbir and Pragati arrive.
Kalindi and Angad together:We both wish you both a very happy wedding anniversary.
Everyone claps their hands.
Raghbir:I'm happy that Pragati is my life partner.Pragati...there was a time when i used to think that if you are in my life i will lose you forever.But it's been proved wrong by you.You proved that only if you are in my life i can live happily.
Pragati:I'm happy to be Raghbir's wife.His love and prayers saved me from a major accident.His love and prayers changed our horoscope and destiny.

Kunti smiles and says:I admit that earlier I had no faith in their relationship and I felt that Pragati was not the apt woman for Raghbir.But their love defeated me.Now I say proudly that they are the best couple in this world.

Raghbir and Pragati smile.

Krithika:I was also worried whether Pragati’s life will be safe with Raghbir.But time proved that Pragati is the most safest person because Raghbir’s love is a shield for her.

Krithika and Shekar smile.

Kalindi says to Pragati:Mom...you look gorgeous in this gown.You look so young
 that you don't look like a mother.
Pragati smiles:The credit goes to your dad.He makes me happy.
So still i look young and fresh.This gown is his selection.It’s his wedding anniversary gift for me.
Angad tells Raghbir:Dad...you look so young and hot.When we both walk together
everyone thinks that we are brothers.
Raghbir smiles.
KALINDI:What is your gift for dad?
PRAGATI:I have made a chocolate cake for your dad.
The maid brings the cake.They look at the cake.With white icing it's
 been written 'I love you' on the cake.

Seeing that Raghbir's eyes shine.He looks at Pragati.She blushes.
ANGAD:Wow Dad...mom has baked a cake specially for you.It looks yummy.
KALINDI:Mom's message is also seen on the cake.Mom loves dad very much.Dad..
what are you going to give mom for making a yummy cake for you?
Raghbir looks into Pragati's eyes deeply and sings …

Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko
Nazar nahin churaana sanam
Badalke meri tum zindagaani
Kahin badal na jaana sanam
Oh, le liya dil, oh haai mera dil
Haai dil lekar mujhko na behlaana
Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko
Nazar nahin churaana sanam
Badalke meri tum zindagaani
Kahin badal na jaana sanam

Bahaar banke aaoon kabhi tumhaari duniya mein
Guzar na jaaye yeh din kahin isi tamanna mein
Bahaar banke aaoon kabhi tumhaari duniya mein
Guzar na jaaye yeh din kahin isi tamanna mein
Tum mere ho, ho tum mere ho
Aaj tum itna vaada karte jaana
Chura liya

ANGAD:Wow!Dad..you sing so well.We always hear mom's songs.But for the first time
 we heard you sing.We never knew that you can sing so well.
KALINDI:Yes dad.Your song was a surprise for us.
PRAGATI:Your dad sings very well.
KALINDI:That means he sings for mom.
ANGAD:He sings only for mom.How romantic!
Raghbir and Pragati are shy.
R:No party is complete without Pragati's song.Pragati...sing a song.
She smiles and looks at Raghbir. She sings.
 
Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko
Nazar nahin churaana sanam
Badalke meri tum zindagaani
Kahin badal na jaana sanam

Ho, sajaaoonga lutkar bhi tere badan ki daali ko
Lahoo jigar ka doonga haseen labon ki laali ko
Sajaaoonga lutkar bhi tere badan ki daali ko
Lahoo jigar ka doonga haseen labon ki laali ko
Hai vafa kya is jahaan ko
Ek din dikhla doonga main deewana
Chura liya

Raghbir is deeply involved in the song as he knows that Pragati is singing specially for him.

Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko
Nazar nahin churaana sanam
Badalke meri tum zindagaani
Kahin badal na jaana sanam
Le liya dil, haai mera dil
Haai dil lekar mujhko na behlaana
Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko
Nazar nahin churaana sanam
Hm hm hm hm, hm hm hm hm
Hm hm hm hm, hm hm hm hm(Yaadon ki baarat).



KALINDI:Now it is the time for dance.
Angad and Kalindi push Raghbir and Pragati to the dance floor.
They dance to the music.

Bulaave Tujhe Yaar Aaj Meri Galiyaan
Basau Tere Sang Main Alag Duniya

Bulaave Tujhe Yaar Aaj Meri Galiyaan
Basau Tere Sang Main Alag Duniyaa
Na Aaye Kabhi Dono Mein Jara Bhi Faasle
Bas Ek Tu Ho, Ek Main Hu Aur Koi Na

Hai Mera Sab Kuch Tera Tu Samajh Le
Tu Chahe Mere Haq Ki Zameen Rakh Le
Tu Saason Pe Bhi Naam Tera Likh De



Main Jiyu Jab Jab Tera Dil Dhadke

Tujhse Mera Ye Jee Nahi Bharta
Kuch Bhi Nahi Asar Ab Karta
Meri Raah Tujhi Se Meri Chaah Tujhi Se
Mujhe Bas Yahi Reh Jana

Lagi Hai Teri Aadatein Mujhe Jab Se
Hai Tere Bin Pal Vi Baras Lagte
Bulawe Tujhe Yaar Aaj Meri Galiyaan
Basau Tere Sang Main Alag Duniya

Jo Hove Tu Udas Mujhe Dekh Hasde
Tu Chahe Mere Haq Ki Zameen Rakh Le
Tu Saason Pe Bhi Naam Tera Likh De



Main Jiyu Jab Jab Tera Dil Dhadke

Tujhse Mili To Shikha Maine Hasna
Aaya Mujhe Safar Mein Thaharna
Main To Bhool Gayi Duniya Ka Pata
Yaara Jab Se Tujhe Hai Jaana

Hai Tu Hi Dil Jaan Hai Meri Ab Se
Ve Zikar Tera Na Jaye Mere Lab Se



Later Angad-Kalindi join them and dance romantically.

Bulawe Tujhe Yaar Aaj Meri Galiyaan
Basau Tere Sang Main Alag Duniyaa

Jo Howe Tu Udas Mujhe Dekh Hasde
Tu Chahe Mere Haq Ki Zameen Rakh Le
Tu Sanso Pe Bhi Nam Tera Likh De
Main Jiyu Jab Jab Tera Dil Dhadke

Pyar Di Raawa Utte Yaar Tu Le Aya
Mainu Jeene Da Matlab Aaj Samajh Aaya
Paraya Mainu Kar Naa Na Tu Sohniya
Channa Main To Turr Jana(Luka Chuppi).


The end.
thanks a lot for supporting my first PragBhir Story.Plz do write a detailed comment on the last part.Plz write your favourite scenes,favourite character and why you liked that character the most.
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Part 10

wonderful update....

nice end

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Kunti has a plan up her sleeve? Did she create a misunderstanding with that false prediction?

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