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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
sorry guys!! 😆 😆 i had exams!! 😭
and few marriage functions to attend!! 😭 😭
i hate marriage parties!! 🤢

here is my next part!! 😳
he he 😛 pardon me if i done too much messing up in details 😆

sorrrrry guys!! 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-6
"pehchaan nahi paa raha mujhe??" teased Huda.

Yudi turned to face him. "its nothing like that….I just didn't expect you…chal chod…what's happening here?"

"Serious banda ho gaya hai tu…mard ban ne ki practice kar raha hai ke?"
"HUDA…mind your tongue!" shouted Yudi angrily…but controlled himself after a while and asked "look dude…I don't want to fight with you…not in this situation atleast, My sis and her fiance are with me and I have to get them to a safe place…because to me the situation doesn't look good"

Huda gave a short laugh "Why is it like every time…you want some help with girls…I am always present??…waise teri galti nahi hai…bhagwan bhi jananio ki madad ke liye mujh jaise insaan ko chunte hain…coming to the situation…there's a curfew in the city..a very violent one…that is why we have been ordered to keep the tourists and travelers away from the city limits…and you can take your sister and her fiance to the camp made specially for the tourists…go back and take a left turn….through the gravel path..if you want I can help you"
"I will do that thanks…I will come back…as an army man I should be present here with you" said yudi and smiled and turned to leave when huda stopped him.

"Yudi…itne dino baad mile hain…gale nahi milega?"
"phir kabhi huda…is baar mujhe tujhe bahaut kuch saabit karna hai…uske baad …I will think…"
Huda couldn't say a word…he didn't understand why yudi told him that…after all these years…they met, and it seemed like he had done something wrong in the past because of which yudi couldn't be happy as he was after meeting him.
"Lt Huda! I don't want to see you standing there…now get back to work!!"
"Yes Sir!" and ran off to follow his senior's orders.
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Ali couldn't believe his eyes…Pooja was right in front of him…half covered in blood and all he could do was to stand and look at her helplessly. He moved an inch closer to her bed, kneeled in front of it and looked at her closed eyes…she looked so forlorn…he could see that even in this state. He reached out and touched her cheek with a soft hand and stroked it…as if he wanted to dust away the sadness, which was all over her pretty face. Ali's memories struck his frail mind and shattered it into pieces.
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"Ali bhai, I can't tell you how much I love Pooja. Ever since I parted from her…I have been in hell. My parents were dead against our relationship…and I didn't want them to suffer because of me…that is why I went away from her…and made a false promise to come back…but today I have come for her…I know she has suffered a lot for me. I have come to pay her back and make her life beautiful...like the way it was before"

Ali smiled …and hid something in his pocket and kept holding it till rohit left.
He avoided Pooja as much as he could…even when Pooja had hugged him "I won't let you go!"
Ali shouted at her that day "let go of me Pooja!..what is the meaning of this??…listen Pooja…I don't think of you that way…and since rohit is here why do you need me??…I am tired of helping you out from every situation and I have always been by your side when rohit wasn't here!…you cried for him and were ready to sacrifice your life for him…and now you behave with me like this?!..what kind of woman you are?!"
Pooja slapped him and ran away crying…

Ali couldn't forgive himself that day…rohit wasn't the only reason…
"Cadet ali baig…I am sorry…your father is no more…"

And the day when he had to leave for his city for the final rituals…the ballroom looked so right…pooja had kissed rohit…and ali turned away…feeling happy for her and his family.

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Rajveer and Alekh ran towards the officer who was keeping the track of the route of infiltration. Rajveer talked with the officer…while Alekh went to examine the area…
"what's the situation" enquired rajveer.
"This is not normal sir…"
"what do you mean officer?"
"the blast was not normal sir…it was too planned for a curfew"
"do we have any leads on the bomb which was kept near the car?"
"I think…"

alekh's shout…didn't let the officer complete his sentence…
"Sir watch out!!"
a huge ball of fire and ash surrounded a small area in front of rajveer.
Rajveer was blinded by the glow and heat from the blast, which missed him by few metres. He was thrown back by its impact and crashed on the ground along with the officer … "don't let them go Lt Alekh!"
Rajveer couldn't lift his left arm …it was bleeding and looked at the officer who had hurt his head badly "are you all right officer?" to which the officer nodded. Alekh came running towards them..
"They escaped sir"
"LT Alekh can you search for the trigger of the grenade?... it must have fallen at the place from which they threw!…go now quick!"
"yes sir!"
it was after a few minutes when Alekh showed the trigger to rajveer who was sitting on the chair given by the fellow officers who had come running to help them…
rajveer examined the trigger and noticed a R7 engraved on it. Rajveer was shocked.
"this can't happen…"
"what is the matter sir?"Asked Alekh.
"It was a RPJ-7 grenade…"
"what then sir?!"
"it is a grenade which has not been accepted by the Indian military yet…it is a weapon used mostly by the terrorists, this curfew is just an alibi …I think we are going to face some big trouble ahead…"
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Camp-2

"everything is in its place sir…this camp is going to be attacked in a matter of minutes…the major is hurt…and we don't expect much confrontation here. This camp is way too noisy…wouldn't it look nice…if it falls silent?"
"good luck in your mission then"
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"excuse me ma'am… you have to fill the name and address fields here…this is necessary" requested an officer and handed over the clipboard with a form to ritu.
naina and ritu looked at the officer who had just come between their argument.
Ritu filled up the fields, which the officer asked them to "what shall I write next to camp?"
"Camp 2 ma'am"
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Edited by drymaple - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
hey too good yaar

the story is too good

keep writing

well how were ur exams

i hope ow ur updates will be faster



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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
wow i loved it please continue next part soon ... n ali pooja part was best...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
wooww!!! dat was an aweshum come bak devu dear! 👏 plzzz do continu asap! 😉 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
😃 awesum yaar........... 😃 😃 😃 continue soonnn 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
the story is awesomeeeeeeeeee and very interesting plzzzzzzzzz write other part soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
so gud 2 c u bak here..plz..continue soon.vry soon..❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
please continue soon with ali pooja part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
waiting for your next part ....

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